Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 36

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul 4 months ago Kiss...I love you scene and dance were romantic.
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago [QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]O. MY. GOD!!!! YAY... they r FINALLY together!!! i cud jump up
nd down with joy!!! AWESUMLY WICKED prt!!!
i LOVE LOVE LOVED
it... my most fav prt yet!!! nd the song was just the best song u cud
have chosen, i LOVE tht song... Kripa is really desperate, she like,
TOTALLY threw herself on him, lol, jk... nd the way she confessed her
love was just, ahhh, not the most perfect way, but still, REALLY cute... nd i
am not even going to say anything bt the whole make-out session scene,
coz tht just left me speechless, it was soooo HOT, lol... u have an
incredible talent of writing... ur an AWESUM writer!!!
i just hope nothing Simone doesnt screw
something up for AK!!! nd i also hope ur not thinking of ending thiss FF
soon, coz tht wud just be TOTALLY devastating!!! and IF u do end up
closing this FF, u shud TOTALLY write another one... anywazzz... i
CANNOT wait to read more... continue soon!!! [/QUOTE]thanks soo much!! glad you liked it! and as for ending the ff umm yea im actually thinking about it but it will have like a lot more parts left so its not any time soon maybe like a month or two and since i regularly update thats a lot of parts so dont worry! yea i have another ff planned sorta but the details are things i have to sort out! [QUOTE=angullgrl91]omg. yeah. they finally confessed well i mean kripa
did. im sooooooooooooooooooooo happy. yeah. cont soon. [/QUOTE]yup they did!! thanks![QUOTE=rajeevskitu]well, i'm a silent reader and 2day i cudn't resist
to comment[ umm..... actually i'm toooooooooo lazy to comment],.......

the part is sweet, cute and ofcourse romantic ..........

i hope atleast now kripa doesn't do something stupid..........

gr8 part buddy.......... [/QUOTE]lol thanks soo much! no i dont plan to separate them right now! [QUOTE=sweetmittal]yay i am so happy that they are one. now please let
them get married soon. don't bring any twist so soon please it a
request. but it
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 16 years ago [QUOTE=Numera*]
[QUOTE=xobrown sugaox] [QUOTE=dancingdiva91] u are not writing crap, i love your writing, this is probably...no wait, it is my fav. ff. I look everyday to see if you've updated. cont. soon
[/QUOTE]

agreed

plz cont. soon

ishuu[/QUOTE]lol wow ok no i actually meant the next part lol! i want it to be more than what it is right now! so yea i just came up with a new idea so i'll start finishing up the part! maybe in like 2 hours it will be done![/QUOTE]yea i agree with those two, and yay cant wait
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago [QUOTE=xobrown sugaox] [QUOTE=dancingdiva91] u are not writing crap, i love your writing, this is probably...no wait, it is my fav. ff. I look everyday to see if you've updated. cont. soon
[/QUOTE]

agreed

plz cont. soon

ishuu[/QUOTE]lol wow ok no i actually meant the next part lol! i want it to be more than what it is right now! so yea i just came up with a new idea so i'll start finishing up the part! maybe in like 2 hours it will be done!
dancingdiva91
dancingdiva91 @dancingdiva91 16 years ago u are not writing crap, i love your writing, this is probably...no wait, it is my fav. ff. I look everyday to see if you've updated. cont. soon
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago NEXT PART WILL BE UP TOMORROW! I dont really feel inspired i feel like im writing crap lol its really late at night anyways so for delay! if i finish early i'll let you guys know its coming soon k!Numera*39229.9043865741
nycdesiqt
nycdesiqt @nycdesiqt 16 years ago great job loved the part between kripa and angad and the part where they declare their love for each other in public was hilarious...the gasp, the silence, the awws, the WHAT...lol
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago [QUOTE=brainychild92]i just caught up on the last two parts.. i think i missed two parts on every fanfic of mine..lolz

great parttt!!! loved itt seeing simon'es face.. lol

but the only thing is i dont remember aliyah and josh..... plz refresh me on them..

continue soooooooonn[/QUOTE]oh aaliya and josh are just part of the gang, they are just side ppl but good friends of Kavya angad neev prachi anjali and kripa! as for posting today its gonna be hard cuz i have jsut got on th ecomputer and i have more than half to write and still come up with some ideas so yea! i'll try and ill make sure its long like the last two parts!
brainychild92
brainychild92 @brainychild92 16 years ago i just caught up on the last two parts.. i think i missed two parts on every fanfic of mine..lolz great parttt!!! loved itt seeing simon'es face.. lol but the only thing is i dont remember aliyah and josh..... plz refresh me on them.. continue soooooooonn
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