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Nice. Beautifully written.

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Well written os ... Good going smiley20

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Originally posted by: Redblueblack

Omg Pratyusha 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

This is so beautifully written. Love love love it!! The way you've described Armaan's turmoil, realisation and acceptance is so beautiful!!

Also, the look into his life since he was a toddler is so well written and heart touching!!

Thank you so much for writing this!!!

It's a pleasure to read ❤❤❤

Thank you so much Di❤️

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Originally posted by: Honey-Friend

Wow!!

Pratyu!! I am balling my eyes out!!

It's so beautiful yet heart wrenching..

Thank you so much for this.. smiley27

Thank you Di ❤️

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Originally posted by: Neeharika

First of all your writing is as beautiful as your name...and am sure u are even more beautiful in person...

The poetic lines u added in the middle ..that aurora borealis part .. reminds me of that Taylor Swift song snow at the beach..

Eagerly Waiting for future updates ...angst is the jamm!!!smiley27

Aww thanks so much!!!

Oh now that you said it, yes. But I heard snow on the beach completely much later. I only knew lana sang it with Taylor.

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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Beautifully written, very descriptive of armaan feelings and emotions.

Loved reading it 🥰

Thank you 😊

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Thank you so much!

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Posted: 1 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: MeghaBis

Tissues!!! I need tissuess!!!!😭😭😭


How do you write so beautifully girl? This was intense, agonising and heartbreakingsmiley38 Looking forward to read Abhira's pov. I hope it's comingsmiley9

Thanks so much Di!!!!!

Ahh well, I'll try but abhi line up me nahi hain. Maybe sometime later 😅

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluech96

Girl… this is sooooo beautiful 😭😭😭😭how do you write so well??? I love it 😭😭

Thank you Di ❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: Ambii

The para where you describe how Abhira feels like summer rain has my ENTIRE HEART smiley27

You write-up feels like a cozy blanket of words. It tugs my heart strings everytime.

This is the Armaan we want !!! This is the inner turmoil we want him to feel !!! Exactly THIS !!


And Pratyusha, keep shining with your words dear.

May the Universe keep blessing you with this talent ✨

Thank you so so much!!!!

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