Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 45

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul 2 months ago Song sequence was very romantic. Jealous kripa dancing with another guy was ridiculous. Ak dance was romantic. NP and KA scenes were funny.PM scene was romantic.
mansi1219
mansi @mansi1219 16 years ago ahhh!!! OMG!! numera... the last 2 parts were awesome!! soo funny!! especially the one b efore this one... this one was awesome! i loved how u talked about each of their looks and clothes.. nice.. the actual disco thing was funny wit a-k.. and the wrong promo.. but the way u said wedding DAY .. i was lmao.. .. cant wait for the next part.. w/e u have planned. since its a big secret and all.. luv mansi
berkeleygirl818
Rutu @berkeleygirl818 16 years ago OMG!!! tht was the most hilariously awesum prt EVER!!! i LOVED it!!! i really thot sumthing bad wud happen if the guys got drunk, but a gud thing tht the girls were there and nothing bad happened!!! lol, the songs were grt... ok, i kinda know wht Prem & Mukti & Josh & Aali went to, did they like go off to have their own fun??? anywazzz... i CANNOT wait to read the next prt, the 'something else' sounds intriguing!!! sooo, continue soon!!!
iluvpulkit
Preet @iluvpulkit 16 years ago omg..can't wait i wanna kno wut the next part is..
ix iishiqaa xo
ishiqa @ix iishiqaa xo 16 years ago yayyy later today i wonder what the next part is can't wait loved the last part jealousy is a weak emotion ishuu❤️3
cheeselova
cheeselova @cheeselova 16 years ago continue soon [:)] _________ sana
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago CHANGE IN PLANS!!! The next part won't be the wedding, it will be something else... i don't want to give it away! anyways sorry for giving the wrong promo!! OH AND I WILL POST THIS NEXT PART LATER TODAY!!
cute Aleesha
Aleesha @cute Aleesha 16 years ago Awwwwsome part. You write extremely good yaar Very cute couples. cute Aleesha39247.6812962963
sweetmittal
sweetmittal @sweetmittal 16 years ago that was really cute, funny, loving and caring part. cant; wait till their marriage. their chemistry rock.
-Ami-
Ami @-Ami- 16 years ago wow awesome part!Can't wait for the next part...
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