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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..wanderer..

finaly i'm here with my comments ... it was a nice update 👏⭐️
rumi is the one who's going to unite sania & asher ... i can imagine the worried sania the angry asher ... the office scene sania going to asher cabin & the humsafar ost in the BG it was beautiful ⭐️ waiting for the next update ...

nice to see the siggy ... but '' Sirf Thankyou Kafi Nahi Tha Kya
Dosra Jumla Add karna Lazmi Tha ? in Sidra Style 😆
apki farmahishi list yaad hai .. will make it soon 😳

Shazoo! 🤗 Missing You Buddy! ❤️ Im happy to know that you're loving the story..😃 "Ab Aisi bhi baat nhi hai, Thankyou karti rehti hoon Tumhara!" *Zaroon Style!* 🤣 Rumi is the actual tying bond between them..😳 Stay Tuned. 😊
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Part-4
Sania lukd at him as Asher's Hazel Eyes glowed like a Furnace beneath his glasses. She cud feel his rhythmic breathing on her cheeks.. "Im a weak man?" Asher repeated, his voice dangerously calm. "You think loving sumone is being Weak?" He questioned her. Sania's heartbeat had now pulled up slowly. Never before had Asher been so close to her, Not even during the time they were together. His Strong Cologne was blocking out her mind to retort back to him. "I think more than being a weak man, I was a FOOLISH Man!" Asher spoke, his voice rising. He moved closer to Sania if possible.. Sania tried to shift back but the wall was an obstacle.. He was close, So Close that she cud see the angry tears glittering in his eyes, If this continued.. Sania was fast losing her urge to escape him. "Galti thi meri jo maine tumse Mohabbat ki, Miss Sania Javed!" Asher snarled. "Toh aapko kya laga? Main Bohot khush thi?" Sania hit back, Sarcastically.
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"Atleast uss waqt tumhare Drame se toh yahi laga tha mujhe!" Asher snapped back. "Ek baat bolun? Kabhi nahi socha tha ki iss khoobsurat, saada chehre ke peeche ek itni giri hui aurat ho sakti hai..!!" Asher added, Acid laden in his words. "Issi Giri Hui Aurat se mohabbat hui thi aapko, Mr. Asher! Main aapke darwaze tak nahi gyi thi aapke mohabbat ki bheekh mangne!" Sania snapped back, equally acidic. "Galti thi woh meri..!!" Asher retorted back, angrily. "Mohabbat thi tum meri, Guroor thi tum mera! Aur tumne? Tumne meri Izzat ki Dhajjiyaan udaa di..!! Tume leke jaane kaise-kaise khwaab dekhne laga tha main, Ek Mukammal Zindagi ke khwaab! Par Tumne?" Asher yelled, gripping Sania's arm in his Iron Hold. Sania flinched in pain as she tried to free her arm. "Todd diya mere saare khwaabon ko! Tumhe iss baat ka andaaza bhi hai ki iss 1 Saal mein main Chaain se raaton ko so nhi paaya hunn. Tumhari Bewafaayi ne mujhe kahin ka nahi chhodha Sania!" He yelled angrily, His Hazel Eyes glowing with Anger..
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Sania freed her arm from his Iron Grip. "Yeh mera Maslaa nhi hai..!!" She snapped, wringing his hand away. "Mohabbat karne ka dava karte hain na aap? Yeh kaisi mohabbat thi aapki jo aapne mujhpar aitbaar bhi nhi kiya!" She added, her voice rising.
Woh Humsafar Tha Magar Usse Humnawaai Na Thi..
Asher took a deep breath and controlled the anger that was threatening to errupt. "Agar tum chaaho, toh main Rumi ki Education ke liye tumhari maddad kar sakta hunn main!" Asher replied, anger still raging in his voice. Sania's face etched into strong determination. "Aapki alazarfi ka Shukriya!" Sania snapped back. "Itna zyaada guroor karne ki zaroorat nhi hai..!!" Asher hit back wid sarcasm. "Main jo bhi karunga, uss bacche ke liye karunga, Tumhare liye nahi..!!" He added. "Mere Bacche ki parvarish aur padhayi mera maslaa hai aapka nahi..!! Aur agar Rumi aapse itna attached nhi hota, Toh main usse aapse milne toh kya? Aapki shakal tak dekhne nahi deti..!!" Sania spoke, Venom loaded in her words.
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"Tum mujhe Rumi se milne nahi rokk sakti..!!" Asher threatened her, His voice dangerously low gripping her arm again. "Bilqul rokk sakti hunn!" Sania wringed her arm free of his hold. "Aap na mere kuch lagte hain na uske, aur main uski maa hunn! Woh kisse milega aur kisse nahi woh mera Concern hai..!!" Sania replied, equally determined. "Dont you dare Challenge Me!" Asher replied, in a dangerously low voice. "Am I? Then this is it then!" Sania snapped back and stepped out from his hold. Asher stepped back, His eyes still blazing with anger. Sania walked towards the glass door of Asher's Cabin. Then she turned midway, "Waise aapko galatfehimiyan paalne ki aadat bohot zyaada hai Mr. Asher Hussain! Pehli Galatfehmi ki main aapse mohabbat karti hunn, Doosri ki main aapse Shaadi karke ek mukammal zindagi guzaarungi? Aur Teesri ki aap Rumi ke kuch lagte hain!" Sania spoke, her voice acidic. Asher till now had fisted his palms, controlling his anger as his knuckles were turning white, But her words broke the vestige
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of his self control. "GETT OUTT!" Asher screamed, shattering the Glass Tumbler and The Paperweights onto his table into gazillon pieces.
Ke Dhoop Chaon Ka Aalam Raha.. Judaai Naa Thi..
Sania shook her head and walked out of the cabin. She reached the reception area, where Rumi was happily playing wid Nagma. "Chalo Beta." Sania held his little hand and walked out of the Office. She took a deep breath and blinked back her tears.
Woh Humsafar Tha..
Asher sat down gripping his hair in anger.
Woh Humsafar Tha..
A Young girl of abt mid 30's, walked in as soon as Sania walked out with Rumi. She turned around to look at Sania and then turned her footsteps and walked out.
Later That Night.. Fareeda's Room.
Asher gave Fareeda her medicines and a glass of water to follow up.. "Khush Raho Bacche." She gently caressed his forehead. Asher smiled and took the glass from her. "Aaj kuch pareshaan ho Asher?" Fareeda asked her son..
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"Nahi Mummy, Bas aise hi." Asher tried to brush it off. "Nahi Asher, kuch toh! Ab itne bade bhi nahi hue ho tum jo apni baatein mujhse chupaoge?" Fareeda insisted. Asher took a deep breath and rubbed his eyes. "Sania aayi thi?" Fareeda asked him. Asher's head shot up. "Aapko Kaise?" He asked her, stunned. "Saba aayi thi aaj tumse milne, usne Sania ko dekha tha. Ussi ne mujhe bataya." Fareeda replied. "Haan actually woh Rumi aaya tha mujhse milne, toh ussi ko lene aayi thi woh!" Ashee concluded. "Mujhe samajh nhi aata ki tumne unn dono ko itna sar pe kyun chadhaya hua hai? Kya lagte hai woh tumhare? Pata nhi Asher tum kaise bhul sakte ho ki Sania ne tumhare saath kya kiya tha?" Fareeda spoke up, irritated. Asher's Nerve was throbbing ever since that encounter wid Sania and now his mother's words made it feel as if sumone was continously hitting his head wid a Hammer. "NAHI BHULA MAIN KUCH!" Asher screamed in anger and crashed the glass tumbler onto the floor as it broke into million pieces.
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Fareeda flinched in terror as she saw the anger her son held. "Nahi Bhula hunn main kuch!" He spoke, sumwhat loudly. Fareeda lukd at her son, He never had been so aggressive in front of her. Asher's rage cooled down and he held his mother's hand. "Im sorry Mummy." He apologized sincerely. "Mujhe maaf kardein." He added. Fareeda nodded and placed a gentle kiss on his forehead. "Main abhi mulazim se kehkar saaf karva deta hunn." Asher smiled and moved out of the room.
The Next Day.. Asher's Cabin.
"Ek baat bolun Asher?" Nadia spoke up. "Haan bolo na?" Asher replied, sipping his coffee. "Mujhe pata nahi kyun aisa lagta hi nahi, ki Sania tumhe dhoka de sakti hai ya tumse bewafaayi kar sakti hai..!!" Nadia concluded. She had come down to meet Asher this morning and Her Best Friend had told her all abt the previous day.. "Tum aisa keh rahi ho Nado? Tum?" Asher spoke up in disbelief. "Main hunn isliye keh rahi hunn Asher! I've known Sania for 3 Years now. Haan filhaal ek arse se humare
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darmiyaan baat nhi hoti par phir bhi I know her! Woh nihayati Self Respecting Ladki Hai. Kaafi Saada aur Shaant. I cant believe ki woh sirf paise, aish-o-aaram ke liye kissi ke saath kuch buraa karegi. Tabhi dekho na? Inn ek saalon mein usne kahin aur intrest show nhi kiya, Infact tumhari financial Aid bhi nhi li jo Rumi ke liye thi Asher! Kahin hum usse galat toh nahi samajh rahe Asher? Tum batao mujhe? Jab tum dono saath the toh kabhi tumhe iss baat ka ehsaas hua ki she's a shallow woman jisse materialistic cheezon mein intrest ho?" Nadia spoke up. Asher lukd at her thoughtful, Her words had indeed given him sunthing to think about. "Asher kayi baar sach woh nahi hota jo humari aankhein dekhein. Its more than what meets the eye!" Nadia added to which Asher nodded slowly.
Meanwhile..
Sania had just seen off Rumi for School when her cellphone rang. The Caller Id seemed an unknown number yet she picked it up. "Hello?" She spoke up. "Lagta Hai Tumhe Meri Baat Uss Din Samajh Nahi Aayi?"
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A known voice spoke up from the other side and Sania recongnised who it was.. Fareeda Hussain. "Kahaa tha na maine tumse ki mere bete se durr rehna? Lagta hai jo dhamki tumhe di thi uska asar kamzoor pad gaya hai!" Fareeda spoke up from the other side, her tone threatening. "Mrs. Fareeda Hussain, sabse pehli baat jiss Sania ko aapne 1 saal pehle dhamki di thi woh ek maa thi, ek behen thi aur woh jo aapke bete se mohabbat karti thi. Par aaj jisse aap dhamki de rahi hain, woh ek maa aur behen toh zarur hai par kissi Asher ki Mohabbat nahi..!! Uss waqt main kamzoor thi par aaj main kamzoor nhi hunn toh isliye mujhe dhamki dene ka sochein bhi mat..!! Aur doosra mujhe aapke bete, aap mein yaa aapki so called paise-property mein koi intrest nhi hain! Laanat bhejti hunn main aap par aur aapke Shaandaar Bete par! Aainda se mujhe phone karne yaa mujhe dhamkane ki koshish bhi mat kijiyega!" Sania spoke up, Her voice strong and firm as she ended the call. Fareeda cudnt say anything and heard the line go dead..
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