Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 40

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-


Hello there tibs ji...good to see ya back😳


Thabs how are you 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09


Thabs how are you 🤗

Fine and u 😳
And waiting for ur update 😳
Edited by -Thabassum- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
@tibs, B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. & S.O.U.L.F.U.L. ...
In one of my earlier comments, I had mentioned that the Sky always assures that millions of lamps are there to light up even the nooks & corners of the darkest avenues. So, Sky has fulfilled her promise. Might be her children were praying frivolously ...

O' come and light up the little lamp in the corner of the dark lonely abode.
The rain-laden evening has descended.
Lights & shadows are playing hide & seek !!
Surprise me in my lonely wait in the form of a mild scent of jasmine !!
Let the shades of the blue garb spread like a joyous night within my mind !!
My flute is lost.
Which tune should I use to invoke you !!!
The eyes that are waiting for eternity, please hear their silent words !!
Please feel my trembling heart in the touches of the moist breeze !!!


For Shaurya & Mahek both, it's like...

I have stamped you as the cynosure of my life
Never again shall I be lost in this ocean
Wherever may I roam, you are always gleaming
Pouring beams of lights into my boundless tears
Your countenance is there in my conscious forever
A moment's absence and I become like a lost soul
Should my wandering heart get disillusioned and want to roam astray
A glimpse of that face coerces it to become mortified in pudency...

or is it ...

The blue polestar questions me
How long will I remain directionless
I could never answer
My whole life has been spent just staring at the path only.

I wonder whether I search for the path or the path searches for me
What mind can't understand, understands without understating
Everything around me is moving continuously
Only, I am like a frozen motionless stream.

Apparently a few had lit light with the power of their love
That even forced the sunlight to go off
I, for nothing and like a loser, run behind my own shadow
Just to discover on one fine day that I have lost you.


At last, it's time to the play the game of shattering the game ...

Apologies for being so late ...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">@tibs, B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. & S.O.U.L.F.U.L. ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">In one of my earlier comments, I had mentioned that the Sky always assures that millions of lamps are there to light up even the nooks & corners of the darkest avenues. So, Sky has fulfilled her promise. Might be her children were praying frivolously ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">O' come and light up the little lamp in the corner of the dark lonely abode.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The rain-laden evening hasdescended.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Lights & shadows are playing hide & seek !!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Surprise me in my lonely wait in the form of a mild scent of jasmine !!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Let the shades of the blue garb spread like a joyous night within my mind !!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">My flute is lost.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Which tune should I use to invoke you !!!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The eyes that are waiting for eternity, please hear their silent words !!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Please feel my trembling heart in the touches of the moist breeze !!!</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">For Shaurya & Mahek both, it's like...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I have stamped you as the cynosure of my life</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Never again shall I be lost in this ocean</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Wherever may I roam, you are always gleaming</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Pouring beams of lights into my boundless tears</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Your countenance is there in my conscious forever</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">A moment's absence and I become like a lost soul</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Should my wandering heart get disillusionedand want to roam astray</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">A glimpse of that face<font color="#222222">coerces it to become mortified in pudency...</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">or is it ...</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">The blue polestar questions me</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">How long will I remain directionless</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">I could never answer</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">My whole life has been spent just staring at the path only.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">I wonder whether I search for the path or the path searches for me</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#222222">What mind can't understand, understands without</font></font><font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">understating</font>
<font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Everything around me is moving continuously</font>
<font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Only, I am like a frozen motionless stream.</font>

<font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Apparently a few had lit light with the power of their love</font>
<font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">That even forced the sunlight to go off</font>
<font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I, for nothing and like a loser, run behind my own shadow</font>
<font color="#222222" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Just to discover on one fine day that I have lost you.</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">At last, it's time to the play the game of shattering the game ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Apologies for being so late ...</font>


Chandrima all three of them are beautiful
Is it not true that sometimes when all is lost ... only very fragile , tenacious things like the smell
Of jasmine in a lonely night keep you going
And again is it not true that just the memory of a face keeps us on the long narrow straight path , throwing aside all tempataions
We all need a blue pole star in our lives .. may be the Sky is for Shaurya and Mehak .. maybe the wind as KK is for Mehak , Mehak has always been that for Shaurya ...
You have made me think of another layer for these characters ..
BTW I am not supposed to choose but the rain laden evening is my favourite ... you know to keep the gist of poetry on translations is an art and you do that so well ... that one enjoys reading the translation as much as the original ones
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lagtha hai photo pe varmala chadane ke waqt agaya 😈 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Lagtha hai photo pe varmala chadane ke waqt agaya 😈 😆

Toh shub muharat ka wait Kar rahi hoo Kya 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Toh shub muharat ka wait Kar rahi hoo Kya 😆😆

Wat r u saying then ?
Shall we ?🤣...
Okay now I officially got permission from coolbie 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lo ji chada diya varmala photo pe 🤣...bhuktho !
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Lo ji chada diya varmala photo pe 🤣...bhuktho !


Allah ko pyaari hogayi Kya ...Bina update diye 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tibu par bombs ka assar nahi hoga Isleaa yeh dynamite ka new stock yehi test karongi🤣

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