OS: Jaan Nisar - Page 2

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Noor, this is legit me when you post!

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Thank you so much for writing this! it was much needed after that horribly edited episode. Your writing today took me back to this scene here

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I loved the tension, attraction and chemistry!

Plus he said my name in this episode. I did not miss it this time!

Amnu 🤗🤗

Main toh bas ye jaan kar khush hun ki tum logo ko ye update pasand aa raha hai ❤️

Traffic scene editing - 😑

I wished they give more of teasing too... And a bit of physical touch romance.

You still only heard him the second time 😌

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Noor🤗

Glad to see you back here with your OS

Its so beautiful dear and yes something new from your side. But that's what we want to read for AbhiRa.😳

Seriously if like this something would happened in the episode then FD gonna mad

Thank you so much Noorie for giving such an amazing OS in the morning only 🤗

Bhaviiii 🤗🤗

Aaj kal main yahi kar rahi hun yaar. Story post kar ke gayab 🤣🤣

I was so nervous while posting this. Physical touch romance is a new concept nd writing it yet not showing too much of this but make viewers feel the sexual tension between the leads had me on my toes and reading your guys reviews relaxes my jittery nerves. I did not messed it up, yess!!!

Aree maine kal dekha tha FD utne mein hi pagal ho rhi thi... Ye aata toh pata nhi kya hota 😂😂

The pleasure is all mine

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Finally those beautiful lines are used here 😍😍😍😍

Noor this was your first time writing something like this and trust me it's bang on

You did justice to their every emotion and feeling with your words

Haye... These beautiful lines are like cherry on the top

Loved it ❤️

Fabulous OS 🤗

Zenuu ❤️❤️

Hai na... When Amnu sent those lines ... I was like. Okay I have to write a one shot and present the scene my way 🙈🙈

Yeah and I was so jittery while posting it. So glad you guys liked it ❤️

I so happy to hear that I am able to do justice to them yaar 🙈

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Anu 🤗🤗

I am so glad you liked it ❤️😊

Ab nhi milega... Ab mera quota khatam writing ka 🤣

Arre... Wo TS silence and confessions kab update karogi? I am waiting for the final part

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Arre... Wo TS silence and confessions kab update karogi? I am waiting for the final part

I will see when I can ... Atm, I have too many projects to submit. Once it's done, I will get back to it 🤗

Noorrrr!!!! Bachcha I am so happy reading this.

I was expecting and I wanted something like this.

Everything, every emotion, the tension filled room, the slow touches and the lingering thoughts….. you had it all captured so perfectly. Why aren’t we getting such kind of scenes????

We had to get more time for scenes like these rather than the Udaipur traffic, dance contest…. Blah blah blue blue…

I loved these lines:

“Aise Riha na kare ki kaid lage…..”

Thank you so much for this wonderful piece!!!!

Simply beautiful noor....

I absolutely loved the small details you added to that stitching scene...it was😍

"Kab aa rahe ho mulaqat ke liye

Maine Chand roka hai ek Raat ke liye."

Also the poetry is love.

Originally posted by: Silveraliax

My replies in blue. Yes it was something new Noor but i absolutely loved it! It was beautiful and bold at the same time. But not too bold either, you kept it subtle. Thanks for tagging me and I really enjoyed this.

Abhi and Akshu perfectly fits yin and yang description. They are each others flaws light ❤️

It's okay... I have not really specified what I am writing on 😂😂

Akshara is shy yet the coy type person. Remember the sensous move she did in that mask festival dance... Kudos to Pranali for bringing that innocent yet desired expression ❤️

Yes yes yes... Weddings are supposed to be mithai fully and AbhiRa deserved that type of wedding

Same... Makers have not built the connection right and that's why it never clicked with me either... Awwie, I am glad here you are able to connect s lil

Harshad nailed the Abhimanyu Whipped Birla look. He is ruling ITV since many years after all

Aree di, I wrote this in twitter thread and I got so many indirects... Maybe it was really PG 😂😂

I was all along imagining the jittery nerves that must have been pooled in her stomach. Ahh.. makers have to put a lil more effort for details.

AbhiRa are just so hot... Nd knowing you are liking it even after this being my first story of physical touch romance ... Ahh ❤️❤️

And what if I said, I did send them? 😳

I wish he teased her a little during that bedroom scene

They are my intense Abhi × shy Akshu trope... Have to give the teasings and the touch after all ,😜 and you are making me blush by such compliments ❤️❤️

Ab main bina bataye bhi wishlist poori kar rahi hun... Kuch baat hogi mere mein 😂

I am so so glad you liked it di. And every compliment of yours meant so much ❤️🥰

Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

Noorrrr!!!! Bachcha I am so happy reading this.

I was expecting and I wanted something like this.

Everything, every emotion, the tension filled room, the slow touches and the lingering thoughts….. you had it all captured so perfectly. Why aren’t we getting such kind of scenes????

We had to get more time for scenes like these rather than the Udaipur traffic, dance contest…. Blah blah blue blue…

I loved these lines:

“Aise Riha na kare ki kaid lage…..”

Thank you so much for this wonderful piece!!!!

Ashuuuu 🤗🤗 I am so happy you liked it

We all were but they are taking the intimacy part slow and the slow burn they are serving .. haayeee ❤️❤️

Maybe better things are waiting for us, with much more tension filled room 😂😂

The mid traffic scene was 🙄🙄🙄🙄

I am just so happy to know that you liked it !!

Originally posted by: Nyxigniflex

Simply beautiful noor....

I absolutely loved the small details you added to that stitching scene...it was😍

"Kab aa rahe ho mulaqat ke liye

Maine Chand roka hai ek Raat ke liye."

Also the poetry is love.

Riddhiii 🤗

They were so hot... I can't help the imagination ❤️

Those lines are loveee ❤️