Adaalat Story: The Challenge - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great work Shreya...
I miss Varun so much.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awesome one👏
Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: -Eris-

res

and why dint u write a JAgan story till now ????



I'll get to that one as well. It'll be my next or my second next story. Just writing one now. Actually I had been working on this one and another story before your request came in. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Just finished the first post.
And the case is really interesting. See i am inspired by you. Writing crime fictions.
I just love reading those crime fictions. Really😃

coming to this one, what a cas. It began with a challenge, and then KDs next procedure to solve it, was nicely portrayed.

Starting from Aniket, so KD was so sure that Aniket was not the culprit. And his mental condition proved that.
I had a doubt on sunaina but you cleared it in the end.

And srman was really funny, when varun asked him stay with him in the house, he stayed with him.😆 and then in KDs cabin..lol. Poor varun he have to now make him his chota bhai and to kd his chota assistant.
I think sramn really have any important role to play here.

And then daya, so someone hired him and asked to lie in court so that aniket would be the suspect. But KD very intelligently proved him wrong and he also accepted his crime.

So now who is the lady who, stalked there. And also the lady who ascted as daya's sister for the fake accident. I am very curious about that.

So anna's case is cleared.

Now i wll read the 2nd post and then will comment.

Thanks for the PM.



Ah I don't think Varun will mind to have Srman as his chota bhai or chota assistant. It would make the perfect team: KD-Varun-Srman. 😉

It's good you doubted Sunaina. Even I doubt her. 😆

It's actually Uday, not Daya. And you'll find out about the lady. 😉

Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Now that was really a nice one. You had written exactly the way the characters behave - Varun- Srman-Jaiswal


I had always wished that Varun never died and imagined Varun and Srman working together. Nothing wrong in having a suave assistant and a crude assistant who could get down to things where Varun cant

But unfortunately Varun was killed. I still feel that there was no need to kill Varun.

Anyway, Thanks a lot for this one. It was really good.



Even I miss Varun so much. That's why I did this like this to show that there was no need to kill Varun and 2 assistants are always better than one. I think my future stories will take this path as well.

Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Muskaan92

Great work Shreya...

I miss Varun so much.


Originally posted by: sadffi

Awesome one👏

Thanks for the PM :)



Thanks Muskaan and Sadff. 😃

@ Muskaan: Oh even I miss him so much. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sri I'm sry mene yei badi nehe...kyu ki mei padneki mood mei nehee hu...itz not about you ya itz about my network 😡 you understand me na...???? 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres my cmnt on page 2! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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story
👏

used to watch Adaalat at times.. but left due to lack of time
😉even leaft watching online due to amazing stories😉

⭐️but this is juz fantastic⭐️
ADAALAT ppl MUST contact U

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: MriduB

Res!

Will unres soon!😳

Unres :

Haye! I loved it!

Bole toh dhinchak!

Hmm...when I started reading it...I thought it was similar to the case which aired a few days back...where that director was murdered by his manager...

But than...slowly n slowly apun ko sub samajh mein aa gaya!😆

I wish ki Varun was alive! Miss him so so much! Miss KD-Varun's chemistry!😭

But it was nice to see Varun n Srman together! 😳

Loved it Shreya! Great work!



Mridu when I started writing this story that episode hadn't aired and after it aired I was too lazy to change it so yeah it is somewhat similar in the beginning. 😆

Thanks! 😃

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