Gumnaam hai koi ( An Abhira FF) New Link to chapter 4

I know I know

Mere friends ko shock lga hoga title dekh ke kyu ki maine humesa yahi kaha hai ki writing is not my thing.

But still aaj ka precap dekh kr I also went into silent trip of shocking moments

Manjari 😡😡😡 mumma ye khud ko akshara ki maa kehti hai

Plot :

So my story starts with Akshara in Mauritius with Dr. 🤐🤐 inka naam leke main inko izzat nhi de paaungi

Abhi comes to Birla House after a year and goes to his room and cries remembering Akshara . Here comes the devil wearing Mamta ka aanchal . ( Guess who 🙄🙄🙄)

Ab tk to sabko pata chl gya hoga in my story maata ji is in grey character . She will hate Akshu in the starting but I am gonna make her cry on her knees in the last ( you can trust me with that) pata nhi kyun but I am hating her now.

P.S. : Yaar first of all this a story and my POV ( plz give me reviews I should continue or not ) as that matters

But but but

Plz mujhe bash na karna chhotu sa dil hai toot jaayega to phir nhi judega

Tomatoes will do pr plz fresh wale bhejna salad bana lungi wo kya hai na mehenge ho gaye hai tamatar . Sandal bhi chlega wo bhi pair me de dena pr plz apni shuddh vaani ko shuddh hi rehne Dena

Maine apni list de di hai aap log kis kis trh mujhe suna skte hai baaki aap log dekh lena

Guys do read this note on page number 3

Here is the link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161691435

Originally posted by: Nidhii.3007

I know I know

Mere friends ko shock lga hoga title dekh ke kyu ki maine humesa yahi kaha hai ki writing is not my thing.

But still aaj ka precap dekh kr I also went into silent trip of shocking moments

Manjari 😡😡😡 mumma ye khud ko akshara ki maa kehti hai

Plot :

So my story starts with Akshara in Mauritius with Dr. 🤐🤐 inka naam leke main inko izzat nhi de paaungi

Abhi comes to Birla House after a year and goes to his room and cries remembering Akshara . Here comes the devil wearing Mamta ka aanchal . ( Guess who 🙄🙄🙄)

Ab tk to sabko pata chl gya hoga in my story maata ji is in grey character . She will hate Akshu in the starting but I am gonna make her cry on her knees in the last ( you can trust me with that) pata nhi kyun but I am hating her now.

P.S. : Yaar first of all this a story and my POV ( plz give me reviews I should continue or not ) as that matters

But but but

Plz mujhe bash na karna chhotu sa dil hai toot jaayega to phir nhi judega

Tomatoes will do pr plz fresh wale bhejna salad bana lungi wo kya hai na mehenge ho gaye hai tamatar . Sandal bhi chlega wo bhi pair me de dena pr plz apni shuddh vaani ko shuddh hi rehne Dena

Maine apni list de di hai aap log kis kis trh mujhe suna skte hai baaki aap log dekh lena

@beanstalk04 madhu plz sabko tag kr dena ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Abhis love for ak is different from others. She is his everything. That's why he is roaming around to time pass till she comes back. With family they are selfish for their own blood not others as long as ak helps supports them they are happy and give her ijjat. Abhi will leave his family next. Already doors closed for ak in birlas. It's his turn to leave.

Originally posted by: Mehersudha

Abhis love for ak is different from others. She is his everything. That's why he is roaming around to time pass till she comes back. With family they are selfish for their own blood not others as long as ak helps supports them they are happy and give her ijjat. Abhi will leave his family next. Already doors closed for ak in birlas. It's his turn to leave.

Sahi main chhudwa dungi main maata ka aanchal is story me 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

Please please do continue, even i m pissed off watching the precap. Like she called herself akshu's mom..Only naira was her mother. Both Sirat and Manjari are ehsan ki maa, who only accepted her bcz of their selfish motive. sirat bcz she wanted akshu to protect arohi which resulted her entire childhood traumatized and then Mnjari bcz of her son. I m tellimg you Manju aunty will get vicious, and dekhna ye hi hongi jo Abhi k tilak 4.0 ka shagun le jaengi for Maya 🙄🙄

Also yes i want all the birlas and Goenka's to apologize to akshu profusely. Bcz last time k bhi wounds abhi heal ni hue h. Affair and illegitimate child manju aunty k husband ne kia, Ek bachhe ko manju aunty ne chhupata but truth bahr aya toh villain is Akshu.

I Dont want akshu to be forgiving to anyone bcz she has been wronged a lot.

Please continue this fic and if possible do tag me in updates🤧

Originally posted by: Nidhii.3007

I know I know

Mere friends ko shock lga hoga title dekh ke kyu ki maine humesa yahi kaha hai ki writing is not my thing.

But still aaj ka precap dekh kr I also went into silent trip of shocking moments

Manjari 😡😡😡 mumma ye khud ko akshara ki maa kehti hai

Plot :

So my story starts with Akshara in Mauritius with Dr. 🤐🤐 inka naam leke main inko izzat nhi de paaungi

Abhi comes to Birla House after a year and goes to his room and cries remembering Akshara . Here comes the devil wearing Mamta ka aanchal . ( Guess who 🙄🙄🙄)

Ab tk to sabko pata chl gya hoga in my story maata ji is in grey character . She will hate Akshu in the starting but I am gonna make her cry on her knees in the last ( you can trust me with that) pata nhi kyun but I am hating her now.

P.S. : Yaar first of all this a story and my POV ( plz give me reviews I should continue or not ) as that matters

But but but

Plz mujhe bash na karna chhotu sa dil hai toot jaayega to phir nhi judega

Tomatoes will do pr plz fresh wale bhejna salad bana lungi wo kya hai na mehenge ho gaye hai tamatar . Sandal bhi chlega wo bhi pair me de dena pr plz apni shuddh vaani ko shuddh hi rehne Dena

Maine apni list de di hai aap log kis kis trh mujhe suna skte hai baaki aap log dekh lena

Originally posted by: chremma

Please please do continue, even i m pissed off watching the precap. Like she called herself akshu's mom..Only naira was her mother. Both Sirat and Manjari are ehsan ki maa, who only accepted her bcz of their selfish motive. sirat bcz she wanted akshu to protect arohi which resulted her entire childhood traumatized and then Mnjari bcz of her son. I m tellimg you Manju aunty will get vicious, and dekhna ye hi hongi jo Abhi k tilak 4.0 ka shagun le jaengi for Maya 🙄🙄

Also yes i want all the birlas and Goenka's to apologize to akshu profusely. Bcz last time k bhi wounds abhi heal ni hue h. Affair and illegitimate child manju aunty k husband ne kia, Ek bachhe ko manju aunty ne chhupata but truth bahr aya toh villain is Akshu.

I Dont want akshu to be forgiving to anyone bcz she has been wronged a lot.

Please continue this fic and if possible do tag me in updates🤧

Is story me apni saari bhadaas nikalne wali hu main

Sabko Akshu ke saamne naak na ragadwa diya to main bhi main nahi 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣 but but but

Story end happily hi hogi

Akshu maaf karegi but after a lot of sorries

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

nice plot. Do continue show toh main kuch din ke baad hi dekhungi when they will meet 😆

Thank you diya

Now I am motivated yr agr forum ke writers encourage krenge continue krne ko to hosla khud b khud aa jaata hai

Good good, bs yhi chiyh..Ab jldinse updates bhi post kr do🤤🤤

Chapter 1

Main Akshara

Akshara POV :

Hello all pehchan to liya hoga . Main Abhi ki Akshu ya yoon kahu Abhi ki Jaan. ( Wo jaan jisne apni Jaan ko khud se door karne ka gunaah kiya par uski bhalaai ke liye)

Main wahin hu aaj bhi jahan ek saal pehle thi . Jaanti hu yha se kuch mile door sb mujhse nafrat kar rahe honge . Dil toda hai maine sabka but haalat aise the ki main kuch kar bhi nahi paayi. Mera pyaar OT me tha aur jis doctor ko uska operation karna tha usne saaf saaf mana kar diya. Aise situation me mujhe kya karna chahiye tha. Shuruat se apne Abhi ko ek hot shot surgeon ki tarah dekha hai and jaana hai ki wo apne kaam ko apni Pooja maanta tha. Uska pehla pyaar tha uska kaam. Aur waise bhi sabko yahi lagta tha ki uske haath ke saath jo hua wo sab meri wajah se hua to chalo ek baar phir main hi wajah ban jaati hu Abhi ka haath thik ho jaane ka . Haa uske liye mujhe usse door hona pade to main wo bhi kar lungi. Jaanti hu use bahut takleef hogi bahut dard de rahi hu main use parrrrr..................

Flashback:

K : Akshara you have to come with me to India

A : You very well know that I will not listen to you than why are you even trying to make a conversation with me. Last time also you made do what you wished for but this time you can't force me.

Flashback ends :

Here I am back from to where it all started .

Jaipur the pink city . Yeah first I ignored the request made by doctor Kunal but when maaya his little sister attempted suicide don't know why but I suddenly remembered Anisha the dearest sister of my Abhi . Wo Abhi jo apni behan ke liye mere bhaiya ke khilaaf ho gaya.

The city where everything started. The city where we got married. The city where I hope I meet him again. But jo maine kiya hai uske baad sayad hi wo is jagah aana chahega . Aur chahe ya na chahe uske yahan aane ke liye use pata to hona chahiye na ki main yaha hoon. I know wo mujhe feel kar sakta hai but ek saal me to sab kuch badal jaata hai phir kya pata Abhi apni nafrat me ( nahi nahi main ye nahi soch sakti mera Abhi mujhse nafrat kar sakta hai par mujhe bhool kabhi nahi sakta)