Mehek Shaurya OS: Mrs. Khanna's Fast Part8+ Epilogue 2/9 pg39 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you and thank you for taking the time to comment😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanu156

Oh it was awesome👏👏👏n short😭 I can't believe people are still not writing on this pair ... its been just a month since show started n the chistrybtw them😳😆😃 uff its on fire !!😲😆 plzzz write more ... It was awesome he fainted👏😆😃

I love their chemistry😳 and am so looking forward to their story. I am sure it will be encouragement for a lot of stories and creations on the forum.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Wow...amazing just loved it..keep writing


Thank you so much. It is one thing for a writer to note the view count on their posts but even more special when people offer their likes and comments. I will definitely be writing more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Waida1234

We already have two awesome FF on MeHRya written by old members of this forum..! One by serene-rose and another by Couch-Potato...! Please have a look...! You're so right...MehRya are magical...an out of the box jodi...! Like you...shall love to read more stories on them...! Fingers crossed...more members will join the Writers Club...and we get to read more on this unique couple..! 😃T

Oh I am certain that more writers will jump on the bandwagon to write on this couple...they are amazing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

BAHAHAHAHA. 🤣

That was brilliant! I loved his inner turmoil and his denial and reasoning. His insight on her from then to now. It was all so Shaurya. And how he knew that the only possible way they worked initially was because of her talent. Great job at keeping it in character.

Another tidbit that I adored was the how unsure he was about the 'love' factor. Somehow that seems so plausible, that they would get married and be in love with each other but never actually say it. Because that's just the way both of them are.

This was a delight to read. I won't ask you to continue this cuz it's so compact and right as it is but yes, I will look forward to more one-shots and possibly a fanfic from your end!

Keep writing!

Thank you Couch Potato, and although i have commented on your post allow me to say again how insanely beautiful your OS is. I am really looking forward to reading more.

As it pertains to my own I am happy to see that most think that I captured Shaurya just right, I was a bit nervous to tell the truth. I will for sure be posting more on this Jodi as time allows. Now just have to work out a good balance between the 2 other FF I have going on and now MehYra too, along with life in general. Wish me luck.😆
Edited by crtkelly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh wow
kk fainted
so funny
too good
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

oh wow
kk fainted
so funny
too good


Thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Folks, I just couldn't resist. Like I said I am addicted. Not sure how far this will go, but I am offering the following teaser as to what could possibly happen next. I expect it will take a few days to complete the update in totality, and hopefully I will decide if this will become a full fledged story. Opinions appreciated on the following :

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"She cannot fast: I will not allow it." Shaurya brusquely announced. He frowned when his mother merely turned away from him to attend to a pan on the range top.

Away from his view, she smiled, as she stirred the gravy. "Beta, women: wives and mothers have done this for ages. It is tradition and believe it or not there are accommodations made for such situations."

This was not the response he expected or wanted from the one he had anticipated to ally with him in this matter. And anyway, who cared what women had done in the past; none of them had been his, nor had any of these nameless females been carrying his child, Shaurya thought.

"She is your bahu, Mother and carrying your first grandchild: the heir of this family. To even contemplate such tomfoolery ..."

"Haan beta, but you have to realize that she is also a wife, one who has seen the evidences of her husband's delicate constitution with her own eyes. How can you expect her not to want to succor the welfare of her husband: the father of her child, no less?"

It was a low blow to bring up his fainting spell, and evidence that he would find no support here. Thik hai, if the women of the house wanted to play hard-ball then so would he. He would just call the doctor to dispel the lunacy wrought by the upcoming festival.

"I'm afraid I am with your mother on this one, Shaurya beta...and frankly you should be grateful that your wife wishes to fast for the day. In fact, you should encourage it...one can just imagine the size she will grow to in the coming months. And it is not as if she cannot afford to miss a meal or two"

Shaurya rotated to glare at his aunt, who with her usual wine glass, had entered the kitchen.

"Congratulations Beta, you have done well by the family. And far sooner than I expected you, especially since my new niece doesn't exactly meet the standards of our class. I honestly thought it would take you longer to warm up to the task," Svetlana slurred, clearly under the influence of the intoxicants she had been imbibing. "Bhabhi you have done well in the selection of the family broodmare, but without doubt this particular one derives from "hearty" stock," she continued derisively. "Listen to your mother beta, a fast will hardly affect your wife, in fact you should insist on it. Aacha perhaps even a schedule throughout her pregnancy would benefit... "

Svetlana stopped when Shaurya advanced on her, fire in his eyes. But then he suddenly stopped. She rotated to follow the direction of the angry man's new focus.

Shaurya watched as Mehek backed out of the room she had entered; the abject pain unmistakable in her doe eyes. In reaction, he closed his own: he would surely kill his Aunt today.

Edited by crtkelly - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love it. Officially addicting to your OS 😊😊😊. Waiting early for more 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting teaser, loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part Continue soon please.

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