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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago
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Abhimanyu is waiting for akshu in sunset point with the hope that he will be free from this loveless marriage..

Abhi: kyun kiya akshu.. kyun.. aaj main har sawal ka jawab lekar hi rahunga tumse..

( why did you do you do this akshu.. today i will ensure to take all the answers for all my questions from you!)

abhi is being restless as its 4 O clock and akshu is still missing

Abhi: so tum aaj phir nahi aogi.. phir jathana chahohi ki tumhe mujhse pyar nahin hai.. fine then..

( so you will not come today as well. And you will still try potray as if you dont loved me.. okay fine then)

Abhi fumes in anger..

He was about to leave he senses akshu's presence

Abhi turns to see akshu standing afar.. he overjoyed by the fact that she atleast came to meet him...

He runs towards her with carrying so much emotions and he sees akshu with a face drenched in tears.

He goes and cups her face.. and he hugs her tight..

Abhi: kya hua akshu.. kya haalath banakar rakh hi tumne apni..

( what happend to you akshu. Why do you look so ill?)

Akshu starts breathing heavily...

Abhi understood she might be having panic attack.. he makes her sit under tree.. and sits beside her.. cups her face..

Abhi: akshu.. saas lo.. gehri saas lo..

( breathe akshu.. take a deep breath)

Akshu nods to say its not happening..

Abhi: sing... gao akshu...

( sing akshu sing)

Akshu: with feeble voice.. lag ja gale..

Hmm. Hmm...

With that her breathing is bit neutralized

Akshu smiles ..

Abhi looks at her.. as more than him asking he want her to talk.

Akshu: bachpan se mujhe aru ka pyar chahiye tha..

( from childhood i craved for arohi's love)

Abhi looks at her with surprise as for him these sisters were too close..

Akshu smiles..

Akshu: patha hai mujhe patha hi nahi tha meri mumma kaun hai.. jab main maa shab ka arth samajhne lagi tab se maine sirf sirath mumma ko apna maana hai..

( do you know i never knewed who was my real mother.. the day on which i understood the meaning of the word mother i only have seen sirath mumma as my mother)

Abhi still listening..

Akshu: jab main kuch 15 saal ki thi thab mujhe patha chala ki main jinhe apni maa manthi hun woh toh meri asli mumma hai hi nahi..

( when i was about 15 years world i got to know that the person whom i called my was not my real mom.. )

Abhi looks at her as he never knew akshu had so many bad days in her childhood.

Akshu: phir bhi maine iss sach apna liya aur unhe maa mana.. aur unhe uthna hi pyar diya jithne ka hakdar thi. Bina koi shart ke

( still i loved her unconditionally without any rules )

Akshu wipes her tears...

Abhi holds her hands inorder to control her tears..

Akshu: mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai sirath mumma ne kaha tha.. akshu adjust karlena..

( i still remember sirath mumma telling me that i should adjust)

Akshu: maine unki bathon ko ithna seriously le liya ki maine bachpan se hi adjust karthi arahi hoon.. she smiles

( i took her so seriously that i am adjusti ng until this day)

Abhi: ye sab kyun akshu.. aru tumse nafrath kyun karthi hai..

( why all this akshu.. why does arohi hates you so much)

Akshu: usse lagtha hai ki sirath mumma ko maine usse cheena hai.. sirath mumma seediyon se giri thi.. abhi remembers her getting stressed on seeing that patient

( she thinks i am responsible for her moms death. Sirath mumma died after falling down from stairs. )

Abhi: sabne usse samjhane ki koshish nahi ki..

Akshu: ki na sabne ki.. lekin wou maani nahi..mujhe laga main badin hoon toh main usse door chali gayi..

Abhi : par kyun akshu.. kyun..

Akshu: kyunki mujhe adjust karna tha..

Abhi: toh uss din maine jab pehle bar udaipur main tumhara gaana suna tha.. tabhi tum wapas ayi thi?

Akshu: nods.. uss din main isliye ro rahi thi kyun ki mujhe patha chala ki arohi ne mujhe ab thak maaf nahi kiya.. woh kush nahi thi mere aane se.

Abhi understood why her voice had so much emotion that day. He also understood why she had an panic attack.

Abhi: toh mask festival main jo panic attack aya tha?

Akshu: arohi ne mujhe jane ke liye kaha tha. Sabse door.. tumse door...

Abhi closes his fist to show his anger..

Abhi: aur jo tumne sabke samne mujhse pyar na karne ki bath ki thi woh..

Akshu: aru ne kaha tha ki woh hum sabse door chali jayegi agar main tumhare pass jaoongi...

Abhi is unable to control his emotions..

Abhi: uske liye tum mujhse ithni door chali gayi akshu...

Akshu: unfortunately yes.. uske liye.. uske ek muskurahat ke liye..

Abhi: phir aaj tum kaise..

Akshu: arohi ne kabhi tumse pyar kiya hi nahi.. main uske pyar main ithni ulajh gayi thi maine dekha hi nahi.. na usne tumhe court case main bachana chaha na aag se.. usse sirf best chahiye.. jo tum ho..

Abhi never realized being best turned out to be a curse for him.

Akshu cries more this time..

Abhi: kya tum mujhse pyar karthi ho...

Akshu nods and cries even more..

Abhi: shh.. shh.. aur rona nahi hai tumhe.. ab tum sirf meri ho.. aur main tumhara..

Akshu looks at him with the twinkle in her eyes..

Akshu: aur aru..

Abhi : usse uski kiye ki saza zaroor milegi agar tum chaho toh.. and he smiles.. as he dont want to go against akshu.

Akshu smiles and hugs him as he equally cares for arohi even though she was very mean to him

Akshu hugs him tightly...

Abhi hugs her back...

Abhi finally found his love and akshu found herself in him ❤

========The end=======

I scribbled something in the morning after seeing the precap. I started with english subs but if people want them i will add them in the evening ..

Happy abhira week folks 😁sayonara.😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh my god😍😍😍

This was so awesome 😍😍

So wish ki aisa show m ho

Thanku for tagging me❤️

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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbhiRa_Love

Oh my god😍😍😍

This was so awesome 😍😍

So wish ki aisa show m ho

Thanku for tagging me❤️

Thank you😊 I am yet to read yours will read it once i have some free mind

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Are we getting something like this in show too Diya 😆

You're raising my expectations popat hoga ab mera

Awesome OS dear

Their conversation was very emotional ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: firewings_diya

Thank you😊 I am yet to read yours will read it once i have some free mind

Haha!!! Sure read it whenever you feel like🤗

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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago
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Haha 😄 i have 0 expectations if show a normal conversation between leads 🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's a good story...👏

Just one complain....😔 sirat was a nice mother and character....she had sensed that aarohi was not accepting akshu....that's why she told akshu that aarohi has small heart and she won't understand their relationship....and akshu being the elder and mature will understand and take care of her sister....😊

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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashsamik

It's a good story...👏

Just one complain....😔 sirat was a nice mother and character....she had sensed that aarohi was not accepting akshu....that's why she told akshu that aarohi has small heart and she won't understand their relationship....and akshu being the elder and mature will understand and take care of her sister....😊

oh okay i never seen s2 thanks for letting me know😆 my story is only based on some clips i watched on insta.. i wanted to show akshara's journey that one sentence which she overdid( adjust karlena)😊 nothing to do with sirath 😆 i did not explained much as i dont know their dynamics much😁
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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is good.. Ekdam aaram se nipta diya aapne

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just wooooowwwww.

It's amazing . Agar aisa hi show me dikha de to writers ki bhi fan jaaun main 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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