Hi guys this is harsha...
I like hc and pranali bt i feel abhira r not meant to be each other..
So i want to write story for abhi with new lead
I want pranali to be that lead
So i brought krishna who looks like akshara
and this story also includes akshnav as i like abhinav
This is short story..please read keeping logics aside
Ps: no kids involved in this stry.
Im not good writer but still i writes out of habitš
Ignore my grammitical n spelling mistakes..
Lets jump into stry
After one yr from white day
Anand: abhi u need to go to mumbai..i got call from malhothra hospital. They need u for complicated heart surgery.
Abhi: ok i will go.
By saying this he went to his room n started packing.
Manjari came to his room
She saw her son who is living a robotic life who once upon a time is most happiest guy.
She got tears
Till now he avoided talk with her when ever she brings topic abt his future
But today she decided to talk anyways
She went to abhi
Manjari: abhi i want to talk to u
Abhi : no ma i have to go..its very important lets talk after i return
Manjari: cant u give 15 mins time for this maa..dont i deserve ur time?
Abhi: maa y r u talking like that..u know hw much important you r to me..ok come lets talk
He brought her n made her sit on the chair
He kneeled down beside her
Abhi; now tell maa wat u want to discuss?
Manjari: abhi dont u think u deserve happiness..how many days u will suffer like this..y cant u move on beta..i know u love akshu and u know wat? ur happiness is imporatant to me. If only akshara makes u happy .lets bring back her..i will forgot the past if u want.. im ready to apologize her.
I will do any thing for u beta but i cant see u like this u know akshara where abouts lets go we will bring back her.
Abhi: no maa plz..i realised that akshara n me r not meant together..we both had flaws..she did some stupid things she didnt think abt consequences of her acts..her mahan nature made me lose my control..but what i did is wrong ma i blamed her for neil death babies death n also sirat ma death and i divorced her without thinking n made her leave this house in such condition she doesnt deserve that punishment maa . Now she is in happy place..let her be maa..she will be happy without me..may be im not happy but atleast im at peace now.. we both r not match made in heaven maa..infact our relation destroy each other..let me be like this ma..im good nw..for me my work is important im happy with my work..now please dont bring this topic again for my sake..ok ma i have to go bye..please take care of urself
By saying bye he left to board his flight
Manjari: kanhaji i cant see my abhi like this..yes abhi n akshu is not meant for each other..but y cant u send some one who is meant to him.. kanhaji please fullfill my wish..
In kasauli:
Akshara is studying
Her mobile rang..she attended her call
Akshara: hello bade papa..how r u?
Bp: im fine beta...hw r u n wat r u doing
Akshara: im fine papa..from day after tmrw my llb exams know? Im preparing for that.
Bp: thats good, how is abhinav
Akshara: ha papa he is good n he also preparing for exams.
Till now we did combined studies 5 mins back he left
Bp: oh k beta after exams y cant u come here beta we all r missing u so much
Akshara: no papa plz dont force me im feeling good now i dont want remind those bitter days again..
Bp remembered those bitter moments
Bp: i can understand beta..we will come when ever v miss u..but beta v never fotgot abhinav for what he did..we r forever indebted to him
Akshara smiled. Bp kept the phone
Akshara went into past
She remebered how she came out of birla house lifelessly after abhi divorced her..she boarded the available bus without thinking..
On the way bus met with accident..after 5 days she opened her eyes n found herself in hospital
Then from nurse she got to know her fellow passanger who suffered with minor bruises saved her n few other people in bus..
He even gave blood to her
She is the only person who injured severly
She also got to know he is in hospital from 5 days n looking after her..
At that time she saw a guy came to room happily n asked nurse to keep baba vibudhi to her.
Nurse understood her confusion n told he is the guy who saved her..n mentioned his name as abhinav sharma
She gave little smile at him
Abhinav: hi...ji..can i know ur name..see from 5 days im praying for u to open ur eyes..i dont even know whom to contact..i dont know ur where abouts..i.tried a lot but couldnt find anything about u..if u give ur details i will contact them asap..i cant imagine how much they r worried abt u
He is talking without giving gap
Akshara: abhinav ji..first of all thank u for saving me.
By the way myself akshara and please dont ask my details..i can manage..they will feel bad if they see me in this postion so let it be...
Abhinav: wat r u talking akshara ji...sry for my tone..but wat r u doing is not correct..you r thinking they will feel bad.
But wat you r not thinking is they will feel more pain if they dont know abt u..please dont act childish akshara ji..share me details i will contact them
Akshara thought for a while
She too understood how foolish her thought was
She gave her details abhinav contacted goenkas n explained her situation
Goenkas rushed to the hospital
They felt bad seeing her condition
Bp decided to take her to goenka villa after her discharge
But akshara didnt agree she want to go far away from her past
Bp n swarna stayed there itself n took care of her
Mean while abhinav became good frnd of akshara.
She got to know abhinav is llb student..she too want to prove herself ..want to have career.
n identity.
After she recovered she shifted to kasouli n started staying in pg
With help of abhinav she enrolled in llb college
Abhinav helped her to cover her syllabus as she joined late
They study together..abhinav stays with his parents in kasuali.soon they became close friends..his parents also treat her like daughter..she remembers naira n karthik when ever she meet abhinav parents.
She shared her past to abhinav she also feels guilty as she felt she is indirect reason fr neil n her kids death she used to burst out some times in that phase abhinav emotionally suported her.
Now she cant say she is happy but she is at peace now she has career to focus..frnd to share her feelings..she understood her relation with abhi is just toxic..they both r toxic to each other..they r never meant to be each other..
Akshara understood she is going into deep thougts...she pulled the rubber band she wore around her wrist n started concentrating on her preparation
Back to mumbai:
Abhi reached hospital he met md of the hospital
Md: we r very glad to have u here Dr abhimanyu birla..our one of the best doctor is going to assist u in this case she will explain u case details
Abhi:ok
Md left the cabin n send dctr who is going to assist abhi
Dr: Excuse me Dr abhimanyu birla
Abhimanyu is checking his files
Without looking up
Abhimanyu: yes come in
Dr: good mrng im Dr krishna karthik gupta..im the one who is going to assist u in this case
While introducing herself she found abhi who is looking at her without closing his eyes
She is confused
Krishna: Dr abhimanyu.r u okay?
Now abhi came out of his world
Abhi stood up n uttered Akshara thum?
Krishna looked at him confused
Krishna: no i think u had some confusion im Dr krishna, krishna karthik gupta..heart surgeon in malhotra hospital...
Abhimanyu still cant believe his eyes
Abhimanyu to himself
Abhi: how is it possible..akshara ? Heart surgeon? But she is saying krishna karthik gupta as her name..is she changed her identity no...as of my knowledge she is in kasauli preparing for llb..but who is she? Y she is looking exactly like akshu
When he is in thoughts
Krishna: dr birla where u lost again..its imp case we have to discuss in urgent basis.
Abhi came out of his thoughts
Abhi again thought...no i have to look into the case first...patient life is more important than my confusion..let me look into it first
Abhi: sry Dr krishna karthik gupta he stressed krishna word..he didnt find any odd reaction from her..she just smiled
Abhi: lets discuss
They discussed about case..he understood she is well experienced doctor ...he confirmed she is no way akshara..
They decided to conduct suregery after 2 days when patient condition improves..
After discussion abhi again lost in his thoughts
He decide to know more about krishna
When krishna about to leave place
Abhi: Dr krishna karthik gupta if u dont mind lets have lunch together..i dont know much abt mumbai so asking ur company..
Krishna smiled
Krishna: y not Dr abhimanyu birla..i know every corner of mumbai..i will take u to best restaurent in city
Abhi smiled
They went to restaurent to have lunch
Abhi didnt understand how to start convo
But he decided to know abt her at any cost
before abhi could talk
Krishna: dr birla sry im not accoustomed to this silence...can u please talk some thing
Abhi smiled at her cutness...while discussing about case he found her so mature now she is looking so cute
Abhi snapped out of his thougths
Abhi: ok tell about urself Dr krishna karthik gupta
Krishna: before telling about myself can i ask u something
Abhi: yeah sure
Krishna: im feeling weird when we r calling each other with full names..any ways in hospital premises we will call each other as doctor...atleast outside can we call each other with name...i will call u as abhi n u call me as krishna..
He.remembered how only akshu calls him as abhi
When again he lost in thoughts
Krishna: arey baba its ok if u r not ok...i will call as Dr abhimanyu birla only ..
Dont lost in ur thoughts again please...i cant bring u to this world again n again..
She said pouting her lips
Abhi got smile seeing her
He unable to say no to her
Abhi: ok krishna u can call me abhi
Krishna: thank god...from morning onwards i dont know y i felt tired calling as dr abhimanyu birla numerous times..now im feeling free..ok.abhi actually i dont share my details to anyone but u accepted my request so im sharing my details..
Im orphan abhi...i dont know about my biological parents..when i was 10 yrs a kind couple adopted me but when my adopted mom died i didnt want to stay in that house n also some memebers in that house didnt liked my presence so i left that house n then another couple adopted me but they died in accident..my life turned upside down..i felt i will loose the people who i love so i distanced my self with attachments..i started studying with scholarships after lot of struggle im here infront of u..
Abhi felt bad for her..but loved her strength n her smile which didnt fade even facing those difficulties as orphan..
He felt he should learn so much from her
She is still smiling even after god tested her in many ways n heart breaks..he felt his pain is so small compared to her struggle
Krishna : abhi can i ask some thing?
Abhi: yeah sure
Krishna: who is akshara..i heard u calling me as akshara..
Abhi is silent
Krishna: its ok if u dont want to share..i just asked out of curiosity
Abhi: i will tell krishna..bt not now ..i just need time to share
Krishna: its ok u take ur own time..anyways u have to stay here for 3 months as malhotra.sir requested ur help for some heart surgeries which r providing for free by malhotra hsptls
Abhi smiled and felt happy as she gave him space he required
Krishna: by the way..abhi ...mujhse dosthi karoge dont say i need time for this..
She forwarded her hands
Abhi smiled n forwarded his hands
In kasauli
Abhinav n akshara completed their exams
They went to restaurent to have lunch
Abhinav: akshara any ways v got holidays y cant u visit udaipur
Akshara: abhinav u too na..dont u want me to stay in peace
Abhinav: arey its not like that yar...let me tell u one thing..dont try to run away akshara just face it..becz of past y u have to miss ur happy place?..u have memories of ur parents there n u have family there..u r remebering only bad times but u frgt ur good times..in past also u left udaipur as ur sister dont like ur presense..arey y u have to sacrifice ur happiness for others..being kind is good but being mahan is stupid..some times u have to be selfish..u have to do what makes u happy..tell me one thing dont u want to meet ur mimi..becz of her health she cant come here..u have chance to go there but you r denying..
Akshara: i agree i miss mimi.. i miss udaipur but abhinav..i feel terrible when i remember that day.. i agree neil died i still feel guilt but i didnt do purposefully abhinav..i just want to save that kids but in that process i lost neil n my kid..
And abhi has every right to get angry at me..bt without thinking anything he divoced me..n accused me for sirat ma death..i still unable to digest that fact.
She is in tears now
Abhinav held her hand n wiped her tears
Abhinav: its ok akshara past is past..u didnt do intentionally and he divorced u out of pain...i cant judge both of u..only i can blame that situation..leave all that just move on...i know once u become advocate u will become busiest lawyer n u didnt get time to think about all these...im waiting to see u as successful lawyer..
Akshara didnt react she was just blank
he want to change her mood
n yar you forgot one thing ...becz of that day u r thinking u lost everything...but if that day didnt happen v didnt have met...u might have missed gr8 friend like me dont u?...n also u might not have taken ur career serious.
Akshara.smiled
Akshara: tq for coming into my life abhinav..u not only save my life u gave me strength to live my life again
Abhinav smiled
Any thing for my friend
In mumbai:
Abhimanyu in his hotel room
Abhimanyu: i still cant believe krishna is exact copy of akshara..how can it is possible but as per krishna story she is orphan
Oh my god wats happening shivji
He remembered akshara n krishna again n again
He didnt have sleep
He decide to avoid krishna as he dont want to remember his past
But the more he decided to avoid..the more she became close
Only looks wise she is akshara but nature is fully different
She is bold, strong...she is selfish some times..he attracted to her personality..
One day they r in cafe
He decided to confess about his past to her as she became close frnd nw
Krisha: wats matter abhi..every day i will drag u to cafe... today urself brought me here
Abhi: hmm krishna u asked me about akshara did u remember
Krishna: ofcourse im waiting from first day..
abhi: the day has come
Abhi opened his mobile n showed her pic
Krishna was shocked
Krishna pulled his mobile from him
Krishna: abhi how it is possible..she is looking exactly like me
Abhi: buddhu...thats y i called u akshara
Krishna: omg...may b she is 2nd person out of 7 persons in entire world
Krishna drank glass full of water
Krishna; i still cant believe this abhi..pinch me plz
Abhi pinched her
Krishna : ouch, u idiot u pinched me hard
Abhi laughed at her
Krishna : by the way who is she? ur friend?
Abhi : woh woh
Krishna: wat woh woh..ok i got it she is ur gf na...
she winked at him
Abhi: she is my ex wife
Krishna : wat???
So guys i started it as os but its going some where..i dont know how far i justified this story..
Sry if i hurt any one sentiments in this stry
I hope u guys like it..
I will continue next part based on response i got.
Thank u in advance for readingš
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