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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys,

me is back with another OS on MadhVini... chalo jaldi jaldi read it... 😳



Ishq par zor nahi hai

Ye woh atish hai, Galib

Jo lagaey na lage , aur

Bhujaye naa bujhey!!!


"hum jaa rahe hain Manu", madhav says to Manu. Manu holds his hand and says "ye hath humey de do Yuvraj". Madhav gets conscious of the dialogue and says "gabbar ki beti Manu, ye mushkil nahi naamumkin hai, now let me go. I have to attend an important meeting". "achaa aj Yuvraj ko meeting mey jana hai, aur jo kuch dein pehle humey road side romeo ki tarha stalk kar rahe the, who kya tha? Manu asks him. Madhav gets serious and says "who bas humara bachpana tha, ek khawab tha jo toot gaya, there is nothing left to talk about it". Manu gets hurt hearing it, but doesn't let it show on her face, but her eyes shone with building tears, how ruthlessly she had rejected him and his love and their adhuri marriage. Little did she know at that time, how much she loved him, it was her love that pushed her to be a Devrakhsika, and it was her love that gave her the power to break free from the Devrakshika bond, and protect Madhav not as a Devrakshika only, but made her realize She could be his protector, wife and love all at the same time. And now was time to win Madhav back. She says "aaj zameen kyun na hil jaye aur asmaan blue kyun na ho jaye, I won't let you go". Madhav asks, "manu tm pagal ho kya? Asmaan blue hi hota hai". Manu tries to maintain her confidence and says "yuvraj app baat ko go gol mat ghumanein... Aj hum app se apne pyaar ka iqrar kar k rahein ge". Madhav says "acha bolo kya bolna hai". Manu starts to stammer, "woh ... woh ... hum .. app se bahut ..." madhav taunts her "if the confession is finished can he leave now? Manu gets angry and says, "khud tou Phd ki hui hai pyaar ishq aur muhababt mey, aur mujhe ek chance nahi de rahe... Did you see yourself, how many times you came to me and said "I love you manu, manu hum tm se pyaar karte hai" but nahi app karo tou pyaar, mey kahon tou time bekaar... double standards wale typical yuvraj mentality". Madhav looked offended by her words and says, "yes I am the double standards mentality Yuvraj, because when I confessed you thrashed my heart beyond repair, that it even hurts for my heart to even beat... and now when you have realized I should be standing with my heart at my sleeves, k bht mehrbani you accepted my love, app ka ehsaan mey zindagi bhar nahi bholunga..." Manu froze with his outburst, tears streamed down her face silently, she had expected this and much worse, as she knew Madhav, he was a passionately ziddi person, if he loved her with his heart, then he would hate her too with all his heart.. but being stone walled like this hurt nonetheless the same. Madhav closed his eyes and sighed in anguish, he was angry, rejected, dejected and depressed, but he could never hurt Manu... no matter what she did, he could never reverse the pain on her... he was supposed to protect her all his life, but still he managed to hurt her, be it by his love or rejection... he holds her softly and says "manu, you are a Devrakhsika, bhool jao ye sab and move on in life". Manu jerks off his hand and says " nahi bhool sakti mey k how much I love you, haan haan haaan ye sach hau, I Love you Madhav... mey apni puri zindagi aap k sath rehna chahti hoon, haan mey devrakhsika hoon, par uss se pehle mey app ki patni hoon... and I can never forget the sindoor... at that time, I couldn't accept nor realize but what difference does it make, app tou sab kuch bhool gaye, humari dosti, humara pyaar aur humari shadi... Jayie you are getting late for your meeting". Madhav was shocked at her confession, and what he had done to Manu, he realized how much his acceptance meant to her, after all this time.. her existence just revolved around him... his love felt so little in front of her. He says "manu, listen to me" and makes her look at him. she asks "app gaye nahi Yuvraj? Madhav replies "apni patni ko rota chor kar jane wala zalim pati bana chahti hoo tm" Manu looks at him in disbelief. Madhav senses that knowing look and threatens her "manu agar tm ab peeche hati tu hum tmahri jaaan le lein ge". A small smile broke on Manu's face as she realized what Madhav said and thought to make him suffer more, but then instantly hugged him. Their hearts, souls and worlds entwined together in bliss and happiness. The whole universe smiled upon them, as they step forward on their journey of love with each other.


the end




rocks and chappals🤗

i know its cheesy, but dil kare tou kya kare.. ye dil kisi ki nahi sunta bs OS likh deta hai 😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was not just cheesy but wow yaar u absoultley nailed it 👏write more plus ive started to write n ff madhvini hongey juda na hum plz check it out so it would give me the idea whether to write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..Loved it..well written...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nicely written...👏
Beautifully expressed...liked it...Thanks..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesomee hope we get something like this in serial too post maya's pardafash.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha.. That was so sweet yarr... And those dialogues 😆 I never imagined them saying such lines,but u made it happen 😆
Plzzz write more dear would love to read it.. I wish to get such hug in show too 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyrose

this was not just cheesy but wow yaar u absoultley nailed it 👏write more plus ive started to write n ff madhvini hongey juda na hum plz check it out so it would give me the idea whether to write more



Thank you so much dear.
One rule of writing that I would tell you is, just write. Whatever comes to your mind just write it down. Don't fear criticism or what others would say. Do your best and leave Each to their own opinions.

Beta of luck with your fF I look forward to read it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu92

Haha.. That was so sweet yarr... And those dialogues 😆 I never imagined them saying such lines,but u made it happen 😆
Plzzz write more dear would love to read it.. I wish to get such hug in show too 😭



Thank you 😊
Things and dialogue which can't happen in show are made fan fiction 😆
Kisi bhi tarha koi umeed unfulfilled na reh jaye Humari 😉

Pitch in your MadhVini fantasy. And we can make a story out of it. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was all so sweet romantic and an awesome scene..
Keep writing more dear ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Thank you so much dear.
One rule of writing that I would tell you is, just write. Whatever comes to your mind just write it down. Don't fear criticism or what others would say. Do your best and leave Each to their own opinions.

Beta of luck with your fF I look forward to read it.



thank you so much of blueflames😊 for encouraging me 😊
by the way i dont know but i have wrote an os called haan haan karti hu pyaar do check it out if u havent read im sure you would get your dose of madhvini 😉

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