I have nothing to say except I wrote this

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sab paa kar bhi lagta hai sab khoya hai

Uss se chah kar bhi lagta adhura hai

Jo Jaan nyochawar karti hai mujh par

Maine uss se aaj tak sirf kosa hai

Main sagi nahi hu uss ki

Usko har roz yaad dilaya hai

Maa ko khone ka ilzaam main uss par daala hai

Uss se uska pyaar cheena hai


Bura lagta hai ki jhooth par main Abhimanyu ke saath rishta jod Rahi hu

Par kabhi kisi ne na kaha nahi meri kisi zidd ko

Shayad isiliye galat raah par chal rahi hun

Par kya karu, aaj tak maine Akshara se sirf Cheena hai

Kisi ne Toka nahi toh Dena maine seekha hi nahi

Avval aane ki chah mein

Maine dukh ko sukh maan liya hai

Bewakoofi aur zidd mein maine apni

AbhiRa ko alag kar diya hai

Jo Prem karte hai maine unn ko bichoda hai

Par kya karun, kisi ne jodna sikhaya nahi toh bas issi raah par chalte jaana hai


Maa ke jaane ke baad

Akshu ne maa ban kar sambhala hai

Par papa ki daant suni nahi toh

Uske laad ko maine , halke mein liya hai

Jab usne pehli baar aawaz uthayi toh Darr laga tha

Par wo bholi hai

Jawab bas mujhe deti hai

Aur Abhiamanyu jo uss par jaan chidhakta hai

Uss se andhere mein rakhti hai

Aur main?

Main toh hun hi Aarohi

Aaj Tak jo maanga hai

Sab kuch paaya hai

Toh bas waqt aur halat ko apna maan kar

Uska faayda uthaya hai

Kisi ne daant lagayi nahi

Kabhi galti karne par samjhaya nahi

Shayad isiliye galat raah par hu

Par jo hun woh Kahan hi kisi ki smjh mein hu

Aur jiski smjh mein hu

Usne hi toh har galti par parda daala hai


No tomatoes on me. My best friend asked me to write on her and this is on the spot poetry... So please be little considerate of the Tomatoes... Mehange hai bhai wo bohot. Mere par waste na karein.


This is from Aarohi POV I guess...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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WOW WALA POST KYAA LIKHA HAI 🤪

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Wow Noor. This couldn’t be anymore perfect in describing Arohi’s POV…

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow.. Keep writing dea👍🏼

We don't throw tomato we are star plus audience we only throw water...🤣😜(I missed you Anika 🤧)

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Originally posted by: apacs

WOW WALA POST KYAA LIKHA HAI 🤪


Even tho last wala emoticon ne hasa Diya... Thank you 💞

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Wow Noor. This couldn’t be anymore perfect in describing Arohi’s POV…


Jannniiiiiii ❤️❤️❤️ thank you


Maine toh avein hi likha tha ... I never knew it will resonate with Aarohi this much that you will like it ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Wow.. Keep writing dea👍🏼

We don't throw tomato we are star plus audience we only throw water...🤣😜(I missed you Anika 🤧)


Thank you , Tamatar nhi fekne ke liye..m mehange hai wo and I am so glad you like it ❤️


Anika?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Noor, Don't do this...Just...Don't! because I might end up having a soft corner for Arohi. What a beautiful piece of writing, sweet heavens! felt like Arohi is an open book that i am having a privilege of reading. Her point of view, the embracement of her flaws and admitting to it, acknowledging akshara's role in her life and how she has always exploited her kindness to get her work done/ snatch what was hers - basically everything about it this tugged at my heart and made me realize how blemished this woman is and how helpless she has become to give into these defects of hers to achieve what she wants to achieve in life. This was just brilliant my love!!! I want one for abhi and akshu, please?😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Noor, Don't do this...Just...Don't! because I might end up having a soft corner for Arohi. What a beautiful piece of writing, sweet heavens! felt like Arohi is an open book that i am having a privilege of reading. Her point of view, the embracement of her flaws and admitting to it, acknowledging akshara's role in her life and how she has always exploited her kindness to get her work done/ snatch what was hers - basically everything about it this tugged at my heart and made me realize how blemished this woman is and how helpless she has become to give into these defects of hers to achieve what she wants to achieve in life. This was just brilliant my love!!! I want one for abhi and akshu, please?😳

@bold- I second that.

Edited by jani_faizal - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago
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Wowwie ...brilliantly written yaar.... Superb 🤩

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