My last wish - Based on Abhimaan marriage Part 4 updated pg2

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A thought, that stemmed after watching the current track, now that Akshara is not alive but if she was she might have thought something about Abhira's wedding, Indian parents start prepping for their daughters wedding since the day they are born. Akshara's presence and perspective would definitely add an emotional layer to the storyline, especially considering how deeply Indian parents invest in their daughters' weddings. If Akshara were alive, she might have had her own dreams and expectations for Abhira's wedding, perhaps reflecting a blend of traditional values and her personal wishes. The preparation for such an event often involves not just logistics but a lot of sentimental planning, and Akshara’s thoughts could have been a mix of excitement, nostalgia, and a bit of anxiety. Hope you all like it.

Jai Shekhar, a well-known lawyer in India, had made arrangements to visit Armaan Poddar in Udaipur. Early in the morning, Jai reached out to Armaan and expressed his desire to meet him, which led to an invitation to the Poddar residence. The Poddars were thrilled at the news of such a distinguished guest. When Dadisa inquired about the purpose of Jai Shekhar's visit, Armaan mentioned that Jai had promised to share the reason for his visit in person.

The excitement was palpable among the Poddars, especially Sanjay, who was elated at the prospect of having such a high-profile lawyer visit their home. Despite his initial unease about Jai Shekhar reaching out to Armaan rather than directly to him, Sanjay recognized the potential benefits of this visit. The association with a lawyer of Jai Shekhar’s stature could bring considerable prestige and opportunities to their firm, given his involvement in high-profile cases.

Abhira was quite taken aback when she arrived in PH and saw the bustling activity. The preparations were in full swing, and it was clear something significant was about to happen. Armaan informed her that a renowned lawyer was scheduled to visit, which was quite exciting news. Before he could elaborate on the lawyer’s name, Dadisa called them over.

Dadisa, with her characteristic authority, informed Abhira that since she would soon be the daughter-in-law of the Poddar family, she needed to pitch in with the preparations. Specifically, Dadisa assigned her the crucial task of managing the food arrangements. With a stern warning not to make any mistakes, she emphasized how important this was.

Abhira took a deep breath, understanding the gravity of her responsibility. Ensuring everything went smoothly with the food was essential, not just for the event but also for making a good impression in her new role.

Jai's arrival was a significant event, given the prominence of the lawyer being discussed. The buzz around such influential figures can be quite intense, with a lot of focus on their past achievements and contributions.

Since Abhira was occupied with food preparations for the lawyer, she missed Jai’s arrival and the initial welcome. This might have been a bit awkward for her, especially if she was looking forward to meeting him. It seems Sanjay was quite the host, making sure Jai felt welcomed and perhaps sharing stories or accomplishments to highlight the importance of the occasion.

The conversation about landmark judgments, like the one you mentioned in the NEET case, indicates that the gathering was focused on significant legal matters and the impact of the lawyer’s work on Indian society. It’s a reminder of how legal professionals can influence major societal issues and bring about change through their work.

Jai’s revelation left KP and Sanjay in a state of stunned silence. They had long admired Jai not only for his achievements but also for the mystery surrounding his elusive partner. The news of his partner's passing was unexpected and somber, adding a layer of poignancy to Jai's own recent struggles.

Jai, who had always been the public face of their successful ventures, now found himself facing a different kind of challenge. His battle with cancer and the loss of his partner were heavy burdens, ones he had carried silently until now. KP and Sanjay, both moved by the gravity of the situation, could see the weight of the loss etched into Jai’s expression.

In that moment, the admiration they held for Jai deepened, not just for his professional accomplishments, but for the personal trials he had endured. They understood the profound impact that his partner had on his life and career, and they respected Jai's decision to keep his partner's memory private.

Despite the somber mood, there was a sense of respect and solidarity that bound them together. KP and Sanjay offered their condolences and support, acknowledging the importance of the partnership that had been so integral to Jai's journey.

Jai cleared his throat, drawing the attention back to the present moment. He looked directly at Armaan, his gaze steady but filled with a depth of emotion. Jai’s expression softened as he prepared to deliver a personal message. “Actually, Armaan, I didn’t come here to see you. I came here to meet Abhira,” he said, his tone filled with a touch of warmth.

Just as Jai was about to elaborate further, the sound of Abhira’s excited voice interrupted him. “Jai Uncle!” she shouted from across the room, her enthusiasm unmistakable.

Jai turned, a genuine smile spreading across his face as he saw Abhira rushing toward him. Her presence seemed to bring a momentary lift to the heavy atmosphere, and Jai’s eyes reflected a mix of affection and relief.

Abhira’s joyful shout had clearly broken through the tension of the earlier conversation, and Jai’s attention was momentarily drawn to her bright energy. It was evident that, despite the serious discussions and personal trials, the bond with Abhira brought a welcome moment of lightness and connection.

As Abhira ran across the room and wrapped her arms around Jai in a tight hug, the atmosphere shifted noticeably. Jai, equally excited and happy, embraced her warmly. The Poddars watched in surprise, their curiosity piqued by the informal and affectionate interaction between Jai and Abhira.

Sanjay, in particular, was taken aback. He had not expected Jai, a figure known for his public persona and professional demeanor, to have such a close and personal connection with Abhira. His surprise was evident as he tried to piece together how Jai knew her.

Jai gently pulled back from the hug, smiling down at Abhira. “It’s so good to see you, Abhira. How have you been?”

Abhira beamed up at him, her excitement palpable. “I’ve been great, Jai Uncle! I’m so happy you’re here!”

After exchanging a few more pleasantries with Abhira, Jai turned his attention back to the group. He could sense their curiosity and addressed the unspoken question. “I know Abhira because she’s very special to my family.”

Jai's revelation was met with a wave of surprise and shock from everyone in the room. Turning towards Armaan, he clarified, “I actually came to meet Abhira because I found out that she had married you and had changed her contact details. I needed to find a way to reach her, so I requested this meeting.”

He then shifted his gaze towards the rest of the Poddars, particularly Sanjay, KP, Manoj, and Rohit. “You all wanted to know about my partner, but what you didn’t know is that my partner was actually Abhira’s mother.”

The room fell into stunned silence as the weight of Jai’s words sank in. Sanjay, KP, Manoj, and Rohit exchanged looks of astonishment. They had admired the achievements and success associated with Jai, never realizing that Abhira’s mother had played such a pivotal role behind the scenes. The revelation added a new layer of respect and intrigue to their understanding of the past.

Jai continued, his voice steady but carrying a note of sadness. “Abhira’s mother chose to stay low-key, particularly after the rape case that had a profound impact on her. Her decision to step back from the public eye was a personal one, made in the wake of the case's intense scrutiny and emotional toll.”

Everyone listened intently, processing the new information. It was clear that Abhira’s mother had made significant contributions while maintaining a low profile, a fact that only deepened their respect for her and the work she had done.

Jai recounted the harrowing details of the rape case trial, noting the immense personal risks and threats that Abhira's mother had faced. Despite the danger, she chose to continue pursuing justice, motivated by a deep sense of empathy for the victim, who was also someone else's daughter. To protect herself and Abhira, her mother had initially sent Abhira to a hostel and later relocated to Massouire, where she managed a resort while secretly continuing her legal work.

Jai then turned to Abhira with admiration, expressing his joy that she had completed her studies and followed in her mother's footsteps as a lawyer. He confidently predicted that she would achieve great success, just like her mother. He highlighted Abhira’s dedication, particularly recalling her work as an intern during the NEET matter, where she had shown exceptional commitment and skill in researching the case.

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Amazing story

Would love to read few more parts on how Jai uncle makes poddar realize the importance of abhira mom

I so want to read jai uncle teaching a lesson to both dadisa and Sanjay

Please continue this story soon

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Part 2

The Poddars were taken aback when they learned about Abhira’s association with Jai Shekhar. The revelation that she had been working with him, as well as with her mother, since her first year of law school was particularly surprising. This information highlighted that Abhira had gained substantial knowledge and experience early on, which spoke volumes about her capability and understanding of complex legal matters. It became clear that her expertise and skills were not merely a result of her formal education but also a reflection of the significant, hands-on experience she had accumulated over the years.

It was evident that Jai was immensely proud of Abhira, treating her with the affection and pride of a parent. Abhira, though visibly touched, was a bit embarrassed by the praise.

In an effort to shift the conversation, Abhira inquired about the purpose of Jai’s visit. Jai explained that he had come to deliver some important documents and a letter that her mother had entrusted to him. During the rape case trial, Abhira’s mother had given these items to Jai, intending them to be a safeguard for Abhira’s future in case of any unforeseen events. These documents and the letter were meant to provide support and guidance for Abhira, reflecting her mother's enduring care and foresight even amidst the trials she faced.

Abhira was taken aback upon hearing that Jai had a letter from her mother. The news that her mother had entrusted such a personal item to Jai was both surprising and moving. Jai continued, explaining that after Abhira’s mother had moved to Massouire, he had offered to return the belongings she had left with him. However, her mother had declined, asking him to keep them safe and only return them to Abhira when she requested them or after her own passing.

Jai then revealed that he had recently learned of her mother’s death, which led him to investigate the circumstances surrounding Abhira’s marriage to Armaan. Discovering that Armaan was Armaan Poddar—a well-respected figure in the legal field—Jai had reached out to him to arrange a meeting with Abhira. This connection underscored not only the depth of Jai’s involvement in Abhira’s life but also the importance of maintaining the legacy and support her mother had intended for her.

Jai carefully took out a box from his bag and handed it to Abhira. Overwhelmed with emotion, Abhira took the box from him, her hands trembling slightly. She slowly opened it, revealing its contents. Inside, she found a collection of bank documents, several letters addressed to her, and a key.

The sight of the letters, clearly written by her mother, and the personal nature of the documents stirred a deep emotional response in Abhira. Each item seemed to carry a piece of her mother’s legacy, and the key was a poignant reminder of the connection and care her mother had always maintained for her. The unexpected delivery of these items brought back a flood of memories and a sense of her mother's enduring presence in her life, even after her passing.

It was a poignant moment for Abhira and Armaan. In this scenario, after Jai’s departure, the family is left to unravel the contents of a mysterious box that had been kept hidden. Abhira, who is transparent with her family, decides to examine the items inside the box. Overwhelmed by the emotional weight of the situation, she turns to Armaan for support.

Armaan, understanding the depth of Abhira’s emotional turmoil, steps in to help her go through the letters and items.

As Abhira and Armaan carefully read through the first item from the box, they discover a bank document detailing significant investments amounting to Rs. 10 crores, made in the name of Abhira Sharma. The substantial financial gesture is likely meant to secure Abhira’s future and perhaps reflects Akshu's desire to support and protect her in a meaningful way.

Alongside the bank documents, they find several letters. The first set of letters appears to be from Akshu for Abhira’s teenage years. These letters were filled with guidance and advice, offering insights and support as she navigated the challenges of growing up. They contain words of encouragement, wisdom, and personal reflections that highlight Akshu's role not only as mother but also as a mentor or guardian figure in her life.

The second set of letters were undated for around the time of Abhira’s marriage. These letters carry messages of lesson Akshu wanted to give to Abhira for and after married life. It offered a mix of heartfelt sentiments, life advice, and expressions of Akshu's hopes for her future.

As Abhira and Armaan read these documents and letters, they experienced a range of emotions. The financial investment might come as a surprise. The letters, on the other hand, provide a deeper, more personal connection, revealing Akshu's thoughts and feelings towards Abhira at various stages of her life.

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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Amazing story

Would love to read few more parts on how Jai uncle makes poddar realize the importance of abhira mom

I so want to read jai uncle teaching a lesson to both dadisa and Sanjay

Please continue this story soon

This story had more to do with Abhira and Akshu and what as parents she had done for Abhira

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Look forward to reading more.

Sure I have already updated 2nd part

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Chalo. She's got some financial security now. Thank god

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omfg this is so so so good! i absolutely love this. abhira finding family in jai and also a connection to her mother through the letters makes me extremely happy. the financial security doesn't hurt either. i'm glad the poddars won't be able to call her a gold digger anymore!

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What a beautiful story please continue

If only writers & DKP took inspiration from here!

a lovely way to give Abhira family and financial security

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would be nice if this man would reminisce about Abhira's childhood and her shararatein etc which he still remembers.

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