Abhi's Imaginary dialogue - One Shot with One Dialogue only

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I want Abhi to say the below dialogue at least once in the show. 😊 May be consider it as short shot 😆

This is when Akshu tries to apologize once Abhi is proven innocent.

" Ye accha hai mrs sharma, jab man kiya gaali do aur jab aapki benefits ki baath ayi toh aise pretend karo jaise kuch hua hi nahi. Kya fark tha uss din main aur aaj ke din main. Agar aaj ke din tumhari koi galthi nahi thi toh uss din meri koi galthi nahi thi. Bass karo. Galthi kiya maine jo thumse pyaar kiya. Suna tha daayan bhi do ghar chodkar war karthi hai(It's a hindi Muhavra used only for dialogues).

Tumne mujhe mere bacche se 6 saal door rakha iss hadd thak ki ab woh mujhme sirf docman dektha hai. Baap nahi. Janthi thi na tum mujhe apna bachpan mehsoos karna tha apne bacche ke saath. Phir bhi tumne jaan bhooj kar mujhe mere bacche ke zindagi se nikal kar phek diya. Chalo theek hai maine phone nahi uthaya lekin uss maa ko bhi nahi bathaya jisse tum baar baar maa kehthi thi woh 6 saal thak mere mare hue bacche ka maatham manathi rahi mere saath.

Theek hai chodo maa nahi uss behan ki parwa nahi ki jo tumhare wajah se apne pathi ke saath nahi hai aaj. Aur roohi uski kya kasoor thi. Kabhi socha roohi ke baare tum toh kush thi ke tumne abhir ko do do papa diya bolke. Roohi ka kya akshara. Socha hai kabhi roohi kaise jeethi rahi 6 saal thak apne papa ke bina.

Nahi uthaya maine phone. Patha hai kyun kyunki maa hospital main thi critical thi. Wohi maa jisse tum maa kehthi ho.

Nahi kiya maine tumhara peecha patha hai kyun? Kyunki mere ghar pe neil ke marne ka matham chaya hua tha.

Nahi aya tumhe doondhne patha hai kyun? Kyunki tumhare bade paapa ne kaha tha tum mujse milna nahi chahthi aur tum kush ho.

Theek hai Maine 6 saal thak tumse baath nahi ki. Kabhi jaan na chaha tumhari maa kaisi hai neil ke maut ke baad? Tum toh kush thi jo tumhe kush khabri mili naya pathi mila ghar mila. Lekin uss maa aur uss behan ka kya jo ithne dard se guzar rahe the. Kabhi jaan ne ki koshish ki kya hum zinda hai ya mar gaye?

Chalo theek hai. Neil se vada kiya tha tumne ki tum roohi ka khayal rakho gi. Kaise nibhaya tumne woh vada? Kya tumhe sirf dusro ki parwan hai. apno ki nahi?

Chalo ab tumne mujhpar ilzaam lagaya ki maine abhinavji ko maar diya. kya main tumhe punish karne ke liye abhir ko tumse door kardun? Ya phir abhir ko boldun ki tumhari maa margayi? Isse accha tum abhir ko ye boldethi tumhare papa marchuke hai. kamse kam usse patha tho hotha main uska papa tha.

Aur ye kaisa rishta hai tumhara jo ek pal main maa ko maa bolthi ho dusre pal main unke parvarish par ungli uthathi ho? Yahi hai tumhara pyaar maa ke liye. Atleast maa ko maa bolna toh bandh karo patha hai kyun ki woh gaali lagthi hai tumhare mooh se. Kyunki tum maa ki izzath hi nahi karhi toh unko maa kyun bolthi ho.

Bass karo akshara maine galthi kardi tumse pyar karke. Maaf kardo chali jao meri zindagi nahi chahiye tumhari maafi. Main apne zindagi main jaisa bhi tha zinda toh tha. Ab zinda rehne ka bhi mann nahi kartha. Aise lagtha hai iss dard se accha mar jaun, "

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Posted: 2 years ago
#2

He should tell her haath jodke " door raho mujhse meri maa se mere gharse mere hospital se mere zameen aur mere aasmaan se! Tumhari meherbaani nhi chahiye mujhe! Aur ha meri maa tumhari maa ya manjiri maa nhi hai wo tumhare liye Miss. Manjiri hai jyada se jyada Mam ya Aunty. And I am glad I left you that day warna ab tak Mera poora khandaan kabar me hota. Tum bhi door raho aur apne bete ko bhi door rakho. Agar kuch chahiye hoga toh let Rohan or Arohi know I'll provide for it"

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Needhi.A

He should tell her haath jodke " door raho mujhse meri maa se mere gharse mere hospital se mere zameen aur mere aasmaan se! Tumhari meherbaani nhi chahiye mujhe! Aur ha meri maa tumhari maa ya manjiri maa nhi hai wo tumhare liye Miss. Manjiri hai jyada se jyada Mam ya Aunty. And I am glad I left you that day warna ab tak Mera poora khandaan kabar me hota. Tum bhi door raho aur apne bete ko bhi door rakho. Agar kuch chahiye hoga toh let Rohan or Arohi know I'll provide for it"

upar wala milna hi mushkil hai ye toh kabhi nahi milega 😆
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: firewings_diya

I want Abhi to say the below dialogue at least once in the show. 😊 May be consider it as short shot 😆

This is when Akshu tries to apologize once Abhi is proven innocent.

" Ye accha hai mrs sharma, jab man kiya gaali do aur jab aapki benefits ki baath ayi toh aise pretend karo jaise kuch hua hi nahi. Kya fark tha uss din main aur aaj ke din main. Agar aaj ke din tumhari koi galthi nahi thi toh uss din meri koi galthi nahi thi. Bass karo. Galthi kiya maine jo thumse pyaar kiya. Suna tha daayan bhi do ghar chodkar war karthi hai(It's a hindi Muhavra used only for dialogues).

Tumne mujhe mere bacche se 6 saal door rakha iss hadd thak ki ab woh mujhme sirf docman dektha hai. Baap nahi. Janthi thi na tum mujhe apna bachpan mehsoos karna tha apne bacche ke saath. Phir bhi tumne jaan bhooj kar mujhe mere bacche ke zindagi se nikal kar phek diya. Chalo theek hai maine phone nahi uthaya lekin uss maa ko bhi nahi bathaya jisse tum baar baar maa kehthi thi woh 6 saal thak mere mare hue bacche ka maatham manathi rahi mere saath.

Theek hai chodo maa nahi uss behan ki parwa nahi ki jo tumhare wajah se apne pathi ke saath nahi hai aaj. Aur roohi uski kya kasoor thi. Kabhi socha roohi ke baare tum toh kush thi ke tumne abhir ko do do papa diya bolke. Roohi ka kya akshara. Socha hai kabhi roohi kaise jeethi rahi 6 saal thak apne papa ke bina.

Nahi uthaya maine phone. Patha hai kyun kyunki maa hospital main thi critical thi. Wohi maa jisse tum maa kehthi ho.

Nahi kiya maine tumhara peecha patha hai kyun? Kyunki mere ghar pe neil ke marne ka matham chaya hua tha.

Nahi aya tumhe doondhne patha hai kyun? Kyunki tumhare bade paapa ne kaha tha tum mujse milna nahi chahthi aur tum kush ho.

Theek hai Maine 6 saal thak tumse baath nahi ki. Kabhi jaan na chaha tumhari maa kaisi hai neil ke maut ke baad? Tum toh kush thi jo tumhe kush khabri mili naya pathi mila ghar mila. Lekin uss maa aur uss behan ka kya jo ithne dard se guzar rahe the. Kabhi jaan ne ki koshish ki kya hum zinda hai ya mar gaye?

Chalo theek hai. Neil se vada kiya tha tumne ki tum roohi ka khayal rakho gi. Kaise nibhaya tumne woh vada? Kya tumhe sirf dusro ki parwan hai. apno ki nahi?

Chalo ab tumne mujhpar ilzaam lagaya ki maine abhinavji ko maar diya. kya main tumhe punish karne ke liye abhir ko tumse door kardun? Ya phir abhir ko boldun ki tumhari maa margayi? Isse accha tum abhir ko ye boldethi tumhare papa marchuke hai. kamse kam usse patha tho hotha main uska papa tha.

Aur ye kaisa rishta hai tumhara jo ek pal main maa ko maa bolthi ho dusre pal main unke parvarish par ungli uthathi ho? Yahi hai tumhara pyaar maa ke liye. Atleast maa ko maa bolna toh bandh karo patha hai kyun ki woh gaali lagthi hai tumhare mooh se. Kyunki tum maa ki izzath hi nahi karhi toh unko maa kyun bolthi ho.

Bass karo akshara maine galthi kardi tumse pyar karke. Maaf kardo chali jao meri zindagi nahi chahiye tumhari maafi. Main apne zindagi main jaisa bhi tha zinda toh tha. Ab zinda rehne ka bhi mann nahi kartha. Aise lagtha hai iss dard se accha mar jaun, "

Behen...writer ban ja

Posted: 2 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Needhi.A

He should tell her haath jodke " door raho mujhse meri maa se mere gharse mere hospital se mere zameen aur mere aasmaan se! Tumhari meherbaani nhi chahiye mujhe! Aur ha meri maa tumhari maa ya manjiri maa nhi hai wo tumhare liye Miss. Manjiri hai jyada se jyada Mam ya Aunty. And I am glad I left you that day warna ab tak Mera poora khandaan kabar me hota. Tum bhi door raho aur apne bete ko bhi door rakho. Agar kuch chahiye hoga toh let Rohan or Arohi know I'll provide for it"


Me still looking for the meaning of mera aasman se 🤣


AbhiM bhi confuse isliye hi hai he is like main khud yahi chahta hun par Aasman ko kaise batte hain


Also, why only Maa taai ji Tau ji

Bhaiya bhabhi

Yahan tak ki Shivu ko Akshu chaa


Shivu se yaad aaya I have actually never seen any in depth scene between Akshara with other children.

Like with Ruhi also it's like haan ap pretty main pretty that's all.


Shivu se us din k baad koi matlb nahi


At least Ruhi se toh ek emotional scene dikha dete. She is the daughter of the sister you loved sabse jyada itna love k uske saare blames and sab maaf hain mention hi nahi hai

Daughter of the guy who died protecting you.


& Makers feel we should feel connected to Akshara or feel bad. Kuch depth tih dikhao uske character ka.


All the time from Jan- June she did either AbhiM acha hai bura hai bash sorry bash ya Nav ji god hain god

Recently too before fever all she did is yell at AbhiM instead of actually trying to be there for Abhir.

Where is the conscience of the FL, her thought process. A persons thought process can't only be mera happy family, Kasauli.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: reeyacute

Behen...writer ban ja

hehe tv serial writer may be i can try hopes nahi hai .i hate reading novels 😆novel writer kabhi nahi ban sakthi 😆
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Posted: 2 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: chaipaani


Me still looking for the meaning of mera aasman se 🤣


AbhiM bhi confuse isliye hi hai he is like main khud yahi chahta hun par Aasman ko kaise batte hain


Also, why only Maa taai ji Tau ji

Bhaiya bhabhi

Yahan tak ki Shivu ko Akshu chaa


Shivu se yaad aaya I have actually never seen any in depth scene between Akshara with other children.

Like with Ruhi also it's like haan ap pretty main pretty that's all.


Shivu se us din k baad koi matlb nahi


At least Ruhi se toh ek emotional scene dikha dete. She is the daughter of the sister you loved sabse jyada itna love k uske saare blames and sab maaf hain mention hi nahi hai

Daughter of the guy who died protecting you.


& Makers feel we should feel connected to Akshara or feel bad. Kuch depth tih dikhao uske character ka.


All the time from Jan- June she did either AbhiM acha hai bura hai bash sorry bash ya Nav ji god hain god

Recently too before fever all she did is yell at AbhiM instead of actually trying to be there for Abhir.

Where is the conscience of the FL, her thought process. A persons thought process can't only be mera happy family, Kasauli.

Itni akal hoti toh show ka ye haal nhi hota. And that pretty thing they copied from krpkab in that when Soha met her maasi+chachi after the leap she call her beautiful beautiful all the time🤣 copy karna hi tha toh FL ki maturity bhi copy kar lete. Satyanaash kar diya Abhira ka. I don't want a reunion till she apologises to Abhi Ane gets rejected and cries for him and repents her actions!!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaipaani


Me still looking for the meaning of mera aasman se 🤣


AbhiM bhi confuse isliye hi hai he is like main khud yahi chahta hun par Aasman ko kaise batte hain


Also, why only Maa taai ji Tau ji

Bhaiya bhabhi

Yahan tak ki Shivu ko Akshu chaa


Shivu se yaad aaya I have actually never seen any in depth scene between Akshara with other children.

Like with Ruhi also it's like haan ap pretty main pretty that's all.


Shivu se us din k baad koi matlb nahi


At least Ruhi se toh ek emotional scene dikha dete. She is the daughter of the sister you loved sabse jyada itna love k uske saare blames and sab maaf hain mention hi nahi hai

Daughter of the guy who died protecting you.


& Makers feel we should feel connected to Akshara or feel bad. Kuch depth tih dikhao uske character ka.


All the time from Jan- June she did either AbhiM acha hai bura hai bash sorry bash ya Nav ji god hain god

Recently too before fever all she did is yell at AbhiM instead of actually trying to be there for Abhir.

Where is the conscience of the FL, her thought process. A persons thought process can't only be mera happy family, Kasauli.

I agree.

@bold - Yes, even Arohi had a few heartfelt scenes with Abhir. In the camp Ruhi ignored all of Sharma’s attempts to cheer her up! I wish Abhimanyu also ignores Mrs Sharma the same way.

Edited by DevilsHeart - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Needhi.A

Itni akal hoti toh show ka ye haal nhi hota. And that pretty thing they copied from krpkab in that when Soha met her maasi+chachi after the leap she call her beautiful beautiful all the time🤣 copy karna hi tha toh FL ki maturity bhi copy kar lete. Satyanaash kar diya Abhira ka. I don't want a reunion till she apologises to Abhi Ane gets rejected and cries for him and repents her actions!!!

@bold We shouldn’t have such high hopes from either her or the writers! She is not capable of following such complex chain of thoughts. She gives puzzled looks the moment Abhimanyu starts speaking of her mistakes..
Edited by DevilsHeart - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow...dialogues are too good..

kaash some one from makers side read this

Kaash we get scene like this

Kaash we started to love akshu again

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