EPISODE-28
Rajveer and Naina found a suitable lodging in the Northern part of the city. The Army prison was towards North-East. They had to initiate their mission slowly and in phases. They had to make sure not to look out of place or to do anything that could arouse suspicion. They spent the first two days roaming around in the nearby areas. They made keen observation of the mannerisms of the local people. Naina picked it up quickly as compared to Rajveer. Slowly they extended the area they used to stroll to check upon. Slowly and gradually they reached almost the prison. Rajveer kept an eye on the place and also the people who worked there. Four of the prison staff lived in Wazirabad, six in Sialkot and the rest of them in the accommodation provided right next to the prison.
Their only option to seek inside information was to crack-up one of the four residing in Wazirabad. His focus shifted to them and they were under his surveillance. He didn't let Naina go with him too close to the prison area, even after her repeated insistence. Though, within the town, she accompanied him everywhere.
Meanwhile Naina made acquaintances with the other people staying in the lodge. They stayed there as Mr. and Mrs. Azhar farooqi. One evening when Rajveer returned he found Naina lost in her thoughts and looking upset.
"Relax Naina..... Navin mil jaayega."
"Main Bhaiyya ke baare mein nahin soch rahi thi."
"Then?"
"Maa-Baba...... Unhe lagta hai ki main Neetika ke saath Phagwara mein hoon. Maine isse pehle unse kabhi jhooth nahin bola. Pata nahin Neeti unhein kaise handle kar rahi hogi."
"Woh sab Neeti pe chod do. Waise bhi yahan se baithe-baithe tum kuch kar bhi nahin sakti ho na...... Stop thinking about trivial issues and focus on our mission."
"Hmmmmmmm....."
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She was sitting near the window of the beautifully decorated room. It was late night or rather early morning but her eyes showed no traces of sleep in them. She was very happy and kept on staring at the exquisite diamond ring in her finger.
"Kitne pyaar se ring ko dekha jaa raha hai.... Kaash ring pehnane waale ko bhi kabhi itne hi pyaar se koi dekh leta." Came a voice from the door.
"Kya karoon? Woh kehte hain na Diamonds are a girl's best friend."
"Matlab ki aaj ki raat aap apni ring ke saath hi busy hain aur hamara koi chance nahin hai." He said coming closer to her.
"You bet."
"Matlab main jaaon."
"Well.... Tumhara ghar hai...Tumhari marzi."
He turned to leave but she held him by his hand and went to him. She put her arms around his neck.
"Waise main tumhein ek baat batana bhool gayi.... Fiance is anyday, dearer to a girl, than her best friend."
"Really?" He slipped his hands around her waist and pulled her closer. Their bodies rubbed against each other. She lowered her eyes...blushing. He took her in his embrace and they stood like that holding each other for long.
"I still can't believe Navin ki aaj hamari engagement hui hai."
"Kyun? Is it that difficult to believe ki ab tumhein saari zindagi mujhe hi jhelna hai? But mind you...main tumhein koi aur choice nahin dene waala....whether you like it or not."
"Promise."
"Yes Ma'am...Gentleman's Promise. Aur aaj se aap officially hamari hain and if it's still difficult to believe I have other ways to make you believe that."
"Acha....aur woh kaise."
"Very simple."
Without giving her even a single second to comprehend his intentions, he was already on her lips. He was kissing them passionately igniting a similar passion withing her as well. Her hands went into his hair and her fingers started playing with them as their tongues fiddled with each other inside their mouth. The passionate moment soon came to an end when they heard a voice.
"Humnein kuch nahin dekha."
They turned to the door and saw Rajveer and Naina standing there, with their backs turned to them. Rajveer had closed her mouth with his hands to shut her up.
Neetika was embarrassed but Navin was not.
"Nahin dekha na....good. Ab chup-chaap door band karo aur niklo yahan se and DO NOT DISTURB..... Bhaago ab dono."
"Navin?" Neetika was amused at his reaction.
"What?"
Rajveer closed the door and Naina ran away from there, giggling.
"Yeh ladki has-has ke saare ghar waalon ko jaga degi...Uffff."
"To tum jaldi se apne room mein jaao."
"Hellooooo... Just now you said...Mera ghar...meri marzi. Raj handle kar lega use."
He again tried to kiss her but she retreated.
"Mujhe neend aa rahi hai." She said with a pretentious yawn.
"Oh... that's all the more better."He said hugging her from behind.
"Kyun?"
"Kyun... well....woh isliye because you even have a company tonight."
"Shut up Navin."
A tear rolled down as she laughed on those sweet memories of Navin. She was so absorbed that she could even feel his hands around her waist and unintentionally her hands moved to hold them. But they were not there. She picked up a phone and dialed a number.
"Hello Alekh. Raj aur Naina ki koi news."
"Nahin.. Unke Wazirabad pahunchne ke baad se unki koi news nahin hai."
"Unhone call kyun nahin kiya... It's been around 20 days. Kal Maa ka bhi phone aaya tha. She was asking about Naina. Alekh mujhe Maa-Baba se Naina ke baare mein jhooth bolna acha nahin lagta."
"I know Neetu.... Par hum kar kya sakte hain. Maine hi unhein unnecessarily call karne se mana kiya tha."
"Alekh I am worried."
"Neetu please...Dont be and don't forget...No news is a good news. Aur tu zyaada tension mat le."
"I can't help it Alekh..... Tu..."
"Neetu meri baat sun..... Raj aur Naina sab sambhal lenge. Tu fikr mat kar. Woh jaldi hi aajayenge. I am sure ki unhein bahut jaldi hi koi lead milegi...... I have a very strong gut feeling."
"I hope so."
"Chal tu apna khayal rakh aur apni medicines time pe lena. Jaise hi mujhe koi news milegi, I'll give you a call. Okay?"
"Hmmmm....."
"Theek hai... You take care. Bye."
"Bye."
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sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Hey Guys,
Here's d nxt part...RN parts to follow frm here on..It will b Romantic or not I dont think i can exactly say dat bt here it goes..Waise navin ki story thodi familiar lagegi bt sryyyyyyyyyy cudnt think of something else!!!!
Hope u guys like it!!
Luv,
Sanya..
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Sureee yaar..Just gimme 10 minutes!!!
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
mere exams 25june ko khatm honge use din last paper hai
yaar jo bhi chahe tu kuch soche aur chae tu kuch likhe per teri story mein clear hota hai, professional wrieters bhi itni clearity specially discriptio of city , vilage, their journey , each and every place name all is too claer.
what i mean to say is each and every thing so clear and looks too realistic that yes it can actaully happen
[/QUOTE]25 June??? Bachche ki jaan lenge yeh log...hey Bhaggu!!!Waise itni saari tareef k liye Thank u very much!!!P.S - I'll update after 4pm 2day!!!
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Hmmmmm.....coool idea...chal lete hain appointment...aur Narration k kaamon mein Sameer bahut experienced hai to uski help bhi le lete hain...Wats say???
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari
17 years ago
hey sanya
great part yaar
i liked your Idea of narrating the story to Rajeev yaar
chal usee appointment lete hai then we will go
what do you think?
pl comment
Pinka @pinka28
+ 2
17 years ago
mere exams 25june ko khatm honge use din last paper hai
yaar jo bhi chahe tu kuch soche aur chae tu kuch likhe per teri story mein clear hota hai, professional wrieters bhi itni clearity specially discriptio of city , vilage, their journey , each and every place name all is too claer.
what i mean to say is each and every thing so clear and looks too realistic that yes it can actaully happen
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Dat is very encouraging Andrea!!!Filhaal dats it for Navin n Neetika.....n nxt part coming up really soon!!!
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Thank u Neha!!!!& dont worry Navin jaldi hi mil jaayega!!
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Happy days ka pata nahin bt Navin jaldi aa jaayega dat is 5 to 6 parts more to go b4 his re-entry...dats it!!!So basically dis weekend woh hamaare saath hoga.
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Dont worry sweetheart...Unka number bhi aayega