Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 23

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Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago thanks soooo much!!
[QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]OMG!!!! ahhhh.... they kissed again... schoooo schweet & romantic!!!

loved it... they'r like always matching... its quite cute,
hehe!!! ouch... crab bites hurt... poor Angad... lol... yay... Kripa
loves him too... niceee... i CANNOT wait for the next prt... the preview
sounds exciting!!! [/QUOTE]yup lol yea they are matching all the time lol i love having them match! lol yea im sure they would hurt! lol well she doesnt know yet but yea she does! its not that exciting lol[QUOTE=angullgrl91]omg. dat was such a cute n romantic part. i luved it
so much. ak r so cute 2gether. i hope their fear of losing their
friendship soon disappears so that they can love each other w/out any
worries. cont soon. [/QUOTE]thanks a bunch!! yea i think they are cute too! it will...eventually![QUOTE=goldi2]lol nono dont make me wait THAT long lol im posting this
jsut soo u dont post it on tuesday but more like tommarow or even today
wont hurt lol
well im sur ei dont need to tell u how much i enjoyed reading the part!!
lol
continue soon:D

Hina[/QUOTE]lol arite i wont make you wait that long lol! soo sweet!
[QUOTE=iamsmart]gr8 part


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sana[/QUOTE]thats a bunch!!!!!![QUOTE=nehagupta_9]OMG OMG OMG That was such an awesome part... i
wonder wats gunna happen b/w them, i hope they jus dnt say sorry to
each other n leave!!![/QUOTE]awww thanks you! lol not so much sorry! lol but they do leave! cant stay at the beach forever lol
[QUOTE=lil_desi_goddes]wow! brilliant!!

i really enjoy your romantic parts, because you can seriously imagine them!

please do continue and i love the fact that every other day from monday you
are going 2 update!!

[/QUOTE]thanks soo much! hehe i love writing them! lol yea its works out for me too and on top of that gives me time to think where the story is heading![QUOTE=erier101]kk im in a hurry but will leave a quick comment cdun
wanna wait that long!! lol!! so ye
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago lol umm ill be posting within an hour!
ami_princess
Bhumika amin @ami_princess 16 years ago plzzzzzzzzz write the next part......i am dying 4 it.... bhumi
Cytherea
Cytherea @Cytherea 16 years ago amazing part..i just read both the last two updates together nd it is amazing..the 2 make the sweetest couple ever..lol..angad u had better tell her u love her before it effects ur relationship in an adverse way..i love the way u display their emotions so clearly..waiting for monday!!
ixi-shaj
ixi-shaj @ixi-shaj 16 years ago Brilliant- is seriously thought she was going to push him off her if only to save their friendship form becoming awkward. anyway- how are they going to react this time after their kiss/
MochaQueen
BellaRosa @MochaQueen 16 years ago lol kripa is sooo mean to angad i mean her pranks! but hes rlly sweet!! hey can u post more of kavya n anjali plzz??:P btw dis is my fab ff rite now:D:D luv yaa
roshaa
roshaa @roshaa 16 years ago thank god ...this time no one came between there romantic scean otherwise that person have gone to god !! because i must have killed that person lol awesome ,amazing ,lovley and romantic part!! contniue soon !!!
angel_tia
saborni ahamed @angel_tia 16 years ago it was vv romantic!!!!!hope kripa realises her luvv and angad confesses his!!!!!
sweetangle04
shagun @sweetangle04 16 years ago absolutely briliant....sooo romantic
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