MehRya SS: His Last Valentine...Epilogue page 35 04/03/18..... - Page 22

Originally posted by: AD04

Res😛

Unres😛

Wow what a amazing chapter u have wriiten👏..

I must say u have wriiten very intelligently without oozing out a drop of suspence to whole of scenario.👏

So it was so very much planned .. loved the every part of actual truth relavation of whole goon drama 😛. Ma played and outsmart SK too😆

And that Shaurie part is really beautiful 😳.. SK was literally surprised with this 😃

It's really good that mehek is not rushing into their relationship and giving each other a chance and fair space which both deserve 😃

Nehal and SK conversation was very beautiful😛

It will be interesting to c when their relationship will take next step 😛

Eagerly waiting for next update😉

One thing more I never tired off reading Ur stories so it's an bonaza for me that last part is splitted in to two . U have the full liberty of writing as much as u can .. we are here for acknowledging that😛

Thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: Diva200

Lovely update

So it was all planned and Ms got shot by accident

Sk has competition with Jaison

Ms is taking her time and Sk will have to woo her now

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: YourNightmare

seems like i am the only one who don't get replies to the fbs 😆

Originally posted by: crtkelly

So you noticed that huh...😆. It is not from a lack of enjoying them...just needed the time to do them justice😛 and now that I am wide awake when I should be asleep... they are coming up in chronological order since I am a bit anal like that...😉

Originally posted by: YourNightmare

I didn't give chapter 3 fb as well so here i am giving a collective one for 3rd and 4th

First of all thank you for taking my suggestion for the acting villain name here at the time😆

Chapter 3 & 4

Shruti is such a desperate women trying to convince herself hard that Shaurya cares for her and really wanted to marry her when she was told the truth that she so wanted to deny by her friend Tanya that Shaurya only loves Mehak, even if he pretend to hate her now that is because he loves her immensely and he is doing his best to convince himself to hate her but he can't he will always be loving her and her only and the fact that he was going to propose her was just to hurt her not anything else, Shruti was married too?😲 waiting for the divorce settlement, i am sure she lied about that too when she told Tanya that Shaurya knew about that, she is a leech who is after every other guy's blood sorry i mean money 😆...Shaurya's eyes were fixed on Mehak and wanted Vicky to put up an act and he did, Shruti was trying her best to get Shaurya's attention but B got none😆 , Mehak brought water for Vicky and she caught onto it that it was all an act she didn't want Vicky to get hurt, Shaurya was desperate to know why Mehak was crying such a fool he was but his concern and care for her was so visible in his tone and both the brother were worried about that Knife Mehak had, so when that idiot was so busy hating her he didn't notice how Mehak Vicky's bhabi shared such a lovely bhabi-devar bond..Jason had threatened to even kill Mehak if she was trying to be acting smart and warned her to stay away from the two brothers..Shruti was still filling Shaurya's ears against Mehak such a disgusting woman, at the end Shaurya was surprised at Shruti's words was he then catching upto something...Sara was bleeding which was then a plan of Mehak and she was allowed to be taken away, Mehak had hoped for Trey to be gone with her but he wasn't allowed to and Trey wouldn't have left without Mehak 😛, seeing their interaction Shaurya was so jealous 😆, he was telling himself that he hates her but no at that moment even he got convinced at that point too that he can't hate her, his Mehak all he saw was goodness in her and those feelings of his of love, admiration and affection were slowly coming out and he was realising he can't live without her she meant so much to him...They were negotiating for hostages release and Jason agreed to release one that was Trey but trey was adamant on taking Mehak with him too which Jason didn't allow but the negotiator on the other end convinced him to release one at all cost as it will be a good gesture after what happened to Sara and so he did release Vicky but Vicky was not going anywhere without his bhabi, Jason at last agreed to release both but then reiterated on his decision much to the shock of his men..Jason is more interested in knowing about whats going with Mehak and Shaurya so he wanted to know more😆 and he asked to continue what he had interrupted earlier that was Shaurya proposing Shruti, B was happy but her happiness was short lived she was lying again when Shaurya asked her why she let her cousin be married to a man like Trey, she was stuttering and was making excuses just then Tanya who was scared of Mehak thinking she will kill her as she hurt Sara😆 started to tell what exactly they did and the B's deceptive,cunning face her real face was starting to be revealed

Thanks for all the pms Kelly and sorry for being late 😳

Originally posted by: YourNightmare

So sorry Kelly i haven't been regular with the fbs as i was away

I will give the previous chapters fbs when i am fully here and that will be real soon😉

Just read this one so thought of giving fb of this one right now

So we have jumped right up to the scene where the kidnappers gang was shot along with Jason😆

May be there will be fbs to how it happened?😕 and that Tanya scene where she was confessing to what actually happened and how they separated them was cut off here?

Anyway so its good that we are out of that hostage situation which lasted for about 4 chapters😆 and Shaurya learned the truth about B**** Shruthi but Mehak got shot in when sharpshooters were lighting up the gang😲, how can a sharpshooter miss his target? and now Mehak is in hospital requiring surgery, poor girl has to suffer so much? 😭 and now that idiot Shaurya has learned the truth he is in real guilt but after reading about the fbs and all what surprised me the most that he misunderstood the whole scene and giving how it was played out i will give him the benefit of the doubt here as he believed what he saw but what i never understood is he never asked Mehak about that? never confronted her instead he left her and was all broken up...

And that hotel room scene? did it progress further and anything happened between him and Shruti?🤢

If something has happened then he doesn't deserve Mehak at all...But i am sure nothing happened and more to be revealed in that fb?

Mehak still calls for him first what will the idiot do, that pain he gave her all this time?

This is something i never expected to read as a valentines story Kelly as Mehrya romance is non-existent instead we are getting flashbacks of that B in that hotel room we despise the most 🤣 but its a really good one kels, just serve it up with some Mehrya romance as well 😉😆

Thanks for the pm Kelly😊

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Kelly di,sorry for being late i need a weekend to catch up with the updates.i'll be back wd my fb soon.