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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _nakshi_

sorryfor late comments...

it was good part..
but wer ur creativitygone????
use more creativity in naksh scenes...
dis one is also good iloved the ehsaas nd dream wali sequence..
nk hanging to pillar nd ak in dilemma was😆
hmmm nk became romantic hmmm...
do update more of naksh scenes cute wali ... :)


Sryyy ..i was waiting for longgg ..
Der se aai durusat aai..thankuuu so much for liking nd ur khathi mithi comment 😊 ..oo u want more romance between them 😲 ..
Def i will try my best in next part sure 😃 ..u laughed nd passed smile na yeh mera maksad tha thoda hasi aaye so i wrote like this..
I will try my best in next part... 😃
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So...hlooo frds...i m here with my new story but but it willbe so short story of mine till now.. 😃 ...forget everything just imagine to naksh..we loved from them so much so only feel d love in loveland...
Wat is love sath jina ya sath marna...par hum jisse bhi pyar kare chahe frds ho ya bhai behen ya mom...every realtion hamare heart mai live karta hai...like that for someone if we loved from someone that means woh sirf hamme jinda rehta hai..woh person 😊 ...like that one boy nk...who was standing in his house...smiling nd singing d song..
He was in yellow shirt simply just like pic u can see in beginning. ..specks. ..
woh ladki bhut yad aati hai woh ladki bhut yad aati hai.khabhi mujhko sataye khabhi mujhko hasaye mujhe kitna satati hai .woh ladki bhut yad aati hai...
Five years back:::::::-------- 😲 ...
One boy was sat on stairs outside like that in pic ..red t-shirt. .passing smiles. ...he was singing song infront of all students of clg...yes in clg he was a clg boy...

ilu ilu ilu ilu.. (students yeh ilu ilu kya hai yeh ilu ilu).jab bhag mai koi ful kile toh bhawaro ne kaha ilu ilu ilu ilu...parwat pe chai khali ghata toh fulo ne kaha ilu ilu ilu ilu...jab koi aacha lagta haiii bada pyara pyara lagta hai.
He was giving compliments from eyes..teasing to her playing with her eyes infront of all...nd that girl was smiled nd sat in chair in audience.she was looking up to nk from side nd saying from lips .from eyes from eyes waaw so nice voice nd making face ...
Now nk stood nd coming close of ak. .she was shocked y he is coming. ..
ilu ilu .ilu ka matlb I L U..i love u i love u nd sat in his knees infront of ak.nd gave flower to her.i love u nd smile.ak grabbed her lips with teeth.didn't take.
Nk-dunga sath har dam..ek bar in fulo si chehek toh jao..
Apna hai woh har pal fulo jaise mehek toh jao..
Ek tu toh meri jindagi hai jo mujhme basi hai..
Pyar se pyar hua ekrar se ekrar hua tune dekha muskura ke toh mujhe tumse khudse jayada pyar hua...
Everyone were clapping. ..girls r flat on him...he was giving isara to take flower..she smile nd took d flower... 😊 ..thankuu...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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ilu ilu yeh ilu ilu kya hai yeh ilu.jab bhag mai koi ful kiya toh bhawaro ne kaha ilu ilu.jab koi aacha lagta hai bada pyara pyara lagta hai toh dil ne kaha ilu ilu.. (ak was singing in garden).ilu ka matlb ILU..i love u nd turn nd ssees that nk was just behind of her...oo.nk-smile-i love u..
Ak-huh i dont love u..
Nk-but i love u nd smile...nd gave flower rose..
Ak-haa shocking expression. ..than smile..i love u too ..nd dey hugged to each other..
Ak-sab janti hu tujhe aur tere pyar ko..
Nk-aacha kya janti hai..
Ak-woh jo black dress mai tere piche khadi thi na usne tujhe poem likhai thi aur bada gur ke dekh rahi thi tujhe..
Nk-kiski bat kar rahi ..both were in hugging position. .
Ak-aacha jaise notice hi nahi kiya..
Nk-mera pyar mera jaha toh tu hi hai mai toh sabko dekhta hu aur bhool jata hu tujhe hi notice karta hu pyar karta hu..u know that..
Ak-aacha badi batiee lag gaya hai..mere cute se writer ji pulling his cheeks. ..baithte hai na..
Dey were on floor nk was laied on floor nd ak was resting on his chest like in pic..
Ak-sabke samne kyo flower diya sab kya sochege..
Nk-yahi ki dono mai kitna pyar hai hame bhi essa hi pyar mile..
Ak-par esse sabke samne nahi show kiya karo najar lag gai toh..
Nk-duniya toh jalti hi hai jalne do...u know na mai bachpan se tujhse pyar karta hu...aur..
Ak-haa hamare bauji dost the aur mere bauji ke jane ke bad tere bauji ne mere dadu ki bhut help ki hai..
Nk-thabhi toh tere dadu mujhe itna pasand karte hai..
Ak-ja ja mai teri itni tarif karti hu thabhi..aacha aunty ke knees ka dard kaisa hai..
Nk-better much better...tune woh oil di thi na bhut trarif kar rahi maa..
Ak-mai huhi tarif ke kabil..aacha kal rat ko tu kaha tha phone kyo nahi uthaya tune..kahi phir se pen copy leke likhna toh nahi start kiya tha..
Nk-amm nahi..bas kuch personal work kar raha tha..
Ak-wat from anger she sat on floor..kya personal work woh bhi mujhse chupa ke..
Nk-are baba woh ladko ke liye hai sirf nd gigling...
Ak-bata toh warna aacha nahi hoga ..
Nk-offo movie dekh raha tha..
Ak-konsi like detective. ..mujhe bhi bata deta hum sath mai dekh lete na.
Nk-resha ki jawani nd laugh. .kaise dikhata tu marti mujhe..
Ak-kya chii yeh kaisa nam hai bakwas nam se hi buri lag rahi..
Nk-but it was waah..bhut maja aaya yeh us tipe ki movie thi.
Ak-chii..hitting on his chest...tu phir bakwas kar raha chodugi nahi tujhe...tere pass uske like time tha aur mujhe bhool gaya..hitting nd made sad face. ..
Nk-are baba mai drama kar raha tha chod mujhe chuhi...mai likh raha tha aur nind aa gai subah dekha tu nahi thi clg mai aa gai thi..
Ak-stop..sach made puppy face..
Nk-mooch...mai tujhe nahi bhool sakta khabhi bhi hug from back..ab dekh mujhe tujhe tease karne mai bhut maja aata hai ..
Ak-thabhi esse mamle mai karta hai ab last year hai na..phir hamari shadi ho jayegi par tujhe mera hath manga padega..
Nk-tu toh meri hai hi...par thodi boring hai..
Ak-aacha hat piche..kya nahi sunti hu
Nk-dekh woh samne woh ladka ladki kaise khoye hue hai..def woh ladka us girl ko kiss karega.
Ak-ladki sarma ke bhag jayegi...mujhe pata hai girls sarmati hai..
Nk-but time changed dey will kiss to each. .
Ak-nahi ..
Nk-haa..
Ak-nahi..
Nk-haa ..dekhte hai...naksh were seeing nd dey starts kissing to each...nk was laughing nd ak made face..dekha i m always right..
Ak-hihi..mai thodi sa socho mai kitni alg hu yeh sari girls..nd sees to nk..kya dekh rahe ho..
Nk-woh jo kar nahi pata dekh toh lu..sshh..
Ak-eewww...covered his face with her hand..saram karo kuch..chii mai ja rHi mujhe bhool gye aur tease...she stood nd nk following to her..
Nk-are ruk i was just kidding. ..
Ak-mujhe laga tum sochoge mai kuch alg hu..stop par nk mai chahti hu hamare rishte mai shadi ke bad kuch toh naya ho jo hame mehsus ho...
Nk-i know u r different my love..ak sees with big smile...mai janta hu tumhare nature ko apne pyar ko bhi..coupped his hand on her face..jo mere liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai..aur tumhe majbur bhi kar sakta hai mere pass aane ko..par woh hak toh thabhi hoga na jab tum meri biwi rahogi...smile..aur aaj tum utni si alg aur saf rahogi jab tak meri nahi ho jati...
Ak-aur iske liye tumhe mere dadu se bat karni hogi..mera hath mangna hoga..
Nk-hug to her..tum toh meri hohi...hena hum ek dusare ke liye bane hai aur esse hi sath rahege..
Ak-haa thabhi toh mai tumhare liye besan ke laddu lai hu..
Nk-wat..waaw great...thanku dena mujhe kaha hai mere fav tune banaye..
Ak-hmm ruk beg mai hai..opened it nd gave to nk..dekh first time try kiye hai kuch gadbad ho toh natak mat karna..
Nk-ok...ate ..hmm thik hai but mere jaise nahi bane..
Ak-mana tu aacha cook hai but thodi tarif toh kar sakta hai na...par nhi..shadi ke bad tu hi bana lena...
Nk-hmm..par tu moti ho gai toh ..turn wise karege..
Ak-toh tu ghar ke har work mai meri help karega..
Nk-laugh rehne de phir toh teri dresses bauji ki cupboard mai aur meri maa ke mai.
Ak-datt...
Nk-aur bhi bauji tujhe teri nightgown denge socho sasur dega bahu ki nighty nd laugh..lol..
Ak-ohoo..tu pura pagal hai munna..
Nk-nhi chuhi..munna mat bol..
Ak-ewww...bakwas...mai kal clg nhi aaugi ..so mujhe teri class end hone ke bad milna bye bolne ko..exam aa rahe ghar pe padai karugi.
Nnk-pehle kyo nhi batati ab tera time ho gya class ka uff..koi help leni hogi toh batana..
Ak-ok..chale..she walked but nk holds her hand..nd aks duppata aired on nks face she skipped duppata from his face. .
Nk-ek...he kissed on her face...bhut sundar lag rahi is dress mai..
Ak-blush..nd hug to nk..class last year hai nikalna nhi chahti nd runned...
Nk-meri chuhiya... 😳 ..
Pyar toh pyar hai ek ehsas hai..aur isme ak nk bilkul kho chuke the..woh pyar nhi karte the woh duniya the ek dusare ki...
Next day ak was in her room...
Ak-bhut pad li yr ab balcony mai jati hu..she went in balcony nd nk just come infront of her...she shout aa..pagal ho kya esse koi darata hai kya..
Nk-surprise de raha...
Ak-door se aa jate ..
Nk-pyar karne walo ko kisi ki chinta nahi woh toh jaha se chahe aa jate hai ..
Ak-uff thank god dadu nhi hai...
Nk-toh kya hota hote bhi toh ...tere bina clg mai aacha nhi laga so aa gaya...ab tu pad li na chal room mai..dey leave for room...nd she placed on bed nk hugged to her nd gave one gift..
Ak-waaw kya hai ..
Nk-kol...she opened d box nd sees a card ..maine decorate kiya. ..
Ak-waaw...nice...thanku..she opened d card..
har pal ek pyar ka momsam hai .tera jaisa dekha nahi koi .har.par ko yeh aahat hai koi mere ghar aaye pyar se usse mehkaye.jindagi meri banye.jisse pyar kiya hai bachpan se woh mere dil ki rani hai.bas woh jaldi se mere pass aaye is dilko yahi bat batani hai...
She had tears on her eyes. ..thankuu...tu bhut writer banega meri wish tere sath hai.
Nk-wish nhi tu sath chahiye..
Ak-toh huna sath...itni pyari pyari poem likhega toh mai toh har hi jaugi tere pyar ke samne..
Nk-are yeh hamari pic..took it..dekh tere bdy ki hai na..
Ak-haa...aur tu mere liye ittni sari poem laya likh ke..par plz studies mai dhayan de..mai chahti hu tu ek aachi si story likhe..aur mai sath rahu ya nhi par tu hamesha esse hi pyar bhari bat likhte rehna..
Nk-he stood ..mai chala jata hu bolde natak mat kar.
Ak-sry...mai rahugi na tere brain khaugi...nd hug to him...from back...looing at to him..gussa ho gaye.
Mere pyar mere dil ke rajkumar meri si bat samjho.
Mere dil mai ho tum aur sath mera do..mujhe nhi aati teri jaise potery na..
Nk-laugh...ekdom bakwas thi...
Ak-ek din likhugi dekh lena ekdom emotional wali..
Nk-aacha...aur mai likuga hamari kahani..ki ek chuhiya thi..woh mujhe bhut tang karti thi..
Ak-aacha bandar munna munna ...mere karan teri story ban jayegi mai start karaugi..
Nk-aacha tu karayegi..
Ak-haa bol na karaugi na..tiking to him.bol na.
Nk-laughing haa..pagal..haa..chuhi...
Ak-uuu...nd running here nd der...nk catch to her..
Nk-kaha tak bhagegi aur ab tak...tujhe pata hai na har rase me mai hi first aata hu..
Ak-ek din tujhse bhut aage nikal jaugi mai dekh lena..tu royega phir ewew..
Nk-aacha ji...he coming near of ak..her hair was following on air. ..itni sundar lagogi toh mai ghar kaise jauga..ha..meri maa bolegi maa ka ladla bigad gaya..
Ak-par unka ladla unki ladli ke pass hi toh hai..
Nk-itna pyar kaise hai tere andar..i love u...grabbed her tummy nd kissed on her cheeks. ..
Ak-batiee banana aur romance karna koi tujhse sikhe...she too kissed on his cheeks. .i know hum ek hi hai..
Nk-aa baithte hai..dey sat in hull in corner. ..
Kitne sal ho gye na hame is relationship mai..jab tu choti si thi..
Ak-aur mai tujhe mili ..bauji ne tere ghar pe mujhe choda aur tune help ki meri..
Nk-tumhe yad hai hamara i love u bolna..woh movie jo hum dekhne gaye the..jisme dono frd the bahar nikle toh do din mujhse bat nhi ki..
Ak-kya karti hum school mai the mai kitna dar gai thi...put her head on his shoulder.
Nk-haa phir mai aaya aur tujhe kitna data aur bol diya full nd final that i love u..
Ak-haa toh maine hi pucha tha na ki kyo tu aaya hai..phir yad kar jab hum clg mai the tune mujhe hug kiya tha first time...
Nk-tera face ekdom red..kaise bhag ggai thi na..aur aaj hum itne pass hai sees in her eyes..
Ak-aur pass honge na..
Nk-hmm..ab yeh duri aur bardast nhi hoti yr..nd hug to her...than shorya shout ak..are dadu mai jau..
Ak-nhi dadu tere liye puch rahe the aa..
Nk-fine. ..now dey came in hull..shorya sees to nk..
Sh-are nk tum..
Nk-haa woh ak ki help karne aana tha studiess mai nd hit to her hand ..ak made face.
Sh-help...than varsa came..she works with shorya so came for business work..
Ak-are varsa ji aap..
Va-kaise ho dono..
Ak-hum toh aache hai ...aap dadu meri frd aai hai..tease to him..
Sh-dekh liya na...
Nk-haa dadu aache se dekho tease to him..
Va-nk tumne dekh liya ak ko pada liya..nd laugh..
Sh-yeh sab kya ho raha...nk mujhe is project mai tumhari help chahiye. .
Nk-sure dadu mai study karuga nd pakka karuga abhi thoda late..
S-hmm..thik hai phir aana..
Nk-ji..he was going nd ak sees to him..
Sh-apne best frd ko chodogi nhi bahar tak..
Ak-love u dadu...nd naksh leave outside. .
Va-kitni badi ho gai na ak..
Sh-thanks to u...bhut help ki apne usse samjhane mai..
Va-toh nk ak ki shadi..u know dey loves each.
Sh-haa i know bas dono studies complete kar le aur nk ek aacha writer ban jaye ..phir mai khud uncle se ak ke liye bat karuga..
Va-woh ak ko pasand toh karte hi hai..bhagwan in dono ki khusi esse hi banaye rakhe.
Sh-yeh hasti hai toh mai kilkilata hu...
Va-thought tum kilkilate ho toh mai...
Here outside ak said bye to nk..
Ak-bye...
Nk-chutti do din ki uff..
Ak-laugh..aacha hai na mera gast aa raha parso..
Nk-teej..mat rakh plz..tu bhuki rahegi mai wait karuga..
Ak-rakhugi bas aur dadu bhi bahar ja rahe parso..uu..mai rakhugi bas..
Nk-ruk toh but she went...pagal hai yeh..phir bhuki ...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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After one day teej day...nk was in his house ..he was making burger for him..nd went in balcony. ..he was working in laptop..than gy3 came..
Nk-are munna aaj aap itni sajhi hui kyo ho..
Gy-pagla bhool gya aaj teej hai. ..din bhar se kam kar raha..he was eating burgor..
Nk-oo shit ..thanku maa nd kissed on her cheeks. .mai toh bilkul bhool gaya tha..ak..
Gy-kaha hai woh aajkal aati hi nahi hai bilkul..but nk running.
Nk-puch ke batatu hu...bye now..
Gy-pagal..bhut ek bar ak aa jaye isse samal aur aur is ghar ko bhi mai toh nistinant ho jaugi phir..
Nk went in aks house he was holding burger in hand .but ak was waiting to him in table so he hide it.
ak-aa gaya tu ab kachar kachar kha le na chupa kyo raha hai.
Nk-nhi..sat besides her ..mai kaha..
Ak-dikh raha..le..
Nk-yr kya tum bhuki rehti ho..le kha lo..gave burger to her..lena kyo bhuka rehti hai mere liye..
Ak-teri umar ke liye aur harama ki bhi..
Nk-woh kha ke pi ke bhi bad jayegi na..bhooka nhi reh sakta mai..shadi ke bad rakhuga mai thik hai..
Ak-aur mai rest karugi pura badla lungi dekh lena..now mai taiyar hoke aati hu..chand dikhne wala hai..
Nk-are esse hi thik hai na...
Ak-uff ab pyar aur tyohar dono ko special banna hamare hath mai hai.yeh burgor mere liye rakhana ok..mai aati hu...aur teri dress bhi guest room mai rakhi hai mai esse tujhe nahi manne dungi teej..
Than ak got ready nd she was wearing jewellery than nk sees to her nd stood behind of her. .
Nk-smile bhut sundar lag rahi hai tu..
Ak-tu bhi...abhi bas nath pehen lu..she wore all ..nd stood infront of
Nk...
Nk-waah ekdom cute si doll tipe lag rahi...esse lag raha hai jaise jaldi se shadi kara do..
Ak-woh bhi ho jayegi sahab itni jaldi kya hai nd laugh chalo balcony mai dekhte hai sari preparation ho gai hai...chale..she held his hand nd leave..
Nk-oo god yeh moon nikal nhi raha...lo kha lo kya fast karna...
Ak-bhudhu ram...bas thoda sa wait..
Nk-dekh lena mai shadi ke bad rakhne nhi dunga yeh fast..
Ak-haa ..mai hi rakhugi i know bhukad hai tu ...nd tu kha lega..
Nk-haa toh yeh fast wast mujhse nhi hota..bas i know hum sath hai..chand chal jaldi se kar apna pooja..
Ak-ok...she took channi nd diya ...nd throwed diya behind nd took aarti of nk...he was giving kisses to her...than she saw to moon from channi but nk too join to her..
Nk-waaw chand si chandni ho tum mere khawab ki rani ho tum.
Ak-smile now kuch kilao bhut bhook lagi hai..he drinking water to her nd she also...now nk ate burgur to her..
Nk-aa chal kha le..dekh maine yahi table pe tere liye food rakha hai..dey sat on chair. ..nk was having dinner to her..
Ak-hmm..it is nice. .ab mujhe teb nhi leni hogi..
Nk-wat teb..
Ak-u know na harmonics ki teb...
Nk-tu abhi bhi sudhari na woh teb lena band kar de..khabhi kisi ki khabhi kisi ki sodeeffect hogya toh..
Ak-kuch nhi hoga...woh dekh aaj mai wish manugi ..she closed her eyes. .bhagwan ji hum rahe ya nahi par mere pyar ko lambi umar dena .aur mere pyar ko bhi ..
Nk-tu kehna kya chahti hai..
Ak-yahi ki pyar karna aasan hota hai par usse nibhana utna hi muskil .aur agar kisi ka ansh nhi bhi hoto bhi hamare upar hai us pyar ko jinda rakhna..hena..
Nk-khabhi teri bat mere sar se par ho jati hai ..pyar ka nam toh sapne dekhna hai na like woh dekho...both were seeing their future infront of eachs eyes...
Hamari bhi barat aayegi jisme mai nhi hum pure seher mai gumege hena...she passes smile..
Ak-waaw..sees in his eyes...
Their dreams was infront of der like this pic...
Nk-hum mandap mai hai..tu mujhe sarma ke dekh rahi aur mai tujhe naughtyness ke sath..
Ak-datt...blush...aur dhree dherre hamari shadi ho rahi hena...tune meri mang bhar di aur hum ek ho gaye nk..
Nk-nahi abhi toh suruwat hui..tu ussi room mai hai jaha na jane kitni bar gai hai par yeh feeling thodi toh alg hai hena...sab chale gye...aur..
Ak-plzz...her heart beat getting increased. ..nk took to her in his hand..
Nk-in dreams...ab kyo sarma rahi ab toh hum ek hai na ak..
Ak-abhi toh aur saram aa rahi..chodna ...but he put to her on bed nd she covered her face with duppata..
Nk-hu bhai ab toh meri bride ho ..gungat ki diwar toh hogi hi na...he opens d gungat nd she blushed so much...ak aaj toh nahi rokogi na..
Ak-maine tujhe roka hi kab hai...than he come near of her. .nk light ..
N-sshh...ab toh banana mmat bana tu...come near nd kissed on her cheeks. .she closed d eyes nd felt it..
Ak-i love u too..
In reality. .
Ak-bas na..blush aur aage mat bol..
Nk-are abhi toh puri rat bhaki hai itne mai saram aa gai tujhe..sshh see dont worry thoda sa tang karuga phir...
Ak-kya...
In dream..
A-bas..chodna..
Nk-jabse yahi bol rahi fine...he hug to her...ab bata u r hpy na..
Ak-ladki ki dilki bat uski aankhe hai mirror ki tarah saf..
Nk-aacha phir toh u want ..
Ak-kya..laugh..
Nk-amm amm...u want...nd kissed on her forehead. .nd covered to both with blanket.
In reality. .
Ak was hitting on his chest..
Ak-badmash...sapne mai bhi badmasi haa uuu...
Nk-are chinta mat kar ..tu konsi kam hai dekh mai tujhe bol raha rukne ko par tu jid kar rahi jane ko..
Ak-thats better for u..
In dream..
Ak-offoo...kam hai kitchen mai.
Nk-pehle din boring mat ho plzz ek kiss..
Ak-ok but ek haa...
Nk-fine...she gave kiss on his cheeks. .thanku ek aur.
Ak-are nhi..abhi toh di na..nooo...suddenly she falls on floor nd nk also..uff mere sath tu kyo gira..
He forcefully kissed to her..
Nk-is liye...nd laugh..
In reality. .
Ak-itna tang mat karna warna mai dadu ke pass aa jaugi..
Nk-itna hak toh banta hai mera..tang toh hamara baby karega see...
In dreams...ak gave birth to baby..both naksh r so hpy..
Nk-with terry eyes...aaj toh sare sapne pure kar diye tune...nd kissed on her forehead. .thanku itne pyare ful ke liye..
Ak-she was crying thanxx to u ...love u..
In reality. .
Both were crying. .
Ak-hamara sapna pura hoga na nk..
Nk-hold her hand haa...sits to her on his lap...tu meri life hai jissne mujhe jina sikhaya hai ak...moves his finger on her face. .
Ak-aur tunemujhe pyar karna sikhaya hai. .ehsas jo tere chunne se milta hai mujhe har pal...
Nk-mai toh tujhe dekh ke jita hu..
Ak-aur mai teri aankho mai teri baho mai mar bhi sakti..
Nk put hand on her mouth..
Nk-maruga datuga essa bola toh..datt...hug to her on chest..
Ak-esse hi pyar karega sath dena mera hamesha...thanki esse si smile karu..
Nk-promise kyoki tu smile karegi toh mai toh double smile karuga na...nd touched his face from her face..
Love u..
Ak-love u tooo...
Pyar mai log kho toh jate hai..nk ak bhi kho gaye but kya hamesha wahi hota hai jo hum sochte hai ..
Now after aks exam...her holiday nd she was feeling that now her dreams comes true..but no life can change anytime for anyone. ..he was walking in road put some thing...suddenly she felt like chakar...but one uncle hold her hand. ..
Un-samal ke beta..
Ak-pata nhi kuch din se..i m fine uncle thanku. .he went..lagta hai woh chakkar wali teb le leti hu..vomit ki bhi li thi ..uff...now she went in room nd took teb...suddenly he felt like vomit nd went in bathroom. .
Ak-she was vomiting. ..she feared to sees blood..
Yeh blood kyo..dadu dadu...she shouted nd went in hull...nd told everything. .he took to her in hospital. .
She was on bed..
Ak-kya dadu ...khane ka hua hoga esse rotu mat baniye..
Sh-dar toh lagta hai na..
Ak-mere darpok bhaiya..than doctors came ..dekhiye doctor. .
Do-mr maheswari dont worry hamne ak ka check up kar liya hai sam tak report aa jayegi tab actual bat pata chal jayegi aap ghar ja sakte hai..
Ak-dekha dadu kuch nhi hua par aap chale..
Sh-hope yahi ho..aa..dey returned house...ak was in her room...she was seeing albums here shorya was in hull...suddenly he got a call...
Sh-hlooo...kya...he skipped d phone nd starts crying. .
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Ak came nd sees to shorya..
Ak-dadu..kya hua...aap ro kyo rahe...
Sh-ak woh...stop crying...woh mai project mai work kiya na toh woh deal nahi hui..
Ak-kya bas itni si bat...shorya hug to ak..
Sh-meri behen tu mere sath hamesha rahegi na..tujhe koi dikkat toh nahi..
Ak-aap essa kyo bol rahe dadu...i m fine..nd fit bhi hu..aap toh mere bauji hai..pulled his cheeks mere cute se dadu..apni beti jaise pala hai mujhe..esse choti si bat mai rote hai kya...
Sh-haa nhi rote chal na aaj teri fav ggolgape khate hai pata nhi ab..
Ak-kya..
Sh-kuch nahi chal..dey went for outing but suddenly shorya behaviour changed towards ak..he made tea nd gave to her spend time with her..ak noticed..but didnt ask..one day varsha came in house nd shorya was thinking. .he sat in sofa ...der was so many darkness. .
Va-are shorya itna aandhera kyo hai yaha...
Sh-ab toh aandhere mai hi jina hai mujhe..she came near of shorya nd switched on power..
V-itne sal se work kar rahi tumhare sath...esse sad aankhe ekdom lal aandera kya bat hai mujhe nhi bataoge..u can share with me..esse toh gut jaoge andar hi andar..he starts crying. .
Sh-varsa meri sabse kimti chiz jane wali hai bhut dur hamesha ke liye..
Va-kon..ak...kimti toh wahi hai na..
Sh-haa u know hum doctor ke pass gaye the woh report mai aaya hai ki woh ussko blood cancer hai aur woh ab sirf do tin month bas..nd hug to her..varsha was shocked nd she also starts crying. .badly..
Va-hum usse aboard le jayege pura ilaj karayege..hum usse aaj hi..tumne usse..
Sh-nahi ..kaise usse jite ji mar du mai...last stage maine kai doctor ko uski report show ki requst ki mai aau but video chat ki..par no need meri behen ke pass toh life hi nahi bachi...usse kuch ho isse pehle mai mar jauga varsa..
Va-nahi shorya. .plzz essa mat bolo..suddenly dey sees ak listens der conversation. ..she has so many qu in her eyes..she didnt cry...she was slightly going in her room..
Shorya was following to her..
Sh-ak kuch bol meri bat toh sun plzzz. ..beta ruk ja..but she leave in her room nd sat on bed...
He sat on floor nd hold her hand..
Sh-dekh mai tere sath hu ha..tu chinta mat kar ..kuch nahi hua..i was just jocking...nd laugh...pagali esse muh banake baithi hai ...sshh..ee kuch toh bol ..meri pyari si sis ko chup rehna bhi aata hai..
Ak-thabhi aap meri itni care kar rahe the dadu ..plz..leave his hand..jaiye shout...mai akle rahugi jaiye yaha se plzz..go...goo..gooo...
Shorya leave from her room but he sat outside in corner.
Ak-haww...mai..mujhe...she put her hand on her ears..nahi...jhoot hai sab jhoot hai...she throwed pillows. Aaa...she cried...kyooo...bhagwan...badly crying. .aaa..kyo hua mere sath...mujhe nahi marna bhagwan ji plzz mujhe jina hai...mat maro mujhe ..suddenly she felt vomit nd start vomiting so much of blood ...shorya nd varsa went in bathroom. Nd ak falls on shorya arms.
Sh-ak...ak...he took to her hospital. ..now ak was on bed..
Kaisi hai beta. .thik hai na...
Ak-aap ro lijiye dadu..pata nhi phir dekh paugi ya nhi.he hug to her...aap apni puri care karna dadu aur rona nhi..but she also starts crying. ..dadu mere pass kitna time hai..
Sh-puri life hai beta...essa mat bol ..haa ...tu hamare pass hai aur rahegi...haa...than doctor comes...
Do-aap kaisa feel kar rahi ak..
Ak-better...
Do-ji shorya ma..aap kuch bat karni hai mere sath bahar plz..
Sh-ji..
Ak-dadu..aapko meri kasam jo bat hogiyahi hogi..meri bat mai sunna chahti hu apko meri kasam...shorya said ok..
Do-ak aap janti hai..apko blood cancer hai...aap jo teb le rahi thi usska realtion apko woh teb hamari salah...ab aap chahe toh yaha admitt reh sakti hai nhi toh..
Ak-mere pass kitna time hai doctor. ..plzz...
Do-bhut kam..more three months..
Ak-she had tears..dadu mai yaha nhi rahugi mai apne ghar mai rahugi..
Sh-sir plzz...mai apke hath pair jodta hu aap jitna paisa lege le lijiye mai apna sab de dunga meri behen ko bacha lijiye..abroad bhi le jauga bas ek umid ki kiran dikha dijiye.
Do-sir mera irada kisi ke emotional ke sath play karna nhi hai phir bhi maine apki bat foreign mai doctor se karai..even hamne pucha bhi aap jante hai par ..mujhe bhi utna hi dukh hai apko yeh kehne mai..par hum bhi toh insan hi hai ...
Ak-dadu koi fayda nhi hai maine sach man liya aap bhi man lijiye...aur mujhe ghar le chaliye plzzz...now dey returns house ..ak was on bed..but sleep was far away from her..
She reminds all those golden moments with nk...wen dey were in park..nk was pulling her nose...she was in his arms..she hug to her...
Ak-crying...nk...i love u..i love u nk...i really love u..
In morning. .shorya came with tea..
Sh-kaisi hai tu...le chai...she took..
Ak-dadu mera ek kam karege aap..
Sh-do bol..
Ak-dadu aap nk ko nhi batayege ki mai..plzz dadu..mai usse kya kaugi mai soch chuki hu..dadu mai nhi chahti ki woh mere karan ruk jaye. .bas aapko meri madad karni hogi..mai usse saza nahi de sakti ...woh seh nhi payega..plzz help me..nd hug to him..
Sh-jaisa tu bolegi wahi karuga haa chup..bilkul chup..
Here nk was working in laptop...
Nk-ak ji apne toh ab mera chain bhi chin liya..is pic mai tum sundar lag rahe ho..aammm...ab toh bat karni hi hogi hena.he called to her but she didn't attend...busy hogi sayad ..par ek din ho gya na call kiya na kuch..
Mai hi Milne chala jauga usse...
He was so hpy in aks dream..but ak become silent completely. ..shorya was giving support to her ...after one day nk was missing to her..
He went in aks house..she was arranging things in her room...
Nk-he swlly hug to her from back...kaha busy hai madam...love u dekh tujhe miss karte hue yaha aa gaya mai ...kissed onher cheeks...she wips her tears..
Ak-chod..nd skipped to him..tang mat kar turn..
Nk-karuga...tu kya karegi chugiya...
Ak-bol diya na mat kar tang..shout..tere karan mai yeh saman bhi aarange nhi kar pa rahi..
Nk-aacha...ok baba..la mai laga deta hu..chill gussa kyo ho rahi..smile..
Ak-kyoki tu karta hai hi essi harkat..mujhe bhut buri lagti hai teri hai aadatiee...pagalo wali aur yeh chehra..mujhe irritating lagti hai...yeh aur nhi seh sakti mai..
Nk-yeh sab kya bol rahi tu..thik toh hai na..touched her head...
Ak-hata...thowed his hand..aur pass mat aana mere..koi pyar vyar nhi hai mujhe tujhse...har time ak ak..ya poem. .writer banega kya de payega mujhe haa..kuch nahi..
Nk-pyar ..aur jo bolegi woh..essa mat bol..i know teri need jo aaj tak puri ki..
Ak-kya ki haa..bas pyar ka drama...mujhe nhi chahiye na tu na tera pyar...
Nk-yeh kya bol rahi tu...Sun capped his hand on her facce..
Ak-hat na...ja..pushed to him...kyo mere piche pada hai..i dont love u i hate u i hate u i hate u..mai wahi rahugi aboard mai aur tujhe pata bhi nhi chalne dungi mai kaha hu...mujhe studies karni hai..tere jaise faltu nhi padi hu mai..bhag yaha se tu..bhag...aur phir aaya toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga..dekh lena...mera mara muh dekhege tu..
Nk-ak...shout..thik hai tu chahti hai na mai jau..fine...ja raha hu...tu chup reh..chill kar...nd leave from her house...
He was in his house..he was so sad...than gy3 came..
Gy-kya hua munna...esse dukhi kyo hai..ak se jhagda hua na..
Nk-haa maa..pata nhi kaisi pagal ho gai hai bolti hai ab woh mujhe pyar nhi karti mai irritating hu..
Gy-laugh aacha..itna tang kiya usse...kitne din se bat nahi ki usse..
nk-do din..
Gy-gussa toh hogi hi..are munna woh chid gai hogi na aur itni batiee sunke tu muh fula ke aa gaya..koi rute toh manate hai na..he hug to her.
Nk-yes maa aur mai stupid aa gaya..love u aata hu abhi...he again went in her room from back side...
Ak was sleeping peacefully. ...
Nk-yeh is time so rahi..sat in side ..kitni cute lag rahi na..but gussa omg...she want pillow in sleep nk noticed this..he put her head on his lap..mai tujhe bhut pyar karta hu tu padna chahti hai pad lena par tu jaha jayegi mai piche jauga ..he sees besides of bed...uff essi toh itna bolti hai par sari chize dekho...he arrange things...suddenly he opened droor...are yeh kaisi report hai...he opened it nd read about aks bimari...nd he was so shocked nd a tears drop from his eyes..its went on aks face nd she wokeup...sees to nk...
Ak-tum..sat on bed phir aa gye..nk...saw her report meri chizo ko hath kyo lagate ho..
Nk-ak isme haaww...he starts crying..nhi ak stood..haww ak...he went from der..
Ak-nk..ruko nk ruko..usse pata chal gya..nk ruko...but he leave...
ak-maine usse saja de di khud se pyar karne ki..woh tut jayega ..ya gya ..woh mar jayega maine usse saza di hai..de di..badly crying. ..


He went is in house nd sat on stairs. ...he was thinking their past ..their love for each..der support. ..
Nk-mera sath diya na tune ...ab yeh sab nhi...he starts badly crying. .than gy3 came nd saw to him.
G-munna kya hua. .ro kyo raha hai..
Nk-maa mai marne wala hu...mukhe bhi jeher dedo..thaki mai uske sath ..nhi mai usse nhi jane dunga maa woh ak bhut beiman hai woh .akle hi soch liya jayegi mai usse nhi jane dunga..maa usse cancer hai ..maa..gy3 starts crying. .
Gy-kya...tu jhoot bol raha..
Nk-maine uski report usse pata hoga ..thabhi..
Gy3 hug to him..
Gy-tu yaha aa gya..tujhe usse samjhayega..samalega thabhi toh woh samlegi na..woh tut gai munna..tu esse tut jayega toh kaise chalega haa...samal...khudko..ab teri parisha hai tujhe tute bina uska sath dena hoga..bhagwan ne dukh diya hai umid bhi dega munna...dega..
Nk-nhi maa mai usse tutne nahi dunga...maa par kya karu..
Gy-meri beti ko woh khushi de jisse dukh na pauhuche usse...ja munna..ja...
He runned in her house...she was crying in her room...
Nk-tu meri jindagi hai ...tu meri sase hai ..tu meri aatma hai..chah ke bhi sas ko dur toh kar sakta hu par aatma se toh dur mai reh nhi sakta..tujhe dard dege mai ji nhi sakta...
Ak-turn nd sees to nk...she hug to him...nk...nk..tu kaha chala gaya tha..mujhe chod de...ab toh chod de..mere pass toh tujhe dene ke liye jindagi tak nahi rahi...
Nk-abhi toh thamne ki bat aai hai ..abhi toh milne ki rat aai hai..jindagi hai hamari ek isse alg kaise karne dunga..chah ke bhi tujhe apne aapse bichadne nahi dunga..tu jiyegi har pal har sas mai khusi se jiyegi...mai bhagwan se lad lunga par tujhe jane nhi dunga..ya toh hum ya toh koi nahi.
Ak-tu kisi se nahi lad sakta...aur tu kya karega kuch umid hai hi nahi..kuch nhi bacha..sab khatam ek pal mai...hame alg hona hoga yahi meri wish hai..
Broke hug nd left his hand on her face..
Nk-tujhe kya lagta hai tu ittni aasani se mujhse picha chuda legi toh galt hai..kehte hai sache dil se dua mango puri hoti hai..agar god ne hame ek dusare ke liye banaya hai toh woh hi milayege bhi..hamane toh dil se sach mai ek dusare ko hi manga na..toh chal mera sath de...jo pal hum chura sakege ..
Ak-tu kyo bhagwan ban raha..kya kar lega haa..mujhe kya khushi dega..haa ladega god se..dekha hai godko..mere hi pap ki saza hogi..tu nhi janta yeh news kaisi hoti hai ..marne ki bat sunna bhut aasan hai yeh kehna bhi ki ji lo pal..har pal starts crying yahi dar hoga ab mar jaugi ab..
Nk-starts crying tujhe kya lagta hai mai nhi mar raha..ya mai ji pauga...nhi...ek bar mai mar jata toh mujhe khushi hoti par tu nhi mai toh soch bhi nhi sakta..kazh teri bimari mere andar aa jaye aur mai mar..
Ak put her hand on his mouth. .
Ak-nhi nk..nhi..essa mat bol ..i m so sry...tu jo bolega mai karuga..aaj ke badki meri sas teri hai..bas..
Nk-toh dhayan rakh le tujjhhe apni sari life mujhe deni hogi..
Ak-mere pass jindagi hi toh nhi bachi..maine bhut bola tha na dekh mai galt nikali mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki jindagi mujhse kel kel jayegi aur mai hi tera sath nahi de paugi nk...hamare toh sare sapne hi aadhure reh gaye...
Nk-aadhure jab tak hai jab hum unhe pure na kar paye bas...ruk...he apart to her from him...he cut his finger. ..
Ak-koon...
Nk-he filled her mang ..ab toh pure hue na..shorya nd varsa also sees to nk. Ab toh sare sapne pure honge...
Ak-yeh tune kya kiya..
Nk-pyar kiya hai tujhse..aur ab sath chahiye degi na...she hug to him..
Ak-tu mujhe nahi jane dega na...
Nk-khabhi nahi...dadu mai apni amanat le jau..
Shorya starts crying. ..nd hug to ak nd nk..
Now story sifted in nks house...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Nk took to ak in his house. ..ak was hpy but sad also...but he hold to her vry tightly. ..dey was in entrance. .gy3 put thali for aarti..
Ak-aunty plzz...mai kisi ko kya khushi de sakti hu..jiske pass jindagi na ho woh dukh deke jayegi na..
Gy-toh hum tujhe apne pass rakh rahe..mot dena usske hath mai beta...jindagi jina hamare...mai apni beti ko gale se lagana chahti hu thaki kal ko usse koi chinta na rahe..
Ak-mai bhut lucky hu jo itna pyar mil raha warna kabki mar..
Gy-nhi..khabhi toh bhagwan hamari parisha bhi leta hai na beta...aao meri bahu mera sapna pura ho gaya... 😃 ..she did aarti of both...munna bahu ko room mai leja...
Nk-ji...dadu aapbhi aaiye...everyone goes in house...ak nd nk was going in their rooms..dey reached in room..entrance. .ak was admiring to room...she thought about dream...
Ak-sapne pure nahi hote na unhe dekhna hi nahi chahiye...na pure hone ki sart...bhut pain hota hai jab sapne pure nahi hote nd starts crying. ..
Nk-bas...hug to her..mujhe weak mat banao...mai sab bardast kar lunga par yeh aansuu nhi..plzzz...aao hamare room mai...aur wada karke ki ab in aankho mai aansu nahi honge...
Ak-wada she was crying. ..
Nk-ro rahi...
Ak-nhi toh..fake smile..
Nk-chii..samaj nhi aata ro rahi ya has rahi...hug to him..tu bhut aacha hai mujhe tera sath chahiye hamesha ke liye..
Ak-mujhe bhi...aa...rest kar...he laied to her on bed nd hug to her..she was so relaxed in his arms but nk was worried so much...he was not showing but he have fear in heart..he can lost to ak...ak was in sleep...nk stood nd searching somthing on net...
Nk-his eyes was red ...he cant cry nor he can express his pain infront of ak...so he went in mandir...
Nk-god mai nk...mai janta hu mai apki puja nhi karta par ak karti hai..yeh bhi janta hu..
Here ak wokeup nd searching to nk she went in upstairs nd sees to nk...
Nk-ak bhut aachi hai par god woh toh mere liye bani hai na toh aap kyo usse leke jana chahte hai haa...aur apko yahi manjur hai toh mujhe bhi cancer de dijiye aur sath mai hame bula lijiye..ak starts crying. ...dekhiye mai weak nhi hu hena but he cried..mai bhi weak hu..i promise ab mai ak ko bilkul tang nahi karuga...promise...teen ka fast rakhuga uski age bada dunga bhut ...par plzz aap mat lejaiye na usse ...mai ji nhi sakta agar tohfa diya hai toh usse mere pass rehne do na plzz god plz...i cant live...she is my life ..my life plzz..maa kehti hai sache man se kuch mango toh pura hota hai mai toh sach mai pure dilse ek umid chahta hu ak ko phir se jite dekhne ki plczzz god...ak returned in room nd showings that she is in sleep..nk came nd hug to her..
Next day nk made breakfast for her nd put infront of her. .
Nk-kha le..
Ak-kila de..
Nk-bhagwan ne hath nhi diye kha le na..
Ak-kila dega toh chota ho jayega kya..
Nk-mai nahi kilauga tu kitni moti ho gai hai dekh..fel gai hai aur moti ho jayegi toh...
Ak-aacha..abhi batati hu...she stood infront of mirror. ..bakwas mat kar dekh mai fit hu..aur khaugi toh tere hath se...
Nk-aacha ji..nhi kilauga ..ja..
Ak-nk..throwd pillows. ..nk was dancing. .
Nk-moti chuhiya..moti..uu...
Ak-aacha..he was running nd ak was running behind. ..pagal ..suddenly she tired..nd was about to falls...but nk holds to her..
Nk-ak...
Ak-mere pass taqat bhi nhi nk...tujhse ladke ke liye mere pass taqat bhi nhi...nd starts crying. .tujhe promise kiya tha par nhi rok pati yeh aansu kaise rok lu..yeh rukte hi nahi behte rehte hai..tere pyar ko dekh ke aur rona aata hai...nk hug to her...
Nk-bas...bhudu ram hum sab picnic jane wale hai aur tu...chal ready ho..he left to her in his hand. ..aa khana kilata hu...dey had breakfast together. ...now dey were in one garden..all..family picnic..all were playing antakshari...
Ggy-haa ak ki bari song gane ki...
na kuch pucha na kuch manga tume dil se diya jo diya aa...na kuch bola na kuch tola muskura ke diya jo diya.. (she was singing nd holded nk hand with terry eyes).tu dhoop hi chaw tu hi apna paraya aur kuch na janu bas itna hi njanuuu tujhme rab dikhata hai yara mai kya karu sajde sar jhukta hai yara mai kya karu....everyone starts crying but dey clapping also...
Than varsa turn came than nk..
Nk-hoohoohoohoo...hoo..na woh aankhiyan nurane kahi na woh chehra nurane kahi. kanhi dil wali batie bhi na a na woh sajari jawani kahi jag gumiya thare jaisa na koi jag gumyega thare jaisa na koi jag gumeya (he moves his finger on her face nd someair touched to ak with nks touch)...barisho ke mosamo ki bigi haryali tu sardiyo mai galo pe toh aati hai woh lali tu (he stood to her nd took in his hand nd surrounding to her)..rato ka sukun bhi hai subah ki ajan hai..khabhi aag jaisi jalti hai khabhi barkha pannii kahi..khabhi man jana chupke se yuhi apni chalani kahi (stood to her nd sat in knees )jaisi tu hai waisi rehna aaa...jag gumya thare jaisa na koiii jag gumya thare jaisa na koiii).....
Now dey come in their room nd sees that their room was fully decorated with roses...
Ak-yeh sab..
Nk-maine nahi kiya...i think hamari family hame aur karib lana chahti hai...
Ak-sees in his eyes...khabhi khabhi chize essi kyo ho jati hai nk..ki hum jjis time ko apni muthi mai khed rakhna chahte hai woh jhat se fisalti jati hai..
Nk-kyoki hum sochte hai us muthi mai hi hamari jindagi hai jisse kolte hi humara sab chin jayega..par usse toh hame ked karna chahiye aur kisi tarah se khona nhi chahiye na...
Ak-haa...she closed d door ..nk hum ek bandhan mai bhand chuke hai n...toh mai chahti hu yeh rishte ko woh pyar ka ehsas bhi mil jaye thanki kal ko jab mot mere samne ho toh mai daru nhi haske keh saku maine chura liye woh pal jinpe mera hak tha..
Nk-maine tujhe kaha tha na tu bat nahi karegi mot ki par..he turned..
Ak-sry...sry...sry...nhi manoge..ok...amm..haa...she gave flower to him but he didnt take..ok...she sat in her knees...nd gave flower to him. ..
Nk-tu esse mat baith..took..rest kar..
Ak-tu hold his hand...aaj meri wish puri nahi karega..mai tere pass aana chahti hu..itne pass jitna aaj tak nahi aai..kal tak tu chahta tha mujhe pana par aaj mujhe chahiye tera har ehsas ...
Nk-mujhe nahi hoga ak...maine khudse wada kiya hai jab tak teri jindagi tujhe na mil jaye mai tere itne pass nahi aauga..yeh bhagwan se meri ladai hai unhone hame jindagi ka dar dikha ke hame majbur kiya hai par nahi ak mai nhi jukuga mai unhe dikha dunga pyar mai itni taqat hai pass rehke bhi dur reh sakte hai..yeh moka aayega i promise god dege hame..
Ak-nk..aaj time hai mere pass jindagi hai kalko nhi hogi ..man kyo nahi leta jo sach hai usse tu badal toh nhi dega na..
Nk-mai ek insan hu..kuch badal nhi sakta par lad jarur sakta hu..tere liye hamare pyar ke liye..dekhna hai tera dar jitega ya mera pyar..
Ak hug to him..
Ak-mai tere sath hu nk ..sath hu..hamesha aur bhagwan kare hamara pyar jit jaye jit jaye. ..itna pyar kaise kar sakta hu mujhse tu haa..
Nk-pyar ko pyar samjhane ki jarurat nhi ...
Next day...
Nk took to ak in roof...it was so cold...but nk arranged woodfire for both..one video clip also..dey were in one blanket. ...
Ak-kya hai isme...
Nk-kuch yaidee aaj yad karne ko man ho raha..
Ak-konsi yaiee...mai bhi dekhugi aaj...dikhaoge na..
Nk-haa..he starts to video on laptop...
Ak-are yeh toh wahi play hai na jisme tu bhudha aur mai bhydhi bani thi...haww nd laugh...dekh tu yaha apni lins bhool gaya tha..nk was admiring her happiness whichwas away from her since many days...
Nk-haa phir tune hit kiya mujhe kitni jor se...lagi thi..she kissed on his cheeks. ..waaw..
Ak-smile...ab thik hai na pyar jo tumne mujhe diya ehsas jo is dil mai band kar liya..tum hi mere sache hamsafar ho jisne mujhe jiwan naya de diya nd sees in his eyes...he clapped. .
Nk-vry nice ..bhut aacha..
Ak-tune hi sikhai hai...jitna pyar karu utna kam hai tujhse sach i m vry lucky nk..thousands kisses nd gave kiss to him.mere har aansu ko khushi mai badla hai tune kash tujhe jindagi bhar ka sath de pati ..nd hug to him..
But video played.in song.hum.jab houge 60 baras ke aur tu hogi 55 ki bolo prit nibhaogi na phir bhi mere bachapan ki...kya kya bolo prit nibhaogi na phir mere bachpan ki..
Haa baho ka ho sahara jab.haa lakdi kyo hum tekenge.aankh bhale dhundali ho jaye dil ki najar se dekhege .aankho mai tum yuhi dekhna..kya hai jarurat darpan ki ..esse hi prit nibhaui mohobat apne bachpan ki..
Jab tum hoge 60 baras ke aur mai hogi 55 ki pyar ki joyt jalaugi tab bhi apne bachapan ki...
Nk-dekha jab sath ho toh sari chize hamare favour mai hoti hai...sath toh hamara hai hi tum jitna karo inkar jane nhi dunga dur tumne..bhagwan kitna bhi kare inkar.
Ak-tere pyar ke aage toh mai bhi har gai nk..
Nk-ro le bas yahi aata hai..mai chala jata hu..
Ak-dat kyo raha from crying. .
Nk-toh tu bat hi itni boring kar rahi..
Ak-kya bolu..
Nk-yahi ki nk tu mujhse jayada sundar hai cute hai pyara hai dulara hai ...hena..
Ak-woh toh tu hai hi..wips tears...
Nk-kya yr pehle toh tu itna chidti thi aur ab ekdom diwani ho gai. .
Ak-kyoki tu mera pati hai na ..broke hug..mere pati dev...nd made face...
Nk-cute...smile nd hug to her...
Next day dey were in garden. ...nd walking here nd der..than dey sees to olides ...
Ak-mujhe thakawat lag rahi nk..
Nk-baithte hai aa..than dey sat on joint seat...suddenly one uncle nd aunty also besides naksh.
Un-dekh tu apna dhyan rakh ab jo bachi hui jindagi hai na woh mai tere sath nibhauga ..haa..
Au-pehle toh mai hi jaugi...aap bad mai.
Un-bakwas na kar tujhe pata hai na tu mot ke raste se mujhe chin ke lai thi..
Au-thabhi toh tumhe aapne se dur nhi bhej sakti..
Un-aur mai tujhe hum sath mai jayege na...
Nk-dekh ak suni bat uncle aunty bhi ek dusare se kitna pyar karte hai jab woh alg nhi hue toh hum kaise ho sakte hai..aacha ek rase lagayegi ...jo jita wahi jitegi..aa..
Ak-ok fine...lats goo..uuu nd she runned..
Nk-now nk also runmed behind...dey were running suddenly ak felt different she tired so much..went in verge nd start vomiting so much ..blood.
Nk-dekha mai aage yaiee nd turn nd sees to ak...ak..shout ..
Ak-mai har gai nk nd falls on his arms..
Nk-ak...crying nd shout...uttt...than dey uncle aunty came..
Un-kya hua beta..
Nk-yeh kuch bolti nahi uncle..
Un-hospital le chalo isse..
Nk-haa isse cancer hai ...
Un-kya...shocking chalo beta...
Now dey reached in hospital ...Nk-ak..jag jao ek bar jag jao plzz apne nk ke liye mere liye hos mai aao...aa jao haa...swlly she opened eyes nd sees to nk..
Ak-nk...mai kaisi hu ..
Nk-smile thik ho ...aao...dekho tumhara nk sath hai..
Ak-she cried a little nd had tears on her eyes...nk tu samaj kyo nahi leta mai thik nahi hu..tu mujhe yaha chod de mat de aur khushi thaki mai yeh soch saku ki tere pyar ke sath jina hai ...kya kaha doctor ne..
Nk-woh kya bolegi..unko pata hai kuch thik hai agar tu maregi toh mai bhi tere sath maruga fine ab mat ro..
Ak-nk...tujhe jina hoga mere liye hamare pyar ke liye usse amar karna hoga..tu story likhega aur jisme hum honge..apne liye na sachi mere liye wada kar..
Nk-nhi ..mai likhuga story jo amar bhi hogi par hamare sath ...hogi mai tujhe nhi jane dunga ...
Ak-nk..tu kyo nhi jane deta mujhe mai kitni buri hu tere sath kiya koi wada nibha na pai mai..
Nk-toh badla lunga na sab badla lunga...tujhse hisab barabar hoga..
Ak-nk mera ek kam karega mujhe apni baho mai le le mujhe dar lag raha ..
Nk-ak...he sat on bed nd hug tp her..
Ak-mai toh jindagi ki resh mai bhi tujhse har gai nk...meri wish bhi aadhuri reh gai ...tears was continued dropping from her eyes..mujhe marna nhi hai tere sath rehna ..
Nk-umid dega na god tu essa mat bol..meri har sas pe tera nam hai tere pass life nhi bachi toh bhagwan ko meri saso se tujhe sase deni hogi par hum sath mai rahege bas..
Ak-nk...she was feeling like vomit ..
Nk-ak...ak..
Ak-nk...tu jina mere liye nk...she was breathing heavily ..
Nk-ak he was crying. ..
Ak-nk...she falls on her arms..
Nk-akkk..shoutly...everyone comes nd sees to nk nd ak.. 😭
In reality. ..
Nk-he was crying. .kyo chod ke gai mujhe woh bhi esse wade ke sath jo mai chah ke bhi pura nhi kar sakta...kyo ak ..mujhe teri bhut yad aati hai ..aaja plzz aaja mere pass warna sach mai mar jauga...panch sal kam toh nahi hai na ..plzz...meri kahani ban gai mai writer bhi ban gya teri hi kami hai har jagah is ghar ke kone kone mai is dil ke kone kone mai..
Suni si lagti hai jindagi tere bin..tu mere jine ka maksad hai.
Tere bina mai kuch nhi..bhari bhari har waqt hai..
Jindagi ek aankh micholi hai ek pal aandhera hai .
Ek pal ujala hai tu aayegi mere dil ki khusiya wapas aa jayegi..
Dur rehke tujhse mai bhi konsa ji pai hu..tune ittna majbur kiya mujhe ...kudda se tere liye ladke aai hu..
Teri thi teri hu jindagi bhar nahi jaugi dur ..
Gale se laga le mujhe ab aur na kar majbur ..
Pput her hand on nks shoulder. ..he turned..
Nk-ak...he starts crying tu sach hai ya khawab..
Ak-mai sach hu nk...dekh tere liye mai apni jindagi se bhagwan se lad aai...from terry eyes dekh tune mujhe jane nhi diya...bhut tadpaya bhut behkaya aakhir apne dar tak kich ke le hi aaya nd hug to him...
Nk-akkk...bhut miss kiya..jina bhool gaya tha..
Ak-dekh ab mai pakka wala wada karke aai hu jiugi tere liye yeh sase teri hai yeh jindagi teri hai ...i love u...
Nk-i love u tooo nd kisses on her face ...mai tujhe kaise jane deta tu toh meri life hai na...
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Now nk shouted nd doctor came ..
Do-kya hua ...dey checked to ak dont worry behosh hui hai mr nk cool down plzzz...bahar jaiye thodi der...
Nk was outside everyone were crying so much..
Nk-plzz bhagwan ji meri ak ko kuch mat karna mai apse bhik manta hu ...plzzz...koi toh umid de dijiye...maine kitni jagah try kiya ak ki bimari ka koi toh ilaj hoga na ...
Suddenly he got call...
Nk-hloo..
Kya yeh nk bol rahe...
Nk-ji..
Hum kerla ke aasram se bol rahe ..maine apka blog padha hai ...aap camcer ka ilaj khoj rahe na mai bhi isi bimari se gujar chuki hu...jab aapne apna number net pe choda toh mai khudko rok nhi pai...mai apko adress deti hu aap sab bat kar lijiye..
Nk-thanku u r angel...u r thanku vry much ...nd smile...
Thanku bhagwan ji thanku so much ...ab tu jiyegi ak mere liye jiyegi...
Do-ak ko hosh aa gaya plzz aap mil lijiye. ..
Nk went near of ak..
Nk-ak tu jiyegi tu jiyegi ak...
Sh-nk...samalo khud ko plzz. .
Nk-nhi dadu sach mujhe iska ilaj mil gaya hai...sach ...
Sh-nk tum sach keh rahe ho..
Nk-haa dadu..ak...
Ak-plzz nk...samal khudko..
Nk-sach kissed on her forehead. .bhagwan se hamara bichadna dekha nahi gaya ...unhine ek umid di hai sach..nd told everything. ..ab tujhe mai jina sikhauga tujhe mere liye jana hoga...
Kerla...aasram..it was vry small aasram..not much popular..
Ak-nk..yeh toh bhut chota sa hai tujhe lagta hai kuch hoga..
Nk-pata nhi mujhe itna pata hai bhagwan umid deke todte nahi hai andar aa...dey went near of head person of aarasam..
Me-yeh koi jaddu nahi na koi wada ki apni patni thik hogi hi..hum un bebas ka ilaj karte hai desi ilaj...yeh bimari agar puri fel gai hai toh inko dard bardast karna hoga..aur apko visvas ...agar yeh dard bardast kar leti hai aur aap sanyam toh bhagwan ji sayad sun le...
Nk-mai taiyar hu par jayada dard...
Me-woh toh hoga...khoon ko saf karna itna aSan toh nhi..par agar hame apne bhagwan aur unki prakriti jo banayi hai unhone uspe visvas hai toh namumkin kuch nahi..
Nk-visvas hai thabhi toh yaha aaye hai guruji..
Me-toh aaj se hum apka ilaj suru karege aap un ararat ke pass rahegi aur aap ja sakte hai..ilaj ke waqt kisi ko aane ki anumati nhi..
Nk-ji hum bahar...dey sat outside. ...ak tu kuch bol nhi rahi..
Ak-mai toh dard bardast jar lungi tu kar payega..
Nk-haa...essa mat bol ..
Ak-tu weak mat padna plzz...nk mai hamare pyar ke liye ladugi pata nhi lad paugi ya nahi par koisish karugi..dua bhi ki hamara pyar jit jaye..
Nk-jitega...jao tumhara treatment start hone wala hai...
She went inside. ..nd her painful viice made to him cry ...he cant heard her voice ...
Nk-hey bhagwan yeh ak ko bhut dard ho raha kya..yeh itna chila kyo rahi mai toh andar ja bhi nhi sakta..kyo apne sare dard usi ke hisse mai likhe hai mere hisse...gulab ke ful kante bhi hai na ...he put his hand on flower branches nd got pain nd blood...
after somtimes. ..
he went near of ak..
Nk-kaisi ho ak bhut pain ho raha kya..
Ak-haa...bhut pain hua...pata nhi kya pine ko diya bhut jalan ho rahi..
Nk-sayad yeh dard hi tumhe jindagi de..
Ak-tumhe..meri jindagi tumhe jindagi degi hold his hand. .she caught d blood..
Ak-yeh kaise cut gaya haa...chatoo mai..
nk-mai tujhe dard mai nahi dekh sakta ...
ak-isi chakkar mai mujhe double dard derha tu..u hurt me nk...u hurt me ...
Nk-i promise phir essa nhi hoga promise. ...
Ak-hoga toh aacha nhi hoga ...
After some days...ak treatment was start..nd nk went in Forrest to take jhadibuities...he insists to head person he waana take for ak...he have pics ...
Ak-aaj nk late kaise ho gaya...than he comes...her hand was cuted so much ...he was unable in walking. ..she sees ..nk tujhe kya ho gya..tu chal kyo nahi pa raha ...aur teri hath mai chot face pe cut kaha gaya tha tu..
Nk-woh aasram mai koi tha nhi toh mai jangle gya tha tere liye jhadibuities lane...waha lag gai..
Ak-toh yeh nikala upaye na tune waah..mujhe pain ho raha khud ke liye nhi tere liye agar tujhe esse hi dard mai dekugi mere jine ki icha khatam ho jayegi..mujhe toh dard jindagi ne diya par tu ...apne aap par lage dag bardast kar sakti hu par tere upar nhi nk...tu sas leta hai par har sas meri hai ..tera dard mera hai .aur mere dard se judne ke liye tujhe khud ko dard sehen karna hoga agar yehi tu chahta hai toh fine...ok...mai ilaj nhi karaugi..
Nk-nhi ab nhi hoga..
Ak-bas ek sart thabhi ilaj hoga..
nk-kya..
Ak-tujhe wapas jana hoga jis din mera ilaj hoga khatam mai aaugi khud tere pass tujhe meri kasam..
nk-nhi mai nhi jauga..
Ak-ya toh tu meri mot dekhega ya wapas..tujhse duri bardast kar lungi par dard nhi..hamari duri hame ek karegi..aur tujhe yakin hai mai bach jaygi toh tu mera wait karega..story likhega ..mujhe jinda rakhega khud mai ..bas nk bas jitne bhi sal lage 1 2 3 4 kitna bhi time...
Nk-mai tujhse alg nhi reh sakta par mai tera injar jarur karuga..aur hamesha apne aap mai zinda rakhuga..
Ak-ja plzz abhi ke liye ja tu...
Nk-intzar karuga mujhe yakin hai tu aayegi aayegi ek din..
nd both apart from each for five years but god knows d real love so they didnt apart to naksh..dey were one ...but now dey r becoming one...naksh wedding day...nd nk was on ghodi...he was dancing on ghodi...

dulhan tu dulha mai ban jayuga mera intjar karna barat leke aauga .dulhan tu dulha mai ban jauga...
nk was dancing nd singing in full swim..
Now he reached in akks house..she was in door..
Ho dhol barati ghode hathi baja bajega raho mai (he touched to dhol made steps of baja nd hathi)..haa dhol barati ghode hathi baja bajega raho mai...chandi jaisa (nd pulled to ak closed of her)chandi jaisa badan yeh tera bhar lunga apni baho mai ..(hug to her)..aayegi jab woh milan ki rat ched ke koi (saying in her ears nd she was moving ).pyar ki batt tujhe sari rat jagaugaaa(stood infront of her nd saying from finger )...
Than ak starts singing. .dulha tu dulhan mai ban jaugi dekh mai sajna pyar mai tere mar jaugi (hug to him)...
Mere jiwan shathi jabse dil mai mere aaye ho janam janam ke pyar ko apne sath mai kaise laye ho dekha maine jabse tujhko (touched his face with hand ).mang liya tujhe apne rabse tujh bin ji na paugi (she had tears on her eyes but nkk wips cleaned from thumbs ).than music was started...
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Now nk filled aks mang with sindur nd dey took phere nd finally wedding finished. ..so now der dreams comes true. .nk left to her in his hand nd took to her in room...ak was not nervous because she knows that dey want to each since long but didnt get time...today finally its comes she wants her love. .dey were in each other arms..
Ak-nk...kya kar rahe ho..chodo ...saw in his eyes..
Nk-i m sry pain hua kya ab kyo ro rahi ho..
Ak-thanku mujhe nai life dene ke liye..pata hai in kuch salo mai mers pyar aur bad gaya tumhare bare mai soch ke..aaj tumhari baho mai ek ajib si santi hai..
Nk-mai bhi kitna tut sa gaya tha..par tum mere pass wapas aake meri jindagi mai khusiya bhar di..aakhir mera trust jit gya..
Ak-bhut pehle nk...mai woh lucky girl hu jisse mere pyar ne jindagi di..essa toh kam hota hoga na nk ki koi apko pyar toh kare had bhi jayada bhi par jo apke liye sabse ladke apko jindagi de tum meri life mai wahi pyar ho...nd tightly hug to him...
Nk-i love u..
Ak-sees in his eyes nd kissed on his lipe..love u too...nd m getting blush now ..leave them in their world...
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Enjoy this one part full ending story of naksh..i tried my best nd leave comments say fully my frds..thanku for reading 😃 nd mainly ur time..
Thanku for support... 😊 ..
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same thought
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Wowww...!! Waiting for the big treat...!
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U all r hpy 😊
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