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Sanju

@Sanjh30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Shristi,a very nice update my dear 😃
Yaha bhi chipku khanna wants attention 😆
Mahek ko drama queen kahta hai and khud Kya hai? 😆
Please I wanna see MehRya encounters,next update mein ok?
Thank you sweetie 😊
Love n hugs
Sanjh ⭐️

Shristi,before I forget you have a very good writing skills 👍🏼
Keep it up! 👏

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#492

Nice one Shristi😊

Although not as angst filled as the previous chapter, I love SK continued bewildered pique about why Mehek treats and reacts to everyone differently than she does him. D'UH can someone just hit the man over the head already 😆. Rajiv was one of my favorite characters on the show and I love how you show him in the role he should have renained in: not only a great support but the perfect foil to SK...the voice of reason in this partnership. So now Rajiv has his volatile friend thinking on second chances...how intriguing😆

Update soon Shristi . I cannot wait to read what happens next!

Thank you for the PM

Kelly

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Kash

@KashishJ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#493

Nice chapter shristi.

Mehek's reaction was quiet normal. why shud she thank the guy who broke her heart and insulted her dish earlier. Ignoring him is the best way to get back at him

Ms. Singh ? New character ? Hope she won't be the other women whom SK will use to make Mehek envy.😉

Thanks for the PM

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tibs09

@tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#494

Wonderful update Shrishti..
Why do I get the feeling that this Aashima singh is trouble..
Any ways seems like Shaurya is trying to mend his ways..
Ab gadhe ko ladki ke reaction ki chinta ho rahi hai 😆

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Pavi

@Pavi05

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Posted: 8 years ago

#495

Wow wonderful update shristi di 👏. This is for you 🤗 .

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Mein aagyi first 😆
No MehRya scenes 😆😆
Chal next update mein adjust karlena 😛

Isyy bhi attention chahiye...Jab di thi toh Kya Kiya tha bay 😆😆

Khud bada dramybaaz Hai ...😉
Chalo good yahn toh yeh kaam par concentrate Kar raha Hai

Yaar Sachi batoon...Dil nahi bhartaa padhkar...Tu Kitni Badi update bhi laga mujhy choti hi lagegi 😆😆😆

Waiting waiting for next update...

@thanks Yaar Sham...thts why i call u my rajdhaani express😆😆😆

N yes agree there werent any Mehrya scenes but i promiss tht i ll include them in my next update...

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Good going .update soon[/QUOTE

Thanks alot Richa😳

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Mr Khanna felt bad of Mehek's behaviour she didn't wish him how she did it to Rajeev. Everyone deserves second chance now Shaurya thinking to give second chance to whom, for himself or Mehek.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Yes maybe Rajeev's line of giving the other person a second chance did make Shaurya think...😛

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: chandrima02
@Srishti, mera ek question hai. Itne kam interactions inn donon mein 😲 ???!!!! Why ??? Why ??? Why ??? Anyways, wonderful update indeed. Rajeev ke saathh things have cooled down. He did not surprise me by nodding to MS' matar ki kheer, since he has characteristically been fair to good dishes. "Everyone deserves one chance" - is this going to be realization jolt for him ? Waiting eagerly for your next chapter. Please put lot of interactions between these two, if possible.

@bold I completely agree with you Chandrima..There wasn't any strong Mehrya scene in this chapter.. Believe me, when i wrote this chapter, i wasn't happy with it either. I wanted to include the mattar ki kheer part purposely to make Shuarya realize tht he could be wrong at times too and i coudn't think of anyone other than Rajeev who could put tht point across so firmly!!!

I will try to add more Mehrya scenes for sure...sorry for this chapter dear😭

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Shristi

@shristi0706

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Posted: 8 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Hey shri ...😉
Very well written...
I see shaurya was restless becoz he made his friend / bhai upset ...
I really like rajeevs and shauryas bond...

They are awsum ...😉
I was really surprised at the part wer shaurya was complementing mehak for mattar ka kheer ...was

I really like the fact ...shaurya was bothered , wen she dint thank him 😆
He was thinking about her😉
And everyone deserves second chance ...is tat a hint shri ?!?!? 😉

Update girl...

PS...was not long enuf update shri 😉😆 dill mange more ...😉😆

Hey Thabs my sweetheart thank u so much yaar😳😳😳

Didyou think it wasnt a long update😕😕😕???? I keep on writing the entire part n then i realise - oye yeh toh bahut bada chapter ho gaya😆😆😆 n then i divide it in to two parts!!

Thank you for the lovely comments dear ...

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