#longpost(sorry for the mistakes)
In our school when we were taught about story writting we where told its most difficult thing to write because its not just facts or just writing your imagination,like in debate writing or simple composition.
First keep as less characters as you can, keep your plot simple and most important character sketch and character development where few basic points.
Now coming to yrhpk
For lets keep other characters aside and talk about the main leads abir and mishti.
Abir- an artist,poet, photographer, an observer, intelligent, educated (created a tracking app) runs an ngo helps anyone in need brings smile to every soul he touches. Naughty and a prankster. Abir is a pacifist. Basically a self made man.
He is a wanderer but this aspect of him had a catch and that is he used to get fed up with his family and when ever he saw his mothers manipulation working he just left home to fine solace amidst nature stars moon etc
He had caved to be loved unconditionally somebody who would fight for him and support him.(he faught for the right things like during ketki marriage but lost cause nobody supported him)
His baba was his idol and he practically worshipped him he built his career as per his teachings.
Mishti- educated,opinionated, realist a problem solver,finds happiness in small little things,have strong family values, loves fiercely and can go to any extent for loved ones, lives by her principles and ethics, never back down, daring, brave, naughty and goofy.
She overthinks a situation,always has an insecurity of being left alone, tries to make everybody happy even at times accepting the wong, crave a family that she could say hers with authority.
These are the basic traits now what ever tracks comes and goes character should move around these where they overcome certain insecurity or they develop new one.
They grow together as a couple and overcome their flaws by helping each other or at times calling out.
After their confession nothing seems at place writer are in some kind of hurry or don't know. every track they brought had immense potential but only if explored properly. But all when down the drain. Shadi ke bad to i feel we are watching some othe show this is not the abir and mishti we loved. Their characters were flipped as per the will and wish of the writers( which clearly didn't work)
But today i will talk about post lockdown.
Lockdown started by showing abir leaving mishti alone at the resort. Pstd sexual abuse had no story like varun and karan relation, how varun met ketki, their family ties nothing everything was left to audience imagination no base was created to even connect with the story so the audience never connected. we read story or watch it and through the story audience deduce the moral or underline message but its just opposite they loudly speak the msg but there is no story.
First they started with sexual abuse then suddenly turned it to a half cooked murder mystery. No mystery no plot nothing they were just in a hurry to end the plot.
Abir kuhu kunal leaving mishti alone at the resort that too without mishti's fault was never called out( even if it was her fault who leaves his wife or family alone just because of fight). They never confessed their mistake. Apart from abir mentioning once or twice nothing.(i am not blaming abir for what happened to mishti because what happened to her was just karan's fault or rather people with such sick and cheap mentality) abir should have been scolded just like mishti was currently when she left abir. But too much to expect.
Yeh sasural genda ful na dikha kar they could have shown mishti and abir taking professional help to overcome pstd would have made better sense and also a good msg.(fast forward aur ek mahine ka leap hi dikha dete)
Magazine kand i mean what was that as a women i felt so bad and angry with the horrible stunt pulled by abir and those stupid logics given by abir and bp and mishti falling for that and apologizing made me feel sick.
For once i thought mishti even after clearing all the mess and saying sorry would call abir and bp out and confront them and make them realise how wrong they were. What kind of progressive show it is which they claimed.
Are jitna drama dikhana hai dikhao par kuch basic chize to sahi rakho. Abir bp wahi the who said mere pyar ko society bully nehi kar shakti and bp said to meenu mishti would not apologize. aise hi character badal kaise diye. Diya to diya galat ko call out kyu nehi kiya wah bhai.
Phir yeh bacha wala track mere kaan se khoon nikal ne laga hai yeh bacha word sunkar(worst track of all). What is abirs desperation about baby.yeh baby ek private matter hai couples ke beeh mein you can definitely take advice par yeh panchayat bulake yeh kaun discuss karta hai.
Actually first i thought it would be about difference in opinion where abir wants parenthood and mishti not ready. The way they were showing abir in his excitement unintentionally putting pressure on misthi and mishti because of abirs excitement giving in will be dealt with but no maker to alag e nashe mein hai.
And what was that mishti leaving abir because of his happiness where time and again abir said how she is his happiness. wasn't she the same girl who even after all the insults from abir came back went against her own family and fought tooth and nail ,ran away from the wedding alter to be with abir.(so not mishti's character). Somehow after lockdown i feel no connection with mishti the girl who went to every extent to protect abir the girl who fought with everyone to be with abir. Okay understood she was vulnerable but still(mishti is synonymous with fighter)
Aaj kal to show kam moral science ka class lagta hai nobility of adoption vs cruelty of surrogacy (and please both have their pros and cons and its individual couples choice)
Abir bang on baatein bol raha hai hats off for showing the social stigma and pointing out the important aspect.
Lekin story aur show ka kya. Is track ka aim kya hai kaha jana hai.
The only sane things relevant to the story and show that's been spoken till date by anyone is mishti
1 help orphan children and work for their development ( work together and concentrate on career) spend time with family and heal together from the pain of not becoming parents.
2is it the right environment to adopt a child and leaving home is not the solution to meenu problem because she will be there to create trouble
3 lets pause and take a break sab bohut speed mein ho raha hai
(the main issue and the current real solution suggested by mishti was thrown out of the window)
Writer track suru karne se pehle story plot in sab ke bare mein sochte hai kya???pata nehi.
Aab to bhagwan yeh sab abir ka gyan ka kya matlab jab surrogacy hi karani thi.(i thought mishti might give in but abir will stand his ground cz he was very clear about all this from the beginning)
They have made a fool out of motherhood and mocking sensitive issues of adoption surrogacy.mishti and abir jumping form one to another without showing proper emotions like Adoption got cancelled and that was the reaction of abir and mishti nothing. So lot happened but proper emotional connect was not there Horrible writing.
And then we ask why trp is low.
Who after all day work amidst pandemic want to watch a show and get frustrated.
Untill you work on your plot and story i am sorry nothing interesting is left.
Character ko apne hisab se flip karwate hai character arc character growth naam ki kisi cheez ke bare mein pata bhi hai in logo ko??đ¤
they just ruined every thing they had beautiful cast, amazing actor(shaheer and rhea are brilliant, a big salute to them and the only thing that kept me connected to the show)
Kuhu kunal story also had amazing potential angry young man bubbly girl but they never explored that properly too.
How can we expect trp that too during ipl season.
Totally unfair.
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