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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

I will start new os ...koi ready hai padne ko.. 🤣


im readyy 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

So just like pic..this story willl be depends on naksh family bond...previously mujhe kisi frd ne bhut din pehle bola she is missing a chemistry between naksh...so she said ki mai ek essi story likhu jisme naksh ka evergreen romance ho family bond ho... 😊 ..
Yeh story mai kuch different toh nhi hai just like serial but ek chiz different hogi naksh ke bich ki bond nd kids ki bond towards naksh 😃 ..i will write in my style hope my frds will loves this story too...
😊 ..
This is for u pragati 😳 ...hope yeh tumhe apni stories ki yad dilaye aur tumhare dil mai bas jaye.. ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... Great di..nice concept... Eager to read this.. Thanks to you and Pragathi :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanku so much trishna nd abi ...:)...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-1...
Firstly short short intro of house...ss house with lots of changes like all big stupid character r not here ...nk ak r living in their house with der small kids ..yup young boy who recent completed 6 years .nd sweet naughty nairu who is only 3 nd half years old...now come in kitchen ak is working nd sweet nairu is sat on kitchen slaap...her voice is really cute ..she can't talk proper words..but she dont want to read..also..
Ak-baby...nairu ...ab aap mujhe count karke batao hamare ghar mai kitne member hai..
Na-mamma..one mele papa..twoo meli mamma tilli mele bhaiyu..bus...
Ak-ale meri cute si baby pulled her cheeks but not tightly. ..baki ka bhi bolo ...dadu..
Na-ale haa...fol mele dadu pive meli dadi siixx meli bali dadi aul sewen mele bale dadu..bas mamma itte hi na.
Na-vry gud meri baby kissed on her cheeks but mela baby nairu bhi toh rehti hai na ..
Na-alle mai toh bhool gai 😆 ..put her hand on her head..but maine sahi tount(count) tiya na mamma..
Ak-ale mera baby toh supar talented hai na...
Na-haa mai papa pe gai hu na..
Ak-haww with shock look..yeh sab kon sikhata hai apko...
N-papa ko kal na mai na pillow di na toh mele ko papa bole ki aap papa ke upal gai toh mene bola mammy pe kyo nhi toh bole apki mamma toh puli galt work kalti he aul mele ko shout bhi kalti hai .aap toh siwet ho papa tipe hena ..toh mai boli haa..
Ak-aacha waaw ab mamma kyo bol rahi haa..jao papa ke sath office bhi aur unko bolo padane ko bhi ..mamma toh bad hai .
Na-hug to ak..nhi mai bolugi mai meli mamma tipe hu hena..kissed on her cheeks. .
Ak-nhi beta aap apne papa tipe hi ho masska queen hena...chalo fruits ko do ek ek karke aur pure name batao haa...
Na-oki...Apple'...lo .gave to her..ak turned nd taking from naira...grapls (grapes)..mamma yeh wali nhi pata..
Ak-ofoo..yeh hai watermelon. .ruko aap nhi pakad paogi ..next..
Na-olenge (orange)banana nd giving..in low voice mujhe bol lag laa with sad face.
Ak-ho gaya beta ..bas haa ..ab mamma thoda pickle bana le..
Na-oki..she was playing with tomato suddenly she sees to nk..got hpy she was about to tell but nk said sshhh...haa...he was coming near of ak..he lifted to naira in his hand..papa cal (car)chalaiye..
Nk-haa but thodi der mai oki aap dekho bhaiyu kya kar rahe hai oki...
Ak-naira kya kusur pusur kar rahi ..
Na-chuh nhi mamma..mai baithi hu..but nk put to her on floor nd she runned..nk was about to hug too ak from back but she turned with pickle nd all oil reached on nks shirt...
Ak-starts laughing aap...mera aachar..
Nk-mere vichar..sab gaye pani mai..datt..kitni mehnat se naira ko bhagaya aur aap huh..
Ak-smile..mehnat to meri badi nakku g...aap thodi mai hi toh clean karugi na...waise aap itne dabbe paw aaye kyo..
Nk-mujhe aachar ki dukan kolni hai na toh mai apki recepie churane aya tha..
Ak-sach..means diamonds ke sath aachar free..
Nk-are nahi nahi ak ke aachar ke sath diamonds free 😆 ..
Ak-datt..hit on nks hand...
Nk-aacha datt..maine socha thoda romace hi kar lu..kitne din ho gaye..thoda kiss kar lu apko but aap bhut buri hai ek chance nahi chodti mujjhe bhagane ka..
Ak-aacha shadi ke itne sal bad aur do bache hone ke bad bhi apko yeh sab suj raha chii..besaram..
Nk-hmm..bas bat toh yahi hai meri wife ekdom boring ho chuki hai..
Ak-boring nhi time ka problems. .ab esse aacha nhi lagta koi nai nai shadi toh nhi hui na..
Nk-haa..mai isse aacha apna work kar leta hu..
Ak-are nk apki pri...than duggu was shouting badly..uff yeh duggu ..
Nk-itna chila kyo raha..dey both went in hull...naira was running here nd der nd duggu was following to her...
Du-mamma...with chidchid..mai nairu ko apni chotu sis nhi boluga..yeh meri book leke bhag rahi mai sachi mai isse pit dunga...meri book mamma papa nd lill crying nd frustrating face...
Nk-kya duggu ladkiyo jjaise ro rahe ...naira he too runned..kitna tej bhagti hai yeh ladki..nairu..
Ak-duugu aap mat run karo yeh apne aap aayegi..essa hi karti hai yeh pehle toh bhagegi phir piche aayegi.eee...meri bat mat kyo nahi rahe..naira..hold to her...kyo pakad rahi bhaiu ki book aapko pata hai na woh royega.
Na-mai to kel lahi thi mamma..
Du-aacha meri book mili tujhe ...mai read kar raha tha aur yeh aake meri book le gai..waise bhi itni tang karti hai koi isko kuch nahi bolta..sab mujhe hi datte hai..nd starts crying. .
Nk-offo is naira ko dekh lo tang karne mai maharat hasil hai aur yeh naksh rula lo bas..
Ak-sab apki galti hai nk ..sab..
Nk-wat meri kyo. ..
Ak-apke karan hi naira ka birth hua..apne hi mitti batio mai mujhe fasaya tha na...
Nk-waah galti toh sirf meri hi na..
Ak-abhi toh aap ghar pe hai toh apko pata hai ki yeh dono esse hai..sochiye mai jab akli hoti toh yaha tufan aata hai dono ne paresan kar rakha hai ...naira nd duggu r seeing naksh fight with open mouth..
Nk-waaw waaw..meri nhi apki galti hai ek toh aap pehle sarmati hai phir mai kuch na karu toh boring karu toh problems. .
Ak-haa galti toh meri hai na ab yeh hi dekh lo abhi naira ne mujhe bataya kal rat apne kya kaha ...mai shout karti hu galt kam karti hena.
Nk-woh toh majak mai nairu apne meri sikayat ki na...
Nai-noo papa...
Ak-means mai jhoot bol rahi..
Du-uiii...aap dono kitni fight karte ho...bade log bade log nd went... 😆 ..
Na-bale log bale log put her hand on her head..nd went..
Nk ak were seeing to each but after seeing kids realtion dey laughs...
Nk-dekha bache nhi hum mahabarat karte hai..
Ak-huh ..manna bhi nhi aata...kuch yad hai apka aur duggu ka stage play..
Nk-are haa ak help kariye na...
Ak-mai toh shout karti hu na...nd leave..
Nk-ofoo yeh ladies bhi na...sach kehte hai ek buri bat na bolo bas tarif karte raho inki..ab kaise help lu ...he went in dugggu room..
Du-uiii..papa hamara play hai thode din mai ..hamne toh koi taiyari ki hi nahi hai...hum kya play karege..
Nk-pata nahi..apki mamma gussa ho gai hai..kaise manau...he sat on bed..
Du-ofoo papa..aap bhi na...ek kam karo aap dinner bana do rat ko mamma kush ho jayegi unki dress press kar do ya unki cupboard clean kar do..
Nk-aap mujhe mamma ko manane ko bol rahe ya unke nokar banne ko bol rahe..
Du-mai toh bas option de raha tha...because jab mai mamma ko tang karta hu woh gussa ho jati hai toh mai yahi karta hu..
Nk-means aap mere sath bhi esse hi maska marte hai na..
Du-noo papa uiii mai toh bhool gaya mamma ne mere liye milk rakha hoga bye...
Nk-yeh bache bhi na pure ke pure maska lagane wale hai...
In dinning tablle ak was giving food to naira nd duggu..
Du-mamma koi idea do na play ke liye..
Ak-apke papa toh perfect hai na unhi se lo...
Na-mamma mujhe nini aa li...
Ak-haa chalo ...aao baby ..took to her in room.
Nk was in room..waiting for ak...he was walking here nd der..
Than ak sees to nk in tension nd she laugh a little. ..
Nk-amm...are aap ho gaya kam ..bache so gaye..
Ak-hmm pata nhi kab tak..
Nk-grabbed her hand nd took to her close..sry..my perfect wife..
Ak-kaha perfect ..mai toh mistake queen hu..hena make puppy face..
Nk-hmm...aap bhale hi kam kar leti hai sare par ek chiz mai mar kha jati hai woh hai hamare bich ka time romance. .
Ak-jab mai bolti hu romance ko toh aapke pass time nhi ab do bache ho gaye pehle jaisa pyar time nhi ho sakti na..
Nk-toh kya sab badal jata hai do bache hone ke bad.
Ak-apne aap se puchiye..aap pehle jab mai gussa hoti thi toh aap room decorate karte the flowers late the..blushes new nighty late the ab dekho esse hi mana rahe..
Nk-ab itni rat ko yeh sab ..
Ak-nk..sshh...covered his face..mai janti hu aap aaj bhi mujhe utna hi pyar karte hai..mai bhi..bas hame time hi nhi milta..mai gussa nhi hu..
Nk-thoda toh ho jati..
Ak-hui thi par apka cute sa pyara sa chehra..melt ho gai mai..usko dekh ke...pulled his cheeks. .
Nk-hug to her ...i love u..
Ak-i love u too..dekha esse hi hota hai..romance khatam ho jata hai hena.
Nk-are..moves his hand on aks hair...
Ak-nk...smile...aap ab yeh kya kar rahe..
Nk-kosish kuch kuch karne ki..
Ak-aacha...par suddenly aaj kaise yad aaya..
Nk-kyo ..moves near ...yad aane wali kya bat hai..mai toh ready ready hu..
Ak-aapki bat aur aap bache uth jayege na..mujhe unko check karne jana hai..
Nk-dekha agar mood ho bhi toh aap esse bolti hai ki man hi nhi karta..mera work hi thik hai ..
Ak-gussa ho gaye kya..
Nk-nhi pehli wali ak thoda sarma bhhi leti thi jab woh mere pass aati thi abki ak has deti hai bas..
Ak-nk...
Nk-koi bat nahi ak...mai gussa nhi hu..leavve her
Ak-nk...gripped to him ..
Nk-ak...dont worry relax..yeh nhi hona chahiye rishte mai ki maine apko chod diya toh mujhe dikhane ke liye aap mere pass aaye..yeh toh ek ehsas tha na hum dono ke bich ka jo mai tadapta tha apke liye aap sarmati thi..its ok agar aaj nhi aati saram..ab itna tension kyo le rahi...hug to her..muaa kissed on her hair...i love u na..
Than naira with cry..
Na-papa mai dal gai ..
Ak-are naira aap ..
Na-crying mamma..
Nk-mera betu ...took to her in his arm...
She was in sleep...
Ak-nk yeh aadhi nind mai hai ..yahi sula lete hai ..
Nk-hmm...mujhe bhi nind aa rahi..plzz ak kal kuch soch ke batiyega na...play ke liye..
Ak-haa nk bilkul...sochti hu kuch...she slept...
Nk aap kehte nhi toh kya mai samjhati toh hu..kya sach mai yahi hota hai sare ehsas khatam ho jate hai...hum kitne karib the na ek dusare ke ab dekhiye hum dur ho rahe kya...
Nk-ak bhi na..mai janta hu thode mai sochne lag gai hongi par mai samjhata hu sayad hamari life bhi sab jaise hi hogi..bache pariwar sabke bich sayad ehsas bhi kkhatam ho jata hai..pehle wali tadap yeh sab bhi... 😲 ...
So guys i dont know wat to tell or wat to asked but plz say that u all r enjoying dis story or not.i m giving my best..
Plzz press like button if u like this part nd gave sweet comments i will wait. .
Precap-nk nd duggu play...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
You made me so happpyyy today... Lovely part... I wanted like this before the Capetown leap.. Thank you so much dii for this story.. So cute.. The foursome bonding is lovely.. Do update like this a lot.. :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abinaksh

You made me so happpyyy today... Lovely part... I wanted like this before the Capetown leap.. Thank you so much dii for this story.. So cute.. The foursome bonding is lovely.. Do update like this a lot.. :) :)


Aww thanku so much abi for liking this part nd gave sweet comments 😊 ..
I too wanted this story on serial but we cant do anything. .
But i will try to give this tipe of scenes in this os 😃 ..
I will do update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ruchu once again an interesting plot .. Foursome bonding is osm .. Naura ki totli baatein duggu ka chidhna . Ak nk ka romance khatam ... Never ever aisa kbhi ho hi nhi skta kuch der wali duri jb realize nhi hota k life kahan jaa rhi wala phase hai yeh unka dekhna yeh hai k apna relation kaise spice up krte hai yeh love birds. a light hearted special moments wali story . update sooner
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Ruchu once again an interesting plot .. Foursome bonding is osm .. Naura ki totli baatein duggu ka chidhna . Ak nk ka romance khatam ... Never ever aisa kbhi ho hi nhi skta kuch der wali duri jb realize nhi hota k life kahan jaa rhi wala phase hai yeh unka dekhna yeh hai k apna relation kaise spice up krte hai yeh love birds. a light hearted special moments wali story . update sooner


Thanku so much nidhu for liking this part nd gave sweet comments loved it 😊 ...aww u liked their chemistry. .are dont worry essa khabhi ho sakta hai kya but ek drop toh sab rishte mai aa jata hai na..
Yup i will show everything but swlly swlly. .i will def try to update sooner soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
woww wat a cutee sii part..
i loved nairus titli words nd voice...
perfect story...
duggu crying babay nd nairu daring girl...
naksh missing each other..
must say its a good concept ki kya after kids life nd love ends...
do update soon..
naksh ki romance nd pyaar forever

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