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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey KarVians, I am Shibani (many new members don't know me)

This os I had written after KarVi marriage, so here, Kartik hasn't accepted the marriage.

Hope you like it.

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"Chodiye naa Kartik" She blushed as he made invisible patterns on her saree material on her belly.

Kartik- Tum room mein aa rahi ho yaa nahi?

She blushed and to avoid him catching her expression, started stirring the dish. She was in the kitchen, preparing breakfast for her new family when he came and started flirting and romancing with her. She pushed an utensil by mistake and it fell making a noise.

"Tring!" rang the alarm clock and she woke up with a start. Remembering her dream she blushed and laughed at her not-so-innocent thoughts. Suddenly, the smile disappeared from her face and tears made their way in her eyes. She looked at her husband who was sleeping on the floor.

She went and sat next to him, adoring his calm expression, which was not a daily sight for her. She ran her hand through his hair and stood up.

Kartik woke up to hear the soft sound of bangles. He looked at his wife, who stood in front of the mirror, applying kohl in her beautiful eyes. He kept staring at the beauty clad in golden saree. She picked up the sindoor container and looked at it sadly.

She then turned to look at Kartik, who closed his eyes and faked that he was sleeping. She brushed off her thoughts and applied the sindoor, walked closer to him and sat on the floor.

Survi- (trying to wake him up) Kartik, uthiye...

He chose to ignore her and decided to keep on acting. She sighed and didn't understand what to do. She bent a little, letting her cascade hair touch his face.

Survi- Uthiye Kartik..aap office ke liye late ho jaayenge...

Kartik felt the wet hair on his face and couldn't help but open his eyes and control his sneeze. Survi smiled and was about to step out of the room, when he sneezed.

Kartik- Aachoo!

She looked at him in confusion as he sneezed and sneezed. After 5 sneezes, he tried to say something, but sneezed again. Survi remembered that last night the two had gone out for a walk and had an ice-cream, not bothering of the cold weather.

Survi- Lag gayi naa sardi...kaha tha mat khaayiye, lekin nahi janaab sunte hai kya kisiki?

She continued blabbering about the cold and its effects, but Kartik heard none of it. He enjoyed his pretty's wife's expression, as they turned from angry to sad within mini seconds, her hair move as she moved her neck, her eyes, her lips...

She stopped speaking as she felt his intense gaze on her. Both were lost in an eyelock, when Bindu came to call the two. Looking at the scene in front of her eyes, she walked off angrily. Survi heard someone anklets' noise so turned away.

Survi- fresh ho jaayiye, phir aapko kaadha deti hoon...

Kartik-(disgusted) Kaadha? Yuck!

Survi- Chup! Bilkul Chup! Main aapki ek nahi sunugi, you get that?

She gave him a firm glare and walked out. He smiled remembering the ladhaku Survi when they were young.

All were seated at the breakfast table, when they heard someone sneeze from upstairs. He walked down the stairs sneezing.

Lata- Tum dono ko ghumne bheja tha, sardi laane nahi...

Survi- Puchiye mat Aayi...inhone ice-cream khaayi kal raat ko...

Tai-(faking concren) Ho re Kartya? Tereko maalum hai naa, tujhe zukhaam hota hai,phir kayko khaai?

Kartik- Kyunki Survi...Aancho...kehti hai, main bacchon ki tarah...Aancho..

Shanti giggled.

Shanti- Dada, aapki naak dekho...

Kartik- (annoyed at being teased) Chup!

Survi shook her head and handed him the glass of medicine. He made a disgusted face.

Survi- Chup-chaap isse pi lijiye...

Kartik- Survi, main yeh nahi pi sakta...please...

Tai- (in mind) Chya aila! Ab kar patnidharam...Kartya toh sirf mere haath se kadha pita hai, kisi aur se nahi... (she smirked)

But her smirk down into a frown as she watched Survi forcefully made Kartik drink the medicine.

Kartik- (after finishing) Chee! Yuck!

Survi- Aap naa, sach mein bacche ho...

Lata- (adoring) Kisi ki nazar naa lage tum dono ko...

Shanti smiled.

Survi- Aur haan, aap aaj bilkul ghar se bahar kadam bhi nahi rakhenge...

Kartik- Toh tumhare liye yeh mehangi-mehnagi saadiyon ke kharche ka intezaam kaun karega? Huh?

Survi- Aapka saath hi chahiye Kartik, aur kuch nahi...

Kartik looked at her, and saw a tear in her eyes. Feeling guilty over his decision, he walked back to his room.

Tai- (felling happy that he ignored her) dekha, abhi bina nashta kiye gaya woh...

Survi rolled her eyes. She looked at the bedroom door, knowing that kartik needed some time alone.

Kartik looked at his mirror reflection. He remembered his marriage, first night and today's morning scene. He banged the dressing table, trying to vent out his frustration, but failed. He looked at the mirror to see Survi's image in the mirror. Shaking his head and trying to bring himself out of the reverie, he said to himself

Kartik- Yeh main kya kar raha hoon? Jisse pyaar karta hoon, usiko rula raha hoon...Jisse khushi ka vaada kiya, usiko dard de raha hoon... Yeh kaisi uljhan hai, main apni beewi ko uska darja nahi de raha hoon... Survi, yeh kaisa khel khela hai kismat ne humare saath..

He wiped the tear in his eyes when he heard the door knock. Survi stepped in the room.

Survi- Sorry kartik, mujhe aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha...Maine aapse vaada kiya tha ki main aapka intazaaar karungi...khud se pehle aapke baare mein, aapke parivaar ke baare mein sochungi... Lekin mujhe aapse ek vaada chahiye, ki aap mujhe ek mauka denge... Aapki dost banane ka nahi, aapki beewi ka bhi nahi...par aapke humdard banane ka...Doge naa?

Kartik looked at her dazed. He understood that all she wanted to do was share his pain. He didn't know what came over him and he wrapped his arms around her and pulled her in his embrace. Survi was shocked. Then sensing his yearning for love, she hugged him, pouring her love for him... It was a start...It was a moment of dream come true...

Dard mein tere saath rahungi mein

Khwaabon mein tere sang chalungi main...

Lad jaaungi tere liye yeh puri duniyaa

Tere dil se mere dil ka yeh vaada raha...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww! Beautifully written 👏
update soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it! The way u brought out karvi's feelings is really awesome! I got tears in my eyes when i read last stanza! I get involved into stories easily! Wonderful writing skills! Many times even in the show people fail to bring out entire emotionswhile trying to make it look more realistic but u presented all emotions of karvi in a realistic way must appreciate for that. Don't stop writing we need many more beautiful os like this from u mainly of our favorite couple karvi! But try to end this guilt track soon as can't see them in anymore pain! Specially karthik as even if he has some childish nature and manufacturing defect he has a pure heart and can never see or give pain to someone it's high time to see him happy! Will be waiting for us next os. Well done.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yush001

Awww! Beautifully written 👏
update soon 😳





Originally posted by: chandana1

Loved it! The way u brought out karvi's feelings is really awesome! I got tears in my eyes when i read last stanza! I get involved into stories easily! Wonderful writing skills! Many times even in the show people fail to bring out entire emotionswhile trying to make it look more realistic but u presented all emotions of karvi in a realistic way must appreciate for that. Don't stop writing we need many more beautiful os like this from u mainly of our favorite couple karvi! But try to end this guilt track soon as can't see them in anymore pain! Specially karthik as even if he has some childish nature and manufacturing defect he has a pure heart and can never see or give pain to someone it's high time to see him happy! Will be waiting for us next os. Well done.



Thanks a lot fr commenting guys🤗
bt this story is complete since it was os😆
I'll defo come up wid new stories, if tym permits😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...










Thanks a lot fr commenting guys🤗
bt this story is complete since it was os😆
I'll defo come up wid new stories, if tym permits😉

😆 I thought u r gonna continue it.
Well will b waiting for ur next story😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_gupta

Lovely os.very beautifully written





Thank you fr commenting🤗
@Yusra, hope to write one soon😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey shibani!! awesome os yaar!🥳🥳 keep writing more😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

hey shibani!! awesome os yaar!🥳🥳 keep writing more😃


thanks Apeksha😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..shibu..Awesome is..Loved it...well written..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow..shibu..Awesome is..Loved it...well written..😊


thanks Ritu😃

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