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NOOOOORRRRR

Stop it! I don't want to empathize with Aarohi.

You made me feel for her for a moment there!

I like how nicely you have put Akshu and Aru bond in words. Akshu has been a mom to her. I especially like how you said the only one who knows all her mistakes is hell bent on covering them. The sisters relationship is pretty much summed up here.

You have a way with words. I am jealous.

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Thank you , Tamatar nhi fekne ke liye..m mehange hai wo and I am so glad you like it ❤️

Anika?

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Noor, Don't do this...Just...Don't! because I might end up having a soft corner for Arohi. What a beautiful piece of writing, sweet heavens! felt like Arohi is an open book that i am having a privilege of reading. Her point of view, the embracement of her flaws and admitting to it, acknowledging akshara's role in her life and how she has always exploited her kindness to get her work done/ snatch what was hers - basically everything about it this tugged at my heart and made me realize how blemished this woman is and how helpless she has become to give into these defects of hers to achieve what she wants to achieve in life. This was just brilliant my love!!! I want one for abhi and akshu, please?😳

Mush... I just got up like an hour ago and you made me smile so so wide 🤗 to get a review like this on a poetry that too when I did it on the spot and after months, means a lot ❤️

I always felt Aarohi is well aware of her faults and her wrong doings and she has no problem in accepting it but it's the Goenka parivar especially Akshara who has made sure her ego is boosted. She knew Akshara loved her and is mahaan, so she used it and maybe to survive in this world, we become like that at some point of our life but we have been guided to the right direction when we started walking on the wrong path and here none did that to her. Mimi, AG or whatever AG OG... They have said yes to her all the time that she simply don't know how to take a no and for that more than anyone we have to blame Goenkas and Akshara too. Guidance matters a lot in our life.

I will not say I sympathize with her but I feel pity for her for sure. And maybe I empathize too. I want to help her to know.... Because even her being a doctor is what I think she not really wanted. She just wanted to be at top and profession in medicine is the top most noble work and doctors are still considered next to God's (rightly so...) So she just went for that.

Aarohi Goenka have layers and can be one hell of a character if makers decides to explore but we all know they will not and will just follow ITV... Pehle evilness ki pujaran hogi aur phir usko doodh se dhoya jayega

I hope we get a Aarohi who thinks of all her actions and redeems herself.

Bold: ask my best friend to ask me to write on them 😆

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

@bold- I second that.

I once again ask you guys to ask my friend to give me this as topic ... Only she can make me write now days... I can't do that myself 🤣

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

NOOOOORRRRR

Stop it! I don't want to empathize with Aarohi.

You made me feel for her for a moment there!

I like how nicely you have put Akshu and Aru bond in words. Akshu has been a mom to her. I especially like how you said the only one who knows all her mistakes is hell bent on covering them. The sisters relationship is pretty much summed up here.

You have a way with words. I am jealous.

Amnu, thank you!!!!!

Well, I can't help... I do that so should you ☺️

I am so glad you liked it ... I guess everyone should know this that I dont like that habit of Akshara given that I am almost screaming this at the top of my lungs here 😆

Bold: Kabhi apni story padhe and phir kahe ye baat... I toh unable to write if my best friend is not asking me to write and story toh last mahino pehle likhi thi maine ☺️

Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Wowwie ...brilliantly written yaar.... Superb 🤩

Thank you so much Amru 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Amnu, thank you!!!!!

Well, I can't help... I do that so should you ☺️

I am so glad you liked it ... I guess everyone should know this that I dont like that habit of Akshara given that I am almost screaming this at the top of my lungs here 😆

Bold: Kabhi apni story padhe and phir kahe ye baat... I toh unable to write if my best friend is not asking me to write and story toh last mahino pehle likhi thi maine ☺️

You just need motivation my dear! I never read anything I write, I don't even proof read it. Too critical.

And you doubt your writing after goving this splendid poetry. Are you seriously serious? Ab tujhe mein ghar pe aake marungi😳

This was sooooooooooooooo beautiful. Although kt was about a person i hate from the core of my heart. Still it was so besutiful. U put such a realistic picture of arohi and her thought processes and her guilt through your own poetic way. I wish arohi realized her kartutein in the show. Ik thats never gonna happen but thanks for this noor. I was a pleasure reading and seeing arohi from an angle a lot of us wanted to see🤗

Yu know sometimes i feel like these poetries like the one you just posted on arohi, and then the abhi and akshu in mush’s OS and blues’s stories have better description and depth of the characters than what the show is showing us. Which is so sad because it should be the other way around. It makes me feel like the writers of the show r not putting enough effort to make it work. Although im not at all complaining because these days, i am highly depending on thr writers on IF to make my days but yeah i just wish makers put in a little more thoughts to the characters and the plot itself.