KarVi ff |A Night to remember| Updated part 3 pg4. 6 feb - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana1

Can't u just fire this cvs and take their position! I am not feeling like watching this show now a days! And cant even stop myself from reading ur ff as they make more sense and interesting than the real story! Update the next part soon! Will be waiting!😃

Thnks yaar. This means a lot to me 😳
Actually I asked for the suggestions and ur suggestion helps me a lot.😃
So gimme some 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yush001

Thnks yaar. This means a lot to me 😳
Actually I asked for the suggestions and ur suggestion helps me a lot.😃
So gimme some 😭


Karthik staring at some ladies who are wearing short dresses just to annoy survi! And when survi gets jealous and ask karthik what is he staring at and then karthik murmurs a little louder making sure that survi can hear says ' yeh mein kaun behenji ke saath pasgaya hoon she could never look sexier and look at those ladies in the short skirt' and ones again looks at them and leaves and survi all in anger accepts karthik's challenge and tells herself i will show u what this behenji can do and she also leaves in the night when karthik enters the room he will be surprised to see that lights are off and then he comes inside says survi where are u suddenly lights on and survi wearing sexy short dress karthik shocked seeing her and his jaw droped he was about say something but survi comes closer and shh him and song plays aaj dikhane muje love karke tu isaq mera song from hate story 3 and then what would happen next u know better than me! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana1



Karthik staring at some ladies who are wearing short dresses just to annoy survi! And when survi gets jealous and ask karthik what is he staring at and then karthik murmurs a little louder making sure that survi can hear says ' yeh mein kaun behenji ke saath pasgaya hoon she could never look sexier and look at those ladies in the short skirt' and ones again looks at them and leaves and survi all in anger accepts karthik's challenge and tells herself i will show u what this behenji can do and she also leaves in the night when karthik enters the room he will be surprised to see that lights are off and then he comes inside says survi where are u suddenly lights on and survi wearing sexy short dress karthik shocked seeing her and his jaw droped he was about say something but survi comes closer and shh him and song plays aaj dikhane muje love karke tu isaq mera song from hate story 3 and then what would happen next u know better than me!😆


ohho thts an interesting suggestion chandana!
Will use it in my story..
I must say u do have a creative mind!
Y dont u write a fanfiction? I bet it'll b much bettr thn mine
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yush001


ohho thts an interesting suggestion chandana!
Will use it in my story..
I must say u do have a creative mind!
Y dont u write a fanfiction? I bet it'll b much bettr thn mine


Haha thanks yaar! But no ways agar mein ne ff likhana loge jo thodi bahuth ff padne mein interest dikhathe hain woh bhi bandh hojayegi! 😆 u keep rocking! i love to read ur ff! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana1



Haha thanks yaar! But no ways agar mein ne ff likhana loge jo thodi bahuth ff padne mein interest dikhathe hain woh bhi bandh hojayegi!😆u keep rocking! i love to read ur ff!😃


heheh okaay!
Will keep asking ur suggestions as it helps me alot! 😃 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yush001

Heeyyy everyone! 🤗

PART 3:
As soon as KarVi sat in the car sone goons attacked them. They wer sent by Tai to eliminate them this time for sure. Karthik started beating the hell outta them. Another was trying to molest survi and she started shouting. Karthik rushed and beat that person to pulp. He caught hold of him.
Karthik: batao mujhe tumlog ko kisme bheja hai..he shouted.
But the goon kept quite.
Survi knew it was sent by tai but choose to keep quiet as he won't trust her.
Just when karthik was asking him..his phone rang. Karthik asked him to pick it up.and told him to keep it on speaker.

And fortunately it was TAI.
Tai to the goon: Kya hua re tumlog ne mera Kaam kardiya na?
The goon hesitated and karthik signaled him to say yes.
Goon: haan tai Apka Kaam hogaya hai humlog ne undono ko thi khane laga diya hai.
Tai was overwhelmed to hear this: tumlog me mera badal Pura kardiya,..aj Mai Bohat khush hun..chalo re tumlog ghar pe ake apna inaam Lena thk hai na?

Karthik was shocked to the core after hearing all this. It was like his world ended. The person he trusts n loves so much turned out to be like this.
He looked at survi.
He then recorded all the conversation in his phone.

And sent those goons to the jail.

Karthik: ye Kya Kiya Maine survi. Maine tai jaisi aurat par bharosa Kiya..even I hurted u so much cuz of her...Maine apni aaj par bhi bharosa nahi Kiya...sirf us tai Ke khatir...DAMN he shouted and punched his hand on the car.
Survi: karthik apne kuch galat nahi Kiya...Jo bhi Kiya apne tai ki baaton me aakr Kiya...apne apko mat blame kariye. Chaliye ab hum ghar Jakar tai ka asli chehra Sabke samne late hain!

Meanwhile in the Barve mansion tai was celebrating her victory with her kids.

KarVi's car stopped in the middle of a lone road. Only few people used to go from there.
Karthik came out and checked the car. And called the mechanic.
Survi came out of the car: Kya hua karthik car kyu rukgayi?
Karthik: pata nai I guess engine me kuch problem hai. I called the mechanic n he'll b here in few hours.
Few hours..?! Shouted survi..itni der hum Kya karenge karthik?
Karthik: intezaar..he said sarcastically.

They stood there for few minutes.

Some ladies were passing from there in shorts n mini skirts. Nd he stared at then like an idiot.
Survi got annoyed.
Karthik murmured loud enough only survi could hear: Mai bhi kahan is behenji Ke saath phasgaya hun..she ain't sexy at all.
Survi heard this and thought: I'll show u how sexy this behen ji can be!

She tore the sides of her gown to show her sexy legs and made her neck a lil'bit deeper so that her breasts her exposed. She even tore her sleeves to show off her smooth skin. It was an unressistable sight for karthik.
He was stunned to see her act like this.

It started raining heavily. As she was wet her curves wer exposed which was making karthik crazy.
She came closed to his ear and whispered seductively: nw say who's sexier..ur behenji wife or those ladies?
Karthik gulped. N said Ofcourse u survi.
Survi smirked and went in to the car played the radio. Sawan aya hai was playing in it.
She came n said come let's dance. Karthik nodded.

She kept his hand on her waist and intertwined her hand with his.
They danced slowly. Karthik was resisting so much. Survi noticed this.
She leaned and kissed him lustily. So did he.
They wer lost in their own world. Without caring abt anyone.

There was a jhopri (hut) there.

They broke the kiss and survi whispered in his ear: lift me up and take me to that hut. I'll pleasure u tonight. Karthik blushed furiously.
They went to that hut..

To be continued..

Precap: KarVi bang bang session😳

☺️hyyy jiyohhh
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is This really our innocent survi? Or karthik unknowingly brought someone else?🤣 She tore her clothes?😆 I wonder what she would wear in the morning!😆 Karthik ka tho fuse udgaya hoga!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana1

Is This really our innocent survi? Or karthik unknowingly brought someone else?🤣 She tore her clothes?😆 I wonder what she would wear in the morning!😆 Karthik ka tho fuse udgaya hoga!😆


lol yes! She is our survi! I thought of making her character a lil'bit bold!
Fuse nahi uska toh short circuit hogaya ! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hehehe thnk u :*

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