MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

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OMG how do manage to write so long updates Kelly...

Enjoyed reading it..

You have added so many brief details in each and everything..

Great work👏

Wow Sonal was able to decode what he will be wearing and I can imagine how cute they must be looking with that colour coordinated dresses 😳

Even Karuna MAA could notice it 😆

Shaurya confessed that he has someone in his life...Much to Mahek's relief 😛

And she was pretending even she has someone in her life😆😆

He is getting attracted towards her ..And he doesn't even have a slightest idea about it😲

Would be eagerly awaiting for the dinner date ...😳

Thank you for the PM and Update Kelly🤗

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Mina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

So. I had the opening for my comment mentally composed and was about ready to launch into it, and then you knocked me flat with that ending. Hence the previous comment. Also, longest chapter? Kelly, not long enough!!! 😳

Now that I have out of my system, on to how I meant to start -

BRILLIANTLY DONE, KELLY!!! I am so so so relieved that the tryst sequence was a dream, because that's what made the most sense. And oh what a dream it was! Love the depth of detail, the unexpected turn, the sheer length of it...most of us are lucky to remember the smallest fragments of dreams, after all. How beyond lucky is Shaurya to have that much transfer over to his conscious mind! 😆

I honestly feel this chapter was a tour de force; the reader can feel things coming to a head and every scene is so very important. Seeing Shaurya in a state of emergent transformation was very satisfying. And I was so happy for Mehak, witnessing her arrival to a confident and excited decision! Yet, I understood too where Kanta was coming from. I thought that motherly warning would have a deflating effect on Mehak but looks like our girl's resolve is undeterred, though her mood may have sobered.

Two favourite moments - Shaurya being left with an awakened need to school his pupil of choice; Mehak calling Shaurya 'dost' as they bid goodnight. Did he notice? His subconscious did and I did, but I'm not so sure if Shaurya was in a state to catch that 😆

I do feel a slight foreboding of things about to go awry...Mehak may have miscalculated how Shaurya will react to the reveal, after all. And even if that's not the issue, we seem to be at a point in the story where one last twist would pop up to shake things up for the last time before settling. I'm not too keen on such a twist, I just want happiness for our pair! But I have this feeling of trust that you will unroll the story exactly how it ought to be unrolled...so I strongly suspect I will enjoy whatever you have ahead for us 😉

Thank you for the brilliant update Kelly!!! 👏 ❤️

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Vedika211

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Just when Mehak was being so upfront, so honest and so brave, trying to take the next leap and their relationship to the logical next step - meeting in person.. you gave us a twist as good/bad as any on the show. Good in that it adds to your story, but bad in that we need to know the answers!

How does Uday know about MS? What are Esha and he up to? I've got my fingers crossed that Rajiv is not involved in this. I'm sure the man with Esha was Uday and not Shaurya, but did Shaurya really sign off on her trip without putting two and two together?

And when you give us such twists, you know you have to give us the next update sooner, don't you? 😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87
Kelly,
What was that? Just as were anticipating a blossoming love story, you dropped a MOAB 😔

Where did this Uday get hold of all the information? So was it Uday who had been tampering with Mehek's phone while she had supposedly left it in Rajiv's cabin?

How is Esha fitting into all of this? What's she got to do in this whole fiasco?

Poor Mehek, she's so heartbroken and feels betrayed. 😭
And Shaurya is clueless (wish he manages to figure out what's going on before it's too late)

Let's see what happens now. Will be waiting eagerly for the next update (N don't worry..u'r doing fantastic as a writer...😃)

Getting ready to go to work but had to respond to this.

@bold: FINALLY SOMEONE REMEMBERED👏

As I mentioned before every detail I write is for a reason😉. If you recall Mehek had been left speaking to Uday when Rajiv had been summoned to attend the finance team to hand in some expenses ( which logically could have include the airline ticket disbursement). It was never disclosed if the phone being returned to Mehek didn't get sidetrack if the one returning it came across the producer in the first instance.😉

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Great job Kelly specially the press conference part was bang on😳

But MS has lost trust in him...

Rajeev is moving in right direction...hope he gather more clues ..

Why is SK planning to visit Florida😲😲

Looking forward for the next chapter,

Thanks for the quick update and PM 😊

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Woww...awesome.

Rajiv figured out. Shaurya is gonna be suprised

Mehek shocked .is malik gonna sock shaurya.

Getting exciting. ..midweek update.

Hope there is one more over the weekend.

Thanks for the pm

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Finally wait is over 😈

OMG another cliff hanger Kelly ...

I thought I will be getting some fire works in this chapter..

But you were successful in making us wait for the next chapter😆

They both were not surprised nor shocked😲

Would love to see Malik Uncle's reaction😆😆

O God I think now whole world know he is running after her ...who was that aunty 😆😆

Now even Karuna knows about MS ..😛

Eagerly waiting for next chapter...do update soon 😃

Thanks for the PM 😉

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Vedika211

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Kelly after hanging around for the last one and even reading it soon after it was posted, I could not comment on it. I'm sorry. Life just got in the way!

So you've done it again. Now I'll spend the next week wondering: when did Shaurya figure it out? On the plane? In the state of semi consciousness while he slept? Has he figured it out? Is he whispering the last words to Mehak or someone else?

Your writing just flows and its always amazes me how after such gentleness and with so little drama, you still leave us with cliffhangers week after week!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vedika211
Kelly after hanging around for the last one and even reading it soon after it was posted, I could not comment on it. I'm sorry. Life just got in the way!

So you've done it again. Now I'll spend the next week wondering: when did Shaurya figure it out? On the plane? In the state of semi consciousness while he slept? Has he figured it out? Is he whispering the last words to Mehak or someone else?

Your writing just flows and its always amazes me how after such gentleness and with so little drama, you still leave us with cliffhangers week after week!

No problem Vedika, although I am glad to see you back😊...no week long wait. I have already started the next chapter, and hopefully we will get some of those questions answered.😉