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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for these two super updates in a week Shamz

Chapter 17 FB:
Well i didn't mind this chapter actually everyone was waiting for the drunken romance but i also like how you show their restlessness and how they take care of each other
Shaurya's "tu ek kaam kar ja kar newspaper me chapwa de" line cracked me up..He is already acting like her husband,taking care of her in his own wayπŸ˜‰
That office scene was very nice where he described his dream girl but why do i have a feeling Mehak already knows its about her when she applied mehndi or is it because she wanted to dress up as his dream girl as this was the only thing she can do and also she might have felt its the last time she is going there?
And at party i can imagine they both must be looking hot and gorgeous...And that dance was also romantic just lost in their world without a care for anybody else.

Chapter 18 FB:
Now this is the most romantic chapter u have ever written i guess? i haven't read ur other ffs yet but i am keeping that treasure to open it yet so that i have the curiosity of reading it later on and also i don't want to run out of stories as u write them very wellπŸ˜†
So why did Vicky take his mobile and Nehal her Di's mobile,what were they thinking that they would start playing Pokemon GOπŸ˜†πŸ˜† and i don't blame them most of the time both of them behave like kidsπŸ˜†
Now ab os romance ka kya kehne that was hotπŸ˜³πŸ˜† and i am sure now u have 1 romantic chapter on ur resume πŸ˜†,so u can continue later on writing chapters like theseπŸ˜†
Arre Shaurya ko app ki kya zaroorat hain dikhane kiπŸ˜†,wo tou virus hain khud ye cheeze tou wo aise karta hain ke ek baar kisi ki peehce phar gaye tou peecha nahi chorti ab MS ka shaadi ke baad is virus se bachna mushkil hain and MS bhi bachna nahi chahegi waise πŸ˜† ye ek wahid virus hain jo isse har haal me chahiye πŸ˜† and wo virus thadap rahan hain install hone ko πŸ˜†
Ab Mehak ye dua kare kahin Shaurya Christian Grey ke tarah koi room na khol de and kahen "Welcome to my toy room"πŸ˜†
And shamz u must be feeling like this writing this chapter πŸ˜†
Itna lamba FBπŸ˜†

P.S. Sorry i didn't give my FB early
P.P.S I havent read LU for past two epis but i know from posts whats happening so thank you for that as well as its not an easy job and u do it for forum wasis πŸ‘
Edited by HaRiSKh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

Res

Unres.



Haye haye Maasi ye kya padhwa diya. Mai toh choti bacchi hoon. Mera toh khyal karna tha na likhne se pehle.



Nehal and Vicky where also try to peep inside. Humein toh pura front view dekhne mila πŸ˜›. And Shaurya andar se itna chuparustam hai. Waah Shaurya. You made me fool. I thought you're an innocent soul jo Shaadi ke baad honeymoon ka sochta hai. Not good haan. Aur Mahek. Tu badi acchi student ban rahi. Tu bhi innocent nhi nikli. πŸ˜†



Maasi. I'm sure mera 'drunken romance' ka ye matlb nhi tha. I'm still a minor.πŸ˜‰. But I appreciate your writing. Bakiyon ko bada maza aya hoga. 🀣


You are minor but still you read everything πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ab nikal li mainy apni poori bhadaas ...ek hi chapter mein πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Ab dono hosh mei😳n kahan thy toh dono ke real feelings bahaar aany thy πŸ˜‰
Agar mainy itna nahi dikhaya hota toh chapter ko itnaa zyada hype karny ke baad mujy tamaatr aur aandy zaroor padty πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thank you sweetie 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

THank u sharms di.

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Di kal mein chup chup ke has rahithi padke.
Di some dialogues are very funny.
Like ghar skating ,sk ke sar par football match, etc...
Please tell me in which movie ash asked that innocent doubt to sk.
Utawla bhai aur masoom par jungli billi bhabhi.
Awesome couple.
Mein bachi hun aur kuch nahi bolungi .😳
Bolna mana haiπŸ˜›
But

For this lovely chapter.

Its my bhai and bhabhi.




Thank you so much jaya πŸ€—
hhahaha chup chup kar kion haans rahi thi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Ash ne hum dil de chuky sanam mein kaha tha yeh dilouge πŸ˜›

kuch dilouges hindi mein hi zyada funny sound karty hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: HaRiSKh

Thanks for these two super updates in a week Shamz

Chapter 17 FB:
Well i didn't mind this chapter actually everyone was waiting for the drunken romance but i also like how you show their restlessness and how they take care of each other
Shaurya's "tu ek kaam kar ja kar newspaper me chapwa de" line cracked me up..He is already acting like her husband,taking care of her in his own wayπŸ˜‰
That office scene was very nice where he described his dream girl but why do i have a feeling Mehak already knows its about her when she applied mehndi or is it because she wanted to dress up as his dream girl as this was the only thing she can do and also she might have felt its the last time she is going there?
And at party i can imagine they both must be looking hot and gorgeous...And that dance was also romantic just lost in their world without a care for anybody else.

Chapter 18 FB:
Now this is the most romantic chapter u have ever written i guess? i haven't read ur other ffs yet but i am keeping that treasure to open it yet so that i have the curiosity of reading it later on and also i don't want to run out of stories as u write them very wellπŸ˜†
So why did Vicky take his mobile and Nehal her Di's mobile,what were they thinking that they would start playing Pokemon GOπŸ˜†πŸ˜† and i don't blame them most of the time both of them behave like kidsπŸ˜†
Now ab os romance ka kya kehne that was hotπŸ˜³πŸ˜† and i am sure now u have 1 romantic chapter on ur resume πŸ˜†,so u can continue later on writing chapters like theseπŸ˜†
Arre Shaurya ko app ki kya zaroorat hain dikhane kiπŸ˜†,wo tou virus hain khud ye cheeze tou wo aise karta hain ke ek baar kisi ki peehce phar gaye tou peecha nahi chorti ab MS ka shaadi ke baad is virus se bachna mushkil hain and MS bhi bachna nahi chahegi waise πŸ˜† ye ek wahid virus hain jo isse har haal me chahiye πŸ˜† and wo virus thadap rahan hain install hone ko πŸ˜†
Ab Mehak ye dua kare kahin Shaurya Christian Grey ke tarah koi room na khol de and kahen "Welcome to my toy room"πŸ˜†
And shamz u must be feeling like this writing this chapter πŸ˜†
Itna lamba FBπŸ˜†

P.S. Sorry i didn't give my FB early
P.P.S I havent read LU for past two epis but i know from posts whats happening so thank you for that as well as its not an easy job and u do it for forum wasis πŸ‘


Thank you harry for those sweet words,,,😳
Exactly that chapter was necessary and before showing the romance i wanted to show their restlessness for each other πŸ˜‰

haan ab ek baar likhny ka gunaah kar liya hai ab aagy mauqa milega toh zaroor likhongi but don't think will start writing any soon πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Nehal and vicky took the phone ke bhai aur behan call karky kahin order na de de ...to open the door πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

lol sk is a virus ...ab usny kisi ka dimaag kharab kiya ho ya nahi mera zaroor kiya hai 😳

i thought even you were blushing like this while reading πŸ˜²πŸ˜†

Try to be active on today's LU πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sham di..
Thanks for updating so early..it was 'the' amazing episode we wanted..sham di u tried romance and u did it awesome..πŸ‘πŸ‘ ur good at everything..

The chapter was super intimate..and it was hell cute.. Mehek asking will she get pregnant only after kissing..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† she really doesn't know???!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜²
Shaurya ne jo kia woh bohot achchha tha..usne apne aap ko bhi control kar lia..
The great confession chapter was wonderful..thanks to vicky nehal and karuna maa..

But precap is a little disturbing
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter..
Thanks for the pm..
πŸ€—β€οΈ

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Posted: 8 years ago
I just read chapters 17 and 18, Sham πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ for these two chapters, as usual, very nice updates. I really liked the description of their dance. And the innocent Mehak and her 😳😳😳questions make me laugh πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I'm waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


You are minor but still you read everything πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ab nikal li mainy apni poori bhadaas ...ek hi chapter mein πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Ab dono hosh mei😳n kahan thy toh dono ke real feelings bahaar aany thy πŸ˜‰
Agar mainy itna nahi dikhaya hota toh chapter ko itnaa zyada hype karny ke baad mujy tamaatr aur aandy zaroor padty πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thank you sweetie 😳



Agar read nhi karti toh comment mein kya likhti...aloo gobhi ki acchi sabzi banti hai 🀣. It didn't seem vulgar. You're an awesome writer. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


Thank you so much jaya πŸ€—
hhahaha chup chup kar kion haans rahi thi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Ash ne hum dil de chuky sanam mein kaha tha yeh dilouge πŸ˜›

kuch dilouges hindi mein hi zyada funny sound karty hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Maa saath thi so chup chup kar hasna padha.
Kal yaad nahi aaya par subah yaad aaya sk aur ash ki Hum dil de chuke sanam.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Sham di..

Thanks for updating so early..it was 'the' amazing episode we wanted..sham di u tried romance and u did it awesome..πŸ‘πŸ‘ ur good at everything..

The chapter was super intimate..and it was hell cute.. Mehek asking will she get pregnant only after kissing..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† she really doesn't know???!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜²
Shaurya ne jo kia woh bohot achchha tha..usne apne aap ko bhi control kar lia..
The great confession chapter was wonderful..thanks to vicky nehal and karuna maa..

But precap is a little disturbing
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter..
Thanks for the pm..
πŸ€—β€οΈ


Thank you Arpi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Iam more desperate than you all to write the story that's the reason you all Never have to waitπŸ˜‰

I had that in my mind from starting to make this confession very special😳😳

Ab iss kaand ke baad thoda bahut raitha toh phailega πŸ˜†

Will update in weekdays after Eid πŸ˜‰
Welcome dearπŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sangana

I just read chapters 17 and 18, Sham πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ for these two chapters, as usual, very nice updates. I really liked the description of their dance. And the innocent Mehak and her 😳😳😳questions make me laugh πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I'm waiting for the next chapter.


Sangu history is created todayπŸ˜‰
Iam seeing for the first time you have posted a bigger post πŸ˜†
Thank you dear😳😳
Dance moves...hahaha I just wrote it very simpleπŸ˜›
I will update as soon as possibleπŸ˜‰

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