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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please do share your thoughts.

I just feel like the show started off so well.. they established Mishti and Abir's friendship etc but I just feel its started dragging. The same things keeps continuing. Meenakshi plotting but all her plans to break the alliance failing due to some reason or another. Abir and Mishti barely have any screen time together since the last couple of episodes. Abir has realised his feelings and maybe they could focus a little more on his emotions, his confusion between his own heartbreak and the breaking of the marriage alliance. I feel they just don't focus on his confusion.. its not portrayed well. They actors are so talented but I feel they haven't been used to their potential. I feel the screenplay and direction needs to pull up their socks.

As an avid viewer of the show this entire week has been really uninteresting and boring. I get they need to establish the story line and the characters but its dragging. Kuhu keeps harping about how Mishti is the bane of her existance.. they could have shown some character growth in her after she is facing heartbreak. Kunal from being an obedient son is now becoming a dominating fiance or to be husband. He wants his way with most things and starts getting angry for small things... which wasn't his personality at all when the show started.

What I do like is the brothers relationships. Kunal no matter what does love and care for Abir and likewise Abir knows his brother is an extremely good guy. I love Nanu and Abir's relationship the most. They have an adorable bond. The other bond I like is the Bade papa and Mishti bond. I feel he is much more mature than Mishti and isn't forcing the relationship on her like Badi Ma .. he constantly tells her that he will always support her. He even apologised to Abir at his exhibition in front of everyone for misunderstanding him initially.

I really hope the show picks up and I do hope they don't do Kunal and Mishti's engagement. I am curious to know how and when Misti will find out about Abir's feelings for her and what will lead to her falling in love with him.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I think they should focus more on Mishbir than Mishti Kunal.

I think Mishti should be given some more personality instead of introverted, everything is fine but some more spark like how Rhea used to be as Kanak.

And Kuhu's personality needs to be subdued ALOT!

More scenes to build up Shaheer - Rhea's chemistry. The first time i felt some chemistry is when he brought lunch to her. They should do it more and perfectly capture their chemistry.

Don't bring Kuhu - Kunal together. Both the characters as well as actors have zero chemistry, infact they have negative chemistry. U can use the other boy in Abeer's household for Kuhu and some other girl for Kunal.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: popeye

Please do share your thoughts.

I just feel like the show started off so well.. they established Mishti and Abir's friendship etc but I just feel its started dragging. The same things keeps continuing. Meenakshi plotting but all her plans to break the alliance failing due to some reason or another. Abir and Mishti barely have any screen time together since the last couple of episodes. Abir has realised his feelings and maybe they could focus a little more on his emotions, his confusion between his own heartbreak and the breaking of the marriage alliance. I feel they just don't focus on his confusion.. its not portrayed well. They actors are so talented but I feel they haven't been used to their potential. I feel the screenplay and direction needs to pull up their socks.

As an avid viewer of the show this entire week has been really uninteresting and boring. I get they need to establish the story line and the characters but its dragging. Kuhu keeps harping about how Mishti is the bane of her existance.. they could have shown some character growth in her after she is facing heartbreak. Kunal from being an obedient son is now becoming a dominating fiance or to be husband. He wants his way with most things and starts getting angry for small things... which wasn't his personality at all when the show started.

What I do like is the brothers relationships. Kunal no matter what does love and care for Abir and likewise Abir knows his brother is an extremely good guy. I love Nanu and Abir's relationship the most. They have an adorable bond. The other bond I like is the Bade papa and Mishti bond. I feel he is much more mature than Mishti and isn't forcing the relationship on her like Badi Ma .. he constantly tells her that he will always support her. He even apologised to Abir at his exhibition in front of everyone for misunderstanding him initially.

I really hope the show picks up and I do hope they don't do Kunal and Mishti's engagement. I am curious to know how and when Misti will find out about Abir's feelings for her and what will lead to her falling in love with him.

I would agree to disagree this track has been dragged yes but it does serve its purpose that how knowing and talking to the guy before hand is so important in a marriage. People like Kunal exist in real life too who appear to be something else but beneath the surface they posses toxic traits. Kunal was supossed to be imperfect for Misthi. I agree with you on the KUHU part her character arc has been disappointing. I really hope both Kunal and Kuhu redeem themselves. For now I am liking it better then any other show on the ratings chart.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: TeenRose1

I think they should focus more on Mishbir than Mishti Kunal.

I think Mishti should be given some more personality instead of introverted, everything is fine but some more spark like how Rhea used to be as Kanak.

And Kuhu's personality needs to be subdued ALOT!

More scenes to build up Shaheer - Rhea's chemistry. The first time i felt some chemistry is when he brought lunch to her. They should do it more and perfectly capture their chemistry.

Don't bring Kuhu - Kunal together. Both the characters as well as actors have zero chemistry, infact they have negative chemistry. U can use the other boy in Abeer's household for Kuhu and some other girl for Kunal.

I love Misthi's personality. I feel its a bit subdued but its so relatable not everyone is an extrovert. There are a lot of people who are introverts and its refreshing to see a female lead like M

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Posted: 6 years ago
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i wonder who will be the one to break off kunal- mishti engagement. i just hope its not due to abir or it will be big mess. i wonder why anyone in the house spcly mishti cant realise that kuhu likes kunal. she has given enough hints to her till now.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I think Meenakshi and Parul hog a lot of SS in this show. Poora time Itna busy rehte hain dono ke dono and the minute by minute detail of their daily routine is shown by our CVs.😆 God knows what grand purpose they were serving by tampering with the jhoomer, which tomorrow will fall on her own head. Itni planning keval rishta todwane ke liye. Hats off to Meenu. Arre mana kar do isse acha. Kunal anyway won't go against Meenu and marry Mishti😆 I wonder if her business is not getting affected 🤔🤔 MD Kunal does not have time to even talk on phone, but the head of the company is super busy making flop plans..😈😈 itne failed plans ke baad bhi her attitude, confidence and expressions are like as if she is the most sly character ever born..😎😎 Sometimes I feel Meenu and Parul are the leads , Abir and Mishti are the parallel leads and Kunal and Kuchu are the sidekicks.😆

Edited by ZindagiCalling - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yr mai tired of this mishti and kunal scene..and i think this godhana happened..mishti has no feeling for abeer..atleast now srory need some progress

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks so much guys for sharing your views and thoughts.. it was really interesting to read all your opinions and thoughts.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZindagiCalling

I think Meenakshi and Parul hog a lot of SS in this show. Poora time Itna busy rehte hain dono ke dono and the minute by minute detail of their daily routine is shown by our CVs.😆 God knows what grand purpose they were serving by tampering with the jhoomer, which tomorrow will fall on her own head. Itni planning keval rishta todwane ke liye. Hats off to Meenu. Arre mana kar do isse acha. Kunal anyway won't go against Meenu and marry Mishti😆 I wonder if her business is not getting affected 🤔🤔 MD Kunal does not have time to even talk on phone, but the head of the company is super busy making flop plans..😈😈 itne failed plans ke baad bhi her attitude, confidence and expressions are like as if she is the most sly character ever born..😎😎 Sometimes I feel Meenu and Parul are the leads , Abir and Mishti are the parallel leads and Kunal and Kuchu are the sidekicks.😆

@Bold- THIS THIS THIS. Meenu maa background me planning kr le thodi der ke liye😆

Even i felt show a bit slow this week but vo natural tha after Abir's realization and then fire scene and that dream sequence. It was bound to happen. Worst is wait for the weekend tbh😆

At the same time I wanted this frustration too. It is real.

The pace is ok IMO, I dont want them jumping too fast.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: meen123

@Bold- THIS THIS THIS. Meenu maa background me planning kr le thodi der ke liye😆

Even i felt show a bit slow this week but vo natural tha after Abir's realization and then fire scene and that dream sequence. It was bound to happen. Worst is wait for the weekend tbh😆

At the same time I wanted this frustration too. It is real.

The pace is ok IMO, I dont want them jumping too fast.


Yea id rather them take things slow too. I am ok with the pace too. This week was slow compared to last week but it didnt feel like it got dragged. Engagement breakoff is the highlight so they are gonna take couple of epis to get over this track but i want them to do it in a right way. But I agree with too much screen space given to Meenu and her evil plans. They should focus on Kuhu instead. Hopefully we will get to see dhamakedar epis frm next week onwards.

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