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Hi everyone.. I'm new to this forum and YRKKH.

I came here only for HC, who made his lasting impression on me as Cadet Ali Baig!

This is my second only story ever on IF, it's a continuation of the fire scene and a wishful imagining of mine, just like so many other wonderful fan fic writers have posted so far on the forum..

Hope you all enjoy it.. feedback is always welcome.



Flames of the heart


Abhimanyuuuuu!"

He could hear the frantic calls from Akshara coming from outside the store room which was ablaze at the moment.

The kids were safe, but Abhimanyu didn't know if he would make it out.. the smoke was blurring his vision, burning his throat and slowly seeping into his lungs making it difficult to breathe, he knew what was going to happen next due to the lack of oxygen. He had to get out, but he could feel himself slipping out of consciousness..

"Abhi.. Abhi, open your eyes"

"My love, I'm here, you'll be fine...open your eyes Pleaseeee!!"

He didn't know how much time had gone by but he could feel Akshara's soft hands caress his cheek and her voice filled with concern was pleading him to open his eyes..

"Abhi"

"Abhi, I Love You, I love you, I love you, please open your eyes we need to get out of here.. I can't let anything happen to you, I can't live without you my love.. Ab... Op.."

'She was coughing now.. she was struggling too..

Stupid stupid girl.. why was she in here.. how many times have I told her to not get herself into these situations..

Wait.. She said she loves me.. She LOVES me!'

Something about the silence jolted Abhi out of his foggy brain.. he knew Akshara, his Akshu was losing consciousness now.. the most innate of his protective instincts went into overdrive.. he had to get them out.. and then he could dwell on this massive MASSIVE revelation..



"Akshu, Akshu, wake up, I'll get us out" he said as he parted her cheek.

He pushed himself up and picked her up too, effortlessly. He spotted some blankets around and wrapped themselves in it and looked for another exit.

Thanking the Lord, to whom Akshu always prayed to, he got themselves out of the blaze after spotting another safer way out.

Immediately people surrounded them..

"Oxygen..get us the oxygen cylinders stat" Abhi croaked out the instructions. Right now the doctor had to take over.

" Also get the ambulance ready, the camp doesn't have enough facilities, we need it get back to Birla hospital"

People scrambled around to follow the instructions.

The nurses put Akshara on a gurney and shifted her to the ambulance.. Abhi got in too and fitted an oxygen mask on him after getting one started on his Akshu.

The journey back was long and torturous, now that his mind was clearing and he was able to breathe in some oxygen his faculties returned.. Abhi assesed Akshara with a clinical eye.

She had some first degree burns on her left arm and hands, her dress was burnt in many areas..her beautiful face was soot filled and her luscious hair was singed in multiple places..

'Would I have jumped into the fire for her? Hell yes' came back the immediate response.. "But you shouldn't have taken such a crazy risk Akshu, my dear Akshu" he said caressing her lovely face.

He looked out of the ambulance and saw Neil and Arohi following them close behind on the bike..

"Get us the hospital fast" yelled Abhimanyu again to the driver.

I need her to be well, I have so much to talk, so much to listen and so much love share..

"Akshu... I love you" he softly whispered to her fragile self and wiped the tears from his face as he prayed to see her smile again.




Part 2 will follow soon!

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Part 2


Once at the hospital everything happened quickly.. he gave instructions and handed Akshara over to a female doctor who he knew would handle the crisis well. He then took himself for a quick shower and change of clothes. He had to get some first aid himself and then he would never leave her side.

Abhi did all this as quick as possible since he couldn't wait to see Akshara's progress and he wanted to be there when she came to.

Feeling refreshed and with the knowledge that his world had shifted in that fire with Akshu's heartfelt confession, he walked to her room. The lady doctor gave him a quick handover.

" She is doing well Dr Birla, her saturation is fine, we can take her off the oxygen in a while, her blood test and xray came back normal too. She does have burns and some scrapes. I've started an IV line and also given her some sedative and pain medication - the burns will definitely be painful"


He thanked her as she left.

' the burns will definitely be painful' ofcourse.. he knew that.. with any other patient he would give them the pain meds and move on...now his heart twisted thinking of the gravity of what Akshu had done for him.


He always knew in his heart that she loved him, but her rejection and the request to move on had forced him to put a lid on his feelings and beliefs.


His mind repeated her words of love and for a moment he was scared if he had just hallucinated it in all the fog of his failing alertness.. but he knew it was true..she was right there lying in front of him with burns and bruises proof of the magnitude of love she had displayed for him.


The burns reminded him to take a look at her drug chart.. his colleague had given Akshara only a minimal effective dose of th e pain killer.. he couldn't bear that she would be in pain, so he increased the dose of her meds which were running through her IV line. He bent down to carress her cheek, her hair which he usually pushed away from her face was now oddly shaped due to burning in the fire..


"Uh hermm"

Abhi turned as someone cleared their throat.. it was Kairav walking in.. Abhi addressed him,

" I was just checking in on her, she will be fine soon"

"Thank you for taking care of her and saving her from the fire too, Arohi told me what happened"

" She saved me first" Abhi responded, and it was true, it was not just today. She has been a savior of his soul from the moment he knew he loved her and now that had only strengthened.

Kairav gave a pained nod, and Abhi left him to be with Akshu, he would return later. Being in the same room with Kairav didn't suit him.


Abhimanyu was just turning to next corridor when he remembered that he wanted to take a look at Akshu's reports file. He turned back hoping to quickly nip in and collect the file.

"Why do you always sacrifice yourself for others Akshu? You first scarified your love on the day of Tilak just so that Arohi doesn't breakdown. The other day you selflessly went to prove his innocence in front of medical association, and today you were ready to sacrifice your life for him!" Kairav cried bitterly holding Akshara's hand.

Abhimanyu stood at the threshold of the door, taking this new information in.. filled with mixed emotions.. pride that this woman loves him, sadness that she has to go through this for the sake of her sister, hope that things would now change.

He saw Kairav plant a kiss on her forehead and head out.. Abhi was still rooted at the spot, Kairav didn't say anything and knew that they'd both deserve to be together and left Akshu's room with Abhi there, to update rest of the family.



Abhimanyu took tentative steps back into the room as he heard Akshara stirring slowly in her bed.

Her forehead was creased and she was mumbling.


"Abhi... Abhi" Abhimanyu could now hear her clearly..

"Akshu, I'm right here"

Akshara slowly opened her eyes, and Abhimanyu smiled his eyes moist, glad that she was fine.

"Akshu..."

"Are you okay?"

Yes all thanks to you. But you shouldn't have done that, you scared me! All is well though..we are in the hospital now"

"Ofcourse we- you in the hospital, where else would a doctor be" she giggled..

Abhi thought her answer odd, but continued.." what you did was crazy, never do anything like that again"

"Crazy..I'm crazy in love with you Abhi" she giggled some more.

Abhimanyu looked at her puzzled and then it dawned on him.. he had upped her medication! She was just a bit high!

" Akshu, you went through a fire you should rest now"

The next thing completely surprised Abhimanyu... It was Akshara, imitating him!!

"AKSHU" " your voice is so sexy Abhi"

'sexy' Abhimanyu was baffled.. what was he hearing.. today was quite a remarkable day..he was not complaining though and had a sheepish grin on his face.

" okay..listen.."

"My hair, what happened to my hair?!" Akshu was running her hands through her hair.

" A bit of it got singed in the fire, but its not noticeable, it'll be fine in no time"

" You probably find me very ugly now" she said pouting.. he just wanted to kiss her then, but he knew better " you'll always be beautiful sweetheart, don't ever doubt that".

" Okay but my back is itching now please can you scratch it, I can't recach it"

Akshu was already sitting up, Abhimanyu immediately sat next to her on the bed and let her lean on him and then his eye popped..

All exposed was her glorious back in the damned hospital gown..

" Help na.. Abhi.."

She looked up at him with those mesmerising eyes..lifting her head from his shoulder. She was so close to him, her lips parted and the creamy smoothness of her back just in his reach..

"Stupid hospital gowns"

" What did you say?"

"Uh..ehm.. nothing"

"You are so cute Abhi" she said and planted a kiss on his cheek

Abhi bolted out of his seated position. What was going on.. this was not right.. Akshu in her right mind wouldn't do this.. he had to get out..

" What happened where are you going, I know you wanted to kiss me too"

Abhi knew in that moment..this Akshu on meds was going to be the death of him.. he cleared his throat and said,

"Why don't you go back to sleep, I'll go find the nurse to help you"

'And find myself something to distract me from you' he thought.

" But I always wanted to sleep on your big broad chest" she softly said as she slowly dozed off...



"Crazy crazy woman.. first she doesn't talk and avoids me like the plague and now she does this.. this is what she's been thinking? " That brought a naughty smile on his face and skip to his step as he darted out to find the nurse.

Edited by ArVi-licious - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fantastic TS❤️

Keep writing more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Fantastic TS❤️

Keep writing more


Thank you, I'll surely try to keep writing more 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a beautiful version of the fire episode

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was soo amazing

Please do continue this

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Posted: 3 years ago
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High Akshu was a treat to read! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fantastic ts

Love the intoxicated akshara

Poor abhi 😆

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