New FF: Happy ending...!!

Hi

I know...all are upset...even me...but just to distarct myself...I am thinking to pendown an TS or convert to SS based on reaponse..for yrhpk...now anyway damage has happened...so atleast I thought to end it with a good note...like here...

Hope you like it...

Here this is continuation for today's episode: that is kuhu got offer for modeling, all others are waiting for result...

HEARTFULL ENDING

ALL are waiting for reports at hospital...

Doctor: mr Rajvansh , I am sorry... procedure successful nahi hua...she is not pregnant..

But koi baath nahi we can try after little time again..

All are heartbroken after hearing this....

Kuhu was afraid...

Kuhu (Pov): abb kya hoga...maa kya karengi mujhe aur Kunal ko...? #big trouble

Kunal(pov): e kya hogya...hum sachme bhai ki help karna chahtithi...ab maa kya karengi??

Mishti (pov): he kanaji.. Abir ki dream ko fullfill karne keliye..e aakri umeed bhi nahi he...asa mere aur abiir ki saathi kyu hotha he...

Abiir(pov): not fair partner...jab hum iske liye khilaaf tha..tab aap kuhu ko bheja...jab hum mainly mishti dillse chane laga..tab aap isse bhi cheenliya...? Chalo kuhu keliye acha he..par mishti...?? And sees mishti and holds her hand...

Minakshi (pov): he maa ambe e aakri umeed bhi chalagaya...mene shuruse hi mana ki e dono behene meri parivaar keliye sahi nahi he...

Finally Abir broke the silence

Abir: its ok doctor..we will contact you later..jo hua ache keliye hua hoga..

All reached RV sadan..

Nobody is dared to talk anything..

Meenu: kuhu...

Kuhu: so afraid: without knowing she says: maa meri koi galti nahi he..mene sab kiya vo aapne kaha tha..aur results tho mere bas ki baath nahi he na...tho aap pls mujhe aur Kunal ko ghar se bahar nahi nikaloge na...?

All were shocked...

Abir: kuhu...maa ne dhamki di??

Kuhu: realised what she said....haa..haa..sorry bro..par Kunal keliye ha karna pada...

Abir: that's it...acha hua result negative aayi..varna hume sach nahi pata hota....ab iss ghar me koi surrogacy ka baath nahi karega...

Meenu: abirrr....mera asli vaaras zarroor ayega...

Abir: aap ko apni vaaras ko mubaarak ho..ab mujhse e nahi hopayega...abhi ke abhi..me jaraha hu..chalo mishti..

Took mishti to their room

Abir; packing karlo mishti..hum ek din bhi nahi rukh sakthe yaha...I know..tumhareliye e kithna mushkil he iss samay..but trust me mishti aaj jo hua acha hua...if positive aaya tho hum sab fas chuke hothe...

Mishti: I know Abir...but tumhare sapne pura nahi hopaya..

Abir: mere paas tum ho angry chorni...hum phirse kuch din baad adoption keliye apply karenge...tike..ab muskurao...

Mishti: ha Abir shayad yahi manzoor tha kanaji ko bhi...isliye rok diya iss galat kaam honese...

In kuhunal room:

Kuhu: I am sorry Kunal but me kya karthi..maa ne mujhse kaha..tume secure kardengi...aur vese bhi agar me nahi maani tho vo offer damki me badaljane me der nahi lagegi...#offer is better than dhamki...isliye me maan gayi...

Kunal: I thought tum genuinely bhai ko help karrahi he kuhu..par tumne apni selfish reason keliye haa kardi??

Kuhu: selfish..?? Kunal tume samaj nahi aaraha he..Kunal agar me haa nahi karthi tho maa hame ghar se nikal dethi..

Kunal: tho kardethi na kuhu..me ithna bhi nalaayak nahi hu ki me tume aur maa ko sambhal nahi sakthe...wase bhi bhai kabhi bhi humare saath nahi chodte...agar maa asa karthi tho...

Kuhu: ha Abir bro saath dete..but esab tumhari mehnat he Kunal...hum esab kese chodke chalejaathi..

Kunal: mene kaha na kuhu..mujhe insab me koi intrest nahi he...mujhe bas bhai ka saath aur kushi chayiye...mene tumse surrogate banne keliye force nahi kiya...aur Mishti aur bhai ne samjha diya mujhe ki kithna difficult hoga tumhareliye...isliye mene blackout karliya...

Kuhu: I know..but..

Kunal: nahi kuhu..jo tumne kiya..vo...

Chalo koi baath nahi...but abh bhai..jaraha he..

Aur...hesitating to say something...

Kuhu: I understand Kunal...# man ki baath..tume bhi jaana he..bro ke saath..

Kunal: me nahi hum...yes kuhuhum bhi chalejayengi...ek nayi zindagi ki shuruvaath karenge..

Kuhu: haa Kunal # right decision...yahi rahengi tho..hume baar baar yaad dilathe rahenge ki hum Rajvansh nahi ne...ab mujhe samaj aaraha he Kunal mishti kesa feel karrahi thi...jab baar baar me aur chaachi usse yaad dilathe thi..ki vo Maheswari nahi he..

Kunal: abh tume realise hua tho..chalo..aur sorry bolo...

Kuhu: ha Kunal chale...

Precap: Mishbir house

Shayad iss me me sab dalungi vo hume kamna kiye the...show me dekhne ka...

I will miss you Miahbir...khaas karke Abirr....vese mene 1% ka hope pakad ke rakha he...shayad extension mile...

PART 2:

Kuhu: ha chale...

Mishbir reached hall with their luggage and telling everyone bye...

Abir: aaplog e math sochiye ki me applogo ko chodke jaraha hu...balki me tho bas alag reraha hu...aaj bhi agar mere family ko koi aach aayi tho me unke daal banunga...bas ek call kijiye me ajaungi..

Parul: nahi Abir..hum sab milke koi na koi hal dundlenge...esa chod ke math jao...

Abir: nahi maasi abh koi hal nahi he...iss ghar me rehkar mujhe aur meri biwi ko koi kushi nahi milegi...

Waise Kunal aur kuhu kaha he...

Meanwhile kuku come along with luggage...

Kunal: bhai hum bhi aap ke saath chalenge...me aap ke bina iss ghar me nahi rehsaktha...

Abir is taken a back..he did not expect this...

Parul: Kunal tum bhi..?

Kunal: nahi maa...I know..me vahi karraha hu..jo aapne kaha...me bhai ke saath rahunga...unki khyaal rakhunga...

Abir: nahi nanko...is ghar ko aur paarul masi ko aur unko bhi tumhari jaroorat he...me majboori me jaraha hoo...aur vase bhi hum jab chahe milsakthe he...party karsaktha he...outings bhi jasakthe he...bas me ek phone call ki door par hoo...samjho nanko..pls...

Kuhu: nahi bro Kunal tik keraha he...#right decision...

Mishti: nahi kuhu Abir sahi keraha he...hume tho majbooran jana padraha he...par tumlog yaha sab ki kyaal rakhna...aur vase bhi tum tho kush hona chahiye na kuhu...ab tume mere saath ek gahar share karna nahi padega...(to light her mood she said)

Kuhu: nahi mishti...mene bachpan se jo kuch bhi kaha...I am sorry for that...aaj mujhe realise hua ki tum kesa feel karthi thi...

Meenu: ab sab melmilap hogay tho me kuch bolu...

Abirr...agar tum iss ghar se nikali na...tum wapas kabhi nahi aasakthi...aur maa ambe ki saugan..me tumhe..iss Rajvansh ki adikaar cheenlungi...

Abir: me Abir Rajvansh se jyaada Abir hi teeku...

Meenu: aaj ke baad tume iss jayzaad par bhi koi haq nahi hoga..

Abir: aapki jayzaad aapko mubaarak..mujhe ek paisa bhi nahi chayiye...chalo mishti..

Kunal: bhai pls bhai...

Abir: promise me Kunal tum iss ghar ko chodke nahi jaaogi..aur sab ka kyaal rakhogi...

Kunal: tike bhai...

Mishbir leaves...

Meenu: pov: mere bete ko alag kardiya na mishti..me tumlogo ko jeeth ne nahi dungi...har samay tume ek nayi mushkil kadi kardoongi...aakir mushkilose thang aakar ghar vapas aana hi padega...tab me Abir ki doosri shaadi karvadungi...

Mishbir reaches Mishbir house..(this is same house that we saw in baba track)..

They held their hands...and about to enter the house...

Abir: just a minute mishti...(and went to garden and bought a tub full of cement,water and made a base at the entrance...)

Chalo mishti ab hum isse pair rakh kar grihapravesh karthe...

Both kept their legs on cement base...

Abir: chalo mishti takgayi hogi na..araam karthe..ab tho bed bhi nahi he...tho hum kal jaake shopping karthe...

Mishti: koi baath nahi Abir..agar tum saath ho tho kuch bhi zaroorath nahi padegi..

They went to hall and sat down leaning to the wall...holding their hands..mishti kept her head on his shoulder...he wrapped his arms on her...and slept...hoping for a new and peaceful life from tomorrow...

Pre cap: NGO works of Mishbir...kuhu takes up modeling contract...

Such a nice story.. Great work... Plzz continue soon will be waiting for next update..in this tough time you are making mood light of the fans... Keep it up...

Such a nice story.. Great work... Plzz continue soon will be waiting for next update..in this tough time you are making mood light of the fans... Keep it up...

Part 3:

Precap: Mishbir shifted their own house...and slept in each other arms...

RV sadan:

Kuhu: Kunal ..mujhe tumse baath karna he..

Kunal: ha...bolo..

Kuhu: tum gussa mat hona..mujhe ek modelling ka offer mila...mene apply nahi kiya par via shooting me director ne mujhe dekha aur offer kia...ek saal ka contract he..but if you don't want...it's ok..#kuhumodel

Kunal: good kuhu.. congratulations..

Kuhu: tho tume koi problem nahi he..?

Kunal: nahi kuhu..mene couetship ke vakth nahi samaj gaya..par bhai ne mujhe samjhaya...ki aaplog ka self confidence aur self esteem badthi he..kaam karne se...aur vo bhi which you like..

Kuhu: thanks kunal..me abhi deal sign kardethi hu..

Next morning:

Mishti gets up and see Abir sitting uncomfortably to make her sleep peacefully...she left a smile..and put his head in her lap..and started to caress his hair and slipped into deep thoughts...

Mishti (pov): pichle kuch dino me kithna kuch hua..meri kya galthi thi isme ki me maa nahi bansakthi...par Abir ka sapna Sapna hi rehgaya..meri vajase..but jo bhi ho me nahi tut sakthi aur Abir ko tut ne nahi dungi...iss samasya ka koi na koi solution doond na hoga...Abir keliye..humare liye...kya karu..??

And sees Abir smiling in sleep when she is carasing his hair...

I promise Abir tumari smile esehi bane rahegi...Abir opens his eyes and saw most beautiful eyes before him staring at him lost in thoughts...

Abir: good morning angry chorni..and hugged her..

Mishti: good morning ajeeb rajvash...

Abir: chalo mishti fatafat fresh hoke shopping keliye nikalna he na..

Mishti: ha...

And they got ready and went for shopping..

All shopping for the new house completed...and mishti thought of some surprise for Abir...

They sat in car...

Mishti: Abir me drive karthi hu aur tum aake bandh rakhna..jab thak me open nahi bolana tab thak ..

Abir with confused look: why??

Mishti: surprise he...chalo ankhe bandh..

Abir: tike tike..

Mishti drove to some place and made Abir let down the car and asked to open his eyes

Abir was happy to see kids around him...yes she bought him to amma orphanage..Abir was so happy to play with them..they spend some time with kids...and went to the manager ankitha...who is mishtis friend...

Ankitha: hi mishti..kesi ho..bahut time ke milrahahu...

Mishti: hugged her..I am good tum kasi he..

Ankitha: all good..yaha aana kese hua...?

Mishti: vo bus baccho se milna aaya tha...thoda time spend kana he...tho bus...vase ye meri husband...Abir raj..stopped and looked at Abir.

Abir: hi me Abir...

And she took them inside...baat baatho me she came to know that Abir runs aasha kiran ngo..

Ankith: tho aaphi vo Abir Rajvansh he...

Rajvansh naam sunthe hi misbir ka face peela padgaya...ankitha understood something was not right...so she continued..

Mene aap ki ngo ki baareme bahut suna he...

And they talked for sometime...and ankitha understood that both want to do so much to the society..

Suddenly she thought something...mishti agar tum bura na manne tho me kuch puchu?

Mishti: ha...

Ankitha: vo actually mere ek dosth tha..aakash..vo ek old age home chalaraha tha...par kuch mahino pehle unka accident me moth hogaya he..thab se badi mushkil se mehi chalaraha tha...abh mere hasiyath se baahar hogayi maintain karna...tho..agar aasha kiran vo project take up karle tho acha hoga na..agar aap dono ko tik lage tho...

Abir : tik...etho achi baath he na..agar humari vajase vunlogo ka madath hojay tho achha he na..

Mishti: ha ankitha e tho bahut achi baath he..

Vese kaha he e aashram..?

Ankitha: Champaner..

Mishbir: what..??

Ankitha: kya hua..kuch problem he...?

Mishti: nahi vo actually waha pe humare school bhi he...aur vo humareliye bahut special he..isliye...

Abir: tike ankitha ji..aap paper work ready karwadijiye me ek baar vaha ki logo se baath karna chahti hu..uske baad sign karungi...

Ankitha: ok Abir..me papers ready karwaake mishti ko inform kardungi...thank you so much..mera problem solve karne keliye...

Mishti: thanks to you...ankitha hum se ithna acha kaam karvane keliye...

They took leave from there having new hope in life...

Precap: Mishbir in champaneer

Please continue. Love the way the story is progressing

Show writers could have gone this way instead of going on surrogacy track