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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: latanzia
So love it, so romantic.
You know i am greedy so can u penned a part 2

Thanks for ur wrds😳

Lets c..actually i have no plan in continuing..i am srry about it...

But since everyone r asking.. i will try a part 2...

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Auditi
Aweeesone!!! 👏 👏 👏
Pleaaaseee continue... 😃 😳

Thanks dear😳

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@Abhimita_love

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

wow
I love it and was so lovely
keep writing more

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lovetoread08

@lovetoread08

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

I did not like this but ...but...but...

I loved ...your beautiful OS👏

Beautifully crafted. Its like a summer quencher lime juice. Truly needed as the actual drama in serial. is too high too digest😉😆

The best dialogue which turned out to be turning point of their relationship was " Well anyways I never leave any work incomplete.Nd keep my accounts equal."

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: lovetoread08
I did not like this but ...but...but...

I loved ...your beautiful OS👏
Beautifully crafted. Its like a summer quencher lime juice. Truly needed as the actual drama in serial. is too high too digest😉😆

The best dialogue which turned out to be turning point of their relationship was " Well anyways I never leave any work incomplete.Nd keep my accounts equal."

Oh My godd!! U litreally scared the hell out of me!!!😲

That was a nice way of surprising me...

Thanks dear...😳

Well now i am laughing...cause i got fooled.😆

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rajvilover
wow
I love it and was so lovely
keep writing more

Thanks dear...😃

Will keep writing.😉

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: .tiNNi.
superbbb

Thank u!😃

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lovetoread08

@lovetoread08

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Oh My godd!! U litreally scared the hell out of me!!!😲
That was a nice way of surprising me...
Thanks dear...😳
Well now i am laughing...cause i got fooled.😆

That's was my intention

Sweetie its Shaurya's hangover dekha toh hoga Kaise Apni Mehak ko ullu banaya

Ullu banaya bada maza aaya😆

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Waida1234

@Waida1234

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Oh my god waida!! what do i say...
U ve written something more beautiful than my OS..
Well i too have learned french as my second language...but dont remember much of the language cause its almost 5 years..nd i never turned back...srry abt that...
But still i will try to write a sentance for u in french..with the little knowledge i have.😊

"Merci beaucoup mon Ami!"...😳

That means u r nowhere an indian..right??
Well i can help u learn hindi😉.
No problem..take ur own time.
I am soo pleased to hear that u reading my story by getting it translated... It means a lott!😃
So i guess next tym i write something i should be writing it in english.
I am overwhelmed on reading ur feedback.
Its lovely...
@bold...thats nyc.😳
Thanks a ton..once again.

Love Sharmi

Merci cherie...! Tu es la bienvenue...! C'etait la moindre des choses que je pouvais faire pour te remercier, pour cette magnifique histoire et ce moment de bonheur...! 😛

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hello Sharmi...well don't I feel like a first class idiot this morning😕.

I have fallen behind in reading all the writing popping up on the forum and had finally come to yours only too see the generous concession you made so I could enjoy your lovely OS in particular. And somehow I manage to be so late reading/ commenting😕. I hope you will forgive me.

Thank you so much, that was such a sweet thing for you to consider let alone actually do😊.

I loved this OS. It was so playful and sweet without being over the top. I can just imagine how with the passage of time MehRya would become more comfortable with each other which would inevitably lead to such an encounter. Who knew that khadoos khanna was hiding such a playful side. You captured it so nicely...i was able to visualize the entire scene as I read it, which had me grinning here in the wee hours of the morning.

I hope to see more from you as inspiration and time allows..and thank you again so much for thinking of me and penning it in English: like I said such a generous thing to do😛 especially as I am probably in the minority here with my non-Hindi reading self.

Oh and absolutely, please call me Kelly...no need for formalities between forum buddies😉

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