Keesh - Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai - Page 2

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Love this fan fiction. Waiting for the next part

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********************Keesh Part 4**************************

Naksh says I should be Thankful to Dadi becoz she gave me last few important minutes of my life. Take care keerti ji...be happy. Don't let your fears overshadow your Happiness. From this moment all bad in your life will disappear.. Keerti stays stone hearted. Move on in your life keertiji... stay happy... If you get a right person don't hesitate pls do marry him. Meri taraf se aapki ye gift...what more can I give you. He hand over the divorce papers to her. She gets shocked seeing them. You got stuck with this relation. I didn't understand that you didn't like me. I always wanted you to be happy. Ok ok...I don't want to bore you. while he is moving towards the door.. she asks him please marry a girl who is correct for you. He doesn't respond and choose to go but she insists again. He fumes at her for asking to marry again. I already told you that I am not going to marry again. You said you didn't have feelings for me...but you really don't have respect for others feelings. You will never know what I am going through. Anyways its waste talking to you. Good bye keertiji. Outside everybody wait for them. He says Radhe Krishna to everyone and leaves from there.

Everybody thinks to sleep and goes to their room. They all come back by 3AM. They see keerti sitting there alone. They asks her is she fine. Manish comes to her and asks her is she ok. If she doesn't want to leave I will talk to Naksh. You need not go. She doesn't respond or reciprocate. Karthik says keerti pls don't go If you don't want to go. Everybody says the same. Naira comes near keerti and asks her "Di is everything fine between you and Bhai?? All gets stunned with her question. Keerti raises her head with eyes look like red roses and looks in to Naira's eyes. She asks whats happening Di?

Keerti starts saying me and Naksh are parting ways. We are getting separated. Everyone gets hell shocked. What are you talking keerti how did Naksh agree for this? He has no other choice papa. Beta whats happening please tell me clearly. Keerti says I took promise from Naksh to leave me, divorce me. I said to him that I need to move on, I dint love you. I said many other things to him. I Hurt him very badly papa he didn't say anything other than how much he loves me & needs me in his life. Still I asked him divorce. He saw a ray of hope for his life in me. But I pushed him in to Darkness again.

Dadi comes and asks her problem kya hain beta pls bolo. Keerti doesn't cry but talks to them in sad tone. Dadi... main maa kabhee nahin ban sakata hai...I can never become mother. Tears roll down her eyes. Everyone gets shocked. Dadi comes out of that shock and asks when this did happen and how. She explains everything what Aditya had did to her. Karthik, Manish gets angry. Keerti says Naksh didn't agree with me. He was not ready to leave me. He clearly said that he don't need kids and he only need me. But I couldn't agree with him. Dadi you tell me what Singanias think if their legacy ends with Naksh. How faithful is it with them?. Manish & suvarna tries to pacify her and says beta... we understand but there are many other ways to become mother this days. No maa...meri wajah se Naksh ka life is turning in to hell. Only becoz of my fear I am always ruining his happiness. Aditya tried to kill Naksh...everybody gets shocked again. Aditya n Naksh had fight for 3 time after our marriage. Naksh doesn't want a scene to be created so that you all get panic... so I couldn't convey it. Naksh's life turned in to hell. Which I didn't want to happen I want to see him happy papa. Keerti doesn't cry but she is in such a state that she is a person with mind & body but no soul and heart with her. Everyone cry for keerti...they get angry on Aditya...seeing keerti's condition they feel sad. karthik is inconsolable seeing keerti in that state. Dadi cries seeing Keerti. Suvarna and naira hugs her. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga Keerti di. Hum sab hain aapke saath. Di...if u stay with bhai or stay away from bhai singania parivaar ka legacy will end. Becoz he loves you so much. Whenever I call him he always speaks about you. He notices every minute thing of yours and talk with me about it. He is mad like me& Karthik for you. He can never think of any other women in his life Keerti di. Your fear on one person should not kill your love on other person. If bhai gets to know that you fear for Aditya is more rather than your love for him. Tell me how bad he would feel. Since he is my bhai I am not saying this. Any guy would feel the same way. Please don't take wrong decision di...

In between Naira's phone rings with Naksh's number. Then she says keerti di Bhai is calling... Keerti sighs to lift the call. They hear a voice saying Hi Naira and keerti...and entire Goenka kandhaan. "Aditya ...Naira utters...

Exactly Naira...how could you guess my voice. I have been going through a bad phase how would I let you people stay happy. Karthik and manish gets angry. I was waiting for such a chance from many days. By which I can never see keerti and you happy. They gets tensed its Naksh phone Aditya is talking is naksh with him.? Again you are right Naira. He is in my hands. It seems his wife took vachan from him that not to get in to any fight with Aditya that's why he is not fighting and getting beaten by me. Goons beat Naksh like anything. He is bleeding. Keerti and Naira shouts naksh... bhai and asks Aditya pls don't do anything to him. You wanted to punish us right pls punish us. Aditya then says that how can you both get hurt at a time. Either I have to pick Karthik or Naksh. My luck favoured me I got Naksh. I will kill him infront of your eyes. Then only, my rage will get satisfied. Keerti begs Aditya pls usse chodhooo...Goons beat Naksh infront of Keerti. Keerti gets scared and cries holding hands pls leave him...Naira too cries. Keerti utters naksh's name. Karthik calls police station and tries to track the call.

Police does tracking and get to know that place. Aditya says If anyone tries to inform police I will kill him. Even if you dont inform I will kill him.saying this He laughs cruelly and takes the knife out and stabs Naksh. Naira and Keerti goes speechless. He stabs again and throws him down he drops the phone and leave from there. They all start to that place. Karthik speeds up the car he is the most pained one now as he cant see his sister and wife crying vigorously for Naksh. They reach the place and search for Naksh. He is completely unconscious. Aditya hides him behind trees. So that no one can see him. They all search for him desperately.

Keerti & naira shout Naksh's name...repeatedly she says don't break me,,,please saamne aajao...she sees his watch and goes through that way... she finally finds him and takes him in to her lap. And cries like anything by hugging him. Pls open your eyes naksh. I can't live without you. She takes him near to her heart...Chachu and karthik goes to get cars. They take Naksh to hospital. Naira and keerti cry vigorously and uncontrollable. Doctor checks him and says his pulse rate completely dropped. We will try our level best. Doctors does the operation and says we can't say anything as he is not responding to the treatment. He is young but still not responding. Internal bleed of injuries is not controlled. We will leave it to god. Keerti goes to see him and says I need you Naksh multiple times. Without you there is no life for me I understood that just now. After I realize please don't leave me and go. If you want to go take me too along with you. Blood comes out of his mouth. They all get worried and calls doctor.

Doctor verifies and comes out saying someone pls stay with him. Try your level best to bring him out of that trauma this is the last chance. Keerti sits beside him and talks to him saying that all my fears till now are very little in front of losing you Naksh. Pls come back we will live happily. Don't leave me alone in this big world. I can't live without you. You are my ray of hope. Naksh I promise I will overcome all my fears if you open your eyes. Everybody hears her words and feels sad and prays for naksh to open his eyes. Naira & Keerti looks so sad. Manish comes and puts his hands on Keerti...she then says papa I will leave all my fears pls ask him to open his eyes.

Karthik consoles naira. After sometime doctor comes and checks he started responding need not worry. He reveals the same to all. Everybody feels relaxed. Dadi says we should inform Naitik and all. Naira says no they went for puja because of their pooja only bhai and keerti di are falling out of dangers. Let us not disturb their prayers and take care of bhai here. Dadi and suvarna feels like naira said true and pray for Naksh health. After sometime Naksh opens his eyes. He see keerti is with him holding his hands. he takes away his hand from her... she feels bad for he taking away his hand but was delighted that he was back to conscious.

He says am so sorry because of me your journey was missed. Keerti feels bad. He searches for everyone. Naira karthik, manish everybody goes inside and see him. Keerti hides behind Naira and looks at Naksh. His eyes turns towards her. But she is not willing to come infront of him because of guilt. Naira goes near him and catches his hand and says bhai you scared me bhai and cries. He puts his hand on her and says am ok lady detective. She smiles and everybody too. He looks at keerti again. slowly gets in to sleep becoz of those seductions. Everybody leave from the room. Keerti comes to Manish and asks him papa Aditya ko math chodo...karthik I want him to be arrested and jailed at least for 10 to 15 years. The geonka gents trio gets a boost by seeing keerthi so confident and leaves from there by tightening the security at hospital. Suddenly there comes a Nurse who see keerti. Mam mam behind her.,Mam that day in hospital our doctor was blackmailed by someone to say those fake reports that you can never become mother. All suvarna dadi chachi naira come there and listen to her carefully what happened that day. There happiness turns by leaps and bounds hearing that keerti is absolutely fine.

Keerti goes near Naksh who was sleeping and not conscious, kisses him. I promise we will never ever get separated. I will take complete care of you life long. Then naksh takes her name in sleep saying Keertiji. Keerti responds mein aapke pass hoon Naksh. I am so sorry for hurting you.

Three the Goenkas search for Aditya with police help. They trace him out. Karthik manish and akilesh beats him to death and feels like killing him for what he did with keerti. Police comes and arrests Aditya and they take him to mobile court with video footage evidence of trying to kill a person by torturing him and ill-treating women. He gets punishment for 10years. (mobile court I wish to see in india J)

They will be back to hospital they get the good news and naksh is also recovering. Manish hugs keerti and says am extremely happy. We all will ask naksh to forgive you on your behalf. She says no papa I myself wanted to face everything. Because I had hurt him. Naira feels happy with keerti di's words. And says you are correct di. We don't know how will he react. You only can pacify him & you only can bear him. If we come in between its not correct. Wife & husband only should resolve their issues. Manish says He should not accept your apology because of our pressure. Keerti agrees and says I wanted to sort everything on my own.

Awesome again.. full fidaa...now your writings have become aadat 😊 please update the next too

Really love this its amazing how you write it I can literally imagine it as I'm reading it that much depth in the writing.

last 2 updates were surpbe.. like the way how you write it.. do plez continie it soon..

Awesome you made me cry dear

Thank you so much guys...overwhelmed with your responses. 😊 will update part 5 in 1 or 2 hours...

Dude eagerly waiting for your next update... Please post sooon😊