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Posted: 15 years ago
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To the writers of Karol Bagh
i have been thinking of writing this thread for quiet some time, but wanted to know till where will you go with this story line.
the story of Karol bagh was going very nicely and all the casts has eacted well till today, but i dont know what you are trying to do with this story. It looks like you your self dosent have an idea as to what story you should write.
As of now you have totally destroyed the character of Simi and where she herself dosent realise her mistakes and keeps secret from her husband ans is not even sorry about it , also she dosent even make an effort to pacify him and bring him bad.
the character of Abhi you have made him the opposite of what he was once. totally opposite. this is not the abhi we all liked once , understood his is very angry with his wife but why take it to such and extent and show big faces at her, if it was the old Abhi , he would have reasoned out and given simi a chance to talk. , but there you r destroying it slowly
Request you to please bring back the Old Abhi, also unite simi and abhi , but with simi knowing her mistakes and valueing him as he is her husband now . no matter witht he age difference. and both opf them together should sort out Rajieev bhallas case or say nakuls case and what ever the matter is .
Now Mili, what are you all trying to do to her character, she was one of the boldest actor and in todays ( 27th may ) episode she done a very good job, no idea what you have in store for monday, but please not a rape . This will prove how helpless a women is , She has fought wiht nakul with all her strength , so she should be saved / rescued . and she should do it by herself no help, as she has done so much.
Ok coming to the point ............ r u all continuing with the simi abhi tiff ad millis rape attempt so that in the later stage abhi forms a comfort zone for mili and later she falls in love with Abhi ........... if this is your idea then please stop it right away , as it willbe one of the foolish thing you are coming up with.
just imagine sister falling in love with sisters husband that too because he saved and helped her ...... totally redicilious. TOTLLY ABSURD .
I can garuntee you you are going to loose a lot of viewers..................... i dont know if you vlaue international viewers but plstake us also into consideration.
This was one show which was liked by most ot the international viewers and let me tell you most that more that 90% of the international viewers are working be it men and women. and out of our busy schedule we spend our precious time to sit at watch this show, so please show some sense . also many of us not watch all serials and some watch only this including me.
This is a request : PLAESE DONT PLAY WITH OUR EMOTIONS.
When we heard about the story ahead , many of the people including myself called zee tv office and the people there listened with patience and told us that such type of story is not cgoing to come up and to forget about it , but in the news 80percent has come correct and remaining 20 percent is there, what about that .
also there was a lady who said its just a show so just see it and finish off with it ..............This is not a way to talk to the caller. we call international calls and not local so she should understand and give us a valid reason. We all know itsjust a show , and since this is a resonable show and we want this show to come up to the top most position thats why we are concerned .
Hope you will take this into consideration and change the story line and not show any absurd things.
this change would be really appreciated. and please give us some light moments and not so much of tension / torture.

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Avatarana09 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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There must be some rationale in writing the show.
While going to get proof to expose Bhalla during jagrata, Abhi talks to Mili and Neetu and tells Mili to keep a check on her anger and not to disclose anything to anypne until he returns with proof.
Same abhi now though his anger is valid is now using his fists with everyone from bhalla to his boss.Wherever he goes for work, he has to deal with this issue. bhalla is not gonna let him live in peace. So then what?
Abhi is an IIM graduate from Ahmedabad.If not anyone else, companies hiring IIM grads hardly try to mess with their ego since companies compete to give IIM grads a job and see to it that they are pampered in their company. Here we see Abhi getting into a job which he says he got "with difficulty" and Abhi being thrown out of his job as though he is a daily vendor?
Why only Abhi has to save all damsels in distress?...Bana thanks here...I had to use your quote.
Will any sane woman go and confront the bad guy whom she has seen paying a lumpsome to a local goondah and talking big things about getting someone killed?
Don't Delhi people add more than few ounces of petrol that all vehicles stop when there is dire necessity.
The story is heading to the DTH storyline when all through the phones and mails from us vieweres not to take the Abhi-Mili storyline has fallen in deaf ears. As Sree suggets, the response team finds it as a joke that we are taking the show to heart.And for them it is...JUST A SHOW. I am sure they must be laughing their heart out after each call that they get. Unfortunately for us viewers though we very well know characters are fictitious and it is not is really happening, a story is shown for us to think and feel what will happen if i am faced wiith this situation.And since each one of us relate to each character some way or other, we try and apply logic saying ...this is the way situation will be handled.
But all our concerns are also ridiculed saying...Its just a show.
And yes like Sree says they know very well how to play with emotions.The heights of KB occupying people's mind was when after seeing Wednesday 's precap about Nakul tearing off Mili's sleeve,i was so lost in thought. But I remembered to call the local grocery story for recharging my phone credit. Instead I called the store and asked for my friend because i was wanting to talk to her about the show. Absent mindedness at its height and I felt so miserable when the store guy told me that they dont sell people at the store.And he asked me...what madam,office tension?. And i thought to myself...i wish it were true that it was office tension.
The group watching the show who are least bit bothered form the majority and sincere viewers with sincere wishes and expecting a gooutcome from the once wonderful story are going to be neglected, we can expect nothing but such crap with flaws that are serious.
Edited by mesimi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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To the Cv's of Karol Bagh....

I have been attentively watching this TV show ever since it started, and have completely adored every bit of it. So far the characters have had personalities and broad acting styles that I prefer. I have started to see a negative trend in the characters disposition and do not like these changes; I believe that if this show continues in its malignant course to turmoil, it will be a big waste for such a great show. I do not like the new Abhi and would like to see an immediate change to his spiteful and pitiful demeanor. I have not enjoyed Simi or Mili's appearances on the show as much either,I would love to see our old Abhi. I believe this will provide a crucial and significant effect to this show. And why is it always everybody looking for help to Abhi? why can't mili call Anuj for a change?.

And why is it that the only story you seem to want to show is the possible rape of Milli with the guilt following Abhi and ofcourse the love that Milli will start to feel for her Jeeju! It is bad enough to show a constant change in the character of the characters but to also show them to stoop so low that is not in their original description. Please show us some positive and a lot less of the evil characters trying to ruin the lives of the others and ALWAYS SUCCEEDING!!! Please bring us back the original show that we fell in love with.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am hating my self so much,now as to how can i stand such things which is not at all real .
Might be in some parts of india people are facing , but cut the crap, an IIM graduate who is supposed to be smart and handome not getting a job, suddenly he feels insecure and inferior about him self .
thats so horrible , was he ( Abhi ) a dumb guy or did he just get passing marks that he is not getting a job, infact i heard that IIM garduated who passes out gets a job fast that too a very good one .
WHAT R U ALL TRYING TO SHOW.
Cvs let me tell you more that you we remeber all the dialogues right from the day one
so please dont change it
and after all; the stupid things taking place you are going to show Milis Roka cancelled and Abhi forming a comfort zone .
Are you are showing that illicit affairs welcome in inda, in todays i read an article that the Villagers in some village killed a couple coz they got married in different casts and an other father killed the daughter and son in law for family honour ................ so want to know are you all promotion gthe same thing ........................ by showing such things.
I would say bull shit .
I know your all getting TRPS with such craps ..... dont you all know but whats shown is utter stupidity.
if you all want more trps ................... make the chnnel internationally live means show the shows at the same time every where be it in india, UAE,US, UK, and othert countries .. you will get trps.
Ijust cant imagine the mentality of the indian audience for seeing such tension episodes............ whent they showed nice episodes the indian audiencesdiddnt want and there were no trps now for such rediculious thing like a tiff between a couple, attempted rape, illicit affairs.....................people like it .
For me atleast this is absurd and Rubbish.
Reading this thread i know many of them will have a hearty laugh as saying this is just a show and should not take it seriously, but let me tell, ifhhtis is ment for an entertainment purpose , please show it in that sense and not so much of tension.
once upon a time we all loved the character of abhi, Simi and MIlli.................role done by Neil, Smiritiand Hunar.................... they have done is so well but of recently I have started hating each one of them with passion
Edited by ssree - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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First mesimi I must congratulate you for putting your thoughts so well and in such an articulate manner...I for one is at the last on the line for two reasons.First i didn't watch this show from the beginning and never discussed the issues on the forum..and second I probably on the forum single out for not being the SIMBHI fan but the KAROL-BAGH fan..which is good in this case because I am not pleading their case or their romance but just stating the facts.
mesimi you reminded me the incident when Abhi had asked all of them to stay calm and not to do anything mischievous then why in the hell he is the one running this marathon with Rajiv and getting agitated with his boss. Not true with his characteristic and without a logic or the reasoning why would a character change so drastically. The problem here is that the creative's have in their hands an actor who is par excellence and is driven and motivated and capable to be a versatile actor..& has given us powerful episodes but to change his style with this speed is causing some bumps and these speed breakers should be slowed down..where Abhi is concerned..He is so natural in portraying this angry young man that we are afraid if you are going to label him now with this image..😍

The 12/24 is a superior quality show with the tabooed topics and not discussed in our Indian society and that exactly is the mascot for your show and also the highlight in the minds of us living abroad..and for you to break the connections with us now is not only going to be detrimental to the show but a big blow to your loyal fan followers..😍
Change your writing team and show us the romance and the magic you once had to mesmerize your viewers to this kind of madness and your smart and intelligent viewers were also glued and hinged to this serial....because of the simplicity and the creativity and the captivity of this serial**.. on the part of the actors and the writing team to work as a team..!!
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Edited by SaNiCo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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excuse. More coming up!
Edited by SaNiCo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sree don;t worry I am sure we are not going to have rape scene. I just know this. it was a horrific episode. But then mili should not have confronted sick person like nakul who is ready to even kill his own brother for money.
And I agree we want simbhi back together ASAO working together to defeat all evils who are plotting against them
I was watching simbhi's first offical meeting where abhi saves simi how sensible they showed him and not he looks tired lifeless senseless looser kind of a guy who can not even understand bhalla's game and plays in his hand.
CVS bring back Old abhi who knew how to handle things without getting uptight and bring back simbhi magic and let vishal handle mili's problems. Abhi has enough to deal with in his own front. Regarding abhi;s job why does he have to be ridiculed by his past and his wife/
what abhi does in his personal life should be his business and no one else.s/
and why is that one day abhi is a great asset to any company and nakul makes him head of his office to next he can barely get a job and work as a clerk along with others not even a personal office and is being ridiculed by others.
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I read every body's comment.
Now let me tell you guys, Iam doing my Management Studies, even still 1 year is there for me to complete it, still iam getting good offers.
CVs, Abhi being a IIM graduate, facing difficulty in finding the job in India, i can't believe this, if you want i can sponsor a job for him. This the worst scenario which you are showing to the viewers, what you think that we all are dump or fools, on the contrary he is working as an clerk (Hell what's going on)
Sree i agree with you, i don;t know why the society is so hooked up watching all worst things, (Rape, Illicit affair, abortion, ) surprised to know that KB is getting good trps and is in the top 10.
CVs Indian Govt. is trying to bring change, but you guys are simply spoiling it by showing all these craps. For God sake, Plz change the story line.
The relationship of a sali and Jeeju is so pure, friendly and bonded, CVs are you guys sick?
Do you want to loose your loyal viewers?
In my opinion there was only two sensible characters in KB that was Mili & Abhi, Now you guys have ruined the charaters to the top most boring level.
What i should say now, these is a show full of Villians, giving more space to villians, succeding in their plans.
Now this i can conclude that these CVs just want to spread, hatred, cruel and bad thoughts into the mind of people.
Edited by Somini - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The CVs ruined this show for me a long time ago and have continued to ruin it. I really don't care anymore. The past two weeks of watching Abhi get degraded once again is beyond belief. I just sit back and watch the show drown on itself. I spoke to someone involved with KB. This person was on the CV team and was the creator the Seethi family. The person left the show because of the demand for the high drama and the failure to show things that were necessary. I was stunned that this person agreed with me on the things that I didn't like about the show including the drastic age changes, the rushed romance between Abhi and Simi and the fac that no rationale was given to explain why a 22 year old would fall in love with a 30 year old woman who had been rejected multiple times and was viewed as frumpy, fat and unattractive.
Learning this you will see that if the very person who created this show was not listened too, then why the heck will the same people give a toss about what you or I have to say?
Edited by Laila2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I lost all hope about this creative team.They crossed the tolerance limit.Now its time for torturing the viewers.Only they know how long it will continue.

If you need second girl in Abhi's life then you can introduce a new one or may bring back Anu.Why you are destroying two sisters relationship?This is horrible.

Edited by rumi005 - 15 years ago

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