This serial is too weak in storyline and it's obvious!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Note- this post is going to be a rant. All those who complain that there are no positive posts in this forum can skip this in advance. This is a forum and it is open to all kind of views be it positive or negative as long as there is no bashing of actors.


What brings out the chemistry between a couple is the

- cinematography and background

- the personalities of the character ( their difference in personality/ similarities)

- their inner thought process while being with each other and in their romantic scenes

- their comfort level with each other ( whether they are like friends/ boyfriend girlfriend/ husband wife/ soulmates)

- their humour with each other

- how deeply they respect each other

- how deeply they know each other

- how much goofy they are around each other

- their efforts and gestures towards each other

- their conversations

- their moments together ( singing, dancing, shayari)

- how they adore each other physically ( physical attraction does play a part in relationships )

- them advicing each other

- them standing by each other in tough times


All these are clearly missing between abhira- they straightaway jumped to the I love you to jump in fire for you and give up my life phase.

It was love at first sight and it was beautiful

Then came abrohi track.I have mixed reactions about abrohi track- i liked some angst scenes but the third angle completely ruined the essence of the main lead couple, the freshness of the functions everything,even disturbed their character arc - imagine if the functions started now, we would be so much more excited to see akshara visit birla house for the first time but now it's all done and it's going to be a repeat. It was totally not needed, even if got them trps there could have been other ways to get it .

Dating phase was a blunder- it was all baby talks, they could bring proper chemistry in 1 month instead of showing them merely dancing in festivals. The bubbly talkative girl chemistry with a mature doctor.

Marriage track is involving so much negativity already!!

There are no original tracks, there could have been a lot of potential subtracks - mental health issues, Akshara's missing her mother properly dealt with.

This serial is all about Akshara's aaru jaap

Abhimanyu's obsession with akshara

The lead characters are themselves highly immature and not in proper character .

Yeh guilt trip kya kehlata hai( as they are always crying for something or the other)

Yeh accident kya kehlata hai ( every week accident)

No original songs for abhira apart from jaaniye. Even jaaniye seems so forced now. 🙄

I can't connect to abhira's chemistry anymore. 👍👎

Makers thanks for successfuly making a mess of pranali and harshad's chemistry ...🙏

After sticking with this show since 5 months, I can say I have no hope for a proper storyline


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Posted: 3 years ago
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I do agree with you that there is no consistency. I dont like hald baked plots. The accident drama had potential but now it feels like a filler.

Abhira did have cringy baby talks at one point but since the tilak, theyve given us amazing scenes and I think that criticism has been negated.


However, Abhira is carrying the show. It is because of their chemistry that most people are tuning in, hoping for a better track. And that's the mistake of the makers, they are putting too much burden on Abhira to just make it happen and they're doing good but if you want to move up from top 3 then you need to put effort in the plot.


Advice to makers would be to just follow the iche noddle plot as it definitely did the trick before. I know people may not have liked the marriage track but it was the time when audience was hooked.

Audience is made up of two parts. Abhira fans who only watch for the main leads and average trp audience who watch for drama.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: borntorule12

Note- this post is going to be a rant. All those who complain that there are no positive posts in this forum can skip this in advance. This is a forum and it is open to all kind of views be it positive or negative as long as there is no bashing of actors.


What brings out the chemistry between a couple is the

- cinematography and background

- the personalities of the character ( their difference in personality/ similarities)

- their inner thought process while being with each other and in their romantic scenes

- their comfort level with each other ( whether they are like friends/ boyfriend girlfriend/ husband wife/ soulmates)

- their humour with each other

- how deeply they respect each other

- how deeply they know each other

- how much goofy they are around each other

- their efforts and gestures towards each other

- their conversations

- their moments together ( singing, dancing, shayari)

- how they adore each other physically ( physical attraction does play a part in relationships )

- them advicing each other

- them standing by each other in tough times


All these are clearly missing between abhira- they straightaway jumped to the I love you to jump in fire for you and give up my life phase.

It was love at first sight and it was beautiful

Then came abrohi track.I have mixed reactions about abrohi track- i liked some angst scenes but the third angle completely ruined the essence of the main lead couple, the freshness of the functions everything,even disturbed their character arc - imagine if the functions started now, we would be so much more excited to see akshara visit birla house for the first time but now it's all done and it's going to be a repeat. It was totally not needed, even if got them trps there could have been other ways to get it .

Dating phase was a blunder- it was all baby talks, they could bring proper chemistry in 1 month instead of showing them merely dancing in festivals. The bubbly talkative girl chemistry with a mature doctor.

Marriage track is involving so much negativity already!!

There are no original tracks, there could have been a lot of potential subtracks - mental health issues, Akshara's missing her mother properly dealt with.

This serial is all about Akshara's aaru jaap

Abhimanyu's obsession with akshara

The lead characters are themselves highly immature and not in proper character .

Yeh guilt trip kya kehlata hai( as they are always crying for something or the other)

Yeh accident kya kehlata hai ( every week accident)

No original songs for abhira apart from jaaniye. Even jaaniye seems so forced now. 🙄

I can't connect to abhira's chemistry anymore. 👍👎

Makers thanks for successfuly making a mess of pranali and harshad's chemistry ...🙏

After sticking with this show since 5 months, I can say I have no hope for a proper storyline


Absolutely agree! They ruined the essence of lead couple! 3 Tilaks 2 Ganesh poojas 2 engagements 2 haldis 2 mehendis ewwwe it’s so cringe. And upar se this accident track and heart attack track before!! 🙄 I am not even watching this show since past 2 episodes will come back when show becomes positive! Right now there is too much forced emotions and forced drama that I can’t bear. I loved Abhira chemistry that’s the reason I started watching this show again, I watched this show on and off since 10 years. But my most fav couple are definitely Abhi and Akshu. They are the ones I can relate to mostly. But Akshu’s character is becoming so dumb and so stupid. Some of my fav female characters in recent times are Swadeentha from Dahleez and Sonakshi from Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi. These 2 are very strong characters who are very focused on their profession and also balances their personal life perfectly. I really wish Akshara becomes like that eventually then I will be back.


Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaish.5

Absolutely agree! They ruined the essence of lead couple! 3 Tilaks 2 Ganesh poojas 2 engagements 2 haldis 2 mehendis ewwwe it’s so cringe. And upar se this accident track and heart attack track before!! 🙄 I am not even watching this show since past 2 episodes will come back when show becomes positive! Right now there is too much forced emotions and forced drama that I can’t bear. I loved Abhira chemistry that’s the reason I started watching this show again, I watched this show on and off since 10 years. But my most fav couple are definitely Abhi and Akshu. They are the ones I can relate to mostly. But Akshu’s character is becoming so dumb and so stupid. Some of my fav female characters in recent times are Swadeentha from Dahleez and Sonakshi from Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi. These 2 are very strong characters who are very focused on their profession and also balances their personal life perfectly. I really wish Akshara becomes like that eventually then I will be back.


Agree I thank the makers for their present crappy accident track, they have given me an opportunity to get off this serial, otherwise the tilak episodes and the pre confession episodes I have watched atleast 4 times each.

I don't know but for some reason I have developed an aversion to aaru jaap from Akshara. Its irritating to see akshara takes Abhimanyu's affections for granted and she clearly is blind to Aarohi's misdeeds.

I love 😍Ms.Bose(Sonakshi) from KRPKAB season 1, not a fan of Erica though.

Women without a spine and character as FLs looks horrible.

I bet the TRP aunties also can't digest the character of akshu. Badi Akshara was docile as well but she was smart and was never blindly supporting mistakes.

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: borntorule12

Note- this post is going to be a rant. All those who complain that there are no positive posts in this forum can skip this in advance. This is a forum and it is open to all kind of views be it positive or negative as long as there is no bashing of actors.


What brings out the chemistry between a couple is the

- cinematography and background

- the personalities of the character ( their difference in personality/ similarities)

- their inner thought process while being with each other and in their romantic scenes

- their comfort level with each other ( whether they are like friends/ boyfriend girlfriend/ husband wife/ soulmates)

- their humour with each other

- how deeply they respect each other

- how deeply they know each other

- how much goofy they are around each other

- their efforts and gestures towards each other

- their conversations

- their moments together ( singing, dancing, shayari)

- how they adore each other physically ( physical attraction does play a part in relationships )

- them advicing each other

- them standing by each other in tough times


All these are clearly missing between abhira- they straightaway jumped to the I love you to jump in fire for you and give up my life phase.

It was love at first sight and it was beautiful

Then came abrohi track.I have mixed reactions about abrohi track- i liked some angst scenes but the third angle completely ruined the essence of the main lead couple, the freshness of the functions everything,even disturbed their character arc - imagine if the functions started now, we would be so much more excited to see akshara visit birla house for the first time but now it's all done and it's going to be a repeat. It was totally not needed, even if got them trps there could have been other ways to get it .

Dating phase was a blunder- it was all baby talks, they could bring proper chemistry in 1 month instead of showing them merely dancing in festivals. The bubbly talkative girl chemistry with a mature doctor.

Marriage track is involving so much negativity already!!

There are no original tracks, there could have been a lot of potential subtracks - mental health issues, Akshara's missing her mother properly dealt with.

This serial is all about Akshara's aaru jaap

Abhimanyu's obsession with akshara

The lead characters are themselves highly immature and not in proper character .

Yeh guilt trip kya kehlata hai( as they are always crying for something or the other)

Yeh accident kya kehlata hai ( every week accident)

No original songs for abhira apart from jaaniye. Even jaaniye seems so forced now. 🙄

I can't connect to abhira's chemistry anymore. 👍👎

Makers thanks for successfuly making a mess of pranali and harshad's chemistry ...🙏

After sticking with this show since 5 months, I can say I have no hope for a proper storyline


I agree with you that some of the tracks seem quite forced and the relationship development hasn't been focused on well.

I want to see the couple abhira having trouble while understanding each other, just like how real life couple have issues between 2 contrasting personalities.

Instead they make it look like a threesome marriage or marriage with a buy 1 get 1 free offer.

If abhi marries akshu he will get arohi and her kaands as a free package.

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