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Omg finally a happy chapter 👏
Sanju I've never cried so much while reading a story as I did with this one !
Your an amazing writer! You put in so much emotion that it strongly affects the reader where something painful hurts 10xs more then it usually would and something happy puts us over the moon with joy and excitement . Loved this chapter ! Mehek believed that her husband will comeback to his family no mater what even when everyone else gave up on him . she lived with her son waiting for the day he promised to comeback and her husband didn't disappoint and actually showed up on time . Love this miniature cutie pie !
Sanju I've noticed you've gone hindi on me in at least two stories now with no translation. Having to guess or skip those parts causes misunderstanding what's actually going on 😕 keep them as sometimes translating doesn't express the exact meaning of what your trying to say but please translate Hindi parts next to it for us that are left clueless not understanding any of it .
Beautiful extremely emotional story! Felt the pain ,fear , resilience/ determination and joy along with Mehek that I almost couldn't handle it when it was extremely sad .I was left speechless couldn't comment on the previous chapters other then cry .That's how talented you are ! Because of this strength in expressing emotions so realistically that it jumps off the page and pulls you in it ,living it along with the characters I personally prefer your happy stories for the sake of my health 😆 .
Congratulations on another masterpiece! Thank you so much for sharing it with us and can't wait to see what you come up with next .
PS: Sorry I told you before I'm brutally honest when it comes to my stories I take them seriously 😆
Sanju I've never cried so much while reading a story as I did with this one !
Your an amazing writer! You put in so much emotion that it strongly affects the reader where something painful hurts 10xs more then it usually would and something happy puts us over the moon with joy and excitement . Loved this chapter ! Mehek believed that her husband will comeback to his family no mater what even when everyone else gave up on him . she lived with her son waiting for the day he promised to comeback and her husband didn't disappoint and actually showed up on time . Love this miniature cutie pie !
Sanju I've noticed you've gone hindi on me in at least two stories now with no translation. Having to guess or skip those parts causes misunderstanding what's actually going on 😕 keep them as sometimes translating doesn't express the exact meaning of what your trying to say but please translate Hindi parts next to it for us that are left clueless not understanding any of it .
Beautiful extremely emotional story! Felt the pain ,fear , resilience/ determination and joy along with Mehek that I almost couldn't handle it when it was extremely sad .I was left speechless couldn't comment on the previous chapters other then cry .That's how talented you are ! Because of this strength in expressing emotions so realistically that it jumps off the page and pulls you in it ,living it along with the characters I personally prefer your happy stories for the sake of my health 😆 .
Congratulations on another masterpiece! Thank you so much for sharing it with us and can't wait to see what you come up with next .
PS: Sorry I told you before I'm brutally honest when it comes to my stories I take them seriously 😆
