~Zaroon-Abeer~ Two shots: Daddy's Day Out..! Final Shot Updated! - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

25

Views

2.8k

Users

9

Likes

33

Frequent Posters

pcnsb thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

hahaha..cant wait for the next part the toofani bacche..dekhna hai kya kya toofani karnge wo update soon and ds was awsm


Thank you so much Di...!!
Toufani is an understatement..!!😉
Stay tuned..
Nandini
pcnsb thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: fatema22

hello
awesome update it cute, romantic, funny. ...
abeer not well and..zaroon taking care of ..now lets see how zaroon takes care of his children. ...
do update soon waiting.


Thank you so much..
I am glad you liked it..!!
Stay tuned..
Nandini
pcnsb thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: tvluvr

lovely piece of writing,continue soon and thanks for the pm dear.


Thank you so much..!
Stay tuned...
Nandini
pcnsb thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#14
SHOT 2

Zaroon went down, back into the kitchen to resume Abeer's work.

Parathas are impossible for me! Koi nahi aaj bread butter se kaam chala lenge! And usse banane mein time bhi nahi lagega...Abb chalke bachho ko uthate hai..!

Zaroon rushed into children's room to find them sleeping peacefully. Naira-Naved, their little bundles of joy...Zaroon smiled as remembered the first time he held both of them in his arms. They were so delicate that he was afraid to touch them at first but with Abeer's help he accomplished the task. That was a redefining moment... he was so overwhelmed with those new-daddy emotions that he still gets goosebumps! Abeer too, was smiling in tears. He just couldn't think of anything else other than giving Abeer a tight hug for this beautiful gift. From that moment their life changed upside down, their priorities, their routines, everything revolved around these two little souls. Time flied away with wings, and now it's been 5 yrs since they welcomed them in their lives! He loves to spoil them, hear them talk about their schools, their friends, their fights... it has been his favorite past time for all these years. But right now, he needs to hurry or else they will get late for their school. Zaroon drew the curtains as his cutie pies pulled over their blankets.

"Utho meri jaans..!! come on fast..!" Zaroon called out for them. Zaroon waited but none of them even stirred.

Koi nahi.. let's try again..!

"Bachha party... get up fast...!" he tried again. Same response.

Hadd hai..!

"Naira-Naved!!!" Zaroon called out again. This time, Naved moved a little and soon enough, he went back to his dreamland.

Zaroon unable to take it anymore grabbed their blankets and pulled them away. Both of them woke up instantly, "Daddy?!" they shouted in unison.

"Good morning papa ki jaans...!" Zaroon wished them with a smile. Naved woke up as he wished Zaroon groggily, "Gud morning daddy!" But Naira was still sleeping. "Naira?" Zaroon called out.

"Yeh nahi uthegi daddy... kumbhkaran! Mumma ko bhi aise he pareshaan karti hai..." Naved complained.

"Aise kaise nahi uthegi! Hum toh uthake manege.!" Zaroon said as he winked in Naved's direction. Naved too looked at him with a mischievous smile and at the count of three, both of them reached out for Naira to tickle her. Naira woke up laughing. "Daddy chodd dein! Naved..! please... main uth gayi..!" she pleaded.

"Now that's like a good girl! Wish me, good morning!" Zaroon said as he took her in his arms and made her sit on his lap. Naved too, hugged him from behind.

"Morning!" Naira wished them.

"Daddy... mumma kahan hai??" Naved asked.

"Mumma so rahi hai... unhe bukhaar hai... isliye aaj daddy aap dono ko ready karenge!" Zaroon replied. Both Naira and Naved squealed in excitement, "Yaay..!"

"Come on!" Zaroon said as he took both of them on either arm as he ran towards bathroom. He helped them brush their teeth, and then made them have a fun tub bath. Once they were done, "Okay... tum dono yahin ruko... main towel leke aata hoon!"

"Yaa allah!" Zaroon gasped when he returned back. The tub was overflowing with bubbles. Well, not just the tub! The bubbles were all around on the floor... and there, in the tub, both of them were sitting, Naira was splashing water to which Naved was counter attacking with the body wash. They were having their version of world war with deadly soap weapons.

"Naved... Naira?!" Zaroon said with shock visible in his voice. Both of them were caught red handed, and they looked at him with puppy face. Zaroon moved towards them but he lost his balance. He was about to fall, but luckily he got hold of the cupboard handle.

"Yeh kya kar rahe ho tum dono?" Zaroon asked them.

"Ku..u..u.chh nahi!" Naira replied as she fumbled with her words.

Zaroon looked at them, with unsatisfied expressions, "Achha?! Chalo... Bahir chalo..."

"Nahi daddy, thodi der aur!" Naved requested.

"Jee nahi.. bahout ho gaya..." Zaroon replied as he pulled them out of tub after a lot of hard work.

Zaroon literally juggled between both of them while helping them with their school uniform.

"Daddy! Pony?" Naira said, as Zaroon finished with Naved's tie and handed him comb.

Zaroon looked at her and comb as if they were aliens, then with a sigh, "Ohh.. kay..!"

After a lot of ifs and buts, he managed to make messy two uneven ponies of Naira. Naira wasn't fully impressed with her hairs but unfortunately she had no option.

"Naira tum bhi boy cut karva lo! Meri aur naved ki tarah...!" Zaroon suggested. Naira looked at him hopelessly.

*********

Abeer had just woken up! The first thing that strikes her mind was children!

Pata nahi Zaroon unhe tyaar kar paaye honge yaa nahi! Jaake check karti hu!

She slowly got out of the bed. She could hear noise coming from dining area. She couldn't control her laughter as she saw Zaroon struggling with both of them. Naved was running around like a fighter plane, knocking down things while Naira was throwing tantrums for not drinking milk. Zaroon was running behind Naved with his bread and the next moment he was pleading Naira to have her milk.

Aaj aaya naa uth pahad ke neeche! Abeer thought as she enjoyed Zaroon's state. Soon enough, Zaroon noticed Abeer standing there. He looked at her with pleading expressions. Abeer understood he needed help like seriously.

"Naved-Naira aap dono kyu daddy ko pareshaan kar rahe ho?" Abeer called out for them.

Both of them stopped in their tracks as soon as they heard Abeer's voice.

"Aur Naira yeh aapke baalon ko kya hua? Chalo fatafat comb leke aao!" She ordered. She managed to make Naved have his breakfast with some secret negotiation, and then she did Naira's pony.

Zaroon dropped them to school. When he returned back, Abeer was almost done with kitchen.

"Arre... Tum abhi tak kam kar rahi ho? Chal kar aaram karo!" Zaroon said.

Abeer rolled her eyes, "Main pura din nahi soo sakti! Thoda bahout kaam toh karna padega!"

"Achha chalo abhi ka quota khatam...!" Zaroon replied.

"Achha lemme finish washing the dishes at least!" Abeer requested.

"Okay I'll help you!" Zaroon said as he pushed Abeer aside. Both of them finished the dish washing, with Zaroon flirting every now and then. A strand of hair was irritating Abeer but she couldn't pull it back because her hands were all in dish soap. Zaroon noticed this, and he gently blew it away. "Look it was simple!" he said with a wink. Abeer blushed.

"Waise I must say Abeer... bachhe bahout shaitaan hote jaa rahe hai!" Zaroon said with a sigh. Abeer laughed at his statement, "Zaroon... bachhe iss umar mein shaitaani nahi karenge toh kab karenge?" Abeer replied replicating Zaroon's words. Zaroon raised his eyebrow. "Sahi hai Bibi... utha lo Mazak..!" Zaroon replied cutely.

He looked so cute that Abeer couldn't help but pull his cheeks.

********

"Hello Sara!"

"Heya Abeer! Aur kya ho raha hai?"

"Aaram!"

"Achha jee! Toh kaam kaun kar raha hai?"

"Zaroon! Saara kaam woh he kar rahe hai... bachho ko tyaar karna, aaj ka khana! Sab kuch..."

"Tumhare khubsoorat se ghar mein abhi tak bhuchal aa gaya hoga! Waise Zaroon tumhare toufan bachho ko tyaar kar paya?"

"Hehehe.. don't worry bhuchal nahi aaya..! Mat puchho...! Zaroon ko nani-dadi dono yaad aayi aaj."

"Achha hai... jab bachho bigaad sakta hai toh unhe sambhal na bhi aana chahiye!"

"Woh toh hai!" Abeer giggled.

"Mera bechara bhai!"

After chatting for some more time, she hanged up.

"Kisse baat ho rahi thi?" Zaroon asked.

"Aapki behen!" Abeer replied.

"Sara! Jee bhar ke Mazak banaya hoga mera..?" Zaroon said.

"Aap topic he itne interesting hai!" Abeer replied.

"Ahh..I see!" Zaroon said with a smile.

"Yes! Man with sixth sense!" Abeer agreed.

"Sixth sense?! Kab tak chiddaogi mujhe? Bas bhi karo!" Zaroon said as he secured his place besides Abeer.

Abeer laughed. Zaroon earned this title when Abeer was full time pregnant. Zaroon had some official party that day... but he was not willing to go there without Abeer. He was having an intuition that there was going to be emergency today, that he would have to rush Abeer hospital. When Zaroon told her this, both Sara and Abeer made fun of him but his fears turned into reality. Abeer was rushed to hospital that night itself. She was truly in very bad condition because of labor pain; it felt as if it was going to kill her. Her every cry in pain was piercing his heart. Zaroon held her hand tightly. He kept assuring her that everything's is gonna be fine although he himself was not very sure. Nervousness was so visible on his face. When Abeer was taken into operation theatre, he had to leave her hand, which he did reluctantly. His last words to Abeer were, "Tum chinta mat karo...sab thik se ho jayega! Main tumhare liye allah se dua karunga!" He left her teary eyed as this was probably the first time Zaroon mentioned about praying to almighty. He was never a very religious person, so that came as a surprise. For complete 6 hours Zaroon was untiringly pacing in the corridor. Gazala and Sara kept assuring him but nothing could relieve him of that tension. But he stopped in his tracks, as soon as he heard the shrill cries of their children. Doctor appeared out of operation theatre, "Congratulations Mr. Zaroon! It's a girl and a boy!"

"Kahan ho gayi?" Zaroon asked her.

"Kahin nahi..!"Abeer brushed off the thoughts.

"Waise manna padega! Kaise karti ho tum itna kaam? Uff main toh thak gaya!"

"Itni jaldi..?!"

"Toh kya jaan logi bache ki?"

"Jee nahi, ek cup chai pillaongi bachhe ko! Piyenge?"

"Zaroor!"

Zaroon smiled as Abeer disappeared. He had learned a lesson today! Never to under estimate the work of your wife! She works 24X7 continuously, without holiday... so do whatever you can to bring smile on their faces and make them feel special.

**********

That's it !! Thank you 😊

Do leave your comments...

Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Nice dear
Poor Zaroon 😆
Continue Soon 😊
904129 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awsum Update Nandu!! 🤗🤗 I was laughing like a maniac reading this really!! 😆😆😆 Parathe toh hue nhi, Bread Butter Bhi itni mushkil se banna!! 😆😆 Naira-Naved! ❤️ Aww.. The Faternal Twins.😳😳 Love The Names you chose. ❤️❤️
I Love how Zaroon calls them "Papa Ki Jaans!" ❤️ It reminds me the way he calls Abeer "Meri Jaan!" ❤️😳 But Papa Ki Jaans, papa ki hi baat nhi maante! 😆😆😆 Naved toh ugh gaya par Naira Aww..❤️ I loved how Zaroon and Naved woke her up with Gudgudi.😆😆 Loved how he carried them both in his arms, Adorable Father he is.😳😳 Par Naira Naved Ka world war and how Zaroon was about to slip!! 🤣🤣 What The Hell did he make in name of Ponytails??😆😆😆 Hayee Zaroon Miyan..😆😆 And Breakfast, Naved running around like A Fighter Plane and Naira throwing Tantrums??😆😆 Accha hua Abeer uth gayi warns Bhuchal hi aa jaata! 🤣 No one understands the house better than a woman does and Abeer is exactly that. Loved how she controlled everything.😳❤️

Ahh.. The Small ZaBeer Moment! You never fail to make me happy..❤️ Loved how he blew the strand of her hair from her face.. Cheesy Yet Romantic! ☺️ Romance kam nhi hona chahiye.😉 Aww..The Flashback was sweetest!! ❤️❤️ The way Zaroon says, "Main Allah se tumhare liye Dua karunga." Was soo beautiful. ❤️ The love which should actually exist between the married couple.😳 Loved how Zaroon was soo worried during Abeer's delivery. ❤️ True Zaroon is never a religious person but for her, He can do that.❤️ Man With Sixth Sense!! 😆😆 I like that! 😉 Loved Sara Abeer talk! 😳😆😆 How Abeer says, "Zaroon? Bacche iss umar mein shararat nhi karenge toh kab karenge?" 🤣🤣 Poor Mera Gudda! 😆❤️

Loved The Ending! Love You! 🤗❤️ The Song Itni Si Khushi from Barfi kept playing in my mind while I read this.❤️❤️ Thanx Fr Pm. Keep Writing.


Bhatakti_atma thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#17
superlikes...an awesome topic and it was dealt perfectly with a nice message at the end too..yes,the work of women in our society is underestimated and men take advantage of that but Zaroon..nah he is not the kind..he did realise that its tough being a wife..thanks for this one..and I must say the kids were really naughty :p
Delusional_Minx thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wonderful dear
loved it
Bacche hai ya shaitaan, bahot maza aaya padhne me!
really cute kids!
thanks for pm
tvluvr thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#19
very nice update,it was so entertaining,loved it
mishti.rain thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Naira-naved Sara-zaroon ki tarah ladte hai,zaroon as a father,its very interesting...plz continue soon...make more...kash zgh hai mein bhi zaroon and (mars & Jupiter i mean) his daughters ke scenes zyada hote
Edited by mishti.rain - 9 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".