Asher-Sania OS : Ke Dhoop Chaon Ka Aalam Raha.. - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Daulat chahiye thi na Tumhe?" He shouted, raging. "Sirf Meri Daulat? Ek baar keh kar dekhti mujhse! Apni poori property tumhare aur Rumi ke naam kar deta main! Asher Hussain Paison Ka Kaayal Nhi." He Bellowed making Sania shrink in terror. His Eyes had turned red as tears made their way.. "Kya Zaroorat thi Iss Draamebazi ki? Kyun Meri Mohabbat Ka Mazaak Banaya tumne Sania?" He screamed again. Sania stood quiet before the man towering on her. "NAFRAT HAI MUJHE KHUD SE, KI MAINE TUMSE MOHABBAT KI. I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU SANIA JAVED! DO YOU HEAR THAT? I HATE YOU!" Asher Bawled again as he crashed the Glass Tumbler seething in Anger. Sania flinched in terror as the glass crashed in million pieces on the floor. Asher walked out stomping widout even looking back, started the ignition of the car and drove off in a neck breaking speed. Sania collapsed onto the floor beneath her, Tears flowing down her eyes which she had kept under control. There were footsteps behind her and Fareeda Hussain walked upto her..
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Drama accha kar leti ho!" She spoke with venom in her voice. Sania lukd upto her, tears staining her face. "Chalo yeh accha hua ki Asher ko laga ki tumne usse dhoka diya! Warna woh tumhara saath kabhi nhi chhodta!" She added. "Aapne aisa kyun kiya? Apne hi bete ke saath?" Sania managed to speak between her sobs. "Ussi ki Khushi ke liye!" Fareeda spat back. "Kahaan mera Shaandaar Beta aur kahaan tum Talaaqyaabta, Ek Bacche ki maa! Tumhe kya laga ki tumhe main apne ghar ki bahu banaungi? Mere Asher ki Biwi?" Fareeda spoke, venom dripping from her voice. "Asher Mohabbat Kartein Hain Mujhse!" Sania spoke. "Karta Thha! Ab nahi karega. Aur aainda agar tumne Asher se milne ya baat karne ki koshish bhi ki na? Toh tumhara Bhai, woh kya naam hai uska? Wasim na? Asher ke office mein hi toh hai woh! Office ke accounts mein Scam karne ke ilzaam mein andar karwane mein mujhe derr nhi lagegi..!!" Fareeda threatened her viciously, her voice dangerously calm. Sania lukd incredulously at the woman before her. To what Extent
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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she wud go to destroy her own son's life which she claimed to be saving his life.. Giving The Sobbing Sania a dismissive nod, Fareeda walked out.. Sania's cries increased. "Mujhe maaf kar dein Asher. Main aapki mohabbat ke qaabil nhi." She managed to muffle out the words. Meanwhile, Asher drove thru the streets furiously, Blinded by Anger and Rage. He Screamed gripping the steering wheel in Anger, His grip was nothing less than Iron.
Tarq-e-Taluqaat Pe.. Roya Naa Tu Naa Main..
Sania wiped her tears angrily letting go of them which she had held up during Asher's presence.. Her Almighty knew she loved him. Not for the fact that Asher was rich or financially well off. She loved him bcuz he was the one who genuninely cared and supported her in every way.. Sumone who treated Rumi like his own kid. After driving mindlessly thru the roads of Karachi at a nerve wrecking speed, Asher finally took a sharp turn and halted his car with a jerk. The Sea Beach was deserted at this time..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Asher got out of the car not even bothering to lock it behind him. The waves crashed upon the shores drenching the sands. He took off his glasses and wiped away the tears that hadnt stopped. His eyes were red and his fair skin had turned pink due to his exhaustion and rage.
Lekin Yeh Kya Ke Chaain Se.. Soya Naa Tu Naa Main..
He took out the Red Velvet Box which consisted the ring, he had so carefully chosen for her. To propose her, To Slid it into her finger as he proposed her like shown in those movies.. But the hopes dashed like a House Of Sand infront of the mighty waves.. Asher felt so suffocated so suffocated that he threw the box over into the sea, Into the Crashing Waves.
Woh Humsafar Tha.. Haan Woh Humsafar Tha.. Haan Woh Humsafar Tha Magar Usse Humnawai Naa Thi..
"SANIAAA!" Asher screamed his guts out digging his fingers in his hair as he kneeled down.. Even The Crashing waves cudnt drown his heart-wrenching scream.. He had been betrayed in Marriage.
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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He took that widout flinching, But he hadnt planned falling so hard, so deep for Sania. But then Betrayal in Love Too? This was perhaps his last vestiage of self-control. Sania's heartbeat quickened like lightening.. She knew Asher must be in pain, What wud she not give to run upto him, gather him in his arms and tell him that she loved him and wud be his till the end of time..
Woh Humsafar Tha.. Magar Usse Humnawai Na Thi..
Her muffled sobs turned into cries as she began to realise how helpless she was.. Asher cried relentessly as his tears got soaked in the wet sand... It felt as if a dam had broken inside him which was let out thru tears tonight. He banged his palm against the wet sand widout flinching at the pain..
Ke Dhoop Chaon Ka.. Ke Dhoop Chaon Ka Aalam Raha.. Judaai Naa Thi..
Asher got up, His face pale due to exhaustion.. He suddenly felt his throat go choke and his mind go blank not registering anything or anyone at the moment. "Kyun Sania? Kyun?"
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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He whispered softly as he wandered around the beach aimlessly, Tears glazing his eyes. Sania had been happy since the past 6 months, Ever Since Asher confessed his true feelings for her. She had indeed taken up some time before reciprocating them thinking abt Rumi too. But she had fallen for the Sauve Softspoken Gentleman that Asher Hussain was. It was perfect until Fareeda Hussain had shown up today at her house. Sania had met the woman few times when she visited Asher's home. Fareeda Hussain had threatened her with Dire Consequences for her Younger Brother working for Asher if she didnt refused Asher's Proposal.. This made her world upside down..
Woh Humsafar Tha Magar Usse Humnawai Naa Thi.. Ke Dhoop Chaon Ka.. Ke Dhoop Chaon Ka Aalam Raha.. Judaai Naa Thi.. Woh Humsafar Tha.. Woh Humsafar Tha..
She was grinded between her love and family, She chose the latter.. Precap - Wud Asher Know The Truth?
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
nice concept.so sania also love asher but here again mohhabat ki dushman fareeda interfered.thanks for pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Yaay... me first..!!!

So, Asher Hussain and Sania... interesting!!!
Part 1 was awesome...
Sania and Asher both are divorced...!
Oh god,
Witch Fareeda yahan bhi aa gayi...??😡😡
Ridiculous woman...
Sania ko uske Bhai ko lekar blackmail kiya..!!
I hope Asher ko jaldi sab pata chal jaye...
Update soon!
Thanks for the PM
Nandini...
PS is it a two shot?? or short story??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Interesting start di
loved it
beautifully written
the pain n angst was nicely put up..
the song is too good!
precap is interesting
do continu soon
thanks for pm
sorry for short comment!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice OS Shanu
Awesome update love you lots
Well tha concept is nice
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon 😃 🤗

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