AkshNav SS: Humari Adhoori Kahani (Upt Pg1)

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A little quick one shot on AkshNav, I am like a very amateur below beginner level writer so sorry if the one shot doesnt make sense.

The premise is: Abhinav sees Akshara and Abhi and thinks akshara still loves him.

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Abhinav's POV

Shit, what the hell was he doing. Its clear as day that she still hasn't moved on. Its so obvious, that even after 6 years, she still only sees him as a stranger who she feels indebted to and nothing more, surely not a husband.

He laughs, he thought he finally had a family to call his own. A little world of happiness. But it was all a beautiful lie. Neither was the woman he called his wife truly his and neither was the child whom he called his nikkeji. But every day for the last 6 years, he has felt they were his, that their smile, tears, happiness , anger and every single emotion were his. Then why does it feel like it was all a lie today. Why does he feel like an imposter today? Why does it feel like he doesn't truly belong?

It seems he has been lying to himself for so years, believing that finally his life would be easier and be filled with happiness. He knew when he signed up for this marriage, that Akshara and his relationship would not be like a normal husband and wife, he knew that her heart was broken and that she wouldn't love him and honest to god he had no intention of falling in love with her but he doesnt know when during these last 6 years he slowly fell for her. He doesnt know when in the last 6 years he wanted more from their relationship, he wanted them to truly become one in all sense.

He wanted to be selfish this one time in life and not let her go and make her see that he was here, infront of her and that he would love her like she should be loved. But he couldn't do that. He promised himself that if she ever felt even 1% love for her ex then he would free her, he would support her. No, he couldn't keep her caged in a relationship, he wouldnt do that to her. She deserved to be free to pursue whom she loves. She deserves to build her world with those whom reside in her heart. She deserves happiness, both her and Nikkeji. He doesnt truly know what happened 6 years ago that Abhi and Akshara parted ways but he knows Abhi has a good heart and he will take care of them both.

He knew his heart would break leaving her and Nikkeji but he needed to do this otherwise so many lives would be ruined. He knew she would never willingly break their relationship, she felt too indebted to him so he would have to be the one to do it. He doesn't think he would ever love again, and each day would slowly kill him but he could live with all the precious memories of the past six years. The memories which no one in this world could take from him. He prayed to god to give him enough strength to go through this phase in his life. He will end this façade of their relationship after Kairav and muskaan's wedding. A few more days for him to make the last few memories before letting his whole world fall apart.

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Akshara's POV

Her heart was restless tonight. She felt like something wasn't right, that a storm was coming. But that was so silly, because finally everything in her life was going well so why was she feeling this way.

Finally she had a small world of happiness to call her own. She had her son with her and her husband, so why was she feeling restless. In honestly, it felt a bit weird to finally accept Abhinav as her husband. Deep down a part of her always knew there was more between them, but today she finally accepted that she saw his as more than a friend and a saviour. She doesnt fully know when it happened, but its like slowly he built a place for himself in her heart. the same heart, which she has closed to after the hurt caused by Abhimanyu. It was like he slowly chipped away at her heart with his kindness, his patience and his understanding.

He has sacrificed so much for her and Abhir yet never asked anything in return. She doesnt know how someone can be so selfless and kind. He is truly a unique man, one of a kind. And he is all hers. A smile plays on her lips, as she thinks of her husband, her kind and supportive husband. Her Husband Abhinav Sharma.

She knows its taken her a while to come to terms with her feelings but she knows for certain now that she wants to grow old in her kasuali home with her Abhinav and Abhir. She wants to open her heart fully to Abhinav and let him take her body and soul. She wants him to colour her in his love. She wants him to hold her and whisper sweet words of promises and love. She wants his eyes to always seek her out in a crowd. She wants him to always be there by her side.

She doesn't deny the love she had for Abhimanyu. After all he was her first love, her first heartbreak, her first everything. Their love was passionate yet destructive, it burnt her, it hurt her, there was love but she didnt feel free. A small part of her would always care for Abhimanyu as he was Abhir's biological father and they did have a history. But the feelings she felt for Abhinav felt so different, she felt calm, peaceful and like she could breathe. The love she felt for Abhinav was different to anything she felt before, it felt sweet, content and selfless.

She needed to tell Abhinav about her feelings, she hoped he would also feel the same. She couldnt think of what she would do if he rejects her feelings and is only in this relationship because of an obligation. If he rejects her feelings, then this one time she wanted to be selfish and show Abhinav that no one can love him like she can.

She can't wait any longer, she need to build up courage and tell him that she loves him. That somewhere along the way, she fell madly and deeply in love with him.

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k a b h i s u n t o h z a r a

j o m a i n k e h n a s a k a

m e r i d u n i y a t u m h i h o t u m h i a a s a r a

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Beautifully written❤️

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Only if they showed something like this in the show 🤞

Hope we could get a part 2 of this ❤️

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Amazing.. do continue pls💗

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Thank you everyone :)

Will try and write more.

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Write an epilogue too to bring closure to their adhoori story.

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PART 2 (will probs do 1 more part to end the story)

Also a little edit on Akshnav.

I am trying to to do PS after 5 years so a bit sloppy.


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Akshara POV

There was something wrong. Abhinav was definitely hiding something, there is something big worrying him. He just doesnt look the same. Whenever she asks him what the matter is he tries to deflect the question. Its so frustrating seeing her Abhinav like this and not been able to do anything. If only she knew what the problem was, she would be able to fix it. He tries to smile but there is a sadness in his eyes that she can see clearly. To the world he seems cheerful with his big smile, but she can tell this is not his from the heart type of smile. She has become good at reading him and she can tell when his smile is fake and when its genuine, and for the last couple of days she hasn't seen a genuine smile on his face. She hates seeing him like this. Once this wedding is over she will make him tell her whats wrong by hook or crook.


Haldi Ceremony

Someone makes comment about AbiRa wedding rituals and such leading to there been a bit of awkward silence. Akshara felt awkward and kept looking at Abhinav to gauge his reaction but Abhinav just awkwardly laughed it off and walked away saying he needed to check on the caterers.


Abhinav POV

Of course, she has beautiful memories from her wedding with Bhaiji, after all it was a love marriage. They would have made beautiful memories, have had special moments that only they knew about. He didnt have those memories with her. Their wedding was rushed, as it was a marriage of convenience not love. Dont get him wrong, he doesnt regret his wedding to Akshara, infact marrying her was the best decision of his life as he got a beautiful family, he got a beautiful son out of the relationship, he good the best 6 years of his life. But now he was certain he had to let it go. He had to hurry up with the divorce papers and set Akshara free so she could go to the man of her dreams. He just hoped that even after they were over, he would be able to meet Abhir, Abhir is his jaan, his soul, his purpose to life. He could not live without abhir, even if he could see him once in a while, he would be content. He would be content with knowing that Abhir was happy, had a life filled without pain and luxury. Thats all what he wanted for both Akshara and his Abhir, a life without pain, a life filled with love and no worries. And if to give that life, he had to endear pain, he would do it without a second thought. He would make sure Abhir had his perfect family with his Docman.


Sangeet Night

Abhinav POV

How could someone look so beautiful. Truly Akshara looked like an angel, with that soft smile on her face and her hair slowly moving with the whispers of the wind. Looking at her left him speechless. He wanted to take her in his arms and twirl her around till the end of the night.

Akshara came up to Abhinav and asked him for a dance, she thought Abhinav might say no as he is not a much of a dancer but he surprised her by saying yes.

Abhinav took Akshara to the middle of the dance floor and pulled her close as the song "Tum hi Ho" played on the stereo. In that moment it felt like it was only him and Akshara in the room and no one else. He wanted to memorise each and every feature of his wife, he wanted to imprint in his memory the way her eyelashes flutter, the way her lips slowly part, the way she feels in his arms. He want to memorise everyone single detail of this moment so that afterwards he can think back to this moment. For tonight he wants to forget the undeniable darkness tomorrow was going to bring him. For tonight he wanted to lose himself and pretend for a while that everything was ok and that his wife loved him as much as he loved her. For tonight he wanted to live in his fantasy.


Akshara POV

Her heart was beating way too fast. Her husband looked absolutely dashing. He had a subtle charm to him, like those old romance novels. Honestly he reminded her off those beautiful naive and soft romance heroes you read of. He makes her feel like a blushing bride again. He makes her feel like that feeling you get dancing in the first rain of the season.

She can't help it, she really wants to dance with him tonight. All these marriage rituals makes her want to create memories with Abhinav. She goes to ask him for a dance and is surprised he agrees on the first go. She is further surprised when her husband pulls her close to him, so close that they are basically breathing the same air. She feels his hand on her waist and his dark eyes on her and blushes like never before. Abhinav staring at her is making her feel hot everywhere. She feels like one touch and she might come undone. It scares her t think how much power Abhinav has over her unknowingly. A small little gesture from him can maker heart flutter, a small smile form him can make all her worries disappear. She just wants to stay right here in his arms and forget this world.

While dancing, she finally comes up with an idea on how to tell Abhinav what her heart desires. She previously thought to do something big to declare her love but no, it has to be something personal, something that no outsider can witness, it has to be something that involves her, her husband and their son only. She has the perfect idea, she is going to propose to him to marry her again with all the rituals and she will have to get her little mastermind Abhir's help in this.


Kairav and Muskaan's Wedding

So Kairav and Muskaan's wedding has ended, Abhinav has been sad throughout the wedding as he has decided to give Akshara the divorce papers after the wedding.

Akshara and Anhinav's room

Akshara comes in to their room and sees Abhinav sitting on the bed.

Akshara says," Abhinav, whats wrong? I know something has been troubling you the whole wedding and dont lie to me, I know it has nothing to do with catering and looking after guests or anything. So please tell me what's wrong, because whatever it is we can fix it together. Please, tell me what is wrong."

Abhinav smiles sadly, "Its very kind of you to worry about me. I really do appreciate it. But please dont worry, I have found a solution to my problem."

Abhinav hands Akshara an envelop containing the divorce papers.

Akshara is shocked to see the papers and it slips out of her hand. Akshara stares at Abhinav, confused not knowing what was happening, this had to be just a bad dream. Why would abhinav, give her divorce papers. It doesnt make sense.

Abhinav says, "Akshara, tumne mujhe duniya ki sabse badi khushi di hai, tumne mujhe ek family di hai in peechle 6 saalon mein. I can't thank you enough for that, I always wanted a family to call my own and you gave me that. SO thank you so much. But I know that your happiness doesnt lie with me. I can't be so selfish to keep you bound to me. I know that you are only in this relationship because you fill indebted to me, I know we dont have a proper husband wife relation. But I cant expect you or I to continue living like that. So I free you, I free you from this relation. I free you to follow your heart. You and Bhaiji truly make a wonder couple, you both complement each other. You both have so many memories and deserve another chance and I can rob you or abhir of that chance. I will be ok so please dont worry about me and Dont worry I can help explain everything to Abhir and I will ensure the divorce proceedings go without a hicupp. You and Abhir both deserve all the happiness in the world and that happiness is with Bhaiji, I understand that so you are free. You are free to return to the man you love."


Saying this Abhinav walked out the room, wiping his eyes. He felt if he stayed in front of Akshara a bit longer then he would break and eh cant do that right now. He has to remain strong.


Akshara felt like someone had ripped her heart out, she felt completely cold. Divorce, Abhinav wants a divorce. It doesnt make sense, none of it does. And what the hell is all this nonsense about her and Abhi. She thought Abhinav could read her eyes, her soul but guess she was wrong. She thought Abhinav loved her but it was just a lie. No, no this cannot be happening. No, this had to be a bad dream and she would wake up any second. She has to, otherwise she feels her heart will shatter indefintely. No, no she is not going to allow Abhinav to leave her like this without a fight.

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To be continued ..part 3 coming soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved your writing :) Can’t wait for the next part

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is so beautiful. ❤️ I got emotional reading it. Poor Abhinav and Akshu. I really hope they get a happy ending.

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please any one tell me today written updates

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