Mehek Shaurya OS: Mrs. Khanna's Fast Part8+ Epilogue 2/9 pg39

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

Hey Kelly I had a busy day at work but like always I m gonna read it n comment. Just remember one thing tht I love all ur stories n this happens to be my favourite!!!!!!

OK so I finally read this chapter and now I m feeling a bit sad coz one of my favorite stories on mehrya has ended😭 but happy tht it had such a dreamy n beautiful ending. The shaurya in this story is what I would like to see on the show once he n Mehak are married... Loving, caring n possessive but nt much!!!!! So they were blessed with Junior Khanna who is already following in his father's footsteps... Quick learner I must say

And nt to forget the jealous shaurya part...i m dying to see this side of Shaurie in the show. I hope the CVs listen n give us tht!!!!!

Thank u once again for such a beautiful story... Hoping to read many more mehrya stories from u Kelly!!!!!

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

amazing update

absolutely brilliant

thank you for writing

such a beautiful story

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Kelly, that was 'Simply Awesome '!! A bit bold too...But loved it ...!!
Loved the Junior Shaurya too and liked the way Shaurie though he was competing with him...😆😆😆 Hope they have a lovely KC this year too!!

Also, I am bit sad that this has come to an end ...never mind, you can start another FF soon...

Hey Patsy, thanks so much for your comment, I am so happy that you liked the update and the conclusion of this KC tale. I saw this last chapter as a challenge - bold is not my usual style of writing😉, but I really wanted to give it a go. Happily it seems that it has been well received😛

So now I can pay a bit more attention to my long neglected FF: Discovering the Magic, and actually get the lovebirds united in the first place😆. Since it looks as if the serial won't be giving us any online chatting anytime soon, I figure I will have to satisfy my own curiosity over how this could have played out by penning it myself. I hope you join me for that story as well😊

Thanks again for reading.

Kelly

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: zaara2212
how wonderfully written 😊
so the shy mehek khanna became the ferocious patni ... 😊 i loved Shauraya and his romantic expression... 😛 i wish he is the same in the serial too 😆😆

😆 SK thinks his son is his carbon copy wow.. i must say that no matter what happened they are still following the Karwa chauth rasam so sweet...

Shruthi got a well deserved response 😛😆

Mehek has definitely discovered the power of womanhood here😉. Gosh I would love to see some semblance of a honest love between these two in the show😕 it is making for painful viewing right now IMO.

I love your comment regarding baby Khanna, I can so imagine Shaurya thinking along these lines, can you imagine him and his mini-me...too adorable in my way of thinking.

And Shruiti...ugh I'm sure you can tell how I feel about her😡

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Loved the ending ⭐️ Kelly 😆

Thanks Sharlene. I considered this last update a personal challenge. As you know I am usually skirting around these sort of scenes - inferring more than expressing in too much detail. I'm happy with the result though😛 Thanks as ever for your support, I always know I can count on you😊

BTW looking to (finally) continue Recasting the Princess very soon, now that I have eliminated one story...only 3 active FF now😆. Will PM when I do.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: KashishJ
Fabulous ending . Simply loved it.

Thanks so much Kash. It is a real thrill to know that others appreciate your writing😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

thanks; much appreciated😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: PhineasFerb
Kelly what a amazing journey of karwachauth and the epilogue was cutest .Jr shaurya knows things very well 😆

Thank you, I am really pleased with how this turned out. And yes baby Khanna, is definitely a chip off the old block. Like father; like son, as they say😉😆

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Patsy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Hey Patsy, thanks so much for your comment, I am so happy that you liked the update and the conclusion of this KC tale. I saw this last chapter as a challenge - bold is not my usual style of writing😉, but I really wanted to give it a go. Happily it seems that it has been well received😛

So now I can pay a bit more attention to my long neglected FF: Discovering the Magic, and actually get the lovebirds united in the first place😆. Since it looks as if the serial won't be giving us any online chatting anytime soon, I figure I will have to satisfy my own curiosity over how this could have played out by penning it myself. I hope you join me for that story as well😊

Thanks again for reading.
Kelly

Hey Kelly...yes please continue with 'Discovering the Magic' ...cannot bear the suspense for a long time ...and you are right - the show seems to have forgotten that such a track existed - so it would be good if you take us to the KK-MS land and I am very curious and excited for their first meeting...looking forward to it !!😊 Update soon...

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Priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#290

Omg... 😲 ...Kelly i still can't stop blushing 😳 😳
So baby khanna is the copy of his father and a tight competition to him 😆 .shaurya was right mehak was the one who insisted for jr shaurya...afterall she loves her sr khanna... 😆 . Hope for little princess mehak soon 😳 .
Salute to mehak for giving a muhtod jawab to shruti... 😡
Shaurya was really surprised to see his bold sherni... 😆 .u beautifully recreated the karwachauth scene too 👏 surely showing his transformation from one who never believed in the ritual to one who can do it willingly for his ladylove for a lifetime...it's beautiful 👏 .hope something like this sensible happens in the show too...someday 😭 but I doubt will the evil trio even allow our lovebirds to have a peaceful married life and their little ones... 😕

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