Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 24

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Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago [QUOTE=xobrown sugaox]amazing

i loved it continue soon
ishuuOMG... tht was schooooo adorably schweet!!!
LUVED it!!
thnk God they r not all awkward around each other!!! i wud like, TOTALLY
hate tht!!! Music & Lyrics... heard tht's a cute movie... mite check it
out!!! hehe... shaving cream... schooo hilarious nd cute!!! awww... Kavya is
a sucker for romance.. he's like always flirting with Anjali... kinda cute!!!
poor Anju, didnt get a kiss, sad!!! hehe... Neev's just toooo gud, i LOVE
him!!! i LOVED it... ns CANNOT wait to read more.. continue soon!!!
preview sounds gud nd intriguing!!!

[/QUOTE]yea i didnt want to make it wierd, cuz i dont like the awkwardness myself lol i like to resolve issues quickly lol and AK not confessing is killing me too lol! it was a really cute movie i loved it and it was funny too! lol i love neev too! thanks!
[QUOTE=Gaurav''s Love]lolll toooo funnny shaving cream on their faces i would love 2 see the sight of tht n awww da guys r sooo sweet, not kissing the girls even tho they wanted toooooooo
cnt wait until AK get together.....ooo basketballl shud b cool wonder
what will happen....plz continue sooon great part cnt wait til weds [/QUOTE]lol thanks soo much! i would too lol that would be fun! yea i cant wait either lol!
[QUOTE=ami_princess] thnak u.....u r a great writer.i think u should be in ektas creative team....wat say?
plz.......do write the next part quick!

bhumi [/QUOTE]THANK YOU!!!! your soo sweet! lol next part was written like a week ago lol! i write them all on the weekend and then i got stuck because i didnt outline or figure out the stuff after part 26 and i had AP's coming so thats y the whole every other day thing for now, until i get time to figure out future parts and get a chance to write them as well!
thanks soo much!
yea i hate making it awkward! lol 'their women' lol so possessive LMAO!
thanks soo much! i was hoping you guys could picturize it because i totally ca
angel_tia
saborni ahamed @angel_tia 16 years ago luvvly waiting 4 their basketball match!!!wen will AK be togethr?????
Shazia_haya
Sumra @Shazia_haya 16 years ago hey i just caught up...n i'm looking forward to the basketmall game.....i'm sure it's going to be fun...do continue soon....u really write gr8!!!
ami_princess
Bhumika amin @ami_princess 16 years ago i love ur fan fiction ........it has romance, funnyness and everything ......plz keep writing..... love bhumi
Cytherea
Cytherea @Cytherea 16 years ago lol..how is it tht evry 1 of ur update is better thn the one before??seriously i just cant get enuff..im in love with ur work..lol..so continue soon..i need my daily dosage of ur FF so tht i can function properly..
MochaQueen
BellaRosa @MochaQueen 16 years ago yayyyy kavya n anjali:D:D:D lol! continue soon cant wait for d basketball match i sense anotha prank;)
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 16 years ago Awwwwwww... dat was a really cute part... lukin forward to da basketball match!!!
ixi-shaj
ixi-shaj @ixi-shaj 16 years ago classic- u can tell they were all dying for a kiss from their beloved's
angelic shaz
shazeena @angelic shaz 16 years ago omg dat wasso funni the shaving incident and the different romancing continue soon jus lovin it
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