Drabble: The Storm Inside !!

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Those who told me to keep writing now bear this crap 🤣. It's extremely short. Like shuru hote hi khatam šŸ˜›. Enjoy. Do tell me how it was.



THE STORM INSIDE


How should I make her forgive me. How shall I convince her that I was a child back then. How shall I erase those disgust for me in her eyes. She won't let me go to jail neither she'll let me come near her. She wants my life but wishes that my heart should beat. She isn't able to understand the pain that I'm going through seeing hatred for me in those beautiful eyes I wanted to drown in for forever. I never wanted this to happen. It would have been better if I had told her about my past before the wedding happened. I can't live a life like this. It's choking me. I'm running out of breath at times thinking she'll never love me like she did. I can't see her shrugging my hands off her. I need to get her forgiveness to calm the raging storm inside me. I need to beg for her pardon. I really need to...!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for reading Di 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mini drabblešŸ˜‰
As usual well written and can feel what SK is going through...

And I will still say keep writingšŸ¤—

PS :
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shuru hothe hi khatham but extremely emotional simi.
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Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Mini drabblešŸ˜‰

As usual well written and can feel what SK is going through...

And I will still say keep writingšŸ¤—

PS :


Haan mini drabble only I give. Isse zyda meri laziness allow nhi karti. Thank you for reading and always appreciating me. Love you too my beautiful Maasi šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Shuru hothe hi khatham but extremely emotional simi.


Thank you Di 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Simi beautifully written šŸ‘ lekin ithna choti drabblešŸ˜•
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You have said all you needed to show his anguish..less or more doesn't matter, it is the impact of it that does... 😊
I can sense his predicament - wanting to make sense of what has happened, wanting her to understand, wanting her love, wanting her forgiveness... And wanting the life that is slipping away slowly...

Very nice... šŸ‘


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Originally posted by: Mehryalove

Simi beautifully written šŸ‘ lekin ithna choti drabblešŸ˜•



You know I'm lazy na.🤣 Thank you for readingšŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: DiyaKash

You have said all you needed to show his anguish..less or more doesn't matter, it is the impact of it that does... 😊

I can sense his predicament - wanting to make sense of what has happened, wanting her to understand, wanting her love, wanting her forgiveness... And wanting the life that is slipping away slowly...

Very nice... šŸ‘



Thank you so much for reading Di. I so want CVs to give some POVs right now in the show. Some deep insights. But. Let's see. I, for once want the characters to be all themselves and thus this drabble is put up. Thanks again reading 😃

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