MISHBIR: safar khubsurat hai manzil se bhi ❤:MY STORY-Memory loss - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice updates..loving it..😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardhinirosid

Nice updates..loving it..😍😍

Thank you for you appreciation

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow.... Such a nice story... You should be the writer in the show...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: NTH121

Wow.... Such a nice story... You should be the writer in the show...

😁🤭 thankyou for your words

Ab to sach mai lagta hai mujhe hi hona chahiye😉 jis hisab se story chal rahi hai😂😅

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Posted: 5 years ago
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PART-5



Kunal: bhai vo to jaake hi pata chalega na


Abir: ha sahi keh raha hai chalte hai


On the other side mishti was searching for the jeweller shop and she got it


Mishti: yes finally I got the jeweller shop ab yaha par jake pata karti hu ki kitna paisa milega is earing ka


Then she started removing her jewellery and crossing the road for reaching to the jeweller shop but after crossing the road when she was just 6-7 steps away from the shop a thief came there and snatch mishti's earrings from her hands



Mishti: chor chor


Then without giving a minute to think about calling anyone she started running behind the thief


Mishti: ruk jao kaha bhaag ke ja rahe ho


And she started running fast and even that thief was also running very fast and then thief throw a wooden box on mishti so that she doesn't follow him and because of that wooden box mishti lost her balance and was about to fall then a man just hold her from behind
That man was none other than abir


Mishti: thankyou so much plz hatiye mujhe us chor ko pakadna hai


After saying this she started running again behind that thief even she doesn't see that man's face who hold her from behind just to save her from falling


Abir: mishti...mishti ...


Kunal: bhai uss side mishti kahi nahi mili..........kya hua mili aapko mishti?


Abir: chal mishti mil gayi


Kunal: bhai kaha par


Abir: Tu chal to btata hu


Kunal: okay bhai



Then both the rv's brothers also started running behind mishti



Mishti: maine kaha ruk jao..... Aise nahi maanoge na



Then she saw a sabzi thela (mishti's favourite thing) and drag it on thief and that thela get collide with thief and he fall there



Mishti: pata tha aise hi maanoge



When mishti came near the thief then he pushed mishti again and suddenly abir and kunal came there



Abir: mishti... Tum thik to ho na


Mishti: ha mai theek hu vo chor mera saaman chura kar bhaag raha hai


Kunal: it's okay mai dekhta hu



Then kunal just ran behind that thief and caught him and got mishti's earrings from that thief and that thief ran from there



Abir: thank god mishti tum theek ho tumhe is halat mai uske peeche nahi jaana chahiye tha na...... Uske peeche to dur ki baat hai...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? tumhe to aaram karna chahiye na


Mishti: 1 second tumhe kaise pata ki meri health theek nahi hai aur upar se tumhe mera naam kaise pata?


Abir: vo.... Vo...


Mishti: vo vo kya...?batao


Abir: vo abhi tumhara kuch der pehele vaha par pair phisla na to mai vahi tha to jab tumhara haath pakda tha na tumhe bachane ke liye tabhi tumhare haath se vo medicines ki prescription gir gayi thi aur uspe hi tumhara naam likha tha to zahir sir baat hai na ki bimar ho tbhi dawaiya le rahi ho aur uspar mishti naam bhi likha tha to mujhe laga tum hi mishti ho


Mishti: o acha.... Ha vaise mai hi mishti hu lekin tum mere peeche kyu aaye ho? Tumhe pata tha kya ki mai chor ko pakad rahi hu?


Abir: nhi nhi.....vo mai tumhe...... Mai tumhe tumhari medicines ki prescription dene aaya tha mujhe laga faltu mai pareshaan ho jaogi


Mishti: thankyou so much 😊 for helping me mai medicines hi lene aayi thi


Abir: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Mera matlab hai ki is area mai medicines nahi milti


Mishti: ha pata hai mujhe jeweller se kuch kaam tha na


Kunal: o yes ye lo apna earring


Mishti: thankyou so much agar ye nahi milta to pata nahi meri medicines kaise aati


Abir: matlab


Mishti: hum middle class wale logo ki to yahi life hoti hai na har cheez ke liye hume ladna hota hai itne paise bhi to nahi hote na jo har cheez aasani se mil jaye to bus apne papa ki zimmedari thodi kam kar rahi hu apne medicines ke paise khud dekar so isliye apne earring bechne aayi thi



Abir and kunal get furious after hearing this



Abir: par tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai tumhe nahi aana chahiye


Mishti: kya karsakte hai har kaam papa se to nahi karwa sakte na so isliye bus unki thodi bahut help kar rahi hu okay bye mai chalti hu



Abir was just listening to mishti and thinking in his mind : meri angry chorni tumhe kuch yaad na hote hue bhi bahut kuch yaad hai ......... Tum aaj bhi galat hote hue nahi dekh sakti..... Aaj bhi tumhe apni family ki kitni chinta hai apne aage apni family ko rakti ho......bus fark itna hai ki tum jise apni family soch rahi ho vo tumhari family hai hi nahi bus tumhe use kar raha hai
















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Posted: 5 years ago
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PART-6



Abir was just listening to mishti and thinking in his mind : meri angry chorni tumhe kuch yaad na hote hue bhi bahut kuch yaad hai ......... Tum aaj bhi galat hote hue nahi dekh sakti..... Aaj bhi tumhe apni family ki kitni chinta hai apne aage apni family ko rakti ho......bus fark itna hai ki tum jise apni family soch rahi ho vo tumhari family hai hi nahi bus tumhe use kar raha hai


Kunal: bhai dekha aapne kaise vo mishti ka use kar raha hai


Abir: ha nanko par is time hume josh se nahi hosh se kaam lena hai


Kunal: par bhai...


Abir: par var kuch nahi pehele hume mishti ki dekhna hoga ki vo safely ghar pahuch jaye


Kunal: right bhai isi bahane hum dekh lenge ki uske papa ne use kaha rakha hai kaisi jagah hai


Abir: exactly.......chale?


Kunal: ha


Abir: 1 sec bade papa ka call aaraha hai mujhe ye pick karna hoga


Bade papa: abir beta mishti ka kuch pata chala


Abir: ha bade papa mishti hume mil gayi hai bus abhi hum jgh dekhne ja rahe hai ki uske papa ne use kaha rakha hai


Bade papa: kya matlab beta aapka mishti aapko naman ke ghar par nahi mili to phir kaha pe mili



Then abir told him everything



Bade papa: naman se aur ummid bhi kya kar sakte hai hum beta aap dekh lijiyega mishti ko ki vo safely ghar pahuch jaye


Abir: ji bade papa



Maheshwari house


Badi maa: ji kya hua abir ko mishti mili?


Bade papa: ha mil gayi



Then bade papa told everything that abir told him



Badi maa: hey bhagwaan ye insaan kabhi baaz nahi aayega


Jasmeet to varsha: maine maana mai kabhi nahi chahti thi ki muhboli is ghar mai rahe par aise to nahi chaha tha


Varsha: tune mishti ko. Us time dekhna nahi na jab vo kaise ro rahi thi apni pehchaan ke liye meri to himmat ne jawab dediya tha use aise dekh kar


Badi maa: hey baal gopa meri mishti ki raksha karo



On the other side mishti buyed medicines for her and abir and kunal are just following her and mishti reached to the door of home and kunal and abir are just watching her from distance



Kunal: bhai ye kaisi jagah hai?


Abir: ha yar dekhne mai to safe nahi lag raha hai


Kunal: i don't think so hume mishti ko yaha chodna chahiye


Abir: kya bolenge mishti ko hum jake ? Tune dekha na kaise mishti hume ek random person samajh rahi thi


Kunal: ha bhai i know aapko bahut bura laga hoga


Abir: mere bura lagne na lagne ki koi baat hi nahi hai nanko main baat hai mishti ki safety agar vo safe rahe to everything is awesome


Kunal: that's why I always say my brother is best


Abir:☺


He was just looking at her mishti and remembers every moment with her then he just reverse his car and move out from that area



Then mishti was knocking the door of naman's house



And then naman opened the door



Naman: aagyi beta?


Mishti: ha papa


Naman: saari medicines mil gayi ?


Mishti: ha papa aap bhi aagaye aur vo bhi itni jaldi


Naman: beta vo....kuch log aane wale hai na kaam ke silsile mai isliye nahi gaya


Mishti: acha ye lijiye kuch paise bach gaye


Naman: are 😁 ....par beta tumhare pass ye paise kaise aaye?


Mishti: aap uski tention mat lijiye bus 1 week ke undar mai kisi jobke liye bhi apply karne ki soch rahi hu aise aapka haath bhi bat jayega


Naman: ha beta


Mishti: tabtak mai jake chai banati hu aapke guests ke liye


Naman : ha beta kaafi bade log hai vo



Then two mens knocked the door of naman's house and naman opened the door then that business man was there at the door



Naman: aaiye aaiye



Everyone entered naman's house
Ramesh( naman's friend) to naman: yaar bahut maaldar party mili hai agar inhe khush kardiya to kisi cheez ki dikkat nahi hogi


Naman: ha ha ha ha.... Sahi keh raha hai



Then everybody sat at his house



Then mishti came with the cup of tea



When mishti entered then that business man named Mr singh was staring at mishti continuously mishti feels uncomfortable and suddenly ran from there


















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Posted: 5 years ago
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Niceeee....

Thank you for your speed updates...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Janu.301017

Niceeee....

Thank you for your speed updates...

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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PART-7


When mishti entered then that business man named Mr singh was staring at mishti continuously mishti feels uncomfortable and suddenly ran from there



Naman: lijiye chai pijiye


Mr singh: Hm ......


Naman: aur bataiye aapne kya socha ki ab kya karna hai aapko aap is deal mai kispar apna paisa laga rahe hai?


Mr singh: are vo sab to baatein hoti rahengi aap apne baare mai kuch bataiye


Naman: apne baare mai?


Mr singh: ha apne baare mai...... Aapke saath kaun kaun rehta hai aapki wife? Aapki beti - beta kaun kaun hai?


Naman: acha 😅 mai akela rehta hu yaha


Mr singh: acha to phir vo ladki kaun thi?


Naman: arey 😅😅 bhul gaya tha..... Vo meri beti hai mishti


Mr singh: mishti...


Naman: ji vo mai bhul gaya tha aaj kal bahut cheeze bhulne lga hu😅


Mr singh : are koi baat nahi.... Milayenge nahi apni beti se


Naman: ha ha kyu nahi....... Mishti beta zara yaha aana



Then mishti came there



Mishti: ha papa


Naman: beta Mr Singh ko tumse milna hai


Mishti: mujhse?


Naman: are ha vo to bus family member puch rahe hai to maine kaha ki mera tumhare siva koi nahi hai



Then after seeing mishti he was continuously staring her and mishti again started feeling uncomfortable



Then Mr Singh started coming near mishti to shake hand



Mr Singh: hi mishti



But mishti suddenly gave an excuse that she wants to go to mandir and she will come back after some time


Mishti: okay bye mai baad mai milti hu


Naman: okay beta


Then she came out of the house and started thinking



Mishti: mujhe itna ajeeb kyu lag raha tha us ghar mai balki tha to vo mera ghar aur mere hi papa the phir bhi mujhe itna unsafe kyu lag raha tha...................i think shayad mai hi kuch zyada soch rahi hu mujhe mandir jaana chahiye shayad man ko thodi shaanti mile





In maheshwari house



Badi maa: mera jee bahut ghabra raha hai pata nahi mishti kaisi hogi


Bade papa: shaurya ki maa aap chinta mat kariye hum kuch sochte hai



Then abir and kunal came there



Bade papa: abir kunal aap dono?


Abir: ha bade papa hume laga ki aap logo ko bhi mishti ki bahut tention ho rahi hogi isliye aagaye uske related information batane


Bade papa:kaha lekar gaya hai naman humari beti ko


Kunal: bade papa vo ajeeb si jagah hai mujhe to safe bhi nahi lag rahi thi


Badi maa: hey bhagwan hum kaise laayenge apni bachchi ko ghar pe


Abir: badi maa aap tention mat kijiye hum kuch sochte hai


Badi maa: mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai mai ek baar mata raani ke mandir jana chahti hu mishti ki salamati ke liye mannat maangne


Abir: badi maa hum bhi chalte hai aap ke saath


Badi maa: nahi beta tumhe bhi aaram karne ki bahut zaroorat hai


Abir: ha important hai rest karna par mishti se zyada important to nahi hai na


Badi maa: ha beta par phir bhi tumhe aaram karna chahiye mai varsha ke saath ho aati hu


Abir: okay phir hum dono aap logo ko chod aate hai mandir raaste mai hi padega


Badi maa: thik hai beta



Then everyone started coming towards mandir to pray for mishti


















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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome dear 💞

Continue soon..

Oh my...u r giving back to back updates😆

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