EPISODE-15
"Waise kya baat hai Raj? Mera favorite restaurant, mera favorite color!!!"
"Color?"
"Yeah...Black...tumhari shirt."
"Oh that... Well tumhara favorite restaurant isliye because main tumhare saath dinner pe aaya hoon and for your favorite color...well that's just a co-incidence. Mujhe nahin pata tha black is your favorite color."
"Matlab agar pata hota to nahin pehente?" Rajveer was a bit shocked at a question.
"What kind of question is that?"
"Okay-okay...I was just joking. Waise suddenly yeh dinner ka plan kaise."
"Yun hi...maine socha phir mauka mile na mile."
"What?? Raj you sound as if tum border pe war ladne jaa rahe ho. Come on!!"
"You are right."
"Right? What do you wanna say?"
"Naina... Navin ne tumhe kuch nahin bataya but somehow I think you should know."
"Know what? Raj you are scaring me now."
"Naina you know ki Pulwama mein recently kuch terrorist attcks hue hain. Aur uske baad wahan se arms and ammunitions bhi baramad hue hain."
"Yeah... so?"
"Yeh actual incident ka official version hai... I mean filtered version."
"Raj...what does all that mean?"
"That means Naina ki sach yeh hai ki wahan pe haalaat kafi kharab hain. Army in that area right now has been put on Red Alert. War can break out any moment. Naina... we are not going on a terrorist attack site.... we are going on a war front."
"What? Lekin bhaiyya ne is bare mein kuch kyun nahin bataya?"
"Because this information is highly confidential."
"Then why are you telling me?"
"Honestly... even I don't know. Bas mujhe laga... you should know."
"Raj....." Naina was at the loss of words. She didn't know how to react to this. She knew that Rajveer and Navin were army men and that was one situation they are prepared for throughout their training. But still
She didn't want to accept that they were going to fight a war.
"And what about Neeti?"
"Nahin Neeti nahin aa rahi hai."
That was somewhat relieving for her but the thought of Rajveer and Navin going for a war was too taxing for her. She kept quiet for the entire evening....without a word. She didn't speak even when Rajveer dropped her home. Finally Rajveer broke the silence.
"Won't you wish me luck?"
Naina gave him a half-heartedly smile and said "All the best Raj. I'll see you in the morning." Saying this Naina turned to get down from car but she could not. Raj's words stopped her.
"We won't be meeting tomorrow."
"But why?"
"Because I'll leave when you'll be on your show."
"But why Raj.... you cant do this. Tum mujhse mile bina kaise jaa sakte ho."
"Isiliye to yeh dinner plan kiya tha maine....Just to spend some time with you and to meet you for one last time before war."
On hearing this Naina's eyes were moist. Something inside Naina wanted her to hold him by his hand and stop him from going. She wanted to tell him that it was too dangerous there…. That he was going to a place from where he might not come back. This thought gave her a pain….deep inside her heart. All this while she was just looking at him. She didn't even blink. But the next moment she came out of her thoughts… back to the reality. The reality that he had to go, no matter what and nothing can stop him…..and being a soldier nothing should stop him. She hugged him. "I'll miss you Raj"
"Me too." Rajveer's voice was also heavy. He held her tightly in her arms not wanting to let her go. Naina was special for him…..she has always been special. She has always been one person whose thought was enough to bring a smile on his face. The thought of going away from her and her moist eyes were getting painful for him.A tear came down rolling Naina's cheek as they separated. An awkwardness somehow unknowingly crept between them.
"Come on Naina... I want to see you smile before I go."
"Sure... Jeet ke aana." She said that forcing a smile on her face.
"Of Course... Haarna to hum afford hi nahin kar sakte."
"I'll be waiting for you and Bhaiyya to return. Bye."
"Bye...and take care"
"You too."
Naina turned to get down but Rajveer held her by hand.
"Naina what if I don't come back?"
"Shut up Raj…You don't even need to think about something like that because you are coming back…… You get that."
"C'mon Naina lets be practical…it's a warzone…anything can happen."
"No Raj…nothing bad is gonna happen and I know that. And don't you dare speak even a single word after that." Naina was enraged.
They didn't even realize that they were holding each others' hands. They didn't look at each other…they didn't even talk to each other. They sat there like that for a while. Then finally Rajveer turned to Naina and gave her a smile. Looking straight into her eyes he went closer to her and gave a peck on her cheek.
"Goodnight Naina."
"Goodnight Raj."
Naina got down from car with a heavy heart. Deep down she was scared...even though she had no idea what the coming days had in store for her.
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 9
6 months ago
Both guys in her life are heading into danger.
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Yogiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Frankly dis comment is sooo not ur style bt then I luuuuvd it!!!
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
[QUOTE=Tas]
[QUOTE=sanyamalhotra][QUOTE=Tas]
oh lovely.awesome .awesome.awesome.hey jst a suggestion u can show something like naina wishing raj and other soldiers all the best on her show.and a scene somewhat like raj driving the car and listening to naina's show and missing her and here naina on her radio show wishing them and putting up some romantic songs and both slowly realising their love for each other.
its jst an idea .i know it does not match up to ur level. u can depict it better.waiting for ur next part.[/QUOTE]
Hmmmmmm......sounds goood!!!Bt firstly its a war situation yeh ek confidential info hai......Naina wishing soldiers luck mite raise a few eyebrows......Bt still wid some modifications dis idea definitely sounds worth it bt genuinely ek baat boloon......Radio show write karne k naam pe meri vatt lag jaati hai...Bt still I m trying n I still hve one full day to try dat out....Lemme c wat can b done......Bt again dont pin up hopes.
Ne-ways.....Thanxxxx for d comment,compliment n suggestion!!![/QUOTE]ya u r rite.i forgot abt that confidential part.i thin mera suggestion thoda galat hogaya but i am sure whatever u rite will surelly be goood.hey tum radio show likhne se kyun dar thi hoo.to say the truth the best thing i love abt ur ff is the radio shows u wrote in the starting.i think u wrote them really well.so i am waiting for such show patiently.[/QUOTE]I m glad u liked those shows...bt as I told u all ki main radio nhin sunti so it becomes really difficult for me to write such things ......Dimag ki dahi ho jaati hai.....Aur rite now I m not able to decide ki Naina ka state of mind given circumstances mein exactly kaisa hona chahiyeBt I m still trying....basically bcoz mujhe is month k end tak post karne k liye 22 parts chahiye n till now I hve only 21 so dis 1 part i do need.....Bt then all dis is my headache...chuck it...I m still trying....c ya 2mrw!!!!
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari
17 years ago
TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tas @Tas
17 years ago
[QUOTE=sanyamalhotra][QUOTE=Tas]
oh lovely.awesome .awesome.awesome.hey jst a suggestion u can show something like naina wishing raj and other soldiers all the best on her show.and a scene somewhat like raj driving the car and listening to naina's show and missing her and here naina on her radio show wishing them and putting up some romantic songs and both slowly realising their love for each other.
its jst an idea .i know it does not match up to ur level. u can depict it better.waiting for ur next part.[/QUOTE]
Hmmmmmm......sounds goood!!!Bt firstly its a war situation yeh ek confidential info hai......Naina wishing soldiers luck mite raise a few eyebrows......Bt still wid some modifications dis idea definitely sounds worth it bt genuinely ek baat boloon......Radio show write karne k naam pe meri vatt lag jaati hai...Bt still I m trying n I still hve one full day to try dat out....Lemme c wat can b done......Bt again dont pin up hopes.
Ne-ways.....Thanxxxx for d comment,compliment n suggestion!!![/QUOTE]ya u r rite.i forgot abt that confidential part.i thin mera suggestion thoda galat hogaya but i am sure whatever u rite will surelly be goood.hey tum radio show likhne se kyun dar thi hoo.to say the truth the best thing i love abt ur ff is the radio shows u wrote in the starting.i think u wrote them really well.so i am waiting for such show patiently.
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Touchwood...waise jo bhi aap logon ka pyaar hai...
Ne-wauys thanxxxx a lot ushma!
luckyrobin @luckyrobin
17 years ago
kya baat hai sanya.. aapke FF ki fanlist toh badhte hi jaa rahi hai??? That should tell you how much all of us LOVE your FF.. great going! and keep writing..
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Obstacles na ho to journey ka maza hi kya.....Bt No Desh-Drohi thing at all..........dats for sure....Bechara Navin ab ek baar aur Desh-Drohi bola usko kisi ne to khud hi heart attack se mar jaayega... ...dats cliched n done to death thing....
BTW Thanxxx is d last thing required...aur waise bhi Thanxxx to mere ko bolna chahiye...for dat lovely comment!!!
KSG_qubool_hai @KSG_qubool_hai
17 years ago
oh my god.. that ws so lovely.. beautifully written sanya.. portrayed the emotions so well.. i felt like i cud see it happening.. it ws jus wonderful.. i feel so bad for both of them... they hvnt started their journey yet.. n already such a huge obstacle.. i hope raj n navin come back fine.. n i really hope their is none of the desh drohi thing.. do update soon sanya.. n thanks for this wonderful story.. khnk_rox39187.4515625
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Toooo bad...bcoz I luv tragedies(lekin wahin tak jahan aage kuch achcha hone ka scope ho)BTW Lemme hope so too!!!!