Mehek Shaurya OS: Mrs. Khanna's Fast Part8+ Epilogue 2/9 pg39

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Patsy

@fannymanny

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Kelly, it was superb!👍🏼...Just loved it!!❤️

Shaurya too fasts for Mehak...how lovely! and I liked the way Karuna guessed that Shaurya too was going to keep the fast...by instinct...really nice!

Keep writing ...!!

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Kelly I Loved it ⭐️

You kept the interaction between Shaurya and creepy Shruti like in the show 😆

Love the conversation between mother and son.

The growing love and closeness of the lead pair wonderful even if that don't happen in the show at least we have it in your stories 😆

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Awww!!!! he's also fasting with her... how cute ☺️

Hope he doesn't faint again... 🤣

Sweetie pie, add some more or hell loads of Mehrya, pweeeaaaseee... ❤️

Abhi thats missing from the show toh FF par ke hi satisfy karlu apne andar ka hopeless romantic ko... 😉

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Ahhh kelly !!!

Such an adorable update dear !!!!

Loved it !!!

Please continue soonest!

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
Thanks for updating so quickly
Update next chapter soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting😊 have some other writing planned but hope to get back to this ASAP!

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24
That was lovely Kelly!
Mehak being shielded by protective Shauriya .Bodyshaming ends beautifully! Loved it.
Poor guy,has to keep fighting his molesting ex everyday!😆

Thanks Simran...my version of Shaurya has seen the light...beauty comes in all shapes and forms...now if that crazy ex will just get the hint😆. Poor Shaurya I expect his wife will have to defend his honor at some point...that maybe worth the writing👏.

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: asyafann
Kelly, it was superb!👍🏼...Just loved it!!❤️
Shaurya too fasts for Mehak...how lovely! and I liked the way Karuna guessed that Shaurya too was going to keep the fast...by instinct...really nice!
Keep writing ...!!

Thanks Patsy...I am enjoying this sweet Shaurya myself...and of course Mom understands her son...working on the FF next but will definitely come back to this. Hope you will enjoy the next update as much as this one...

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

this was so cute, i love the relationship between these two, wish we can have this in the show.

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Kelly I Loved it ⭐️
You kept the interaction between Shaurya and creepy Shruti like in the show 😆
Love the conversation between mother and son.
The growing love and closeness of the lead pair wonderful even if that don't happen in the show at least we have it in your stories 😆

You know me Sharlene I write what I hope to see or what is lacking...but knowing the show is so far from this I guess I am just expressing the potential of a loving Shaurya. Working on my update schedule (started ch4 of Mistaken last night) so hope to get a fair amount of writing this weekend. Will be sure to pm you whichever comes next😊

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Auditi
Awww!!!! he's also fasting with her... how cute ☺️
Hope he doesn't faint again... 🤣

Sweetie pie, add some more or hell loads of Mehrya, pweeeaaaseee... ❤️

Abhi thats missing from the show toh FF par ke hi satisfy karlu apne andar ka hopeless romantic ko... 😉

The ultimate question is who will be more successful spouse: our newly pregnant Mehek or our fragile Shaurya😆...lets hope he mans up and doesnt swoon by midday...on the other hand he will be suffering both hunger and worry for his darling wife, so maybe we should go easy on him...

I have decided to go with the flow so I cannot say how many updates this day of fasting will take, but I do hope you enjoy them.

Thanks for taking the time to comment