SS-KISMAT KA KHEL(every story do not have perfect end) epilogue updatd - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sunet27taherian


meherya hoga but pehle Vicky ok aane toh do😆


Ab Vicky be aana baki hei
Kithane chapter thak wait karna padega???😔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manjulaiju


Ab Vicky be aana baki hei
Kithane chapter thak wait karna padega???😔


vicky's role isn't too big! shayad aaj hi 😉
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PART-9


PAGES FROM THR BROWN DIARY!

11th February, 1983, delhi

Aaj maine pehlibaar Sir ko dekha...KHANNA INDUSTRIES KI MALIK! Unho ne milwaya! sir ko dekh kar aisa laga k wo bohot tension mei hai! Par kiuyn? Hoga shayad! businessman hai! itna badaBusiness akela samhal raha hain naa Is liye! Unho ne mere saath achchi taraah se baat kiya! Mujhko wo bohot achchey lagey! Wo dikhne mei bhi achcha hai! Lekin phir bhi...pata nehi kiuyn unmei mujhko kuch kaami mehsus hui! Jaati ho diary! Agar unko aur bhaiya ko saath mei khra kar do naa toh phir unko hi prince lagega! Bhaiya ko nehi! Yeh mei kya likh rehi hu??

DELHI TALES!

Mahek ji! Mahek ji kaha hai aap?

Aayi! She comes out from kitchen! Kahiye!

Achchi si saaree pehen lijiye!

Mahek looked at her saaree- Shaurya ji! Yeh toh achchi saari hi hai naa!

Wo aapka wo...yellow silk hai naa...wo pehen kar aaiye!

Par kiyun?

Arrey? SIR wapas aa gaye hai! Dekhna chahte hai aapko!

Accha! Mahek became excited! Thik hai! Main kuch der mei aati hu! She gets ready and both entered into the palace for the first time! She was literally stunned! In Kolkata she went Victoria memorial for several times but never ever see the beauty of mansion! Antique furniture, chandelier, paintings, animals head! Swords carrying the pride of history!

Mahek ji! Waha khade kiuyn hai! Yaaha aaiye! Called Shaurya,and they entered a ground like big hall! There a young man, wearing royal blue suits, reading news paper; two went towards him!

Standing respectfully Shaurya called "bhaiya! He looked and stand within a second but at very next moment looking at Shaurya's eye he sat!

Shaurya again said: Namstey! bhaiya!

"n...namastey! Shaurya looked at mahek then...bhaiya yehi Mahek hai...meri...!

biwi! Says chotey bhaiya! He now stood up! Starred at her and then said :mera naam Vicky hai! Aapse mil kar bohot achcha laga! Aap ke pati humare bada bhai jaise hai! Yeh mansion aur yaha k saare log unka bohot izzat karta hai! Aap jab chahe yaha aa saktey hain!

Mahek listening to this became very much happy! She looked at her hubby, her hubby was watching her keenly with his knife like sharp eyes! Now he smiles and nodded!

Vicky said: kahiye! Hum aapko kya bulaye! Agar mahek bulaye toh?

Mahek looked at him and says: aapne kaha k aap unko bhai maante hai! Toh phir main toh aapki bhabi hu naa! Aap mujhko Bhabi bula saktey hai!

And vicky becomes happy: humne humari bhabi ko pehli baar dekha hai! Toh yeh humare taraf se! He gave her a golden laxmi-ganesh!

Shaurya became embarrassed: bhaiya yeh!

shagun hai bhai! Mana mat kijiye!

They were about to leave when vicky called him: Shaurya! Zarabhabi saa ko pohcha kar hum se mil kar jana!

Shaurya gave him sharp look, immediately vicky looked down! Seems that Shaurya is not easy with any kind of order! He says: sham ko aaunga bhaiya! Abhi toh office ana hai naa!

Its late night, the palace and the servant's quarter were half asleep! But in the hall Vicky was restless! He cannot make himself relax! He was frightened, tensed and ashamed. Nehi! Nehi! Kar sakta mai aisa! Yeh jhut hai! Yeh galat hai! Kilwad hai, dhokha hai, dhokha!

Kya dhokha hai? He turned and saw Shaurya! Yehi...jo hum dono kar rehe hai us masum ladki k saath, yeh juth kiuyn? Yeh dhokha kiuyn? Bhai usko jaa kar sach bata do!

Kya sach? Chotey bhaiya! Shaurya chuckled and vicky almost shouted: YEHI...K MAIN VICKY TUMHARA SAGA BHAI HU...TUM...KHANNA INDUSTRIES KI MALIK SHAURYA KHANNA...!

Ssshhh! Shaurya puts his hand on Vicky's mouth! Ek saal k liye yeh sach nehi! Mai naukar aur tu bhaiya! He smirked!

Vicky knelt down and said: bhai! Mujhse nehi hoga! Tumne wada kiya tha! But his bhai was indifferent! Mahek bohot achchi ladki hai bhai! Aapki biwi hai! Aapse kitni pyaar karti hai! Yeh uski aankhe dekh kar samajh gaya mai! Usko bohot bada chot pohche ga! Agar sachchai saamne aaya toh!

Now Shaurya, hold him by shoulder: ek insaan ko jaan ne k liye pura zindegi kam hai! Mai toh sirf ek saal le reha hu! Mai bass dekhna chahta hu k Mahek khud kitni der taq aapne aap ko rok sakti hai?

Vicky was surprised kya matlab!

Shaurya turned and see him: uski andar ki laalach ko jagao! Usko impress karne ki koshish karo! Usko yeh ehsaas dilao ek naukar se shaaadi kar k usne bohot badi galti kiya haai! He pointed himself Uski sapno ka raaj kumar main nehi...tum ho!

Mujhse yeh nehi hoga bhaiya!

Zaroor hoga! Insisted Shaurya: duniya ki har ladki sirf paisa dekhti hai! Sirf paisa!

PAGES FROM THR BROWN DIARY!

15th March, 1983! delhi

Aaj baas aise hi garden mei ghumne gayi thi! Kitna bada garden hai! Kitni saari phool hai! Mujhko bohot achchi laagti hai! Achanak maine unko Vicky bhaiya k saath dekha! Maine dekha...k...wo Vicky bhaiya ko daant rehe hai??? Wo?? Aur bhaiya ko daant?? Kiuyn?? Wo toh mujhse kehte rehtey hai k wo bhaiya se bohot darte hai! Toh phir?? Mai un dono k tarf jaa hi rehi thi k achanak bhaiya ne unko zor zor se daant ne laagey! Wo thoda ghabra gaye! Phir unho ne mujhko dekha! Mujhko bohot gussa aaya! Maine turant waha se chali gayi! Thodi der rehti toh bhaiya k saath jhagra hi kar baith ti!

DELHI TALES!!

Bhaiyaa!! Aap shayed aaj bhabi ko thikse nehi dekha!

Har roz dekhta hu!

Par aaj nehi dekha! Aaj jab mai dur se unko dekh kar aapko daant ne laga! Toh unka chera badal gaya! Gusse se laal ho gayi thi wo!

Achcha! Shaurya smirked! Aur kya dekha aapne??

Mazak nehi kar raha hu mai! Aapse keh raha hu! Bhabi jee aapse sach mei pyaar karti hai!

2 mahina hua hai hum dono ki shaadi ka! Abhi taq jan ne bhi paayi wo mujhko! Pyaar kaise karegi! Khair choro! Tumko jo kaha hai maine usko yaad rakkho! Usski kareeb jao! Ek kaam karo! Suno! Maine ek plan banaya hai! Dekho kya hota hai! Tumhari yeh galat faimi mai tod k rakhunga!

The next day! Shaurya comes home at the evening! Mahek was waiting for him! She welcomes him with a broad smile: aa gaye aap?? Baithiye! Mai chay le kar aati hu!

Mahek! Shaurya called!

Jee! She looks at him! Main aap k liye kuch laya hu! Mahek was equally surmised and happy! She just looks at Shaurya! Eagerly waiting for her first ever gift from her husband! Wo kaal SIR k waha ek party hai! Hum ko bulaya! Toh aap agar yeh sab pehen k chalenge toh mujhko achcha lage ga!

Shaurya slowly took out a packet! Gave her; khol k dekhiye! She just opened the packet, a red jaipuri saree! In another packet was red bangles, silver earrings and glittering bindi, she cried and Shaurya became anxious! Kya hua? He asked! Aap ro kiyun rehe ho!

Mahek starred at him for long! Then says: aap nehi samjhoge!

Suddenly they heard a voice: SHAURYA!! Shaurya showed false hurry: Sir aaye hain!

soon his Vicky bhaiya entered with a packet! He said: mahek bhabi! Hum ne aap k liye kuch laaye hai! He gave the packet to mahek! Khol k dekhiye! He says! Mahek opened and there was a saree designed with silver and gold! And there was diamond jewellery! Mahek had never seen such precious things! She was awestruck!

Kaal humare yaha paty hai mahek jee! Aap ye sab pehen kar aayenge toh phir hum ko achcha lagega! Said Shaurya's SIR! Mahek thought for a while and then nodded!

Shaurya was watching them, now a taunt-like smile played on his face! I knew it! He said to mind! He responds towards Shaurya lifting his one eye-brow! Vicky left and Shaurya gave a false sigh: kaha meri aukad aur kaha chotey bhaiya k! Yehi pehniye ga! He left! Mahek holding the packet smiled, she kept her husband's gift aside and whispered: BUDDHU-RAM!

At the party arranged by Vicky and Shaurya ; Shaurya was quite happy! Dekha tumne! Kaise khush ho gayi thi! Huh! Mai keh raha hu! All girls are the same! Vicky gave a lame smile, suddenly his face became bright seeing something, following him, Shaurya also looked at there, he was shocked to see mahek, coming, with her red saree, red bangles, and sliver jhumka! She greeted them! Smiled! And said: maaf kiiye bhaiya! Par mai aapki saree nehi pehen paayi! Wo kya hai naa! Bohot bhari hai mere liye! Tab pehnugi ! jab is ghar mei Malkin ayengey! Waise koi guest dikhai nehi de raha hai! Kaha hai sab?? Aaj aap mujh par ek ehsaan kijiye! Itne din chef k haath ka khana khaye hain abb chef biwi k haath khana khayiye! She smiled! Kichen kaha hain?

It's quite night and two men were sitting in a big hall! One was sipping the expensive French Champaign! Other was trying to stop him!

Bass kijiye bhaiya! Aapko bhabi ji k pass lautna bhi toh hai!

the man looked at the second, yaar ek baat bolo vicky! Tumko kya lagta hai? Mahek koi normal ladki hai? Matlab wo sona aur chandi wala saree chor k wo ordinary saari pehen kar kya dikha chahti hai? Wo koi sati-savitri hai?

vicky smiled: bhaiya! Duniya mein aapko sachcha pyar karne wala insaan bhi toh hoga! Bhabi ji bhi...

kya?? mujhko pyaar?? Shaurya finished the whole glass in a single sip! And threw the glass! Laughed! You know! My mom loved my dad a lott! But when she saw my dad's failure, she flew, she flew away!! He stood up! Wide spread his hand looking upwards, shouting! Bhaagi gayi...aapne dono bte ko chor kar! Yehi nehi! Aur bhi hai...meri bua...gayetri...aapni shaadi k din mahek ki chacha k saath bhaag gayi...LADIES ARE NOT FAITHFULL!! I shall prove it!! He tumbled and left!!

Do aadmi milkar itni der taq kaisi party?? Mahek was sitting at the dinner table, thinking! Shaurya entered, mahek rushed at him with her with a bucket full of questions! Aap itni der kiuyn laga di? Kab se baithi hu? Bhaiya ne aapse kuch bhala bura kaha? Wo mujhse naraz hai? Meri koi irada nehi thi unko dukh pohchana, mai toh bass...

suddenly she stopped, Shaurya was looking at mahek! She starred at Shaurya! Then came closer, more close. Shaurya felt little uneasy, he was watching her, for the first time after her marriage she came that much close to him! Now...hold on...what's she doing?? She's still on that red saree!! She's looking...like...fairy...pure!! Wait...why she's sniffing... Shaurya was totally embarrassed; kya kar rehe hai aap?? With her eyes wide open she threw a question filled with surprise and disgust :AAP NE SHARAAB PIYA???

After marriage, Shaurya becomes habituated to attain home puja with his wife, he has to bath then he must have to attain puja! Today, when he woke up, mahek was not there, but there was a glass nimbu, namak, soda!he hurriedly bath and rushed at the little prayer room. Mahek was there, arranging thali! She completed her puja and went without giving a dam notice to Shaurya! She becomes busy at household work! Shaurya sat at breakfast table, without utter a single word this talkative girl served him breakfast! Shaurya was quite surprised and shocked; he heard from his employees that wives became nightmare when they became drunk! Is that call after effect!

He tried to start conversation! Mahek! Ek aur roti milega? Demand fulfilled! A bunch of rotis and full bowl of curry came, he coughs; mahek! Sabzi ei namak kam hai! The salt jar kept in front of him! Shaurya was at peak of his surprise and worry! Such a lively and nice girl turns into a serious and angry lady! Shaurya didn't know how to cool down his wife! He wanted o say a lot but he cannot gather courage! He only able to say: bye mahek! And no answer there!!...

Three days left and situation doesn't change! Shaurya tried a couple of tricks, flowers, gifts, proposal of movie, dinner at hotel, but all went in vein...no response! Being a Casanova he's expert in flirting, but this time he failed! He even discussed with his employees how to make a wife happy! Then he said to Vicky, and both of them went to Mahek!

Mahek was busy in her household work! She saw both of them, she rushed and the storm begin: samajhte kya hai aap?? Sharab pi kar aayenge toh main aapko maaf kar dungi?? Maii koi mome ki putli nehi hu jo riswat se behek jaungi!! Humare society waise nehi hai! Ek baat kaan kol kar sun lijiye: main sharabi pati bardassh ehi karungi! She looked at vicky: sir!! Aapki society mei yeh sab chalta hoga! Lekin meri pati ko aap yeh sab khilane ki koshish mat kijiye...aap ko pata bhi hai maie inse 3din bat nehi kiya! (looking at Shaurya again) dobara agar yeh zahar piya naa!! Saach kehti hu! Aap pe sara pool ki paani gira dungi...nehi...aapko khana nehi dungi...aaur Mai maike chali jaungi!!

Edited by sunet27taherian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update. Ek ek chapter ke sath story interesting hothi ja raha hei. Waiting for next update. CONTINUE SOON. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Nice update continue soon

thanks😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Manjulaiju

Nice update. Ek ek chapter ke sath story interesting hothi ja raha hei. Waiting for next update. CONTINUE SOON. 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi sunet di...im mishti...this story is very intresting...i just read the last part n its getting intresting day by day...do continue soon...n best wishes to u n ur baby.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misthilove

Hi sunet di...im mishti...this story is very intresting...i just read the last part n its getting intresting day by day...do continue soon...n best wishes to u n ur baby.


hi mishti 😊 are you bengali? 😃 thank you for liking my story dear😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Sunet
I read all parts one go, sorry i couldn't read earlier 😔
Mehek is dead, Shaurya is in guilt and he calls himself Demon, he is telling his life's story to Karishma. I think Karishma is MehRya daughter because he said she is like her mother. 😭

Shaurya's past is bitter that's why he doesn't trust woman. he wants to see Mehek also like others who runs behind wealth or not. He kept his identity hid from Mehek & asking Vicky provoke her by sending expensive gifts to her through Vicky.

Mehek got angry seeing her husband drunkerd & she scolded Vicky. 😆 she truely loves him but our Shaurya can't see all these because of his ego.

It's beautiful story but the sad part is Mehek is not alive at present 😭
waiting for update 😉

Vinu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So Vicky babu agaye story mein maalik bankar ... Mahek must be looking beautiful in that red saree ...
Mein maaiky Chali jaongi 🤣
Haar patni ki favorite line aur sary paati line par aajaty Hai line sunkar😆

Hope Shaurya realizes her worth soon and stop comparing her with others ..

Well written sunet .. waiting for next..😳

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