Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: tibs09

hey Ram ..mujhe update to kar lene deti poora

Rajdhani Express aisy hi nahi bulati Shri mujhy...🤣

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Oshbgosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Oh... I just loved the last part ..Tibs your story fills the gaps ZKM have left.. it was a lovely read .. keep writing 😊

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Muktchand

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Nice Tibs ... Interesting ...

Dolly massi yahan bhi ...100 son... Kya Kaurav paida honge kya Shaurya Mehek ke ghar

MS KK chat ... Loved it ...

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

There is a war going on between her mind & heart. She can't forgive him same time she can't see him in pain. Ab kare toh kya kare.😲

Nice update Tibs

Thanks buddy for PM

Vinu

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DiyaKash

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Lovely tibs... Will come back with more than 'lovely tibs' soon 😊. With your writing, it isn't just what you write that I love, it is also what you don't and that to me is the beauty of your writing. So much of it is in, what one perceives and discerns from all you have said and haven't. And I have to let your story sink in and wash over me for its full effect... 😊

Unfortunately today has not been a good day and the mind is preoccupied with many a things... So, will get back to this later... 😊

Edited by DiyaKash - 8 years ago

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Beautifully written Tibs... I m glad u decided to continue this story. I thought u had abandoned it.. I agree with the current track, ff likhna mushkil ho gaya hai . I too m sailing in the same boat behna... Writer's block!!

U described Mehak's helplessness in this situation perfectly... I really pity Shaurya.. Both in the show as well in ur FF...

As for Dolly maasi, I feel she knows something about the accident. Earlier I used to think she is just like her greedy mother but now I feel tht CVs have deliberately added her character in this story coz she hs some connection with Mehak's parent's accident...

But 100 sons... Yeh kuch jyaada Nahi ho gaya tibs.. Not tht we don't trust Shaurya.. He is toh always ready n fully charged 🤪