Trials Of Fire

Trials Of Fire Ongoing G

Epi 92 Ch 22 Chasing your Love Advay leaves for Allahabad but family worries

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2filmy
2filmy @2filmy 6 years ago nothing I just copy paste the pictures in laptop
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 6 years ago yup from mobile not possible, but what do you use to post from laptop? I do post, but have been wondering if there's any easier way to post, hence asking.
2filmy
2filmy @2filmy 6 years ago oh yes I perfectly remember I requested you to write the SR. there are so many treasured moments. he had so many memorable dialogues. he does romance the best. society assumes a guy shouldn't think of such emotional things. ahh the caring Dev in the 3rd episode was so adorable.
2filmy
2filmy @2filmy 6 years ago I was using a mobile all this time. I can post pictures from laptop. no trick there. I still don't know how to post pictures from mobile. I know. all of them are my favorites. I think your DP is a sketch of the first picture. yes that rain scene was just too good. but I wished they showed Chandni tend to his hand wound too. he tended to her feet. put medicine. but she forgot all about him. but yes their magic made up for all the faults. I too ignored the faults. I too wish it had continued.
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 6 years ago [QUOTE=FrankPunch]Neha I am so sorry for reading the story so late, but, better late than never na?Staff going on holidays add more responsibilities on the remaining staff shoulders.. Last two weeks been horrible. Situation will continue to be so till 1st week of New Year. But i will definitely try to read the remaining chapters and post my comments.No need to be sorry, Jerry! I genuinely liked your honesty in accepting that you are reading the first chapters now... and believe me; you took me down memory lane... made me go through my own start.In regards with the staff being on leave, I perfectly understand and appreciate your situation. In IT, during my middle phase of managing teams. Every Diwali, new year turned out to be maximum work load, client management, SLA management. As if, we don't deserve any festivities or holidays... you took me down memory lane there as well.Chapter 1 You said this is your first FF and your starting statement itself had technical background !The camera started with the window and slowly "zoomed in" on the entire room and "focussed" on the lovebirds...The Zoom In, Zoom Out technique in writing is a tough one, and you have handled it with relative ease. Top notch. I remember, Priyu had urged me to write about SR, when we missed the actual SR part on 6th. If the whole thing was to start with SR, I better start from the windowThe lines that stood out for me : The air was filled with the aftermath of unison, like the rains having impregnated the earth, like Shiva having mated with Shakti. Their passion had sizzled through the night and sleep had engulfed them just early dawn. The Shiv Shakti part was an element of elegance. You explained the whole night, the outcome, and the aura all in one sentence. The doubts and fears of Chandni as a bride, was spot on. Just when she is so apprehensive about the next move, his words "yaad hai I said I will teach you positions" had me in splits , thinking about the scenes in the Show. After the
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 6 years ago Hey Priyu! What a pleasant surprise! You learnt to post Pics? Kab sikhi, Chhupi Rustam? And do share how you do it.The pics you shared, especially the first one, my favourite, too! It's my DPThat whole rain scene was one real good piece of writing. Between the two of them they created such beauty, such magic that all technical glitches, I just chose to ignore and focus on the two of them.Wish he had had more episodes after 6th... like how we had IPK1 after Arnav's confession of I love you during kidnap and after it...Shivrun would have made year's most cute pair.
2filmy
2filmy @2filmy 6 years ago Just going through some AdNi picturesThese are some of my favorites
AshtaVasus
AshtaVasus @AshtaVasus 6 years ago Neha I am so sorry for reading the story so late, but, better late than never na?Staff going on holidays add more responsibilities on the remaining staff shoulders.. Last two weeks been horrible. Situation will continue to be so till 1st week of New Year. But i will definitely try to read the remaining chapters and post my comments.Chapter 1 You said this is your first FF and your starting statement itself had technical background !The camera started with the window and slowly "zoomed in" on the entire room and "focussed" on the lovebirds...The Zoom In, Zoom Out technique in writing is a tough one, and you have handled it with relative ease. Top notch. The lines that stood out for me : The air was filled with the aftermath of unison, like the rains having impregnated the earth, like Shiva having mated with Shakti. Their passion had sizzled through the night and sleep had engulfed them just early dawn. The Shiv Shakti part was an element of elegance. You explained the whole night, the outcome, and the aura all in one sentence. The doubts and fears of Chandni as a bride, was spot on. Just when she is so apprehensive about the next move, his words "yaad hai I said I will teach you positions" had me in splits , thinking about the scenes in the Show. Chapter 2Morning returns and so does her trauma. The anger on the unknown kidnapper is expected from Advay. But the patting Chandni to sleep part is very heartwarming. Generally, a woman always reminisces the previous night, since Shakuntala days. Its hard to see such sensitivities of a man from the Indian society being portrayed. Not even in the movies. Here, its highly refreshing to see Advay reliving those moments with love. And the photo you have attached for "The memory of last night came back rushing to Dev" was so apt in reflecting his feelings There was a time he had tagged her "Shameless" and Characterless. To the extent that he worries today, thinking "Should i break the barrier or not?" and then wor
2filmy
2filmy @2filmy 6 years ago I always remember the story details that touch my heart
srdb5
Sharda @srdb5 6 years ago
I know Priyu.. I always look forward to reading your comments and love the way you mention when even minute details in your review.
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