What happens next? - Page 2

Originally posted by: tanya12

u know what laila all these incidents that u hve jotted down seems so sarcastic while reading but i am sure dis is what we r goin to watch 4 da next couple of months n da entire story will revolve around the same tedious track🤢🤢

Originally posted by: Laila2009

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Heck, we're all hurting too seeing Abhi getting beat up by Simi. Isn't that worse than my posts?😛

If someone has issue with my posts, they can put their name after this post and ask me never to respond to their posts or converse with them in the future. I will honor their request.

Laila what are you talking?. simi just saved his life from Nakul's sword yaar.gosh u forgot just like simi in 4 days!!.😉

Laila,
I went back and finished reading the rest half of the post. Wuoh! What tight script you have. Brilliant Job! Very well written.
It does look like story that can be made into a movie. I was so impressed by the way you brought in all the threads and tied back to completion.
Yeah, Mili needs a story, since its a TV serial. Otherwise, it could be ended with her helping Simi with makeover.

I know its your story, but there are two small points that I do not want in this story. I am sure I am allowed to write my views on your story and you would not take that as a "negative" criticism.

1. I do not like any triangle, quadrangle or pentagonal(if these or any more of such are possible) love stories, Since your story does have a triangle for Abhi-Simi story and since its a TV drama, I would like Abhi not to love this gorgeous girl, but just the girl loving Abhi. Abhi would be faithful to Simi. (I do not like k-ekta kind of stories).
If this story is made into film, I have no problem with how you have written it.

2. The next one is the divorce between RS & Manju. Again I abhor this breaking up and k-ekta kind story. Again, bcos its a tv drama, can we just have RS & Manju's relation strained and go live separately without the divorce? I do not like this divorce business for anyone. Its too harsh that too in their ripe age. Oh! now, don't get me wrong, I am not against people divorcing and I am not offended by their actions. But I have been watching this couple all these months, Manju and RS are parents and none of the children would want their parents divorced, So, I do not wish them a divorce is all I am saying.

Originally posted by: ramas

Laila what are you talking?. simi just saved his life from Nakul's sword yaar.gosh u forgot just like simi in 4 days!!.😉

Now they are even as for saving each other's life.As for beating, I am not sure !!! . Let us see which outweighs ? love, beating or something else😉😆 .

Originally posted by: bee5

Laila,
I went back and finished reading the rest half of the post. Wuoh! What tight script you have. Brilliant Job! Very well written.
It does look like story that can be made into a movie. I was so impressed by the way you brought in all the threads and tied back to completion.
Yeah, Mili needs a story, since its a TV serial. Otherwise, it could be ended with her helping Simi with makeover.

I know its your story, but there are two small points that I do not want in this story. I am sure I am allowed to write my views on your story and you would not take that as a "negative" criticism.

1. I do not like any triangle, quadrangle or pentagonal(if these or any more of such are possible) love stories, Since your story does have a triangle for Abhi-Simi story and since its a TV drama, I would like Abhi not to love this gorgeous girl, but just the girl loving Abhi. Abhi would be faithful to Simi. (I do not like k-ekta kind of stories).
If this story is made into film, I have no problem with how you have written it.

2. The next one is the divorce between RS & Manju. Again I abhor this breaking up and k-ekta kind story. Again, bcos its a tv drama, can we just have RS & Manju's relation strained and go live separately without the divorce? I do not like this divorce business for anyone. Its too harsh that too in their ripe age. Oh! now, don't get me wrong, I am not against people divorcing and I am not offended by their actions. But I have been watching this couple all these months, Manju and RS are parents and none of the children would want their parents divorced, So, I do not wish them a divorce is all I am saying.

Originally posted by: Laila2009

Bee, I loathe the triangle drama with Nukul-Simi-Abhi; it was the cheapest move made by the writers and totally defeated the crux of the original story. Many people wanted this triangle storyline when the name Neeraj was mentioned. I was mortified. Then some people on this board (no names mentioned) said Simi needed to have Nukul fall in love with her so she could reject him to raise herself worth. It totally dismissed the fact she already had the guy she liked love her so why would she need to have Nukul in her life I even saw posts wishing for Nukul to be good-looking. Believe me, I wish I was disgusted by them but I didn't go around emailing the moderator😕.

I see the need for another woman in Abhi's life as it is only then that Simi will appreciate Abhi and put some effort into herself. Only when a woman feels threatened of losening someone does she actually put some effort into her relationship with that person. Simi having two suitors was a whole other story.

See, the goal of every drama is to have masala; there has to be a conflict be that with one person or with the two people upon which a story is built. There is no conflict for Mili hence no story...get the gist.

Leaving seperately is also fine'; I think the divorce will be something that will not happen but something that could happen...new topic, elderly parents getting divorced. However, Anita would definately work towards seperating them. She and Anuj already came close.

I can't understand how the creatives can make a double masters degree and a to be PhD Simi wait for anyone to make her realise her love for Abhi?

Education should not go waste and make a person not see right from wrong. So, I would prefer a strong Simi than a Simi who always needs someone's help.

My choice does not comply with the uneducated masses, so, get me a strong Simi please?

Originally posted by: ramas

do not understand the fixation of making simi get married to nakul. Simi is marreid to abhi and will stay married to him. Yes they might separate thanks to our evil trio anita, nitu and manju. But it wont last for long and as far as I am concern simi wil never marry nakul. it was predicted by many simi will marry nakul this time and yet simi thrashed him badly selecting abhi.

So let us see waht happnes next. Who says it is going to be a easy ride?.

For most marriage is toughtst where 2 ppl try to become one adjusting to each other. But all teh obstacles in their life make the marrainge and bonding stronger.

May the best win.

Plz keep away from making comments about moderating. You are n't allowed to make fun of rules, I am overlooking it this time.

members aren't aware of this facts when I suggest some one's name for promotion a 3rd person do background check who is not associated with thsi forum. They go thru posts to look for positivity and if tehy find -tivity they reject that member and I can't help it.

Criticism is fine I do it myself when I feel it is going wrong way but then scaring ppl who make postive post making their post -tive driving them away from the forum hurting their feelings is this what we want?.

For us it may be wrong but for some it may be right and if tehy feel it is right let them enjoy.

We take is as a show some take it as it is something close to their heart. So why do we hurt their feelings especailly young minds?

ppl who are hurting pointed me to this post.

ramas,

Obviously I haven't done with my questions, so here are some more for my clarification. Since some of the comments you are making here are as a moderator, I am asking as a member of this forum to the moderator.

1st highlighted paragraph:
Criticism is criticism. There is nothing called negative or positive criticism. It is done to improve the quality of a show and each and every person in art related work - artist, film maker, writer etc has to face it. This is how they improve the calibre of their work.
I am not sure who you are talking about getting scared away. We have a very limited number of
members in this forum. I have not seen anyone extra coming in when the show was sailing smooth or someone running away when it is in shambles. You need introduce us to those people whom only you know of.

2nd highlighted paragraph:
Lets do this, people who are feeling hurted, lets get them talk to me via this forum, I will be very happy to quell their fears with my ever positive thoughts that I have written till date till the 99th episode. Lets gets this done ASAP so that we don't continue to go the same path everytime there is a mismatch of views between you, your young friends and some of us.
I am sure with heavy activity in this forum, as shankar a few days back pointed out, you must be kept very busy, I would like those people not keep you more busy by pointing out our posts and making you read them and advocate on their behalf.

Right now I just hope the next phase of Simi's life there will be a make over in her personality with a change and determination that she willmake Manju believe that she has choosen a right guy for herself and Abhi is in all angles a person any girl young or her age would be proud to have as a life partner..
com on creatives prove many of us wrong and show what strength Simi has by standing by Abhi whenever needed..