A kind of messed up episode

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janvi0513

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Posted: 7 years ago

I found the episode pretty messed up in a lot of things.

1. The scenes kept on shifting from GV to SS very often which got really annoying for me, especially because I was skipping the SS parts and had to be sure not to miss the GV/Kaira parts. Though this was more on a personal level to why I found the episode annoying and messed up.

2. Can the creatives stick to one thing regarding Shubham. He had called himself ghawar earlier and Suvarna's brother also spoke about him having only simple education in the village. I didn't really get whether he stole Karthik's presentation or made a new one but in both cases he needed to understand the deal and you need to do some study on that, you can't learn business and know how to handle an important presentation by magic in a day. I think maybe what Shubham means / meant by him being illiterate was not knowing English. If that's the case then creatives should stop getting him to use that term, (or for that matter anyone else) cause language doesn't really matter, if he knows all stuff (maybe till 10 or 12 grade) it doesn't make him illiterate if he know his work in Hindi rather then English.

3. We got a new yaha waha lines and that tune made me smile so much it was sweetest music my hears have heard. I missed it so much, it seemed like ages I had listened to that tune. Though they had to ruin it by simultaneously showing guests entering and mess the scene up.

4. Goenkas just walking in with the guest. I know it is their own house, but whenever my dad is to bring his friends / colleagues over with him, he calls us to inform us, to let us know that we should tidy up the place a bit more or just know that we will be having people over and be mentally prepared for that. So it was a bit weird to have the Goenkas just enter, but then again different homes, different systems. Just cause in my cause in my house it is like that doesn't mean it should be every where else. So not much but this bit was kind of messed up for me.

I wouldn't say I didn't like the episode, but I wouldn't say I loved it either, but I would say that it was special having those few lightly intimate moments between Kaira, those eyelocks after a really long time with yahan wahan in the background and even though the scene was cut off to show the guest entering which got annoying. It didn't change the fact that those few minutes made the episode special to me, even if it wasn't great.

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 7 years ago

More than messed up , I guess the episode was not edited properly specially when they first shifted from Shubham 's presentation to SS, it was so abrupt that I had to go back and ensure that I haven't fast forwarded the scene by mistake.

I actually like Naksh and Keerthi's story more, so loved seeing them getting good screen space today.

About Shubham. Yes ! You are right . He did mention that he wasnt much educated, to top it he was always shown doing odd jobs such as house help or tourist guide and not office jobs . So him explaining a business level ppt was shocking. More than that it looked like he had done few changes in Karthik 's ppt itself and represented it as Karthik did not suspect the ppt to be his. To do all the changes that too within a few seconds and by not studying the ppt but still able to make it aptly that too without any business knowledge is surprising.

Coming down to guests arriving suddenly, in many houses specially in the rich house , I have seen many times people don't inform prior before getting the guests as house help is there to serve the guests 24*7 and the house is always clean so no worries about anybody dropping in suddenly. Though am not rich but my father himself has dropped in many times with his friends without informing. So it's normal.

What I felt surprising was Naira practicing in the hall, that too with the drapes. Is Goenkas hall so well equipped that you can put the drapes anywhere and start dancing ? Secondly, it was shown previously that Naira has a section in the house which is built only for her dance practice and it was pretty big so then what was the need to dance in the middle of the living room instead of her own dancing studio ?

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janvi0513

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

What I felt surprising was Naira practicing in the hall, that too with the drapes. Is Goenkas hall so well equipped that you can put the drapes anywhere and start dancing ? Secondly, it was shown previously that Naira has a section in the house which is built only for her dance practice and it was pretty big so then what was the need to dance in the middle of the living room instead of her own dancing studio ?

What section are you talking about? Is it the one where Naira was shown dancing in alone when she was upset with Karthik that place wasn't GV, it was the DA, I guess cause, they showed Kaira coming directly outside, in a different place I have not seen around GV. If you are talking about some other thing I can't recollect anything yet.

I wasn't surprised with Naira practicing at home, there was no one and Manish and Dadi's convo out of the house seemed like they had plans to be out for few long hours but it got cancelled. Goenkas are Richie Rich, Naira is a dancer, wouldn't be surprising if their is equipment to help her at GV. So it seemed pretty normal since they were expecting to be alone.

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kairalover22

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hmm so true only loved naira breakdown

N sad yaha waha was a bliss

Keesh scenes since keesh marriage track is messed up only want cvs to come some realistic or don't force us to watch keesh its really annoying n breaks the flow only naitik has a goood track n connect with story in ss n others r pale

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CaptiveFreedom

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Posted: 7 years ago

I think it was poorly edited somehow illogical episode...Shubham's character and his exceptional abilities is beyond reasoning...CVs should better send him to any foreign country for studying and spare us please!...Kaira's dance practice with yahan wahan sad version in their minds and Naira's breakdown were still better among all the scenes...but yes why Naira had to practice in GV main hall...there should be a proper reason for that...as she is already having her dance academy for rehearsals and a separate rehearsal room in GV too...

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Charu

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Posted: 7 years ago

Arre re re papa naitik ki daant ka koi asar nai dikha , abhi 1 episode bhi nai nikla ..

I liked that one scene between kirti and naksh where he made her realize that she should have asked the family members before ordering food only for them..Very well done ..

Rest , kaira can practice dance anywhere but they were not dancing ..He he..If they had to do it in drawing room, at least lock the door ..What impression does it give to servants , they were made to stand out ...Chutti hi kardo

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anu023

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: janvi0513

What section are you talking about? Is it the one where Naira was shown dancing in alone when she was upset with Karthik that place wasn't GV, it was the DA, I guess cause, they showed Kaira coming directly outside, in a different place I have not seen around GV. If you are talking about some other thing I can't recollect anything yet.
I wasn't surprised with Naira practicing at home, there was no one and Manish and Dadi's convo out of the house seemed like they had plans to be out for few long hours but it got cancelled. Goenkas are Richie Rich, Naira is a dancer, wouldn't be surprising if their is equipment to help her at GV. So it seemed pretty normal since they were expecting to be alone.

rich or poor its definitely not normal for someone to.practice dance that too aerial in the hall where people keep coming and going. Khair! My mom doesn't let me practice veena in the hall i always do.it in my room .. It's basic manners to leave living room alone. Anybody can drop in any time. And with notorious kids.and old people around u don't pull.such stunts in the living room

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: janvi0513

What section are you talking about? Is it the one where Naira was shown dancing in alone when she was upset with Karthik that place wasn't GV, it was the DA, I guess cause, they showed Kaira coming directly outside, in a different place I have not seen around GV. If you are talking about some other thing I can't recollect anything yet.
I wasn't surprised with Naira practicing at home, there was no one and Manish and Dadi's convo out of the house seemed like they had plans to be out for few long hours but it got cancelled. Goenkas are Richie Rich, Naira is a dancer, wouldn't be surprising if their is equipment to help her at GV. So it seemed pretty normal since they were expecting to be alone.

Yes ! That very section and if you see that scene again you will realize Karthik was looking for Naira in BB itself and then he went behind GV where the studio must have been built. Obviously it was behind GV as when they erected GB they did not know that they will require a dance studio in their house so when Naira came in , they erected it behind their house.

So when you already have a stuido , it's obviously stupid to practice it in the living room.

Secondly, rich or poor nobody builds rods in their ceilings which is required for aerials. Even a normal dance academy do not contain it and people go to stage for their practice which is equipped for all these things only. So it's stupidity to show Naira doing aerials in the living room of the house.

Only dance - she can practice anywhere when no one is around but aerials obviously not.🤢

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janvi0513

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CaptiveFreedom
I think it was poorly edited somehow illogical episode...Shubham's character and his exceptional abilities is beyond reasoning...CVs should better send him to any foreign country for studying and spare us please!...Kaira's dance practice with yahan wahan sad version in their minds and Naira's breakdown were still better among all the scenes...but yes why Naira had to practice in GV main hall...there should be a proper reason for that...as she is already having her dance academy for rehearsals and a separate rehearsal room in GV too...

I did think about why Naira was dancing in the hall but that could easily be explained by her wanting to let the students rehearse alone at the DA, so they could know that they are doing pretty well on their own or something like that, or it could be that since the republic day is close the place is being decorated and arranged painting or something being down for the event cause of which it can't be used. Also their was pain in Naira's eyes, even when family and guest came in Naira tried to move Karthik away, so I am guessing joru ka ghulam had been rotating on her mind so maybe she just needed to dance to let her emotions out and didn't want to have to travel there. So there are somewhat logical explanation to why she was dancing, I just don't know which one is right.

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