Kaisa yeh ishq hai ajab sa risk hai chapter 9 ,,page 26. ,August 24 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey jay buddy!!
Loved shaurya's confessions...but i m still comfused...mehek is not in shaurya's life anymor?? Where is she???

Plzz do continue

Edited by Geekyglasses22 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Hey jay buddy!!

Loved shaurya's confessions...but i m still comfused...mehek is not in shaurya's life anymor?? Where is she???

Plzz do continue

Appu are u asking where is Mehek?She is in shaurya's memories but where is she I will reveal soon.someone r asking whether mehrya are together or not ?
Hint:woh dhono chahkar BHI ek doosre se dhoor nahi ho saktha.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks everyone for reading my FF.i have been reading many ffs ,os,ss since 4 months and these all inspired me to write this FF.To be frank I think I need some more training classes to complete this FF.so after this chapter I will take a month to update next chapter.hope u all don't mind.
Chapter 3:
Shaurya was searching something in his wardrobe then he found a blue saree which he had gifted his wife 4 days before their marriage.He recalled all the incidents happened on that day and after that day how his dreams got shattered by the bitter truth of his past.He thought his dreams got shattered but nothing of that sort happened .It is because of her unconditional pure love and her faith on him helped him to fulfill his dream.He felt sad while thinking how his possessive, obsessive nature and his arrogance always lead to destruction of everything.
//Flashback//


While recalling the lovely romantic moments he had spent with Mehek on that day brought a mischievous smile on his face. On that day after unveiling Meera Sharma,mehek's mom's portrait he went out of restaurant to attend a call.Then Mehek came to know that her Chachi's BP medicines are at home as everyone are busy in dancing she thought "mein Ghar jaakar Chachi ki davayiya laathi Hun"
After knowing that Mehek went to Sharma house shaurya thought it's the best time to spend some quality time with her.
In Sharma house:
Mehek:yeh Chachi davayiya kaha rakhi hai .Nahi milrahe hai
Mehek opened a wardrobe in Chachi's room in search of medicines then suddenly all the clothes of her Chachi fell down and some random file.
Mehek:yeh nehal Kuch Lene Chachi ki kamre mein aayihogi aur yeh poore ke poore kapde idhar udhar kardi isne.agar Chachi ko patha chalega tho jaroor dategi nehel ko.
Mehek kept all the fallen clothes in the wardrobe expect a file.she opened it and shocked after seeing the information in file.
Shaurya entered Sharma house and went to mehek's room after calling her.
Mehek:shaurya yeh Kya hai?
Shaurya:file hai AUR Kya?
Mehek:mein file mein Kya likha hai iski bath kar rahi Hun
Shaurya:Kal thak Jo meri hai aaj woh sabkuch Tere naam kar diya mein ne.
Mehek:kyun shaurya ?Jab mein thumse costly gifts nahi le Sakti tho mein thumhare property kaise loon gi.yeh thum ne Kya soochkar Kiya hai?
Shaurya:yeh tera mera Kya hai Mehek
Jab thum kud meri ho tho yeh property thumhare naam ho Yaa phir mera Kya ...pharak hai?
Mehek :shaurya mujhe yeh nahi chahiye Abhi ke Abhi yeh papers lo AUR ise apne naam karlo warna...
Shaurya:warna Kya Mehek Kya thum mujhe dhamki dhe Rahi ho.
Mehek:Aisa hee samjho
Shaurya: mein shaurya Khanna Hun profit ke bina koi kaam nahi kartha hun.
Saying that shaurya is coming close to Mehek
Mehek:acha tho yeh lo APNA profit saying that Mehek started beating him on his shoulders.shaurya tried to stop her and she pushed him but shaurya holded her bare waist and pulled her towards him .They both fell on bed .He rolled her so that he was on top of her .He started kissing on her forehead,her cheeks still holding her bare waist tightly.
Mehek:shau...Shaurya... Yeh thum Kya kar Rahe ho .Chodo mujhe.
Shaurya:Thumne mujhe mara tha naa.isliye yeh Saja hai Teri.he said those words while smirking continuously.
Mehek:shaurya I am sorry par mujhe Chodona.. aisa thum math karo
Shaurya:Kya hena Mehek hamari shaadi ka har rasm dho baar hua hai par ek rasm ek bar bhi nahi hua hai.ghar mein koi nahi hai dharvaja bhi band hai woh rasm practice karein.
Mehek:shau...shaurya...kounsi rasm
Shaurya:mehek tera yee paseena,ghabrahat bol raha hai tujhe pata hai phir bhi pooch rahi ho suhagrath mehek.
Suhagrath
Mehek found a mischievous smile on his lips and intense desire in his eyes.
Mehek:shaurya suno hum yeh nahi kar sakte .she said firmly and freed her self from his grip.
Shaurya:mein kitna desperate hun atleast ek trialer tho bantha hai yaar.he said those words smirking naughtyly.
Mehek:nahi kuch aur pucho.
Shaurya:theeke.iss bar har rasm mein ne hee shuru kiya hai tho haldi bhi.mein meri mehek ko khudh haldi lagaunga.aajee abhee lagaunga.
Mehek:Theeke.
Mehek nervously sat on bed playing with her saree pallu waiting for shaurya.

Shaurya entered mehek's room closing the door holding a bowl of haldi.
Shaurya:mehek pehle thum mujhe lagaogi
Saying that he kept meheks hand in haldi and applied it on his cheeks and on his entire face .
Mehek:shaurya bas karo.
Shaurya:Thumhein bhee lagana hena saying that he once again holded her bare waist from behind and started rubbing his cheeks on her cheeks so that haldi gets applied on her face.shaurya still holding her waist with one hand kept his another hand in haldi bowl and now started rubbing his hand filled with haldi on her bare waist.she felt butterflies running through her stomach.she is slowly melting under his touch.she closed her eyes tightly when he was rubbing his hand on her tummy.Now he started applying haldi on her hands from her shoulders to tips of her fingers.she thought to stop him before its too late.she tried to free herself from his grip and she succeded by pinching him pn his hand.
Shaurya:aww...mehek .Thum junglee billi ho.
Mehek:hun mein... jao ab yahan se
Mehek rushed towards the washroom but stopped by shaurya.
Shaurya:washroom jaa rahi ho.
Mehek:haa haldi dhone.
Shaurya:kyun
Mehek:agar thum mujhe jane nahi dhoge tho chachi se keh dhoongi
Shaurya:acha kya kahogi ... bolo..yahi naa mein ne haldi lagaya ...thab chachi thumse poochegi "mehek agar shaurya haldi laga raha hai tho thum kadhe kadhe kya kar rahi ho"...thab kya kahogi thum mehek.
Mehek:mujhe jane dho shaurya .
Shaurya :jao mehek .par thum kudhse yeh rang nahi mitapaogi.
Mehek tried to wash haldi many times but rang nahi uthar raha hai.so she came out with a sad face.
Shaurya cupped her face and said"baby mein ne kaha na rang nahi uthregi .yeh mera pyaar ka rang hai nahi uthregi. Thum uthaarna bhi chaho phir bhi nahi uthregi."
Mehek:Theeke shaurya par thum jao.bye.
Shaurya:darling door thak bhi nahi aaogi bye kehne.
Mehek:nahi aaungi jao ab thum .
Shaurya gently kissed her hand and said"lagtha hai mein ne thuje kuch zyada hi thang kiya hai.Kal keliye ready ho jao.bye My love.
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Precap:shaurya's suicide drama.



I am eagerly waiting for your comments.





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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Ek aur ? 😲 ye kab huva 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update Jaya. .
1 month gap kion ?
You are writing good..I can understand being a South Indian Writing Hindi dilouges is bit difficult..
I can only suggest you to continue...and instead of writing Tu and Teri ...use tum ya tumhara and tumhy ...it will suit with their characters...

Thank you for the update dear...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Nice update Jaya. .

1 month gap kion ?
You are writing good..I can understand being a South Indian Writing Hindi dilouges is bit difficult..
I can only suggest you to continue...and instead of writing Tu and Teri ...use tum ya tumhara and tumhy ...it will suit with their characters...

Thank you for the update dear...😊

Thanks sharms di.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Ek aur ? 😲 ye kab huva 😕

Sorry par mein kuch samjhi nahi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Appu are u asking where is Mehek?She is in shaurya's memories but where is she I will reveal soon.someone r asking whether mehrya are together or not ?
Hint:woh dhono chahkar BHI ek doosre se dhoor nahi ho saktha.


okzzz😃 i'll wait for the best updates filled with mehrya

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jaya nuvvu chapter 2 and 3 eppudu update chesav sorry neenu chuda ledhu
Jaya nice update yaar 😊

Hahahahaha hum dono har rasm dho baar kiya lekin ek rasm ek baar bhi nahi kiya 😆 what a dialogue 🤣☺️
Applying haldhi to each other is romantic ☺️
Meri bhai hat waqt chance pe dance Martha hai 😆
Naughty bhai😆

Thanks for update Jaya😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
jay!!! amazing update bud!!!
the flashback was extremely nice!!! the desperate shaurya was the favourite part!!
loved it...
they seemed good while getting intimate😳😳
plzzz dont take a month's gap..that would be too long!!

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